-dreams- maaneet FF THREAD 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks a lot for all the support & love for this dreams of mine

definitly with all ur love I could reach so far
thanks dilse
story so far...umm..
in a nut shell is a princess & he is the prince of her dreams..
just that the dream came harsher in reality...
poem that tells u abt geet & her story

I was an extraordinary girl-with ordinary dreams...

All I wished for is love-my biggest dream...
My world was small, the palace huge,
My dreams-thats where I took refuge!
All my life I wanted just a glance,
Tried to please my Dad at every chance...
Failed miserably every time,
Got scolded-what was my crime?
A single day turned my life upside down,
In a sea of pain I had to drown;
Yet the biggest blow was yet to come,
I lost all-I felt like scum!
How I wished I could die,
Yet to someone's wishes I was made to ply;
He treated me like dirt, didn't bothjer about my hurt,
Not even a word I could blurt...
A roller-coaster ride, has changed my life,
I seen heaven, and now strife,
My biggest dream seems real today;
Yet that dream now seems completely waste!
My identity has changed so have I,
Where my destiny will take me-I will comply,
I was an extraordinary girl, with ordinary dreams,
Yet, now, I am just a mother and a daughter in my dreams...
Love
Swati


for more plz read the parts 1 to 13 on the previous thread
if u want the pm of this fiction..
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LINK TO THREAD ONE

(three parts updated 25-27)
Dreams
part 28
Maan rolled his eyes ' uff issen liyen moo phola ki beti thi jab main meeting ke liya ja raha tha
Geet immediately changed the topic ' baby ko bhook lagi hain
Daadi smiled chalo..
while walking down..she cribbed softly..main ne kab moo pholaya
maan smiled..& pulled her cheek. she frowned.
as the settled in the table.
Maan ' Daadi aaj kya banya hain
Daadi ' sab Geet ka fav hain
she smiled weakly
Maan teased ' dal, sanbzi chicken curry
she wondered when all that became her fav. She was craving to eat her pasta, pizza.. she sighed & looked at the spread.
Maan tasted the food & then looked at her. She was drawing circles & each bite she took it was like a big job for her.
Maan ' kya baat hain Geet
she immediately straighten herself ' ji kuch nahi
Maan ' tho phir teehk se kha kyun nahi rahi
Daadi looked at her plate ' kya huwa beta? Do u want something else
anni ' bhabhi aap tho kuch kaa hi nahi rahi
she shook her head & continued to eat.
Later at night Geet turned restlessly. Maan now got used to sleep sitting beside her on the floor holding her hand & caressing her stomach. He got up instantly & watched her. She was licking her lips. He thought may be water. He immediately poured her a glass of water & woke her up..
mujhe ben & jerry ka fossil fuel khana hai
she said with her droopy eyes
Maan ' KYA?
She rubbed her eyes & looked at him. He was standing with glass of water. She drank the water & lied down
Maan ' Geet
Geet?
Geet ' umm
Maan ' tumhe kuch khana hain?
She shook her head & pretended to sleep. She was dieing to eat an ice- cream, but she didn't know how to ask him. God knows how will he react. he left so bad ..she couldn't even tell him freely wat she wants.
He lifted her & carried her to the car.
Aap
yeh
kya..
he shot an angry look.
She snuggled into his neck.. aap mujhe sone nahi de rahen she complained
he tucked her under the seat belt & came around to the driver seat. He called adhi
he almost fell off hearing the phone ring.
Adhi ' ji...ji...sr..sr...sir?
Maan ' find out delhi main ben & jerry kanha milta hain
adhi ' sir is waqt
Maan ' tho?
Adi ' sr..sr...sir it is 12 now
Maan ' find out & call me back
Geet eyes opened instantly.
How did he know..
did he hear me..
yah kya sochen ge mera baren main.

Maan put on his seat belt & waited for his call.
adhi called back & informed at that hr they could find the ice-scream only at Hard Rock

Maan took the address & drove her down there. She smiled sweetly looking at him. She was really excited. The drive at that hr was beautiful. She chuckled .. holding her shawl close & looked out enjoying the view.
He parked the car & asked her to come out.
Geet ' aisen?
Maan glared
Geet ' main aisen
sab..
she sighed & looked here & there.
Maan just extended his hand & tucked her closer. She was really uncomfortable coming out like this. When they waiter came for order..maan gave the menu to Geet..
order kar lo..
jo bhi chahiyen..
kya tha.. fossil
she smiled & but her lips.. DD she said under her throat
he looked at her questioningly
she immediately looked at the waiter.. ben & jerry fossil fuel her eyes became wide when she said that in excitement. She chuckled & looked at Maan.
The waiter dipped his head ' sorry mam ben & jerry main sirf 2 flavors hain.. chocolate & vanilla.
The whole of the excitement just vanished in that very sec. Maan could have killed that guy with his bare hands.
Maan ' kuch aur kha lo
she shook her head
Maan dehko he pointed at the menu
-Chocolate Mousse Bite
yum.. whipped chocolate mousse with chocolate sauce
.
She didn't even listen
Maan ' aacha yeh dehko Strawberry Cheesecake
cheesecake filling in light Graham Cracker crust and rich Strawberry Sauce
.
She ignored him
Maan ' this one looks really yummy
Crme Brule Bite its a french pastry cream topped with a sugar brule crust
.
She turned her face
Maan was getting restless aisen bhi kya hain uss fossil fuel main..
Geet licked her lips... sweet cream ice-scream with chocolate cookie pieces, she made a juicy sipping sound.. chocolate peace & chukled as she added a chocolate fudge swirl.
He could just eat her as she spoke that..she looked so cute & sweet. He thought for a moment.. then try this Hot Fudge Brownie & Sinful Hot Fudge Sundae ..in dono ko mix kar lethen hain..ban jayega tumhara fossil fuel
Three large scoops of Ben & Jerry's vanilla ice cream, topped with famous hot fudge sauce on a fresh brownie, chopped walnuts, fresh whipped cream, chocolate sprinkles and a cherry.
She looked bit convinced Maan immediately ordered it..
Geet ' ek min.. I don't want that cherry
Maan smiled shaking his head.
next part is geet seeing brij.. will update in few hrs
Thanks a lot for all the lovely comments & likes
muskan little disappointed with the likes number
expect a lot more 'pouts'
working on the next part..
love
muskan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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firstly congrats for yet another thread.,... its been like 6 days since u started dreams n its already on thread no 4... great going gal...
n yeah i'm first... yipeee... was refreshing GHSP MF every 5 seconds... 😆😆😆
wow muski... u shud hv added that song... paune 12 baje dekho ghar se chale whats going on??? lol... i loved the update... btw i was downloading old epis of geet n just 5 mins ago i downloaded the epi where geet asks for road side aloo tikki at 1 am...n maan calls adi to ask where he will get it... lol...
ok now am off to sleep... will read the next update in the morning...
love ya... n thanks... muah... hugs
Edited by deniac - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww super cute update .. wish there would have been a scene like that in GHSP ..

seems like Muski is in mood to have Ben & Jerry ice cream too😆

here u go 😳


Edited by Sia89 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread...🥳
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Congrats on the new thread...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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ummm loved it
but carving for more
it was such a small part
update next asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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how many hours later do we have to wait? i cant wait till tat part i want to see everyone's reaction to geet's family. i want her family to come in fornt of simran cuz of the simran embarrassed maan and geet in the party.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing

next update in hoursss😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats 4 new thread...awesome update...looking 4ward 4 geet seeing brij...cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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CONGRATS FOR NEW THREAD...AND AGAIN A GOOD PART...I JUST LOVE YOUR ff...PLZ UPDATE SOON...
Edited by cute1122 - 13 years ago

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