MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71]

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2022/2/9 - IMPORTANT - SS moved to

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Note - This is not the first time I have attempted to write, but it is my debut fray into GF with a story. So far, due to biased and loving friends I have been made to believe that I am decent enough. And it is due to the love of one of those friends that I have landed up here.

Just a Dream or Two behind You

Chapter One

Andit was Raining that day.

Rains. There is something frighteningly beautiful about rains. While they threaten to leave you thoroughly drenched; yet they tempt you to welcome the force they bring along. Even if they possess the potency to wash away every vestige of your conscious, each droplet holds a promise to leave behind nothing but purity of thought.

And often I find myself drawn to the bargain they avow. An environment so blessed, that my words find a life of their own.

Sitting by the window, penning these thoughts in her ever-faithful journal, she glanced out to once again watch the heavy downpour. She loved writing per se. She loved writing even more when it rained. She knew the admittance of this fact came at the cost of sounding dramatic, but she was self-assured that such a scenario would never arise. She did not see herself in a situation where someone would be that keen. Wherein any person would hold an interest to know the stuff her dreams are made up off. And that left her to enjoy her writing, and eventually writing when it rained, in solitude.

They shared a sense of camaraderie, she and the rain. And she was grateful for sharing this privilege in isolation. Thus Geet sat, any hour that it rained, in the little haven of cushions, placed on a settee by the window of her room. Her refuge, her shelter, her dream.

But as forces of nature cannot be controlled, matters of heart cannot be anticipated.

Across the narrow street from her window, under the deserted bus-stop, he sat shrouded in the cover of darkness, watching on fascinated by the sight he beheld. It was an amazing sight, maybe not unique in its setting, but unique in the aura it emanated. Never before he had seen such abandonment, sitting by the window without any regard to the tempest that raged around. Never before he has seen such faith, that the downpour will bring forth nothing but a sense of calm.

She was scribbling away fastidiously, with complete dedication to her thoughts. Her head bent, her profile in the line of his gaze, moonlit, statuesque and alluring. Occasionally the raindrops would find their way in her tresses, flowing down as rivulets, soothing away her struggle with letters if ever she faltered. His eyes traced an ascendant path on her being with an unexplained excitement. Fingers that attempted to tame the flicks that went wild with the flirtatious breeze. Lips pursed in concentration or absent-mindedly chewing away the pencil head. The brows that were furrowed in deep perusal.

And he wondered what it would be look into her eyes, what depth of emotion he may encounter, how far will he be snatched from the shores of sanity.

"Maan Sir", a voice startled him out of his thoughts. "The car is here, Sir".

"Hmm". He reluctantly tore his gaze away, as he headed back into his rich, extravagant and blas existence.

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Index

Chapter One - Page One (above)

And it was Raining that day.


Chapter Two - Page Five

A door left shut. A ray that crept in.


Chapter Three - Page Ten

Stirred and Awakened.


Chapter Four - Page Seventeen

Impasse


Chapter Five - Page Twenty Four

A Storm underneath the Calm


Chapter Six - Page Thirty Two

When opportunity knocks you out!


Chapter Seven - Page Forty One

Everything that a Word can contain.


Chapter Eight - Page Fifty

The End that gives way to a new Beginning.


Epilogue - Page Sixty Three

At the other end of the Rainbow


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Posted: 14 years ago
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*Edited*

Me first Me first🥳

Finally you gave in and posted it here..i can't say how happy i am to see you here!!

Welcomeee🤗

And here goes my bak bak!!

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Rains. There is something frighteningly beautiful about rains.

I was clean bowled by this very sentence.. especially the words which've been highlighted..frighteningly beautiful..how contrasting!! yet how true..

While they threaten to leave you thoroughly drenched; yet they tempt you to welcome the force they bring along. Even if they possess the potency to wash away every vestige of your conscious, each droplet holds a promise to leave behind nothing but purity of thought.

And often I find myself drawn to the bargain they avow. An environment so blessed, that my words find a life of their own.

Such simply explained..

I always felt love for rains..or rather water..who won't any way?😆There's some magic in water...especially in rains..and the beauty is intensified by your description..

I loved the fact that here, she's not expecting her journal to be read by someone lolz..that's what actually happens in movies..if you are writing a diary, some one should read it lolz..but here, the mindset of a simple girl is shown...there's nothing extra ordinary in her thoughts but you portrayed her simply beautifully..And even though it sounds dramatic..about the love having for rain..i don't see how it is unreal? Rain is the most beautiful form of nature and loving it is simple as loving god..And when you described the simple setting..sitting by the window side, surrounded by cushions i was wondering if anything can be more beautiful?

note that i am not calling it dreamy..it's beautiful..its natural..its lovely.

The next thing you bought is solitude..writing itself is something divine according to me..and writing when it rains and in solitude..a picture perfect scene..

And then came the different part of the story..

Someone watching her..

the description was beautiful no doubt about that..

i wonder how you get these ideas..!!

Sitting by the window,writing..lips pursed in concentration..chewing pencil head absent mindedly..eye brows furrowed in deep concentration..

all the while i was visualizing as i have already told you..you have painted a beautiful scene in front of my eyes is all i could say...

You ended it here?

that's it?😲
Too bad!
par ek baath toh hain you've definitely created the anticipation😃
Now am dying to read the next part!!😆

Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏 Jazi! Atlast tumhe yahan aana pada!

You started it with rain!😳 Am impressed! may be your recent Mandhagini experience!😆😆
I love this start! Maan is already stumped by her... Please continue soon!😊
Edited by Preethi-Premi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preethi-Premi

👏👏 Jazi! Atlast tumhe yahan aana pada!

You started it with rain!😳 Am impressed! may be your recent Mandhagini experience!😆😆
I love this start! Maan is already stumped by her... Please continue soon!😊


You can say I am testing waters over here😆

And no not my mandakani experience, though I think it worked as an omen😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preethi-Premi

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">👏👏 Jazi! Atlast tumhe yahan aana pada!


</div>
You started it with rain!😳Am impressed! may be your recent Mandhagini experience!😆😆



<div>

I love this start! Maan is already stumped by her... Please continue soon!😊
</font>

am not talking to someone as someone forgot me..havent even said a hi par dekkho talking to their fianc. Mein toh kehti hun..biwi aaye sab ko bhul jate hain sister ko bhi *sob sob*
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh man... oh man...

ok before I even read anything... I am like sooo happy that you ve decided to bring the enchanting world of your writing talent to this forum...

cant wait to read the first update... and mind u i m so obsessed with ur writing u better post updates regularly... warna you knw how i get when i am in my bad-mood avatar

Edit:
Jazz... *sigh*

I dont think I can add anymore words to this... please please please continue soonn...
*begs with folded hands*😃
Edited by kesha2412 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds promising...plzz add me to ur PM list
do continue

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds interesting
plzz add me to the pm list
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited ...

First of all Jazz.,need to thank you posting it here.. You are such an amazing writer that i feel everyone should enjoy your way of thinking and expressing certain views and feelings..emotions..everything...I feel embarrassed after reading your stories..i am such a pathteic writer...guess i should stick to Psychology only...

Coming to your SS...why dnt you try and continue this as a FF..i am sure many would want to read more and you would enjoy too..
It was exceptionally awesome Jazz...i just love your style of writing..to really tell you the truth i have no words to describe how i felt reading ur SS..please do continue.. love u loads...muaahhh🤗
Edited by sangi1588 - 14 years ago
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Your writing style is absolutely beautiful.

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