*~*Falling Apart...Sequel*~* 'OS' [PG 20/11 March 2015][PM 2morow]

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

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jiyaa_m

@jiyaa_m

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

wowww what a demo

nice os hillarious one loved ridz all thinking n galias

keep it up

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cuteshilpa

@cuteshilpa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#73

hey like ur os

alot

it was funny n loving

hahha love ridxi character

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Sunita Tandel

@KaJen_addiction

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#74

hey Jannat
amazing updt!
just loved Ridz! she is so funny!
loved hot AR romance!
gr8 ending! phirsey dono bhaag gaye!😆
loved dis OS!
thnx 4 pm
nd do write more OSs

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zoya-ammy

@zoya-ammy

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#75

thnx dear for PM
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Superb mindblowing
Awesum shot yaar
Every dialouge was amazing
"chal hutt bhuki" o god i fell of from chair .&demo dumb head heard some pandit...o lord above all police wale ., awesuuu...m jaan want more OS NOW

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shristi

@shristi sarda

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#76

awsm OS...

it was simply amazing...

thanz for the pm... :)

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Hammi

@koolgurl

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

gr8t job luv it thanxs for PM

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neelima

@araja1234

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Amazing part. Loved it and thanks for the pm

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

hey Jannat
awesome oneshot

loved it

take care and thanks for the pm.

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

hey kiran hi jana how you are
sorry for late comment my net was not f99

gr8 os jana
loved riddhima
bcz of riddhima she and arman was in jail
and poor inspector bichara riddhima is too much
and Child- Of-Kissed-On-Beach-&-Made-Love-In-Car-Guy..
gr88
anh ahm ahm part was too nice
and at the end they both again ran
gr8 update
loved it to core
do wirte more
thankx for the pm
maria