-dreams- maaneet FF THREAD 5

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Muskan

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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks a lot for all the support & love for this dreams of mine

I am definitly flying...474 likes...wow...

5th thread 31 parts.. muskan gretful to u all

wat a friendship day gift from each one of u there..

I am floored

thanks dilse

story so far...umm..

in a nut shell is a princess & he is the prince of her dreams..

just that the dream came harsher in reality...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=INgEbR-Oy9E[/YOUTUBE]

poem that tells u abt geet & her story

I was an extraordinary girl-with ordinary dreams...

All I wished for is love-my biggest dream...

My world was small, the palace huge,

My dreams-thats where I took refuge!

All my life I wanted just a glance,

Tried to please my Dad at every chance...

Failed miserably every time,

Got scolded-what was my crime?

A single day turned my life upside down,

In a sea of pain I had to drown;

Yet the biggest blow was yet to come,

I lost all-I felt like scum!

How I wished I could die,

Yet to someone's wishes I was made to ply;

He treated me like dirt, didn't bothjer about my hurt,

Not even a word I could blurt...

A roller-coaster ride, has changed my life,

I seen heaven, and now strife,

My biggest dream seems real today;

Yet that dream now seems completely waste!

My identity has changed so have I,

Where my destiny will take me-I will comply,

I was an extraordinary girl, with ordinary dreams,

Yet, now, I am just a mother and a daughter in my dreams...

Love

Swati

for more plz read the parts 1 to 13 on the previous thread

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LINK TO THREAD ONE

LINK TO THREAD 2

LINK TO THREAD 3

LINK TO THREAD 4

Dreams
part 32

his heart bled for her love, he had a hand over his heart, his love, his geet, & a frown on the spot where he could see the invisible bleed of his heart & she had her hand on her heart where she saw blood on his guilty heart... I am sorry..he cried..not daring to hold her touch her with his sinful hands.
She didn't let go...she didn't know wat else to say wat else do. He had become her world, how was she to tell him that. She couldn't see him cry see him break down.. it hurt her.. it was burning her within. All the while when things went wrong she only wanted to correct it. She never wanted a revenge or see him suffer. Even at that moment of wreckage..she knew he will repent his deed more than she would, it was all just a moment of anger..rage.. that he lost all his humanity to scar each others soul for ever.

He couldn't not think anything right at that moment. He was petrified. He didn't know if she even accept to be with him anymore. Or should she even stay here with him.. with a sinner. Will brij would let his sister stay with him after knowing wat she had to go through because of him. His soul was shaken up by the thought & he suddenly hugged her. His hands held her so tight it hurt, then with an almost frenzied ardor he dipped his head in her throat & neck...sobbing painfully. He couldn't gather the courage to tell her how madly he loved her..how he will be domed if she left. He has no tomorrow without her.

He was so earnest so fervent she felt a twinge of fear not for herself but for him. She knew she had began to love him more than her own self..yah it was true.. she admired his sincerity.. owed his acceptance & willingness to face the consequence of his mistake with all the courage. He was Man enough to accept every mistake of his & undo it though..in the process he was drowning deep into the pool of guilt. She loved him as a dad to their unborn child, she respected him for the love he showered on the little one. He is a good human being she learned it in a hard way. But his love.. is way too deep & different. She wondered if she could ever be able to reciprocate in the same way & she saw that fear in his eyes too. The fear of losing her, fear his love, his life. She closed her eyes tight & prayed to her babaji to her the strength..to help her forget & forgive. She wanted to be his..she wanted to forgive him.. but the night still haunted her. she closed her eyes tight.. fighting hard to not let that thoughts make her skin burn.. she held him tight..closer.. & firmer.. he dipped his head into her hair.. taking in her scent..filling his heart..his soul.. her hands slipped on his firm back trying to express her longing for him. his pain was way too deep ..he cried.. I am sorry.. ..is all he could manage to say..crying .. she softly placed a peck on his shoulder. his heart sunk into milions of emotions.. how could some one be so pure...

Maan & Geet freshened up & walked down to the dinner table
r u alright brij asked Maan
Maan nodded
Geet sat quietly next to daadi
brij looked at Geet helping herself with roti & daal..the way her face frowned with every bite she took.
brij started to laugh.. he felt it odd himself.. the way he was laughing. He continued to..
I am sorry he said & continued to laugh again
Maan & Daadi looked at each other wondering
anni checked if she had something in her face.. the way he laughed she felt really odd. she even asked her friends.
Brij coughed .. Geet immediately served him water.
Brij almost yelled.. yeh kya kar rahi ho.. why r u touching the glass with jhuta haat
Geet ' main yeh haat se
brij ' stop answering back Geet.. he said it sternly.
Maan was taken a back
brij ' jhuti roti tho is haat se pakdi thi na..
Geet looked down.. she always landed in trouble eating roti's.
Anni & her friends were taken a back .. anni saw the things getting serious she immediately asked ' brij tum hus kyun rahen the?
Brij.. instantly laughed again
Daadi ' why wat happened beta
brij ' oh u really missed it.. u should see the faces Geet makes when she eats anything other than her fav Italian cuisine.
Maan almost felt a lump in his throat. He was reminded of the day he taunted her.
Brij stopped laughing & became concern ' joke apart...Daadi ji..assin halat main tho manpasand khana chayien na?
Phir yeh dal roti kyun kha rahi hain. she can't even stand Indian masala's.
Daadi felt really sad ..they couldn't even understand wat she likes. Uski choti ..khushi ka dhyan bhi nahi rahk sakten. Daadi remembered all the time she longingly looked at pasta's. Daadi felt guilty.
Anni immediately added ' really !!! bhabhi ko bhi Italian pasand hain ' ??
wow aur bhai ko bhi
brij ' thank god!!
we used to always wonder wat will happen after marriage
anni - sachi babaji ne khud banyen hain inki jhodi
brij ' I swear
Maan couldn't eat any further. He just sat quietly pretending to eat. Daadi eyes filled up. She immediately wiped it & smiled weakly hiding her guilt.

Maan looked at Geet she quietly ate the roti's like always, without any complain, though every bite was a struggle for her now for him. How her nose became red when she felt a little spice, Daadi always made separate dishes for her with less spice. Still she used to find it spicy & her eyes flutter as tears threaten to fall. Maan immediately gave her water. She drank it one go. He looked at dearly & in awe.

She only had half a chapati & she was done. She used to fill her stomach with salad. He wanted to cry.. seeing her plight.. the life she spend here last 5 months horrifying worse than a night mare ..not less than a jail. His thoughts were distracted when anni's friends teased anni & brij.. umm abhi se dono ek hogayen ho?
Every one was taken a back.
Daadi couldn't dare to think of the alliance now ...she dipped her head low.
Brij studied the uncomfartable scene & mocked.. agar Daadi ji aisen dinner promise karen tho main shaadi ke liyen tayar hoon.
Geet gulped the water & looked at brij in shock
anni was shocked herself.
Brij didn't know wat else to say.. it was his sisters sasural. He could do anything for her happiness. He was rude & strict in his approach but loved her dearly. so did every person in the family

-dreams part 32-

-PREV PART 31 NEXT PART 33 -

PART 33

PART 34

PART 35

PART 36

PART 37

PART 38

LINK TO THREAD SIX

VM THANKS TO ROOPS

Thanks a lot for all the lovely comments & likes
i am super happy & excited with all the love u showered at me
wat a wonderful friendship day gift..
ummah
updating still..next part.. expect twists ..to follow
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love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh di , it was sch a beautiful part. My heart cries 4 maan .oh so much guilt. I knw he deserve it bt nt so much. I indeed done a unforgivable sin bt seeing him suffering my heart bleeds 4 him.

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sree

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Posted: 13 years ago

Congrats for new thread
Nice update

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Posted: 13 years ago

On new

twists & turns,hmm

you always gives surprise/shock with twists

waiting for them 😍

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Seher

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Posted: 13 years ago

and

for the new shew Thread...You rock as always DI

Poor annie thought sumthing is on her face thats y Brij is laughing like mad

awww Maan feels Pathetic em feeling sad for Maaneet di sab bad characters ache ho rahy han first dadi then maan and now brijdont tell me that Raji, darji and Simran will be 4given that easily

Cont. soon... eagerly waiting

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago

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sunshine94

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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing..lovely update...geet n maan superb👏

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febinyusuff

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Posted: 13 years ago

congrats on the new thread muski !

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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 13 years ago

oh god. ye to raksha bandhan special track chal raha hai 😊
brij really loves geet. 😊😊
bhai bahan ka pyar 😊
loved the update.
thanks 😊
and yes congrats for new thread.

Edited by mannu1988 - 13 years ago