Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Ab tune hi toh kaha tha ki IGNORE... par mujhe nahi pata tha ke tu meri baat ko itna serious bhi leti hai...😆

Ab main karna toh nahi chahti thi aur teri baat bhi nahi taal sakti thi...toh maine beech ka rasta apna liya...😛 Maine socha RESERVE karke pehle teri khabar leti hoon, fir comment karti hoon... ab apni kartoot ko jyada mat chupa...😆

AB uske upar tune dusra jhatka de diya... he he he...adat se majbur... soch le...med ka side effect...😆

I mean...kisne socha tha ki the GREAT LIONESS Priya itni jaldi update karegi??? haina?? 😛😆 arey Sweet hun na...isi liye kabhi kabhi meri Sweetness jo hai...vo bahar aa hi jati hai...😆

No..no..no...I'm not complaining ! Balke main toh bahooot khush hoon... voh to teri mushkurahat se pata chal hi raha hai mujhe...😆

Haan...toh point pe aate hai... vo tha kya kuch...main toh bhul hi gayi...😆

First of all COngos and thank youuu for starting a new fic ! Rajeev fic ...! Well chalega...waise kisse imagine karna hai yeh toh mere hi upar hai..hai na? 😛 haan...hai toh tere hi upar...par behn hone ke naate tera bhi kuch farz banta hai ki nahi...😆

toh I am eagerly waiting to read about Khadoosss Rajeev ( Sumi!!! please dont throttle me! Maine toh pyaar se usse khadoos kaha...😛 he he he...yah jawab sirf Sumi hi de sakti hai...😆) and prem diwani Priyashi... arey itz not Priyashi...itz Prisha...!!! well Thank you...maine kaha ke...behn ke liye farz nibha toh tune toh abhi se nibhana suru karr diya...😆

oye...iss fic ko jaldi jaldi update kar diya kar...theek hai??? 😃 uss ke liye UD likhna bhi padta hai...aur mera dimag toh akshar holiday par hota hai...aur yeh toh tujhe pata hi hai...nahi...

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Ab mujhe kya pata tha ki tu apna record tod degi !! 😲

Itniii jaldi update !!😲😲 oopsss !! sorry sorry !! kahi tujhe meri hi nazar na lag jaaye !! 😛😆 arey behn ki nazar thode hi na lagti hai...voh teri khinchai ki vajah se mere left knee par chot kagg gaya...😆

update was aweeesooomeee !!! Thank you Doc...😃behn ka farz kafi achhe se nibhana janti hai tu...😆

Every emotion of Rajeev was spelt sooo nicely !! Every dialogue...every word just perfecccttt !!! thank you...😃

Infact i could imagine myself standing on terrace enjoying the rains...😉😛😆 kyoun tere yahan abhi tak barish nahi hui hai kya...jo khud ko heroine ki jagah imagine karr rahi hai...??? aur phir tujhe sardi ho gayi toh phir dosh bhi mere hoga...kyoun ke weekend par jo adla-badli ka plan tere yahan her week chalta hai...voh thoda ulat jayega...hai na...😆😉

Ab dekhna yeh hai ki woh kaun tha, jiske phone se ek ko heart attack aagaya aur dusri ussi katar mein hai...😆 mujhe kya pata...main toh samne khadi uss ke reactions ko note karne me lagi hui thi...take use yahan post kar sakun...isi liye phone convo toh maine suna hi nahi...😆

waise apna ek guess batau?? 😛 mujhe pata nahi aise kyun lagta hai ki Dev pyaar mein mile dhoke ke wajehse suicide karta hai...chodd...jyaada dil par mat lena meri baat...Raat ke 12.30 baje khaali dimaag toh bajega na?? 😆 tu aur tere guesses😆...khair main toh hun hi na...unn par experiment karne ke liye...😆

and ya...update soon...😊

*P.S.: Last post bhi unreserve kar diya hai...😛 aur maine uss par rply bhi ker diya hai...

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

negitive roll????...what ????...abhi to tumne kaha ke yeh fic rajeev fic hai...but tell me agar wo hero ke jagah villan ka roll play kare ga to kya yeh fic THE GREAT RAJEEV FIC ho ga??? arey yaar...tum ne sayad voh note pura nahi padha hai...!!! maine kaha ke 'Rajeev iss me sirf Hero nahi hai...negative role bhi uss ne thoda sa kiya hai'...matlab voh villan nahi hai...bass uss ka charachter jo hai...voh thoda sa neg hai...bass...!!! ab rajeev fic hai toh Rajeev hi hero hoga na...main use villan kaise kar sakti hun...hai ki nahi...😃

the update was really good...awesome...superb...delicious!!!! delicious.. tum ne teste bhi karr liya kya...😆

oh so he smoke and drunk???...dev and raj were best freind...but then why did he say that he is dead from me??? kyoun ke Rajeev iss duniya me phir se akela ho gaya...voh Dev se baht pyar karta tha na...toh taklif hui use...aur apna gussa uss ne iss tarh se bahr nikala...😊...i am a little confused why did he sucide????who is mitali...did raj and prisha met before????what happend to him that he become so rude and mean???...maybe my confusion is a bit more then little😆 he he he...aur itne sare confusions main ek hi ud me toh disclose nahi kar sakti na...thoda time toh milna hi chahiye mujhe...😆

the raining part was really good...as you say we can imagine any one so i imagine naina😉...full of feelings...awesome👏👏👏 Thank you... Esha😃

what did the men herd in the phone which gave him such a big shock???😕😕😕...and what happend to prisha???? inn confusions ko bhi abhi rehne do...uds ke sath sath ye sare clear hote jayenge...😃

hey priya plz yaar remove all of my confusion by updating soon...i dont have any problem wid this short update bcz you ud really fast...thanx!!!😃 arey...yaar...voh toh maine pehle se likh rakha tha...isi liye jaldi me post kar diya...varna mera dimag itna fast kahan chalta hai jo main ud jaldi karr sakun...phir bhi main apna dimag daudane ki koshish karr rahi hun...😛

cont soon ...dying to read the whole story!!! next part jaldi post karungi... lekin iss me bhi thoda baht confusion hi hoga...pahle se warning de rahi hun...😆

love yah

esha

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Thanks for the update it was superb... thank you dear...😃

So Rajeev and Prisha have met and now not together... hmmm...something like dat...😉

Rajeev hs lost his close friend perhaps his only friend... yupe...aur voh isi liye kafi tuta hua hai...

Loved Prisha character... thanks...

Pls try and cont soon to help us understand better... will try my best dear...😃

and dont worry Rajeev being negative we will still love him. And drinking and smoking doesnt mean he is a bad guy... yupe...yehi point main bhi dikhana chahti hun...😛

Waing for more...

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

Who was this Dev?? Why did you have to kill him...ek tp waise bhi bechare ke parents nahi the, ab wo bhi nahi raha... main sach keh rahi hun my Lord maine Dev ko nahi mara...😆

Dev ko maarne ke punishment me, isse bada comment nahi milega... vaise bhi yeh ud bhi toh chota tha na...chalo koi baat nahi...jab bhi dil kare...aur jitna bhi...post kar do...😛

Dekho main rajeev par drool bhi nahi kar payi...i was feeling very unhappy...death ka naam sunke aise hi hota hai, chahe wo fictional char ki hi death kyon na ho... awww...sorry sweety...agar tumhe bura laga toh...😊

anyways, update sooon...there are too many question going on in the mind... drafting me busy hun re...kuch add karr rahi hun aur kuch delete...isiliye late ho raha hai...

Vidushi.

Originally posted by: bakula_gandhi

update was good

Raj has lost his best friend.

please continue soon

Originally posted by: -purnima-

that was pretty soon 😛😛... har baar we say u update late 😆😆😆 ... Is baar it was soon 😃😃...make it a habit 😛😛... he he he... actually part pahle se hi likh rakha tha...isi liye jaldi ud kar diya...par next ud ke liye abhi tak confused hun...phir bhi jaldi ud karungi...😃

...sorry abt priyashi 😆😆😆 ... when i commented i was thinking abt something else 😳😳...spelling mistake hogaya 😆😆😆 ha ha ha...hota hai... hota hai...mere sath bhi aisa kai baar ho chuka hai...😆

as 4 lead actress... imaging self 😍 is better option 🤪... 😆😆😆...waise imagining u is also not bad idea 😛😛... kisi ko bhi imagine karo...kya farq padta hai...hamari nazar toh Rajeev par hi rahegi...vahan se hategi hi nahi...hai ki nahi...

awww 😔 ...starting mein hero ko sad kar diya 😒... his best friend suicide 😭😭😭... maine toh pahle hi kaha tha ke story as usall nahi hogi...

smoking & drinking Rajeev imagine karna thoda mushkil hai 😆😆😆...but he really seem to be dependent on Drinking main uss se baht kuch karwanewali hun...jise imagine karna mushkil hai...par itna yekeen hai ke...sab ko sayad achha lage...😉

as 4 girl in rain ... guess she is Prisha 😛😛...& is she wishing 4 Rajeev 😉😉... lage raho...😉
My god... first part mein dono hero heroine ko sad kar diya 😆😆😆... aadat hai meri...main kya karun...sayad next ud me sare readers khush ho jaye...haan par hero-heroine ka pata nahi...😆

ab kiska phone tha 😉😉😉 ... what did she hear 😛😛... u will tell only in next UD 😆😆😆...so continue soon 😛😛.. nahi...main next ud me bhi voh nahi likhungi...he he he...story leap lega...😉😆

as 4 Rajeev playing both hero & negative 😍 ...gud 😳😳 ... means it will be a treat 🤪 ...atleast from me u will not get galiyaan 😆😆😆... haan neg me bhi toh main use hero ki tarah hi picturize karungi...kyoun ke main jo likh rahi hun...😆...rajeev toh galat ho hi nahi sakta...pakki baat...😆

UD soon 😃😃

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Prisha oops Priya😆😆😆 Hiieee Suhana😆

see now I am actually imagining u as Prisha.. achha hai mere liye...😆

Poor Raj!!! he seems to b addicted to smoking and drinking..Dev pleaded Raj to quit drinking but he was unable to do so..he cud give up his life but not drinking😭😭😭I think his character will b grey here and u confirmed it too. thoda sa grey shade doongi usse...par rahega toh voh HERO hi na...mere fic me kisi aur ko main HERO banayu...iss se pahle main 21st floor se kudd kar jaan na de dungi...😆

chalo bahut hua sweet sweet Rajeev now we'll see wat effect this Raj has on our senses..😆😆 mujhe bhi toh dekhni hai na...😆

He seems to b tired of his life.. uss ka pura charachter abhi tak maine likha hi kahan hai...😉

How did Dev died?? did he commit suicide or was he murdered?? then who is Mitali??I think she is his fiancee. yupe...Raj ne ek baar kaha bhi toh tha Dev se...remember...???

Raj was really broken apart with his death but he cudn't do anything.

It seems Prisha is in love will Rajeev and they both knew each other in their childhood..why did they got separated?? pata nahi...main dono ko puch ke tumhe inform karti hun...okay...😆

I think she'll get a shock when she'll see him now. iss baat par bhi mujhe doubt hai...phir bhi jo hoga...jaldi hoga...!!! tumhe toh pata hi hai ke...main hero-heroine ko jyada der tak dur nahi rakh pati...aur agar baat Rajeev ki ho toh kabhi nahi...😆

Wat happened to her mamaji?? whose call was that which lead to these events?? yeh bhi sayad abhi dis-close na kar payun...par ek do ud ke baad voh bhi ho jayega...😃

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

loved the part...

Originally posted by: ivre

Hi Priya Hiieee Sur...kaisi hai...

sabse pehle sabse end ki baat karti hu. Mujhe tumhara note dekh kar bahhuuut khushi hui! Kyuki mai ajkal aise hi fics dhundh rahi hu...typical love stories se bore ho gai thi. sayad yehi wajah thi ke maine iss fic ko start kiya...par yeh nahi keh sakti ke...tum jo chahati ho vo iss fic me milega ya nahi...sahi hai ke typical love story toh nahi likh rahi hun...par pata nahi yaar...baht confused hun...matlab mujhe khud iss story par doubt hai yaar...😕😕🥱

One suggestion- please kisi k bhi kehne par ya fir even public demand par apni story ya characterization change mat karna. ;) mujhe kya pagal kutte ne kata hai jo change karungi...!!! aaj kal main baht hi strong girl bann gayi hun...aur mujhe kisi ki dhamki se koi faraq bhi nahi padta...!!! aur sach kahun toh jo mujhe darate the...voh aaj mere frnds power dekh kar darrte hain...!!! see...mere sath mere itneee sare dost hain ke...koun mujh se panga lega yaar...use apni haddi pyari nahi hai kya...😆

Dev ko maine as smeer sharma imagine kar lia...kyuki sabse zada mare huey scene mene usi k dekhe hai. he he he...😆

First part me kuch zada pata nahi chala...kafi sarre questions zarur khade ho gaye, jo tumko jaldi se jaldi answer karne hai. nahi ker sakti re...iss ke liye jaldi ud post karna padega...aur tum toh meri speed janti ho😆...phir bhi try karungi jaldi jaldi ud karne ki...😃

Overall mujhe kafi acha laga. And isey Rajeev fic banane k liye very good :D sab ke emotion ka khayal rakha hai maine...tabhi Rajeev fic banaya...sabhi Rajeev fan khud ko imagine karenge...uss ke opposite me...😆

take care and update soon

thanks for the pm

S