*~*Falling Apart...Sequel*~* 'OS' [PG 20/11 March 2015][PM 2morow]

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swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

wow nice OS...

luved it...

Thanx a lot..

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Madura

@Redrose21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

U made me cry 😭 . Very Beautifully written. Thanks for the PM.

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AMOON

@Amoon.88

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

LOOOBBBEEDDD IT----U MADE ME CRY N REMEMBER MY BROKEN FRIENDSHIP WID SUMONE WHO IS N ALWAYS B SPCL TO ME----LOOOBRED IT-------PLSSS CNTNU UR ODER FFS TOOO-PLSSS------AMOON

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neelima

@araja1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Awesome os. thanks for the pm

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

hiii

awesome os

loved it

poor ridzy

sooo sad

loved da concept

plzzz do write more

thanks 4 da pm

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Lovely beautiful but sad.. Very well written..
Now pls write a happy happy one ..

thnx for the PM...

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Aashi

@Kashkidiwani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Jannat i hate u... I really do fr making me cry
shilpa's pain ws so so so so beautifully described
i ws so touched!!!!!!
Each time she thought her pst wid him... Like when he used to cum toh pck her up from office or when he used to tease her whome she will chose betwen him n karan ;(
bt still i'll never say write these kind of os...
Do write os bt of happy endings...
No sad endings yaar!!!!! Plz
m feeling so low after reading this :(
bt it on whole it ws a fav os...
Do write mre bt of happy endings :)