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-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
That's ok dear.i can undrstand but anyway thanx 4 update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

this is nice
and great
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE: sorry for the delay! thx for the lovely comments! really enjoy reading them~ :) enjoy!! :) ~sara~

PART 21:

geet excuses herself n goes in the file room telling him that she has work to do..
n she leaves.

Over to Maan:

MAAN'S POV:
she looked in a hurry..
but why?
should i go check on her??
no maan! dont worry about her..
she'll be fine..

OVER TO GEET:
Geet is working on something in the files room..
adi comes in the room and sees her working..
adi: geet kya ker rahi ho?
geet jumps like 3ft high.
geeT: adi sir? aap yahan kya ker rahay ho?
adiL main to accounts ki file laine aaya tha.. aur tum?
geet: woh..
she gives up n begins telling her wat she's doing..

Over to MAAN:
he cant concentrate on anything..are u
he's too busy thinking about geet...
maan: yeh tujhay kya ho gaya hai? y r u behaving weird?
itni restlessness kyun feel ho raha hai?
maan gets frustrated and he hits the table hard..
his hand starts beelding..
maan: lo ab mujhay suffocation bhi ho raha hai??
it was getting hard for him to breathe.
he went outside quickly..
on the way he bumps into adi..
maan: ADI!!!
adi gets scared..
adi: s-sir w-woh...
maan: wohh wat!?
adi: woh sir.. a-ap k-ka -k-oi w-wait ker -r-raha hai.. f-files walay r-room main..
maan remembers the time when sasha said to him: "sasha: maan sir aap ka koi files wali room main wait ker raha hai..

MAAN'S POV:
phir se sasha mujhay kuch dikhana chah rahi hai kya?
NO!
adi nahin ata agar sasha ne usay bhaija hota..
adi sasha ka koi kaam nahi kerta..
phir koun ho sakta hai...
hmmm..it couldnt be anyone from outside..
i meanclients nahin ho sakte..
they will bei n the waiting room but not in the files room..
phir koun?

NO ONE'S POV:
adi: s-sir?
adi disturbs maan's thoughts..
maan: haan adi, theek hai...
maan leaves..
adi: chalo yeh kaam to ho gaya hai.. ab 2nd step...
adi goes in the office cubicles and announces..
adi: LADIES AND GENTLEMEN.. attention plz..
everyone look over at adi..
adi: there is a surprise for u all in the files room.. plz aap wahan chaliye abhi..
everyone is excited and slowly they go to the files room..
even pinky..
but sasha and tasha stayed where they were...
tasha: sasha.. i mean ma'am.. yeh adi kya ker raha hai?? surprise?
sasha: tasha! adi mujhay kabhi kuch patata hai kya?? chalo chal ker daikhtay hain..
adi overhears them..
adi: haan sasha bhot bara surprise hai.. especially for u..
sasha looks at him..
sasha rolls her eyes n leavs following tasha...

OVER TO MAAN:
maan enters the files room.. it was dark..
maan: yahan pe koi bhi nahi hai..adi lied to me..
maan turns around and starts exiting the room ..
geet: ruk jaiye maan sir..
maan stops.. there is a light only on geet..
maan turns around..
hes mesmerized by her beauty..
mahiii...
she's kind of far away from him..
maan: geet?
geet walks closer to him.. and the light is following her just like a shadow would..
geet: maan sir.. aaj main aap ko aik surprise daina chahti hoon..
maan: geet meri koi birthday nahi hai jo tum mujhay surprise do gi..
geet: (protests) but sir.. zaroori nahin hota ke surprise birthday walay hi din di jain..
maan roles his eyes..
maan: acha bolo.. kya hai surprise?
hes kind a excited for it.. wat could geet possibly give me? naab thought..
geet: (intrupting maans thoughts) aap ko thoda sa wait kerna ho ga..
maan didnt speak he again wen back in his thoughts..
in 1 min the door was full of people, rushing to get in...
maan looks at them with confused look..
maan: (yells) yeh kya ho raha hai? kya ker rahay ho aap sab yahan? kaam nahi hai..
geet: (whispers at him) maan sir .. maine inko bulaya hai..
maan looks at geet..
totally confused.
he doesnt speak..
by now everyone gets in..
they all are standing behind maan..
sasha tasha totally confused..
geet: (to everyone) aaj maine aap sab ko aik bhot zaroori baat kerne ke liye bulaya hai.. bhot important hai..
everyone listens carefully
including maan..

precap: any guess???


hope u all like it ~sara~ :)
Edited by sara_06 - 13 years ago
blue24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updates
Continue soon
Wateing for geets surprise
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART UPDATE SOON ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
good update
ab jaldi dusra update karo
cant wait to see maan's reaction on whatever geet is going to tell
thanks for pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 21 ...

awesome... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update daer loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaar bache ki jaan logi kya yaar pal pal mar rahi ho.update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesme part.i thnk sasha's truth wil be out in next part.

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