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thanks a lot for all the support & love for this dreams of mine
I have managed to complete 21 parts in 3days..with 2 threads
definitly with all ur love..ummah
story so far...umm..
in a nut shell is a princess & he is the prince of her dreams..
just that the dream came harsher in reality...
poem that tells u abt geet & her story
I was an extraordinary girl-with ordinary dreams...
All I wished for is love-my biggest dream...
My world was small, the palace huge,
My dreams-thats where I took refuge!
All my life I wanted just a glance,
Tried to please my Dad at every chance...
Failed miserably every time,
Got scolded-what was my crime?
A single day turned my life upside down,
In a sea of pain I had to drown;
Yet the biggest blow was yet to come,
I lost all-I felt like scum!
How I wished I could die,
Yet to someone's wishes I was made to ply;
He treated me like dirt, didn't bothjer about my hurt,
Not even a word I could blurt...
A roller-coaster ride, has changed my life,
I seen heaven, and now strife,
My biggest dream seems real today;
Yet that dream now seems completely waste!
My identity has changed so have I,
Where my destiny will take me-I will comply,
I was an extraordinary girl, with ordinary dreams,
Yet, now, I am just a mother and a daughter in my dreams...
Love
Swati
for more plz read the parts 1 to 13 on the previous thread
Dreams
part 21
part 21
updated 3parts yesterday.. if u have missed it plz check the thread 2
(the part on maan thinking of simran as his dream girl.. was asked by nostalgic_soul)
Geet almost closed her eyes in sheer delight & she almost turned into his neck..he brought his lips closer & took her lips to his. She felt his hand come up and lightly caress her neck and the edges of her hair. She chuckled in his arms. His arms passionately pulled her closer..his eyes closed as his tongue explored her. His teeth touched her lip.. she closed her eyes tighter feeling a different feel whole together. Her heart raced, she left his hand snatching her duppata & pushing her .. she held him tightly. She felt his teeth harsh on her..she cried ..pulling herself away. His scent, his closeness suffocated her..reminding that night. She screamed in pain.. she immediately moved away.. no.. plz don't plz..
she looked down on the floor for her duppata. He closed his eyes seeing her plight.. the fear.. the terror in her eyes.. her scared soul of hers.
He raised his hand to reach her.. she trembled back ward. Still looking for her duppta
tumne pehna huwa Geet..he cried looking down.
she cried.. she clutched the duppata close to her heart & cried. She broke down & fell on her knees. He ran instantly to hold her.. she didn't let him touch her. Plz.. don't plz.. don't do it.. she cried.
His heart went out for her. He felt that his heart was peeled off & has been left like ship wreckage in a deep ocean of loneliness surrounded with guilt of his deeds. Now, his heart is floating dispiritedly as her emotions like tidal waves. The heart that only belonged to him ironically feared him the most because of the scars he pressed on them irrecoverably.
He raised his hand to reach her.. she trembled back ward. Still looking for her duppta
tumne pehna huwa Geet..he cried looking down.
she cried.. she clutched the duppata close to her heart & cried. She broke down & fell on her knees. He ran instantly to hold her.. she didn't let him touch her. Plz.. don't plz.. don't do it.. she cried.
His heart went out for her. He felt that his heart was peeled off & has been left like ship wreckage in a deep ocean of loneliness surrounded with guilt of his deeds. Now, his heart is floating dispiritedly as her emotions like tidal waves. The heart that only belonged to him ironically feared him the most because of the scars he pressed on them irrecoverably.
He felt himself the holder of the heart which has been wrecked. The sinking feeling with the numbness inside was devastating him. He didn't want to live any more.. he sat on the floor away from her holding his knees together.. looking at her with his heart bleed as she looked at him with those eyes.. eyes filled only with fear. If he could he would have killed himself..but that would be a much easier punishment for his sin.. he had to live ..live with that broken, wrecked heart for rest of his life.. taking care of it..giving her the happiness she deserved which he didn't know how, when for miles all he could see was only darkness.. no hope..his plea's unheard, grief unshared.. her eyes.. that could only speak to him.. had that fear in it,turned inside out, and torn apart, like an epitaph of wrecked soul.
He slowly inched closer to her.. she moved away. He shed tears & took her in his arms. Her restlessness increased ..she sobbed .. he cried silently with her helplessly. He let her calm & made her sit in the bed. He got her water. Her hand shivered to even to reach the glass. He sat next to her.. she inched away. He slowly made her drink water.
Why don't u sleep for some time
she looked at him in discomfort. His presence scared her. I will be in the study.
He tucked the spread , she immediately pulled it closer to her.
Why don't u sleep for some time
she looked at him in discomfort. His presence scared her. I will be in the study.
He tucked the spread , she immediately pulled it closer to her.
He walked into the study cursed himself. He deserved every inch of this pain, even more. He just fell on his knees & begged his god.. babaji.. plz..keep her away from the pain. Uske saren gham mujhe dedo.. & just fill her life with happiness. He didn't wamt anything more. Babaji has given him enough.. his pari.. his dream girl.. he remembered how he used to spend hours writing abt her as his eyes fell on the dairy. How he always had her in his prayers. He remembered going to temple & praying for her tieing a manat ka thread for her. Thats where he had met simran for the first time, though they were in the same college but he never noticed her. But that day she had come to the darga. She looked so serne with that white chudhidar..ironically that was the first & last time he had ever scene her dressed in salwar..but he was just 21... how did all that matter.. wat touched him was her untieing his manat ka dhaka thinking it was hers. ..guess her prayers had come true .. he watched her from distance. Then every thing is meaningless now..
he rose suddenly.. manat ka dhaga..
oh.. no.. may be thats why all this.. he rushed to the darga & tied a new manat ka thread.. & prayed for her..for their love..for their baby..for her happiness. It was only her & her happiness in his prayers like it used to be. He felt so much at peace.
oh.. no.. may be thats why all this.. he rushed to the darga & tied a new manat ka thread.. & prayed for her..for their love..for their baby..for her happiness. It was only her & her happiness in his prayers like it used to be. He felt so much at peace.
Geet got up in the evening & looked around. She was in the guest room. She immediately called nakul & asked to shift maans stuff to her room making sure no one saw them especially anni. She goes down to help Daadi in the kitchen.
Maan comes back from the darga & goes straight back to the guest room. He looks around for his stuufs he couldn't find anything. He gets angry & calls for nakul.
Daadi murmurs to Geet in the kitchen ' kya huwa Maan ko itna gussa kyun ho rahen hain
anni comes from behind ' bhabhi se dose nahi mila hoga issen liya
Daadi & anni laugh
Geet looks away. Daadi immediately changes the topic.
Daadi murmurs to Geet in the kitchen ' kya huwa Maan ko itna gussa kyun ho rahen hain
anni comes from behind ' bhabhi se dose nahi mila hoga issen liya
Daadi & anni laugh
Geet looks away. Daadi immediately changes the topic.
Nakul runs up & down trying to answer maans questions & anger
anni rolls her eyse ' bhabhi abhi tho aap ko his sambal na hoga aapne dhust dhanav ko
Geet ' nahi anni woh teehk nahi hoga.
Anni ' kya bhabhi
Daadi interrupts ' rehna de beta nakul manage karlega
they could hear Maan shouting abt his things being moved.
Geet looks at Daadi. Anni gets confused.
Geet immediately says ' aacha main dehk thi hoon
anni also tags along
Geet shot a quick prayer to babaji & reaches his room ' aap galat jagha doond rahen ho
Maan roars ' tum beech main ma.. his voice falls flat when he turns to come face to face with her. She almost jumps back..as her heart did with his raised tone.
Anni looked at him in shock. He was actually shouting at Geet. - how could u bhai, she said in frustration.
aap aapni pari pe kaisen chilla sakten ho?
Geet knotted her duppata she was already finding it all difficult to play infront of anni. It was unlike her to lie. Her face said it all. Maan turned his back to them meren fiile kanha hain.
Ji woh room main hain
Maan just walks pass them to his room
Geet immediately follows. She comes inside locks door behind. Maan turns back & wonders why she was locking the door.
Maan ' leave the door open
ji woh.. room..
she was already sweating & restless
Maan opened the windows ' kya zarorat hain yeh sab karne ki
she dipped her head ' anni kitni kush lag rahi thi
Maan ' tum aapni phikar kyun nahi karthi
she looked at his eyes.. his anger.. his restlessness.
Maan ' plz tum yeh sab chodo..apna aur baby ka kayal rakho.
He makes her sit in the sofa ' plz don't stress ur self.
He sat on his knees & held her hand.. he could feel them turning cold in fear.. he touched them to his eyes & kissed them. She just kept looking at him.. her heart was aching to love him.. but the dark truth of their relation tied her down, clutched her heart choked her emotions.
anni rolls her eyse ' bhabhi abhi tho aap ko his sambal na hoga aapne dhust dhanav ko
Geet ' nahi anni woh teehk nahi hoga.
Anni ' kya bhabhi
Daadi interrupts ' rehna de beta nakul manage karlega
they could hear Maan shouting abt his things being moved.
Geet looks at Daadi. Anni gets confused.
Geet immediately says ' aacha main dehk thi hoon
anni also tags along
Geet shot a quick prayer to babaji & reaches his room ' aap galat jagha doond rahen ho
Maan roars ' tum beech main ma.. his voice falls flat when he turns to come face to face with her. She almost jumps back..as her heart did with his raised tone.
Anni looked at him in shock. He was actually shouting at Geet. - how could u bhai, she said in frustration.
aap aapni pari pe kaisen chilla sakten ho?
Geet knotted her duppata she was already finding it all difficult to play infront of anni. It was unlike her to lie. Her face said it all. Maan turned his back to them meren fiile kanha hain.
Ji woh room main hain
Maan just walks pass them to his room
Geet immediately follows. She comes inside locks door behind. Maan turns back & wonders why she was locking the door.
Maan ' leave the door open
ji woh.. room..
she was already sweating & restless
Maan opened the windows ' kya zarorat hain yeh sab karne ki
she dipped her head ' anni kitni kush lag rahi thi
Maan ' tum aapni phikar kyun nahi karthi
she looked at his eyes.. his anger.. his restlessness.
Maan ' plz tum yeh sab chodo..apna aur baby ka kayal rakho.
He makes her sit in the sofa ' plz don't stress ur self.
He sat on his knees & held her hand.. he could feel them turning cold in fear.. he touched them to his eyes & kissed them. She just kept looking at him.. her heart was aching to love him.. but the dark truth of their relation tied her down, clutched her heart choked her emotions.
-dreams part 21-
pics thanks to anjuu
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expect a lot more 'pouts'
love
muskan
muskan little disappointed with the likes number
expect a lot more 'pouts'
love
muskan
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