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Episode:-2

after few year of Dev's death...

NIGHT STARS,

Mumbai

Mumbai seher ka ek night club...!!! jahan raat ke 9 baje ke baad itni bheed jamm jati hai ke...logon ko baithne ke liye bhi table nahi milta...

her raat 10 baje uss ka show hota hai...

khubshurat si ladki...naam SAIRA...!!! her raat thik 10 baje aati hai... center par baithe...ek khubshurat sa gana gati hai...!!! kafi chahne-wale hain us ke...!!! kuch us ka gana sunn ne aate hain toh kuch apne galat iradon se aate hain...!!! par Saira sirf apna kaam karne aati hai...

night club ke bahr achanak ek silver colour ki mercedes blenz aa kar ruki...!!! Rajeev bahar aaya...us ke piche se Arjun ne kaha:-"sir...yeh jagah itni achhi nahi hai...aap...

Rajeev ne use dekha ...phir kaha:-"apna faishla main khud karta hun...!!! tum agar ander aana chahte ho toh aa sakte ho...varna tum yahin is car me mera wait kar sakte ho...agar yeh sab bhi nahi hota toh wapas hotel ja sakte ho...

itna keh kar Rajeev night club ke ander chala gaya...

Arjun ne khada hua kuch der phir khud se kaha:-"ajeeb inshan hai yeh bhi...hamesha bass apni mann ki hi karte hain...!!! kare jo marzi...mujhe kya...

Arjun vohin baitha raha...use aise clubs me jana pasand nahi...

Rajeev ander aaya...use iss club se koi matlab nahi...voh bass kuch der bheed me baith na chahta tha...pata nahi kyoun use kafi akela mehshush ho raha tha aaj...!!! sayad isliye kyoun ke her ek deal me us ke sath Dev hota tha...par aaj nahi...

ek large whishkey ka order de kar Rajeev baitha raha...ek table par... ciggrate jalayi...thodi hi der me ek waiter aaya...whishkey table par rakh kar chala gaya...

achanak club ki lyts thodi dheemi hui...halki si roshni charon taraf thi... aur thodi hi dur par guiter liye koi baitha hua tha...

taliyon ki gunj uthi...aur kuch logon ke dirty comments bhi Rajeev ke kanon me sunayi diye...us ladki ko le kar...!!! par Rajeev ko iss se koi farq nahi padta tha...voh busy tha apne drink ke sath...

thodi der me us ke kaanon me ek suruli si awaz sunayi diya...

Aa Aaa Aaa Aaa Aaa

Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa

Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa

Bindiya Mehndi Kangna Chudi Jhumar Gehna

Pyaase Pyaase Naina Sune Padein Tere Bina

Bindiya Mehndi Kangna Chudi Jhumar Gehna

Pyaase Pyaase Naina Sune Padein Tere Bina

Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa

Palko Pe Khwab Sajana

Aankhiyo Se Neeind Churana

Roothe Piya Ko Haske Mana Na

Palko Pe Khwab Sajana

Aankhiyo Se Neeind Churana

Roothe Piya Ko Haske Mana Na

Yeh Haqeeqat Hai Ya Ke Fasana

Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa

Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Hai Nai Lagda Tere Bina Dil Mera

Sajna Aa Bhi Jaa Sajna Aa Hi Jaa

song khatam hone ke baad phir se taliyaan gujne lagi thi vahan...!!!aur phir se kuch dirty comments bhi pade the Rajeev ke kanon me us ladki ko le kar...

Rajeev ne us ladki ko dekha...us dheemi si roshni me...thik se us ka chehra dikhayi nahi de raha tha...Rajeev ne apna mann phir se apni drink ki taraf diya...

voh ladki apna gana khatam kar ke ja chuki thi...Rajeev ka drink bhi khatam ho chuka tha...!!! voh table par bill rakhte hue utha jane ke liye...

jate waqt us ne suna kisi ki awaz:- "Saira...tujhe manager ne apne cabin me bulaya hai...

Rajeev ko iss baat se koi farq nahi padta tha...par us dhimi si roshni se voh achanak takraya us ladki se...

us ladki ne dhire se kaha...'SORRY'...

Rajeev ne dekha...voh maneger ki cabin ki taraf ja rahi thi...!!! Rajeev bahar aaya toh dekha...Arjun aur driver dono car ka tyre badal rahe the...

Rajeev:-"kya hua...

Arjun:-"sir...voh achanak se tyre puncture ho gaya...bass 10 min me ho jayega...

Rajeev thoda dur khade ho kar ciggrate jalayi...achanak use yaad aaya... ke voh galati se apna mobile chod aaya hai table par...voh ander wapas gaya...toh dekha..

kuch log ek aadmi ko dhakka marte hue bahar le ja rahe the...aur voh aadmi chilla raha tha:-"kya galat keh diya maine...hai toh voh ganewali na...!!! agar ek raat ka rate puch liya toh kya ho gaya...!!! agar itni hi sarif hai toh yahan kyoun aati hai...

Rajeev ne jana yeh aadmi usi ladki ki baat kar raha hai...apna mobile le jate hue...voh bahar aa raha tha..toh usi maneger ke cabin ke paas se gujra toh us ne suna...

cut to Saira...

maneger ke samne sar jhukaye khadi thi...

manager kapoor use dekh kar phir se bola:-"kitni baar keh chuka hun main tumhe... apne layak kuch achha sa job dhundh lo...!!! yeh kaam tumhare liye nahi hai beta...!!! tumhe nahi pata yeh log kaisi kaisi batain karte hain...aur kaise kaise log aate hain yahan...

Saira ke udash chehre par ek halki si smile aayi us ne kaha:-"uncle...aap hi ke bharoshe toh yeh kaam karti hun...!!! janti hun aap ke hote hue mere sath kuch galat nahi hoga...!!! aur agar mujhe koi achhi job milti toh kya main yahan kaam karti...in sab baton ko sehte hue...!!!"

manger kapoor:-"phir bhi beta...koshish karr ke kuch achha sa job kar le...!!! tere aur Akshi ki vabishya ka sawal hai...

Rajeev ko yeh emotional batain palle nahi padti...voh bahar aaya...dekha Arjun aur driver ka kaam abhi tak chalu hai...

thodi der me ek ladki us club se nikli...burkhe me...!!! Rajeev ne dekha use...ek nazar...!!! phir apni ciggrate ke dhuyain me uljha raha...

achanak ek taxi aa kar ruki...aur ander se ek aadmi niche utra...voh vohi inshan tha jise...clubwalo ne bahar nikala tha...!!! uss ne aate hi uss burkhe me jati hui ladki ka hath pakda...aur khinch ker jabardasti...us taxi me bithane ki koshish ki...

voh ladki na toh chikhi aur na hi chillayi...achanak se uss ne apne hand bag se kuch nikala...aur uss inshan ke hath par kafi tezi se vaar kiya...

voh aadmi dard se chillaya...!!! uss ladki ke hath me ek kafi sharp knief nazar aa rahi thi...

uss ke chillane ke baad...uss taxi se kareeb 4 log aur niche utre...un charon ne us ladki ko zabardasti khinch kar us taxi me phir se le jane lage toh...

Arjun bhaag kar aaya un log ke samne...!!! ek aadmi knief dikha kar bola:-"herogiri chod...yeh mumbai hai...apun ka area...do tukdon me kaat kar phenk dunga... gharwalon ko pata bhi nahi chalega...!!!"

Arjun ne us ladki hath khinch kar apni taraf late hue kaha:- "maut se darta main nahi hun...aur rahi baat mere gharwalon ki...toh un ki tension mat le...voh jante hain ke un ka beta sirf herogiri karta nahi hai...hero ki tarah use bachana bhi aata hai...aur villains ko peetna bhi aata hai...uss ka trailor dikhane aaya hun abhi...

tabhi un me se jo sab se jyata takatwar dikhai raha tha...us ne ek punch marne ke liye hath uthaya...arjun ki taraf...

par us ka punch ki kisi ke hath ke mutthi me kaid tha...!!! us ne hairani se dekha... samne Rajeev khada tha...

Rajeev ne uss admi ka hath choda aur Arjun ka hath thaam kar bola:-"tumhe aqal hai ki nahi...!!! inn ki behn ghar se ruth kar aayi hai...toh bhai saab...use zabardasti ghar le ja rahe hain...toh tumhe kya prob hai Arjun...

Arjun ne hairani se Rajeev ko dekhte hue kaha:- "par sir...

Rajeev:- "par...vaar...kuch nahi...inhone kah diya toh tumhe bhi mann ni chahiye...aur tum mere empolyee ho...toh tum vohi karoge jo main kahunga...samjhe...

Arjun ko kafi gussa aa raha tha Rajeev par...voh kuch bolta...uss se pahle Rajeev ne uss admi ko dekhte hue kaha:-"aap ko apne behn ko le jana hai na...toh plz...aage badhiye aur le jayiye...main isse sambhalta hun...

uss ne Arjun ka right hand kafi tightly pakadte hue kaha...

uss ladki ne burkhe ke ander se hi Rajeev ko ghura...phir apne hath me pakde hue uss knief par uss ka hath tight hua...

voh aadmi uss ladki ki taraf jaise hi badha...toh uss ke face par kafi zorr se ek punch pada...yahan tak ki uss aadmi ka muh phatt gaya tha aur khun nikalne laga tha...aur vo zameen par pada hua tha...

uss ne Rajeev aur Arjun ki taraf dekha...

Rajeev abhi bhi Arjun ka hath tham rakha tha...aur Arjun se keh raha tha:-"maine tumhe mana kiya na...ke bhai saab ko apni behn le jane do... phir kya prob hai tumhari...

Arjun khud hairani se Rajeev ko dekh raha tha...

ek aur aadmi aage aaya...toh Rajeev ne iss baar bhi vohi kiya...Arjun ka hath thaamte hue...aur Arjun ko hi dekhte hue...Arjun ke hi hath se ek aur punch padwaya uss aadmi par...

phir khud hi uss par gussa ho kar kaha:-"tumhe ek baat ek baar me samajh nahi aati Arjun...maine kaha na...ki inhe unn ki behn ko le jane do... phir...

Arjun iss baar hassa...

par Saira hairan thi...uss ne apna burkha...upar uthaya...hairani se dekhne lagi Rajeev ko...dhire se kaha:-"Rajeev...Rajeev Mathur...haan yeh vohi ho sakta hai...ya phir main galat hun...

tabhi baki ke sabhi log samne se aaye...

toh Rajeev ne Arjun ka hath chod diya...aur Arjun ke samne hath jodd kar bola:-"main haar gaya...maine tumhe mana kiya...phir bhi tum nahi maane...toh bhugto...

Rajeev ne Arjun ko dikhate hue...us aadmi se bola:-"yeh Arjun hai... pandavon me is ka no tishra hai...!!! aur is ne keh diya ki use villans ko peetna aata hai toh aata hai...!!! ab apna hath pair salamat rakhne ke liye apni behn ko inn ke hawale karo aur bhaag jayo...

ek aadmi knief le kar kuda Rajeev ki taraf...Rajeev ne pahlewale ko chod...dushre ko ghura...us ke sar se pair tak ghurte hue kaha:-"aap iss se mujhe marna chahte hain...!!!! lekin iss se hoga kya...aap jyada se jyada yeh knief se mujh par hamla kar ke iss ladki ko zabardasti utha kar bhaag jayenge...hai na...!!! lekin main toh do din me thik ho jayunga...!!! lekin sochiye agar is ka ek aap ke upar pada toh aap ka kya hoga...

us aadmi ki nazar padi Rajeev ke hath me...!!!

Rajeev ke hath me ek loaded gun tha...!!! voh aadmi thoda dara hua dikh raha tha...

Rajeev:-"dariye mat...mere paas iss ka licence hai...

tabhi Arjun ne dhire se unn sab ko dekhte hue Rajeev ki taraf ishara karte hue kaha:- "aap sayad inhe jante nahi hai...!!! mashhoor gangster Kalia pathan ka naam suna hai...jiss ne abhi abhi apna 50th murder kar ke...Taz me party manane gaya hai...

ek aadmi ne harani se Arjun ki aur dekhte hue mana kiya...!!! Arjun ne dekha Rajeev use hi dekh raha tha...

Arjun:- "Kalia Pathan ne inhi se hi toh training li hai...yakeen na aaye toh...5 min rukk jayo dekh lena...!!! vaise aur bhi kai katar me khade hain inn se training lene...

voh sab ke sab bhaag gaye usi taxi me...

Arjun ne dekha...Rajeev use abhi tak dekh raha tha...

Arjun:- "sorry sir...

Rajeev ne dekha Arjun ne abhi tak uss ladki ka hath thaam rakha tha...

Rajeev ne Arjun ki taraf dekha kar kaha:-"voh sab ja chuke hain...ab chaho toh inn ka hath chod sakte ho...

Arjun ne turant Saira ka hath chod diya...!!! Saira ne dhire se 'THANKS' kaha...

Rajeev apni car ki taraf ja raha tha...phir ruka...Saira ke samne aa kar uss ke ankhon me dekhta hua kaha:-"jab bhi kisi par vaar karna ho...toh muh chupa ker nahi... ankhon me ankhen dal kar vaar karo...taki voh dare...tumhari himmat dekh kar...aur tute vo uss ke ander se...

aur uss ki taraf na dekhte hue apni car ki taraf aa gaya...

Saira bass use dekhe hi ja rahi thi...uss ke honth bandh the...ankhon me hairani thi ya khushi pata nahi...uss ne dil hi dil me kaha:-"Rajeev Mathur...haan yeh tumhi ho sakte ho...

Rajeev car ke paas aaya aur pani ka bottle Arjun ki taraf badhate hue Saira ko dene ka ishara kiya...

par Saira ne lene se inkaar kar diya...!!! paas hi pade ek cement bench par baithi...

Rajeev ne car me baithne se pahle phir se turn kiya...aur dekha uss ladki ko... pehli baar gaur se dekh raha tha voh...

pahli baar Rajeev ne street lyt me us ka chera itni saaf tarah se dekha...badi badi ankhen...masoom sa chehra...par udashi se bhara hua...!!! ek khinchav tha us k chehre me...aisa lag raha tha jaise voh janta hai ise... par pehchan nahi pa raha hai...

Saira sar jhukaye baithi thi...ankhon me anshun nahi the...uss ne dhire se khud se kaha:-"tum nahi badle Rajeev...sayad abhi bhi tum vaise hi ho... jaise tab hua karte the...par Prisha se Saira tak ka ye safar kafi painful tha mere liye...baht dard se bhara hua...

Rajeev ne Arjun ko kaha:-"uss se kaho ke...agar voh chahe toh hum use us ke ghar tak chod sakte hain...!!!"

itna keh kar Rajeev ja kar baitha...apni car me...

Arjun ja kar baitha us ke kareeb aur kaha:-"chalo...tumhe tumhare ghar tak chod dete hain...!!! aur main yeh tum se puch nahi raha hun...bal ke bol raha hun...samjhi...

Prisha ne Arjun ki taraf dekha...

pahli baar use kisi ki ankhon me khud ke liye apnapan dikhayi diya...!!! jiss me koi swarth nahi tha...

Arjun ne mushkura kar kaha:-"chalo...

Prisha:-"aap ke boss ko koi pareshani toh nahi hogi na...

Arjun:- "unhone hi toh kaha mujhe...

Prisha aur bina kuch kahe...uss ke piche jane lagi...Arjun...driver ke paas wali seat par baitha...!!! Prisha piche baithi Rajeev ke paas...

rashte me kisi ne kisi se koi baat nahi ki...!!! ek jagah Prisha ne car rokka aur kaha:- "main yahin se chali jayungi...voh samne mera flat hai...!!!"

Arjun:- "thik hai...take care...

Rajeev ne na Prisha ki taraf dekha aur na hi kuch bola...phir bhi Prisha ne use dekh kar kaha:-"THANXX...

Rajeev ki car chali gayi...!!! Prisha kuch der vohin khadi rahi...uss car ko jate hue dekhte hue...phir kaha:-"mujhe laga tha ke sayad tum ne mujhe pehchan liya...par nahi...aur sayad yehi behtar hai hum dono ke liye...

Prisha ne dekha rashta sun san tha...!!! us ne apni burkha nikali...apne carry bag me dala...aur apne flat ki taraf badh gayi...!!!

chabi nikal kar us ne flat ka lock khola...ander andhera tha...!!! us ne dhire se apne sandel utare aur ander jane lagi ke achanak lyt jali...!!!

Prisha ne dekha...Akshi (8-9 saal ki ek ladki) khadi thi...us ke dono hath us ke kamar me the...aise ghur rahi thi jaise abhi voh Prisha ko peetnewali ho...

Akshi:- "yeh koi tym hai ghar aane ka...??? itni der raat tak achhi ghar ki ladkiyan bahar nahi ghuma karti...samjhi...!!!"

Prisha ne apne kaan pakadte hue kaha:-"sorryyeee...par main bhi kya karun maam...mere boss ne mujhe baht sara kaam de diya tha..!!! use khatam karte karte late ho gayi...toh kya karun main...???"

Akshi ne gusse se kaha:-"thik hai...par tym ka dhyan rakhna...aur aage se aisi galati nahi honi chahiye...jaldi ghar aana...!!! aur ab ja kar jaldi se...fresh ho kar aayo... main khana lagati hun...!!!"

Prisha ne Akshi ko apne goad me uthate hue kaha:-"beta...tujh se kaha tha na ke mujhe agar der ho jaye toh tu khana kha liya kar...!!!"

Akshi ne smile karte hue kaha:-"aur maine bhi toh tujh se kaha hai na maasi...ke main tere baigair khana nahi khayungi...!!!"

Prisha ke ankhon me halke se anshu chalke...!!! Akshi ne use apne hathon se mitate hue kaha:- "mujhe rona pasand nahi...i hate tears re...!!! abhi anshun pocho...aur jaldi se fresh ho kar aayo...!!! mujhe bhuk lagi hai na maasi...

cut to Rajeev...

car ja kar us 5 star hotel ke samne ruki jahan Rajeev thaihra hua tha...!!! Rajeev aur Arjun ka room...aas-paas hi tha...!!! Rajeev ne apne room ka lock khola aur Arjun ki taraf dekh kar kuch sochte hue kaha:-"mujhe us ladki ki deatail chahiye...aur vo mujhe kal tak voh mujhe mil jani chahiye...!!"

Arjun samajh nahi pa raha tha...us ne pucha:-"kis...ladki ki sir...!!!"

Rajeev:-"usi ladki ki baat karr raha hun...jiss ne aap ko rakhi toh nahi bandhi...par aap jarur us ke bhai bann kar maidan me kude the...!!!"

Arjun thoda embaressed hua...phir bola:- "jee main kal tak pata laga lunga...!!!"

Rajeev ke apne room me jane ke baad Arjun ne khud se kaha:-"ab yeh kya karna chahte hain us ladki ke sath...??? us ka detail kyoun maang rahe hain...???"

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aaj unhe wapas jana tha...!!! par Rajeev ne naye kaam me laga diya tha Arjun ko...!!!

Arjun bad-bad karta hua hotel ke ander ghusa:- "aaye toh the...power-plant ki deal final kar ne...!!! deal bhi final ho gayi...par sir ka bhi na dimag ulta ghumta rehta hai...!!! pata nahi...achanak unhe iss ladki me interest kaise aa gaya...!!! chandan pur ke sab se bade raishon me se hain...par aqal chinti bhar ki bhi nahi...!!! kaam khatm hone ke baad...aaram karo...par nahi...inhe toh bass kaam...kaam...aur kaam hi karna hai...!!! itne bade indursties ke maalik...Mr Rajeev Mathur...kabhi toh dil se soch liya karo...ke aadmi ko aaram ki bhi jarurat padti hai...!!!"

voh ruka aa kar Rajeev ke room ke bahar...knock kiya...!!! ander se Rajeev ki awaz sunn kar ander gaya...aur dekha...

Rajeev apne drink me ice dal raha tha...!!! Arjun ne turant...apne hath me pakde hue uss file ko Rajeev ki taraf badha diya...!!!

Rajeev ka hath ruka...ice par...uss ne drink me ice nahi dali...!!! ice box me ice rakhte hue kaha:-"yeh kya hai...???"

Arjun:-"usi ladki ka detail hai sir...jo humain kal raat mili thi...club ke paas..."

Rajeev file le kar sofe me baitha...!!! Arjun ne dhire se jate hue drink ka voh glass... vahan se hata diya...!!! use pata hai...jab tak kisi kaam me Rajeev duba rehta hai... tab tak voh drink ko hath bhi nahi lagta...par jab bhi voh akela mehshush karta hai... ya use koi kaam nahi hota...use drink karne se koi bhi nahi rokk sakta...!!! tabhi Arjun ne jaldi voh file Rajeev ke hath me de di thi...

Rajeev ne file phenki..center table par...ciggrete jalayi...phir Arjun ki taraf dekh kar kaha:-"mujhe iss file me koi interest nahi hai...!!! tum ne jo pata kiya hai...voh bolo...!!! aur ek baat...use pata hai ke hum uss ke bare me jann ne ki koshish karr rahe hain...???"

Arjun:-"nahi sir...use nahi pata...!!! aur uss ki personal life baht hi painful hai...!!! ek kiraye ke flat me rehti hai apne 7 saal ke niece ke sath...!!! koi dhang ka kaam nahi mila...isiliye club me gana gati hai...par koi galat kaam nahi karti...!!!kisi accident me apne parents ko khone ke baad apne uncle-aunty ke sath rehti thi...us ke uncle ki bhi death chuki thi...!!! uss ke baad un ki aunty ek rehab me hain...!!! ek badi behn aur jeaja hua karte the... matlab uss ke uncle ki beti...jinn ki ek accident me kuch saal pahle death ho gayi...!!! isiliye voh apne aur apne niece ke liye yeh kaam karti hai...!!! us ke uncle ke pension ka sara paisa uss ke aunty ke ilaaz me chala jata hai...aur..."

Rajeev ne smoke karte hue...hath utha kar Arjun ko rukkne ke liye ishara kiya aur dhire se jawab diya:-"iss ka matlab...voh jaruratmand ladki hai...paison ke liye hamara kaam kar sakti hai...

Arjun:-"kaisa kaam...sir...???"

Rajeev ne Srjun ki taraf staraight dekha...

Arjun:-"mera matlab hai ke...voh kafi khuddar ladki hai...!!! aisa koi kaam nahi karegi jo us ke khuddari ko chot pahunchaye...!!!"

Rajeev:-"pata hai tumhe arjun...insan ki sab se badi kamzori hoti hai uss ki majburi...!!! us majburi ke ek baht hi najuk hisse ko agar cheda jaye na...toh voh inshan kuch bhi karne ke liye taiyar ho jata hai...!!! "

Rajeev ne ciggrete bujhayi ashtrey me dala aur arjun se kaha:-"uss ladki se ja kar personally milo...aur meri uss se ek meeting fix karwayo...!!!"

Arjun:-"yes...sir...

Arjun hairan tha aur pareshan bhi...!!! use pata tha ke Rajeev...Saira se kuch kaam karwana chahta hai...par kya...use nahi pata...!!! usse darr iss baat ka tha ke...Saira ke majburi ka faida uthane ke chakkar me Rajeev uss se kya karwana chahta hai...!!! par haan...voh itna janta tha ke...Rajeev itna bura inshan nahi hai...

voh uss room se bahar aaya...door ke paas turn kar ke dekha...Rajeev fone par mr Sehgal se baat karr raha tha...!!!

Arjun darwaza bandh kar ke bahar aaya...aur khud se bola:-'mr sehgal...!!! yeh toh hamare company ke lawer hain...in se kya baat karr rahe hai sir...aur voh bhi us ladki ke bare me...!!!

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Hiiee all...

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mujhe pata hai ke...abhi bhi baht sare doubts honge...baht sari confision hoga... par do hi parts me sab kuch kaise clear karr sakti hun...!!! phir bhi i hope ke yeh ud itna bhi bura nahi tha...aur aap sab chala bhi loge...

Prisha ki story as usall heroines ki dardnaak kahani jaisa main nahi bana rahi...par haan thoda sa ajeeb bhi hoga uss ka charch bhi...

chalo...abhi k liye bass itna hi...

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take care

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Priya😃

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Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

hello priya😊

nice part👏👏👏

and our heroineee... becomes a bar singer saaira😭😭😭 and goes through so much of pain😭😭😭

and now what is rajeev going to do so that prishe agree to do the job for him😕😕

continue soon😃

Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Hi Priya

Update wasjust terrific👏👏👏

Saira was singing a beautiful song and I had this notion that she may b Prisha only..

Rajeev and Arjun's chemistry is indeed fun to read..😆😆 The way Rajeev saved Saira from those goons was quite hilarious..even Arjun was in shock😲😲😆

Initially I thought that he wont interfere but then in his own style he beated those fools😆😆

Saira recognized Rajeev but our hero didn't but he was really interested in her..I think something is going in his mind and thats why he asked Arjun to collect information abt her..

I hope he doesn't blackmail her in doing something in which has no interest..vaise bhi Arjun wud b there to protect her ...😃

Pls continue soon

Bye

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Great Part ...

Still confusing but i know this will go as the story progresses...

Good Saira is Prisha only and our heroine ( if i'm not wrong)

Rajeev feeling lonely without Dev feeling bad abt it...

Loved the way Rajeev and Arjun saved Saira it was just too good... I was laughing reading the part...See Rajeev is not a bad person ... Though u mentioned Rajeev not being emotional but i feel he has become like this bcoz of something which happened in his past which have made him like this otherwise he wouldnt hv Saved Saira...

I feel his drinking is all to do with phis past life... When a person feels he wants to forget his past according to him drinking will help him perhaps Rajeev's past was troublesome that he drinks so much and smoke's too...

Now waiting to know wat Rajeev wants from Prisha wat he wants her to do...

Arjun was sweet...

Waiting for more

Pls dont take too much time to cont...

Edited by golu_1677 - 14 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

This is one intriguing story!! Padhne ke baad 15 minute tak soch me reh gayi thi main...(obviously maine kaafi pehle padha tha...'like' to dekh hi liya hoga😆)...

Talking abt the part...I want Rajeev also. 😳😳 I mean...dekho na...kitna pareshan hai bechara...and kitna cute bhi hai...(maine imagine kiya na...bahuuut cute laga☺️)...Though am doubtful main usse sambhal paungi ya nahi...mujhe thoda darr bhi lagta hai...jab bhi wo scene me hota hai...but still love him...😳😳

Achha hua Arjun itna to janta hai...ki wo bura insaan nahi hai...😳...but he is still very much unaware of his boss...😆...gud...I like mysteries!!😉😊

And coming to mysteries...Saira+Prisha = Mystery!! Thats my new equation...which gets complicated when I add Rajeev to that...😕😆😆...See...Rajeev (Saira+Prisha) = ?

I seriously wonder how she knws him...and wat is he gonna do wid her!! But then...tum ye mat socho ki main aona bacha kucha nanha munha dimag isme kharch karungi...mere palle nahi paregi...u better UD fast to meet my queries...samjhi?😉

Btw...I love the feel u created thru the part...the coldness and grimness of Rajeev was very much there...and that was a very amazing thing to do on ur part!! 👏

Abhi jaldi UD kar do...pls!! 😃

Love,
Sumi. 😳

Edited by Sumi_162710 - 14 years ago

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Preetika/Elena

@Windsof.Heaven

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Hii Priya love your new ff sooo much 😊

cont.soon.⭐️

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#99

hey thanks for the PM..😊 the update was fabulous as always..😊 so the mystery is unfolding itself slowly.. iss baar update karne mein pls itna late na karna.. 😃

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#100

wow priya awesome part yaar!!!!!👏👏👏

loved it!!!❤️❤️❤️

by the way the update was kind of late!!!!!😡😡😡...but that's OK as long as you give us LONGGG updates!!!😆😆😆

raj ka roll to...ufff!!!!

raj bar main gaya hai...just bcz he was feeling lonely and there he met prisha actually saira!!!!...saira prisha kaise banne???...so saira gaana gate hai bar main bcz of her niece and for her self!!!!!...😔poor girl!!!!

arjun is a very nice guy...n i can imagine alekh in this roll😆!!!!!

so saira n raj met but saira think he didn't recognizance her...did he???

and why was he asking arjun to get her details????😕😕😕

the update was very nice and full of suspense!!!!! but u r right 2 parts main confusion kaise khatam ho gi so jaldi jaldi update karna is baar ...OK???

hope you'll remove my confusion pretty soon priya!!!!😉

I'll wait for the update eagerly!!!

love ya!!❤️

esha

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