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Posted: 14 years ago
omg. m uski part 30 plzzz plzz plzz.. with chocolate chips and cherry on top... sweeet.. i want a slap on annies friends faces wen they see that brij is geets brother.. whoaaa.. and geet is actually more rich and royal than her stupid friends can actually be.. what will maan and dadi ma have to say about this.. ish.. muski plzz yaar.. one more update.. plzz... cont sooon..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

shruti di, maine offer kar diya!

likhungi toh update ke baad!
Muski di, jaldi update do, poem pakki

yeh Muskan hain

aasaani se maanti nahin

😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
next is page 77 YAHOOO
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Posted: 14 years ago
BUSS ab kar do update plz plz or nahee bardsahet hoteee
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Posted: 14 years ago
i watched another round of today's episode waitin for u!!
waitin!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Dreams
part 30

Geet murmuring.. babaji..puren duiyen main Maan ko veerji hi milten business karne ke liyen
he slowly tapped he shoulder ..she missed her beat..she knew that was veerji.. she turned & shedding tears..pagli.. he kissed her head & held her tight in his embrace.

A million thoughts zooming in my head,

Why? Why? Why only me?
Why has fate singled me out for the harsher realities?
Why did my life shatter in moments?
Why did I lose all that I ever cherished...even my dreams?
Babaji, i never lost faith in you...
Even when I lost my protective shield,
Even when with loss of diginity I had to deal,
Now, when life's shattered fragments I am arranging,
How do I face my past, despite my heart's yearning?
My guilt keeps eating me each passing moment,
Will I again be blamed for what happened?
Will this part of my soul understand me?
Will his love win over the grudges and accept me?
Love
Swati

She cried..cried for ..she just cried.. dad.. ..
she couldn't control herself anymore.. someone to whom she could show her wounded heart..someone would share the same pain as she does..
dad..veerji..yeh sab kya hogaya..
sab meri wajah se..na.. I am sorry ..I am sorry
he couldn't control his tears too..it rolled down his eyes..the tears he was holding back..being brave infront of the whole wide world. Especially for mama.. he had to be strong.. but now.. infront of her he couldn't..he too cried..

Maan & Daadi just came in & stood frozen seeing them hugging each other. Million of thoughts ran through mind. Maan couldn't stand the sight of her in anyone's embrace. He looked away. Daadi held his hand. Her tears..her cry.. he could read them.. they were those hidden cries..that she hid from him... she hid from him.. tore him within. for so many days she was hidding a pain he had no clue off.. his heart was bleeding to see her pain. He was blank not sure of wat to think. Possessiveness was clear in his eyes as brij cupped her face..she cutely.. pointed ..use din..trying to explain
shoo..chup.. woh sab bhool ja
he wiped her tears.
Her eyes fell on the pair of eyes those looked at her with millions of question & lot of possessiveness. She immediately inched away from brij. He looked behind & straighten himself & protectively put his hand around Geet.
Maan looked away.
Geet ' veerji woh..woh..maan.. humaren..humaren..she twisted her duppata..
she blushed, shied..she had never said it before..that to infront of veerji.. my husband..she said very softly.

THE PIECE OF MY SOUL THAT I GAINED BACK...

I feel a strange peace now.

Tranquility, calmness soothes me now;
A heavy weight has been lifted off me,
The cries that I had stifled have finally left my heart...
while the sense of loss can never die,
The pain that I battled seems to subside.
A part of me i have gained back,
The blast from my past has become a soothing balm,
I now have my brother back,
In him I find my father back!
Another relationship just got deeper,
Today I accepted him, went under his cover;
the battle within is far from over,
yet a bit less qustions will now hover!
I don't know if I can forgive him,
I don't even know if I have forgiven me,
But, i feel lighter, I feel clearer,
with him too the picture seems less darker!
love
Swati


Maan eyes eased the moment she addressed him as veerji.. but sinking his thoughts deeper than the possessive self .. she is his lost sister.
Geet ..is Geet handa. Princess.. handa!!

he wanted to rejoice...she for the first time acknowledged their relation but..does he even deserve her. She not even once let her family pride down & all he could do was stoop lower & lower.. even inhumane. How could he even stand infront of her.

He was nothing but perfection at its worst, he was nothing infront of her beauty he probably now felt below normal, now he wonder, why did people even look at him when he was so below ordinary.

Suddenly he felt a huge difference between them. Was humanity such an hard hue to hold too..he cursed himself..when she held on to her every true shade of hers in worst of the phases. & the true hue couldn't hide longer.. her dignity..he snatched away with his act of rage.. she simply won in his eyes..being herself..soft tender..matured.. simple..never crossed her limits..may it be respecting Daadi, family pride, their child.. his eyes softened.. she was a true princess in all sense.

Geet looked at him to say something..when he looked lost.. she immediately looked at Daadi
Daadi yeh humaren veerji hain she said it so proudly
Daadi was in too much shock to even acknowledge it.. she had known with geets behavior by now that she belonged to good family.. her respect for her multiplied for Geet now. Not even once did she look down at them or showed her discomfort living with them. She only adjusted to them. their living

Brij looked at Geet ..HP main shaadi.. she looked down ashamed of the mishap & the bad name that followed.
brij immediately hugged shocked Maan.
Aapne humari bhen ki izad rahkne ke liyen woh zabrdasti ki shaadi man li.
Maan felt suffocated with the appreciation..it felt more like a slap
brij pulled away & looked at him in awe..
u left ur love for her
Maan looked down guilt clutching his heart..love.. if only he had known then wat it meant..
hume tho yekin nahi hota ki.. aapne woh zabrdasti ki shaadi ko nibaya..
humri narzaron main aapki izzad aur bhi bad gayeen
Maans eyes dipped in shame with his own deeds
aap ki jagah koi bhi hota..brij sighed..
I mean she is a British citizen unless ur marriage is properly registered..it is not considered,
I can't believe u still accepted her
.
Maan moved back.. thats why Geet was quietly leaving the house every time.. she knew it..their marriage was not even legal. She all the while knew the way out, he trapped her further & further into this relationship. & he blamed her for it, he ruined her life..& blamed her for ruining his. How was it even fair ..
Nahi main ne..his eyes met hesr..she pleaded to be quiet
Maan just left from there without saying word.

He could not fathom the whole fact. She was innocent..she didn't know anything abt life her. She was terrified ..with the surrounding, new place, the villagers.. the accusations.. she didn't even kiss him in the barn, it was he, who mistook her as Simran..& he forcefully kissed her.. she was trying to escape out. She even pushed him away.. & said she was not simran. Not once did she accuse him for that.. but wat he could do in his loss of unfaithful love was blame her, not realizing wat she was going through..wat she was losing in the bargain. Her family her diginity..her royal life.. he looked at his house..it seemed so timid.. he remembered the day he proudly told her this Mansion shouting how it seemed like darkness to her...he could feel it now.. the darkness that surrounded with his presence. She was too far away from all that he blamed her off.

She all the while tried to leave him.. move away.. he trapped her ruthlessly, mercilessly.. khabhi aapne ahankar main, khabi aapne, gussa main, khabhi aapne, zidd main..aur tho khabhi aapne dil se bebas hoke..he fell on his knees & screamed.. pushing his hair ..back...Oh God.. how could he not see her true hue before..
was is so difficult to relate her English accent
or not understanding Hindi that well
wat was he thinking..or was he even thinking at the first place.
how will he even go infront of her now. How will he look into her eyes. Kis haaq se javon uske samne.


Brij was taken a back with Maan suddenly walking away like that.
Geet got really scared & knotted her duppata
Daadi immediately ' he might be as shocked as I am
brij '
kyun
Geet looked here & there
Daadi '
humne nahi pata tha ki yeh ki ..humari geet .. aapki Geet handa hain
brij shook his head '
sach main jhali hain
Geet smiled weakly
brij '
u should be happy bina kuch jane Maan ne tumhe aapna liya
Geet smiled delightfully.. yah that was the truth ..of their relation.

bina kuch jane hi wo dono ek dusre ke ho gaye
wo ehsaas dono ke dil me hai

(by pritm)
-dreams part 30-
-PREV PART 29 NEXT PART 31-

Oops anni's frds in for a trouble
Thanks a lot for all the lovely comments & likes
muskan little disappointed with the likes number
expecting lot more 'pouts'
working on the next part..
love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am first!
Now, time for my promised poem😃
THE PIECE OF MY SOUL THAT I GAINED BACK...

I feel a strange peace now.

Tranquility, calmness soothes me now;
A heavy weight has been lifted off me,
The cries that I had stifled have finally left my heart...
while the sense of loss can never die,
The pain that I battled seems to subside.
A part of me i have gained back,
The blast from my past has become a soothing balm,
I now have my brother back,
In him I find my father back!
Another relationship just got deeper,
Today I accepted him, went under his cover;
the battle within is far from over,
yet a bit less qustions will now hover!
I don't know if I can forgive him,
I don't even know if I have forgiven me,
But, i feel lighter, I feel clearer,
with him too the picture seems less darker!
love
Swati
Edited by princess163 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskaan im back after 3 long months
this ff is really interesting one
from where do u get ideas yaar
waiting for the reaction of other people
of their faceoff


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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG brij is not that bad actually he loves his sisterBut y he did delay in searching her
MAAN's condition n guilt is totally justified

Annie's friends hav a tight slap anxiously waiting for reaction after knowing the Geet as a Princess
Edited by Speechless - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I told you she will update on page 77😆
Edited by smj1977.shruti - 14 years ago

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