Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5)

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

wow that was the super fast speed of the update😆😆😆 first part ke liye kahun totumne negative bana hi diya rajeev ko like drinking and smoking and talking rudely to his uncle and his friend dev uska bahut achcha dost tha jaisa ki tumne fb me dikhaya ab isko thoda nahi thoda nahi bahut pyaara bhi bana do and prisha wo kya rajeev ke baare me hi baat kar rahi thi😕😕😕 waise pehla update thoda confusing sa laga magar tha achcha 👏👏👏 isliye zaada to nahi likh paayungi ud ke baare me lets see jaise jaise ud post hote jaaenge waise waise confusions clear hongi😉😉😊

jaisa sur ne kaha tha main bhi yahi kahungi kisi ke bhi kehne se apni fic ka haal ztmk ki tarah mat karna jisse tumhe use rokna pade...aur baaki as you like to go on with your story we were happy to read your writing😊😊😊 pls dont mind i just said what i feel rest is up to you😊😊😊 and update soon just like this part😉😉😉

take care😃😃

shreya😃😃😃

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Now is see why you were saying that this Fic will be different.

To be honest it is difficult to think of Raj in a negative role...it will be interesting to read of him is such a role.

To start with Raj smokes and drinks. He is devestated by Dev's death.

Seems that Raj and Dev were good friends. And being a true friend, dev always tried to convince Raj to give up his bad habits.But Raj would never agree.

How did dev die? and who is mittali.

What did mamaji hear, which gave him such a big shock.

please continue soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

So am here finally!! Part pehle hi padha tha as usual...but wasnt getting the tym or mood to comment properly...😳

Waise pata hai...ye part padhte waqt...I cud feel a certain pinch in my heart...main bas Rajeev ki khamosh nigahon ko imagine kar rahi thi...😳..and damn...the guy is too awesum!! Tumhe to pata hai na RK ye sab kitna awesum tarike se portray karta hai...😳😳...to bas...main kho hi gayi..😆

But getting serious...😳😳...I of course knw..its not sumthing typical u r writing...😊 Priya hai...hatke to hoga hi!!😉😉

But Rajeev lost Dev......his best frnd...He surely hated his father for killing Dev's father......bechara bas gam me duba hua rehta tha...aur ab Dev bhi chala gaya and that too...he committed suicide!!

Pata hai Rajeev jab keh raha tha...ki kisne usse aisa dhoka diya hoga ki Dev usse chhor kar chala gaya...bina uske bare me soche...I cud just feel these lines...😭...pls continue soon na...kyunki agar story aage nahi badhegi to main Rajeev ko aur behtar kaise jaanungi...😳😳

Btw...isme heroine bhi thi...😆😆...koi phn convo sun liya usne hai na?😆😆...Tum UD kar dena...main padh lungi uski problem...😆😆...but main attention is on Rajeev...as usual..😆😆

Waise...Rajeev neg bhi hai and positive bhi...gr8!! Bekaar me kisise ladhne ka jhanjhat nahi hoga!!😆😆 Par tumhe lagta hai main usse gaaliya dungi?😆😆 🤣 Dont worry...mere sahi & ghalat ka definition Rajeev ke saath saath badal jata hai...😉😉...jahan Rajeev hota hai...bas wohi sahi ho jata hai..😉😉

Waise Puri ko kehna...Soundtrack dekhne se smoking & drinking Rajeev imagine karna easy ho jayega...😆😆...she shud w8 till then...😆😆 (am sure ye fic August tak khatam to nahi hoga...bas kuch hi parts ayenge film ki release tak...tab tak adjust karne ko kaho😆😆)

Abhi tum der mat karo samjhi? This is my next fav fic of urs 😃...(ab ye count mat karo tumhari kaunsi fic meri fav nahi hai...huh😆😆)...iska UD jaldi karo...bas!!😳😳

Belated Happy Birthday once again...😉

Luv,
Sumi .😳

Edited by Sumi_162710 - 14 years ago