MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71]

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: mechantefille
I love d way you showed maan's disbelief at his attraction towards her.love d monologue. Hope u hav fun wid ur dad.

Thank you. I had doubts if I was deviating away from how I have portrayed him so far.

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: Nidhsara
An impasse indeed...
But what makes it more interesting is the fact that Maan Singh Khuranna is in an impasse...
A person who knows how to get his way in any tight situation is now in a deadlock...
Captured in an impasse by an angel...sigh such a romantic situation
Brilliantly written once again Jazz...
Good to know that your Dad is visiting...
Mine is abroad...talked to him a few minutes ago...I miss him

It is an impasse all over...whether in my fiction or my life.😆

The situation would warrant confusion and chaos in his mind. Glad it came out right. I only hope I am able to move ahead with equal conviction.

I miss mine too...and we have been too frequently subjected to his absence. But I wouldn't have it any other way. My heart swells seeing him in the uniform.

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
SIMPLY AWESOME

Originally posted by: hamini_yash
good to know your dad's coming home.
very nice update.
keep going

Thank you guys!

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi ...thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Loved it...u have a way wid words...beautifully written! Loved Maan's dilemma n self thoughts! Geet is also attracted to Maan...update soon...😉

Geet isn't attracted to him yet! But she senses nothing negative in his presence too. Plus she still doesn't know who she is...neither she knows that the man she bumped into in morning and the guy standing across the street are the same.

As I mentioned Geet is simply the kind who lives in her own space. As long as she is secure there she isn't really bothered with what others are doing.

But yes, she does feel a sense of familiarity and a pull that she can't explain.

Thanks for the appreciation😊

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ninand

@ninand

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

very well written.. loved it.. thanks for the pm, do post the next part soon.

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Kesha

@--Kesh--

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Can one ever believe that a person like Maan Singh Khurana would be at an impasse?? Someone who is a go getter, who when walks into a room dominates it, who rules the herd of businessmen like a lion rules his territory... is unable to decide how to approach a girl...

beautiful...

Jazzu... lovely update babes... enjoy with Uncle and then update soon.. cant wait to see what happends next..