*~*Falling Apart...Sequel*~* 'OS' [PG 20/11 March 2015][PM 2morow]

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Sammy

@sammy4u

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

omg itna saara drama...aur riddhima kita mind talking karti hai...by god main toh padh padh ke thak gayi.

this was amazing

loved it

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: jannat4ever

you actually read the whole OS na??? coz i have cleared why he was running away...in the end...😛..do read that...i think your whole focus was on demo😳...haan,...naught girl...😉

ab hum kya kar sakte hai... itne ache scenes hote hai ki story se focus hat jaata hai...😳

yeah i read that again... n do cont with os series... or rather first update ur other ff's...😆

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

hey!!

tht ws like a crazy os!!! lol...

really liked it

keep it up!!

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558278

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Woww super amazing ending but I wanna read the real show too! Wow lol heheh

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Awesome ending. I was rolling with laughter. 😆 Ridhima was superb. I had an idea that Arman and ridhima were to marry each other only. And the DEMO was really really HOT... I really enjoyed the thoughts going in ridhima's mind from time to time 😆.. Those were hilarious.
Do write more.. It's really very nice..