Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5)

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#51

abhi mere speech ki bari...😆

haan toh mere pyare bandhu...

pahle INTRO ki baat karti hun...!!! mujhe thodi si hassi aayi...par main hassi baht zorr se...kyoun ke...jaisa ki maine socha tha...vohi hua...!!! sabhi ko yehi laga ke...Rajeev ek aisa role play karr raha hai...jo LOVE par trust nahi karta...aur Prisha...LOVE par belive karti hai...!!! sayad aap yeh soch rahe honge ke aage Prisha ke kuch betuke se acts se Rajeev uss par pura flat ho jayega...aur dono hassi khushi ...bahaon me bahain daale duet gate hue nazar aayenge...😆 hai na...toh mujhe baht dukh ke sath kehna padd raha hai ke...iss me aap ko yeh spice nahi milega...😆

ohkkk...thoda sa clear kar deti hun...Rajeev as usall ek baht hi gud aur sweet sweet sa charachter play nahi karr raha hai...!!! jaisa ki maine hint de hi diya hai ke...voh smoke bhi karta hai n drink bhi...aur baki ke charachter ke bare me...aap fic padh kar jaan hi jayoge...!!!

lekin ek baat aur...Rajeev iss me sirf Hero nahi hai...negative role bhi vohi play karr raha hai...toh zara bach ke...galiyan jarur dena...matlab galiyaan aisi ho...jo mujhe digest karne me ashani ho...bina polycrol ke...😆

love yah

Priya😃

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Ab mujhe kya pata tha ki tu apna record tod degi !! 😲

Itniii jaldi update !!😲😲 oopsss !! sorry sorry !! kahi tujhe meri hi nazar na lag jaaye !! 😛😆

update was aweeesooomeee !!!

Every emotion of Rajeev was spelt sooo nicely !! Every dialogue...every word just perfecccttt !!!

Infact i could imagine myself standing on terrace enjoying the rains...😉😛😆

Ab dekhna yeh hai ki woh kaun tha, jiske phone se ek ko heart attack aagaya aur dusri ussi katar mein hai...😆

waise apna ek guess batau?? 😛 mujhe pata nahi aise kyun lagta hai ki Dev pyaar mein mile dhoke ke wajehse suicide karta hai...chodd...jyaada dil par mat lena meri baat...Raat ke 12.30 baje khaali dimaag toh bajega na?? 😆

and ya...update soon...😊

*P.S.: Last post bhi unreserve kar diya hai...😛

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 14 years ago

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

negitive roll????...what ????...abhi to tumne kaha ke yeh fic rajeev fic hai...but tell me agar wo hero ke jagah villan ka roll play kare ga to kya yeh fic THE GREAT RAJEEV FIC ho ga???

the update was really good...awesome...superb...delicious!!!!

oh so he smoke and drunk???...dev and raj were best freind...but then why did he say that he is dead from me???...i am a little confused why did he sucide????who is mitali...did raj and prisha met before????what happend to him that he become so rude and mean???...maybe my confusion is a bit more then little😆

the raining part was really good...as you say we can imagine any one so i imagine naina😉...full of feelings...awesome👏👏👏

what did the men herd in the phone which gave him such a big shock???😕😕😕...and what happend to prisha????

hey priya plz yaar remove all of my confusion by updating soon...i dont have any problem wid this short update bcz you ud really fast...thanx!!!😃

cont soon ...dying to read the whole story!!!

love yah

esha

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Thanks for the update it was superb...

So Rajeev and Prisha have met and now not together...

Rajeev hs lost his close friend perhaps his only friend...

Loved Prisha character...

Pls try and cont soon to help us understand better...

and dont worry Rajeev being negative we will still love him. And drinking and smoking doesnt mean he is a bad guy...

Waing for more...

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Who was this Dev?? Why did you have to kill him...ek tp waise bhi bechare ke parents nahi the, ab wo bhi nahi raha...

Dev ko maarne ke punishment me, isse bada comment nahi milega...

Dekho main rajeev par drool bhi nahi kar payi...i was feeling very unhappy...death ka naam sunke aise hi hota hai, chahe wo fictional char ki hi death kyon na ho...

anyways, update sooon...there are too many question going on in the mind...

Vidushi.

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bakula_gandhi

@bakula_gandhi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

update was good

Raj has lost his best friend.

please continue soon

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

that was pretty soon 😛😛... har baar we say u update late 😆😆😆 ... Is baar it was soon 😃😃...make it a habit 😛😛...

...sorry abt priyashi 😆😆😆 ... when i commented i was thinking abt something else 😳😳...spelling mistake hogaya 😆😆😆

as 4 lead actress... imaging self 😍 is better option 🤪... 😆😆😆...waise imagining u is also not bad idea 😛😛...

awww 😔 ...starting mein hero ko sad kar diya 😒... his best friend suicide 😭😭😭...

smoking & drinking Rajeev imagine karna thoda mushkil hai 😆😆😆...but he really seem to be dependent on Drinking

as 4 girl in rain ... guess she is Prisha 😛😛...& is she wishing 4 Rajeev 😉😉...
My god... first part mein dono hero heroine ko sad kar diya 😆😆😆...

ab kiska phone tha 😉😉😉 ... what did she hear 😛😛... u will tell only in next UD 😆😆😆...so continue soon 😛😛..

as 4 Rajeev playing both hero & negative 😍 ...gud 😳😳 ... means it will be a treat 🤪 ...atleast from me u will not get galiyaan 😆😆😆...

UD soon 😃😃

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Hi Prisha oops Priya😆😆😆

see now I am actually imagining u as Prisha..

Poor Raj!!! he seems to b addicted to smoking and drinking..Dev pleaded Raj to quit drinking but he was unable to do so..he cud give up his life but not drinking😭😭😭I think his character will b grey here and u confirmed it too.

chalo bahut hua sweet sweet Rajeev now we'll see wat effect this Raj has on our senses..😆😆

He seems to b tired of his life..

How did Dev died?? did he commit suicide or was he murdered?? then who is Mitali??I think she is his fiancee.

Raj was really broken apart with his death but he cudn't do anything.

It seems Prisha is in love will Rajeev and they both knew each other in their childhood..why did they got separated??

I think she'll get a shock when she'll see him now.

Wat happened to her mamaji?? whose call was that which lead to these events??

Pls continue soon

Bye

Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Hi Priya

sabse pehle sabse end ki baat karti hu. Mujhe tumhara note dekh kar bahhuuut khushi hui! Kyuki mai ajkal aise hi fics dhundh rahi hu...typical love stories se bore ho gai thi.

One suggestion- please kisi k bhi kehne par ya fir even public demand par apni story ya characterization change mat karna. ;)

Dev ko maine as smeer sharma imagine kar lia...kyuki sabse zada mare huey scene mene usi k dekhe hai.

First part me kuch zada pata nahi chala...kafi sarre questions zarur khade ho gaye, jo tumko jaldi se jaldi answer karne hai.

Overall mujhe kafi acha laga. And isey Rajeev fic banane k liye very good :D

take care and update soon

thanks for the pm

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

part 1
wow what a start...
oh that Dev part was so sad and seeing Rajeev so reactionless and emotionless sure did hurt...
so thats the female lead's intro...
does she mean Rajeev?
hope yes...
cont soon...