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sush1

@sush1

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#141

bhari bharkam updates. Read both updates at one go 👏

what are u planning?
suspense mein romance ya romance mein suspense, since u have balanced both quite well.

Do give us a longer update later.

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Wow...awesome part...loved maan...

Thanks for the pm.

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Danina

@Danina

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Have fun wid ur dad and update was wow...maan should believe his feelings...loved d update thanks for d pm:)

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#144

I agree with Maan...he should put restraining order against himself😆 Stalking a girl like this, chalo all forgiven since it is MSK😳 So, now what? What route is he going to take? How is he going to approach her?

Will eagerly wait for Monday 😊

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Serenity_me

@Serenity_me

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#145

first of all, congratulations behna on ur debut,,,,,n sorry for late reply,,,,😳...class got cancelled due to rain😆,,,n i jumped on ur ff😆 n here iam reading about rain n its connection to geet n love😆,,,,,loved d intro part, u hv defined rain very beautifully...n then maan staring geet.😆

dadi's taunt on maan was really hilarious...And in the name of extra-curricular activity, you have your hoo-haa tai-chi shai-chi🤣

msk is in an impasse,,,,,now what would b his next step,,,,will he go straight n propose her😆, nahhh he will get a tight slap,,,,😆...but dadi would b really happy😆 after all her dear grand son has got a new curricular activity- stalking geet handa😆

hv fun wid uncle😃

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-Sangs-

@-Sangs-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Jazz... OMG...

First let me come to

Chapter 3

Stirredf and Awakened.

Hmm... Awesome jazz.. Love the convo between Pinky and Geet, it is just reminds me of my college days, where u know , we use to tease the girls , ask their story...😆

And also loved Georgette Heyer 😉

Coming to Convo between Dadi and MSK...what should i say..yeh Maan kabhi sudarega..

In short i was a short and sweet update..

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Impasse

Just loved how you have describes each and every scene so aptly.. Geet wanting to catch a glimpse of him..and Maan ..i didnt expect him to be there standing...staring at her.. Aww..

Loved the way you have written down the thoughts of Maan, the convo what he will have with Geet..it was so much like Maan.. a restraining order on himself..such a poor guy

Couldnt believe, Maan could be in an Impasse..

Awesome Jazz, Enjoy with Uncle.. And update soon 😛

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-lazybee-

@-lazybee-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Its nice update Jazz.😊..I like Maan's monologue...Now eagerly waiting to see what'll he do next😳

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fawzia jahan

@katerpillar

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#148

wen r u updating...waiting eagerly...😍

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: mchopra
Wow Jaz that was beautifull..
mmm maan is sadoo got that..
but geets char need to eteched more...i cant seem to get her yet..

I had hoped that the first three paras of Chapter 2 had set some insight into her. I loved the way deej summarized her...and in a much better way than I could...maybe this will help..

Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

4. The leads... I simply love your Maaneet - there is immense believabilty in their quirks, their flaws, their reactions to the happenings around them... i mean my fav bits from your desc..

Geet - A quiet girl - inward looking and happy in what she has made of her world, going with the flow of life and ready for opportunities when they come and when she is allowed to take them. While she doesnt take the route of the rebel that doesnt make a subserviant soul. She merely bides her time... nonetheless as focused on what she wants as the best of them... any man worth his salt will have to work his way to reach her inner sanctum... if he doesnt bother, then he's not worth it...

the last bits were what really made your Geet stand out from the melee

Maan - 'Not a recluse, but minds his own business'... what a brilliant and perceptice desc of how recluses perceive themselves 😆😆... A no-nonsense guy not out to peacock his riches or prove his worth & supriority... no cynical, world-weary billionaire out to prove to himself that the world is mercenary yet one who derives his worth from the 'toad-eaters' (yes yes... i know!! 😉)

One who genuinely seeks those in whom he discovers a kindred soul and eschews the rest... 'i mind my own business'...

And which is why there is an inevitabilty in their coming together... a classic case of 'like calls to like' and not the cliched 'opposites attract'

The reasons for why she is the way she is will come out in the coming up chapters...atleast I hope so it would.😆

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: --Shika--
me first again! 😆 you know it's kind of gives me energy to say this to you..to stalk you like Maan in ur FF. Haha. Jokes apart.. I love this update. I know nothing new. 'cause i absolutely adore each and every update. But ya i love a specific thing in this part. Obviously Maan's words. The magic started where the line started 'For the first time Maan Singh Khurana was stumped..' dont wonder if i end up repeating each and every line 'cause i know every dialogue of Maan in this update by heart. U've no remote idea how many times i've read it. I've no remote idea how many times i'll read it in future. I could copy paste those lines of Maan but m thru mobile so i cant. But Jazz this update took this FF to a whole new different level. And there's more i need 2tell u which m PMing u 4 obvious reasons..

😳😳

It feels really special when you stand by me so faithfully. And I have already PMed how you will receive my reply.

🤗