Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5)

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INTRO

RAJEEV MATHUR...
Pyar...huh...PYAR...kuch nahi hota...zindagi ko sirf galat rahain hi deti hai...aur kabhi kabhi do logon ka pyar kisi tishre ki zindagi ko tabah kar deti hai...!!! par inshan jaan bujh kar yehi galati baar baar doharata hai...!!! SACHHA PYAR...jise TRUE LOVE kahte hain...jise kai sare writers ne kai tarah se yehi bayan kiya hai ke iss se jyada khubshurat duniya me aur kuch bhi nahi...sab bakwas hai...
main kehta hun...yeh ramp par chal rahe us model ki tarah hai...jo logon ke samne toh behad khubshurat dikhti hai...par ander se tuti hui...bikhri hui...langadati hui ek aisa ehsaas...jo kabhi kabhi un khubshurat models ki tarah zindagi ko khamosh bhi kar deti hai...khud ki zindagi ko maut ke hawale kar deti hai...
PYAR...CHAHAT...kabhi DHOKE ki shaqal le lete hain...toh kabhi vohi sachha pyar inshan jhuthla kar apni zindagi me aage badh jata hai...!!! yeh bhi nahi sochta ke is chand dino ke pyar ko le kar voh piche kya chod gaya hai...
kai zindagiyan barbad hue hain...aur kai zindagi aaj bhi barbad ho rahe hain...!!! phir bhi log pyar karte hain...!!! kyoun...un ka jawab bhi bada ajeeb hota hai...!!! voh jawab yeh dete hain ke...pyar zindagi ko sukun deta hai...din-raat dhadakte hue is dil ko aaram deta hai...
par main kehta hun PYAR...sirf DHOKA hai...aur kuch nahi...!!! sirf ek taklif... zindagi ko galat rahon me dalne ka ek anjana chahat...
bottle ke tuttne ki awaz aayi...Rajeev ne jaan bujh kar toda tha voh bottle...!!! use khali bottles pasand nahi...!!! khali bottles...use uss ke zindagi ke khalipan ka ehsaas dilate hain...
BACK-GROUND...
Maine dil se kaha,dhoond laana khushi
Na-samajh laya gum,to yeh gum hi sahi
Maine dil se kaha,dhoond laana khushi
Na-samajh laya gum,to yeh gum hi sahi
Maine dil se kaha,dhoond laana khushi
Bechaara kahan jaanta hai,
Khalish hai yeh,ya khala hai
Shehar bhar ki khushi se
Yeh dard mera bhala hai
Jashna yeh raas na aaye
Mazaa toh bas gam main aaya hai
Maine dil se kaha,dhoond laana khushi
Na-samajh laya gum,to yeh gum hi sahi
Kabhi hai ishq ka ujaala
Kabhi hai maut ka andhera
Bataao kaun vess hoga
Main jogi banu ya lutera
Kayi chehre hai is dil ke
Na-jaane kaunsa mera
Maine dil se kaha dhoond laana khushi
Nasamajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi
Hazaaron aaise phaasle the
Jo Tai karne chale the
raahe magar chal padi thi
Aur peeche hum rah gaye the
kadam Do chaar chal paaye
Kiye phere tere mann ke
Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi
Na-samajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi
Maine dil se kaha, dhoond laana khushi
Na-samajh laya gum, to yeh gum hi sahi
PRISHA SHARMA...
Pyar anayas hi hota hai...ek dam achanak...pata hi nahi chalta... kab...kis se... kahan... aur kaise ho jata hai...!!! kabhi kabhi hum kisi ko apna First crush kah dete hain...par baad me vohi crush itna gehra ho jata hai ke pata hi nahi chalta ke voh pyar me kab dabdil ho jata hai...
par yeh bhi sach hai ke pyar sirf khush-kishmat walon ke naseeb ka hi ek hissa hai... pyar ka matlab yeh nahi hota ke voh aap ko mil hi jayega...!!! lekin haan...aap khud ko use pyar karne se naa toh rok payoge...aur na hi is feelings ko apne dil me gehra hone se khud ko bacha payoge...
kabhi kabhi khud par baht gussa bhi aayega...ke kyoun is pareshani ko apne gale se bandha...kyoun khud hi apna jeena dubhar kar diya...zindagi aaram se beet hi toh rahi thi...phir kyoun nahi sambhal paye iss khud-garz dil ko...???
sayad kabhi aap yeh bhi koshish karo...apne uss pyar ko bhul kar...kisi aur chiz me dil lagane ki...kuch der ke liye toh aap success ho jayoge...par achanak se aisa kuch ho jayega...ke aap phir se khud ko usi bhanvar me fasha hua payoge...zindagi jaise usi ke ird-gird ghumti hui nazar aayegi...chah kar bhi uss chehre ko na toh apne ankhen se hata payoge aur na hi apne dil se...
par...pyar kuch toh hai...koi bala...ya khushi...kabhi yadain toh kabhi samne ka haqiqat...haan...lekin zindagi kabhi kabhi sirf usi ke ird-gird ghumti hui nazar aati hai...jaise uss k alawa na toh aur koi haqiqat hai...aur na hi koi manzil...
pyar ka na toh koi waqt hota hai aur na hi aap ko aap ka pyar mil jayega...is baat ka bharosha...par yeh bhi sach hai ke pyar ko koi nahi samajh pata...kabhi kachhi umar me ho jati hai toh kabhi... umar ke akhiri padav...me...par zindagi me pyar toh hota hi hai...
Jagjeet singh ka voh gazal yaad aata hai...
"na umr ki seema ho...
na janmon ka ho bandhan
jab pyar kare koi
toh dekhe keval mann..."
Prisha..."...kisi ne piche se bulaya...aur Prisha bhaagti hui chali gayi...
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WHY I LOVE YOU SO...
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Ok...that's enough for today...Plz do let me know whether i shud cont or not...Plz leave ur views here or press d LIKE botton...😃
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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::okay...ab mere SPEECH ki bari::😆

PS*:-
Prisha Sharma...
played the main lead...opposite RAJEEV...😃
kisi perticular actress ka naam nahi likha...kyoun ke mujhe khud jyada tele-actress ki knowledge nahi hai...isiliye adjust ker lena...n kisi ko bhi is role me imagine kar sakte ho...lekin agar koi bhi aap ke imagination me na aaye iss role ke liye, toh better option hai ke MUJHE IMAGINE KAR LO...😆
pehli baar try karr rahi hun ek full fledge RAJEEV fic likhne ki...baht hi confused ho kar ye fic start karr rahi hun...isi liye baht jyada darr bhi laga raha hai...😆...fic ka naam bhi sayad thoda ajeeb lage...par uss waqt jo bhi dil me aaya likh diya...😆
Ab Tumhare Hawale Rajeev Fic Sathiyo...😆
Love yah
Priya😃
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayyy for a new fic !!!! Nice ke tune Rajeev ka naam Rajeev hi rakha !!!! Prisha is also a beautiful name..kahin yeh toh nahi ke Priya likhte likhte Prisha type ho gaya...???😆😆😆

BTW yeh uncle itna negative kyun hai...???😕
Edited by Dhara_s - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ahemz...chalo aaj ki nek kaam tumne kar di...jeeti raho balike!! 😉

And wow...its Mathur Saab!! 😆😆 Though mujhe pata hai this Mathur Saab will not be literally kickass like Arvind Mathur...but character sketch to dhasoo hai...😉😳😳

Lekin aise character me mujhe bas ek hi prob hai...mujhe janna hota hai na...ki mere Raj ko kya pareshan kar rahi hai...I mean...wat made him such a non-believer in love!!😳😳

Khair...wo kar to karwi baatein raha tha...lekin mujhe bada sweet sunayi de raha tha...😳😳...beautiful words!! 😆😆 Pic bhi awesum hai sweetie...😃😃 aur haan...gaana maine suna nahi...but lyrics bahut achhe hai...😛

And female lead is named Prisha...😉...hmm smart ha!!😉😆 Chalo isme main asani se khudko imagine karungi...😆😆😆...tum karna apne aap ko imagine...huh!!😆😆😆 And ye madam to fultoo pyar ko manti hai...😃😃 gud gud!!

Abhi inn dono ka meet kab hoga? I mean...first part!! 😳😳 Jaldi UD karna ok? Mujhe kahani ka base janne ka bahut shaukh hota hai...😆😆

Waise...dont worry...Rajeev fic ko hamare hawale kar diya na...so indirectly Rajeev bhi hamare hawale hua...😉😉...so we r gonna take care ki ye fic tum thik se complete kar do.😉😉

Now finally thank you...for starting this fic!! Will be w8ing for more...😳

Sumi. 😳😳
Edited by Sumi_162710 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kya baat hai mathur saab aa hi gaye yahan per 👏👏👏 ab tumne humaare hawaale kar hi diya hai rajeev ko toh uski chintaa tum mat karo unka humsab pura pura khayaal rakhenge😉😉😉

intro part to kaafi interesting laga jahan per rajeev ko pyaar me koi believe nahi hai aur thoda sa rough bhi hai lekin jaisa bhi hum hi logon ka to hai na😉😉😉 aur bahut achcha bhi hai😍😍😍

aur female lead ye to h bahut zaada believe karti hain pyaar pe ab prisha ka koi play na kar raha ho to main hi karlungi mujhe koi problem nahi hogi😳😳😳
ab intro se to mera pet bhara nahi hai isliye ise pls jaldi se update karna😊😊😊
shreya😃😃😃
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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let me ignore it ... 😆😆 may be i am not intrested 😆 ...coz u asked me i can ignore if i am not intrested 😆😆😆

My mathur saab 😍 ...*drool*

Ok comment bhi karna hai...😛😛 😆... 😳😳😳 ..OK ab Rajeev FF hai toh bura ho hi nahi sakta 😳😳...& u wrote it ...tab to bilkul hi chance nahi hai 😃😃...after reading all ur previous FFs experience bolta hai 😃😃 ..

Sabse pehle i love the title 😳😳 ... coz from last 8-9 years i am asking this question myself... why I love Rajeev... ☺️ ...

ab uske baad i love the name Rajeev Mathur 😳😳 ... hope he is not as tough & aggressive like Mathur saab 😳😳... kahin yeh bhi cop toh nahin hai 😛😛 ...dont make him a cop else u will send him on some difficult case 😆😆😆

Priyashi-- good choice... 👏👏... naam mein bhi 😉😉 & also u didn't selected any lead actress 😛😛😛 ...

Mathur saab ko pyaar se thodi nahi i mean kafi problem hai 😆😆😆 ... lets see how the 2 different worlds meet & ek nai kahani banti hai 😃😃

will (im) patiently wait for the story & mystery to unfold 😍

continue soon 😃😃




Edited by -purnima- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Rajeev Mathur...ab main kya boloon, aaj dopahar tak main rajeev mathur naam ke ek buddhe se behad nafrat karti thi😡...lekin ab to raj bhi rajeev mathur ban gaya...chalo koi nahi, buddha apni jagah hai😡 aur raj to raj hai *dreamy😍😳.

Aur Prisha...wo to full too loveria ki maari hai😆..lagta hai Rajeev ko jaldi se uska diagnosis kar ke ijaaj karna padega..😉☺️

Waise Rajeev ka chakkar kya hai, itna anti-pyar movement khol ke baitha hai. Koi defect ya side effect😆 😆(dialogue original nahi hai). Kisi ne diya dhoka ya abhi tak nahi aya hai pyaar ka jhonka?😕😕 Is nafrat ke karan hai divorced-jhagdalu mummy-dedy, ya bechare ki is halat ki jimmedar hai koi lady?😉😉(dedy for rhyming purpose) Jab baat Rajeev ke fic ki ho to hum rehte hain forever ready.😳😳

Apun kya bolti hai, fic rajeev-prisha ka accha hai, par apna alekh bhi hota to fic ekdum mast bole to jhakkas ho jaata. Wo kya hai na, comic refil (relief) bhi to hona bolta hai. baki ke cartoon nahi ho to bhi apun ko chalega, are apna rajeev ka fic hai na mamu. Vhalega kya Daudega. Aur agar time pe uodate nahi mila to dauda dauda ke marega bhi.😆😆😆

Waiting for an Update. Jaldi kar dena.

Vidushi


Edited by lallulal2010 - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

Hello...doc...reserved ker ke so gayi kya...😛


Ab tune hi toh kaha tha ki IGNORE...
Ab main karna toh nahi chahti thi aur teri baat bhi nahi taal sakti thi...toh maine beech ka rasta apna liya...😛 Maine socha RESERVE karke pehle teri khabar leti hoon, fir comment karti hoon...

AB uske upar tune dusra jhatka de diya...

I mean...kisne socha tha ki the GREAT LIONESS Priya itni jaldi update karegi??? haina?? 😛😆
No..no..no...I'm not complaining ! Balke main toh bahooot khush hoon...

Haan...toh point pe aate hai...

First of all COngos and thank youuu for starting a new fic ! Rajeev fic ...! Well chalega...waise kisse imagine karna hai yeh toh mere hi upar hai..hai na? 😛

toh I am eagerly waiting to read about Khadoosss Rajeev ( Sumi!!! please dont throttle me! Maine toh pyaar se usse khadoos kaha...😛) and prem diwani Priyashi...

oye...iss fic ko jaldi jaldi update kar diya kar...theek hai??? 😃
Edited by Revolutionbreez - 14 years ago
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good another SK after a long time...
good girl...
Mathur hmmm...
after reading his character sketch, he appears to be unromantic and angry young man...
chalo matches the Mathur saab...
interesting dear...
cont soon and pm me...

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