-dreams- maaneet FF THREAD 4 - Page 97

Originally posted by: teddy500

Hey guys,

me teddy500.

me have something to say.

I read this whole fiction and loved it very much.

But m angry with muski di on one point.

I seriously think that she has tried to exaggerate geet's thoughts about her dad and veerji not caring about her.

I mean, take the very first part.

Papaji was furious coz geet was wearing the loose dupatta.

I mean, he was sitting in the hall with his male friends and the daughter of the family is roaming like that, without covering her chest properly.

Any self-respecting individual would feel hurt.

Then when papaji was yelling at rano coz he thought his girl was being disobedient, geet immediately pounces upon her result and rants about topping in the college. I mean, seeing her dad angry, she should have at least said sorry and apologized na?

Then at the dinner table, she suddenly tries to eat indian food without touching or even looking at the continental spread, she could have filled her plates with small portions of all dishes and eaten them.

Then after dinner, that idiotic idea about having a glass roof for the palace was absolutely shocking. Dad and brij veerji were bound to taunt her. A palace is not a green house used for keeping plants that you suggest for an open sunroof. Totally weird.

Then after reaching HP, geet called up papaji and requested him to let her come back home. Even at that time, she did not even once apologize or say sorry. Even in the church, she did not seem to remember any of her childhood moments when her dad obviously would have displayed his affection for his little daughter.

I mean, muski has not done justice with the father-daughter relation in this fic. She could at least have a couple of parts where after reaching london, geet might have found an old diary belonging to papaji which would have contained all of his love, concern and emotions for her. As a daughter, i am extremely close to both my dad and mom. Even my mom is so strict like geet's veerji and dad were in this fic, but she and my dad love me dearly.

If my comment and query interests anyone of you, please convey my message to muski didi. Also, your replies and views on this comment are most welcome. I would like to read your opinions.

Ciao,

take care,

teddy500