MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 16

Originally posted by: ninand

very well written.. loved it.. thanks for the pm, do post the next part soon.

Originally posted by: kesha2412

Can one ever believe that a person like Maan Singh Khurana would be at an impasse?? Someone who is a go getter, who when walks into a room dominates it, who rules the herd of businessmen like a lion rules his territory... is unable to decide how to approach a girl...

beautiful...

Jazzu... lovely update babes... enjoy with Uncle and then update soon.. cant wait to see what happends next..

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

just read the SS...

loved it...

do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Loved the update. An impasse, indeed. Can't wait to see what Maan does next.

I hope you have a great time with your dad! :)

Originally posted by: sush1

bhari bharkam updates. Read both updates at one go 👏

what are u planning?
suspense mein romance ya romance mein suspense, since u have balanced both quite well.

Do give us a longer update later.

Originally posted by: shah10

great update

Originally posted by: Danina

Have fun wid ur dad and update was wow...maan should believe his feelings...loved d update thanks for d pm:)

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

I agree with Maan...he should put restraining order against himself😆 Stalking a girl like this, chalo all forgiven since it is MSK😳 So, now what? What route is he going to take? How is he going to approach her?

Will eagerly wait for Monday 😊

Originally posted by: SlovHanda

first of all, congratulations behna on ur debut,,,,,n sorry for late reply,,,,😳...class got cancelled due to rain😆,,,n i jumped on ur ff😆 n here iam reading about rain n its connection to geet n love😆,,,,,loved d intro part, u hv defined rain very beautifully...n then maan staring geet.😆

dadi's taunt on maan was really hilarious...And in the name of extra-curricular activity, you have your hoo-haa tai-chi shai-chi🤣

msk is in an impasse,,,,,now what would b his next step,,,,will he go straight n propose her😆, nahhh he will get a tight slap,,,,😆...but dadi would b really happy😆 after all her dear grand son has got a new curricular activity- stalking geet handa😆

hv fun wid uncle😃

Originally posted by: sangi1588

Jazz... OMG...

First let me come to

Chapter 3

Stirredf and Awakened.

Hmm... Awesome jazz.. Love the convo between Pinky and Geet, it is just reminds me of my college days, where u know , we use to tease the girls , ask their story...😆

And also loved Georgette Heyer 😉

Yeah...college and hostel life was full of new stories cooking...and new gossip brewing😆 Specially with friends like Pinky.

Coming to Convo between Dadi and MSK...what should i say..yeh Maan kabhi sudarega..

Would we even want him any other way😉

In short i was a short and sweet update..

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Impasse

Just loved how you have describes each and every scene so aptly.. Geet wanting to catch a glimpse of him..and Maan ..i didnt expect him to be there standing...staring at her.. Aww..

Loved the way you have written down the thoughts of Maan, the convo what he will have with Geet..it was so much like Maan.. a restraining order on himself..such a poor guy

Couldnt believe, Maan could be in an Impasse..

What can I say the guy is truly stumped.😆

Awesome Jazz, Enjoy with Uncle.. And update soon 😛