Why I Love You So...(Rajeev FF)last part 119(7/5) - Page 9

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
wow what a start... Thanks Deepa...😃
oh that Dev part was so sad and seeing Rajeev so reactionless and emotionless sure did hurt... yupe...Dev uss ka best frnd tha...isi liye...
so thats the female lead's intro...
does she mean Rajeev? hmm...yeh aap hi padh lena...aage ke parts me...phil hal abhi dis-close kaise karr sakti hun...😉
hope yes... dekhte hain...😉
cont soon...

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

wow that was the super fast speed of the update😆😆😆 iss liye kyoun ke maine yeh part pahle se hi likh rakha tha...😆

first part ke liye kahun to tumne negative bana hi diya rajeev ko like drinking and smoking and talking rudely to his uncle and his friend dev uska bahut achcha dost tha jaisa ki tumne fb me dikhaya ab isko thoda nahi thoda nahi bahut pyaara bhi bana do jo bhi likhna hoga voh main likh dungi...par pyara banega ya kuch aur...yeh tum decide kar lena...😉

and prisha wo kya rajeev ke baare me hi baat kar rahi thi😕😕😕 mujhe bhi nahi pata...main baad me batayungi...😆

waise pehla update thoda confusing sa laga magar tha achcha 👏👏👏 Thanks Shreya... isliye zaada to nahi likh paayungi ud ke baare me lets see jaise jaise ud post hote jaaenge waise waise confusions clear hongi😉😉😊 clear toh honge...aur voh bhi surf excel blue ki tarah clear hoga...fiqar not...Sherni hai na...😆

jaisa sur ne kaha tha main bhi yahi kahungi kisi ke bhi kehne se apni fic ka haal ztmk ki tarah mat karna jisse tumhe use rokna pade...aur baaki as you like to go on with your story we were happy to read your writing😊😊😊 nahi iss bar toh apne mann ka hi karungi...aur thoda baht yakeen toh hai hi ke...sab ko achha lagega...😉😆

pls dont mind i just said what i feel rest is up to you😊😊😊 and update soon just like this part😉😉😉 Mind...voh kya hota hai yaar...??? aur agar mere paas MIND hota...toh tumhe lagta hai ek main FIC likhti...??? Dil...aur Dimag...sabb kuch gayab hai sirf ek inshan ke liye...jiss par mein fic likhti hun...😆

take care😃😃

shreya😃😃😃

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Now is see why you were saying that this Fic will be different.

To be honest it is difficult to think of Raj in a negative role...it will be interesting to read of him is such a role. pura neg charac nahi dungi...par haan...thoda sa grey shade de rahi hun...aur Rajeev fic hai toh...voh hero toh hoga hi...aur readers n writer ki bhi nazar sirf usi par rahegi...😆

To start with Raj smokes and drinks. He is devestated by Dev's death.

Seems that Raj and Dev were good friends. And being a true friend, dev always tried to convince Raj to give up his bad habits.But Raj would never agree. baht prob hai use...spl treatment ki jarurat hai...😆

How did dev die? and who is mittali. Mitali...Dev ki GF hai...raj ne ek baar bataya bhi tha...par pura clearly nahi kaha tha...😊

What did mamaji hear, which gave him such a big shock. yeh bhi clear ho jayega...kuch hi uds me...😃...Thanks Nisha...

please continue soon

Originally posted by: golu_1677

is there any chance of an update today?????

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

So am here finally!! Part pehle hi padha tha as usual...but wasnt getting the tym or mood to comment properly...😳 koi baat nahi dear😃...sab ke sath aisa hota hai...aur vaise bhi bad mood me comment karne me jyada taklif hoti hai...

Waise pata hai...ye part padhte waqt...I cud feel a certain pinch in my heart...main bas Rajeev ki khamosh nigahon ko imagine kar rahi thi...😳..and damn...the guy is too awesum!! Tumhe to pata hai na RK ye sab kitna awesum tarike se portray karta hai...😳😳...to bas...main kho hi gayi..😆 ab wapas aa jayo...😆 aur yeh sab tum kis se kah rahi ho...uss se jiss ka title song hai 'tere naam pe suru...tere naam pe khatam'...he he he...in fact ab yeh toh hum dono ka title song ho gaya hai...nahi...😆

But getting serious...😳😳...I of course knw..its not sumthing typical u r writing...😊 Priya hai...hatke to hoga hi!!😉😉 kahin itna hettke na ho jaye...ki readers bhi hattke galiya dene lagg jaye...😆

But Rajeev lost Dev......his best frnd...He surely hated his father for killing Dev's father......bechara bas gam me duba hua rehta tha...aur ab Dev bhi chala gaya and that too...he committed suicide!! abhi baht kuch bahar aana hai yaar...abhi toh bass suruwat hai...

Pata hai Rajeev jab keh raha tha...ki kisne usse aisa dhoka diya hoga ki Dev usse chhor kar chala gaya...bina uske bare me soche...I cud just feel these lines...😭...pls continue soon na...kyunki agar story aage nahi badhegi to main Rajeev ko aur behtar kaise jaanungi...😳😳 kyu nahi... maine next part me sirf Rajeev ko hi toh dikhaya hai...matlab ek aur chehra Rajeev ka...😉

Btw...isme heroine bhi thi...😆😆...koi phn convo sun liya usne hai na?😆😆...Tum UD kar dena...main padh lungi uski problem...😆😆...but main attention is on Rajeev...as usual..😆😆 achha...heroine thi...kahan...??? maine toh notice hi nahi kiya tha...😆phir se padhti hun...sayad mil jaye...😆

Waise...Rajeev neg bhi hai and positive bhi...gr8!! Bekaar me kisise ladhne ka jhanjhat nahi hoga!!😆😆 tumhe sach me lagta hai ke...rajeev ko bina kisi se ladwaye main jane dungi...😆...Rajeev Neg me hai...par hero bhi toh vohi hai...aur mere fic me villian na ho...yeh toh main hargiz nahi karungi...Rajeev ke actions bhi toh mujhe achhe lagte hain na...😆Par tumhe lagta hai main usse gaaliya dungi?😆😆 🤣 Dont worry...mere sahi & ghalat ka definition Rajeev ke saath saath badal jata hai...😉😉...jahan Rajeev hota hai...bas wohi sahi ho jata hai..😉😉 meri tarah...ha ha ha... main iss me rajeev ko thoda grey shade me rakhungi...par hamesha yehi koshish rahegi ke..sab ki attention sirf usi par rahe...aur kisi par na jaye...isi liye toh use neg shade doongi...😆

Waise Puri ko kehna...Soundtrack dekhne se smoking & drinking Rajeev imagine karna easy ho jayega...😆😆...she shud w8 till then...😆😆 (am sure ye fic August tak khatam to nahi hoga...bas kuch hi parts ayenge film ki release tak...tab tak adjust karne ko kaho😆😆) he he he...iss par toh Purnima hi tumhe RPLY karr sakti hai...!!! vaise Purnima tum ne suna kya...AB keh rahi hai...😆

Abhi tum der mat karo samjhi? This is my next fav fic of urs 😃...(ab ye count mat karo tumhari kaunsi fic meri fav nahi hai...huh😆😆)...iska UD jaldi karo...bas!!😳😳 itni jaldi mat karo yaar...pata nahi aage kya ho...😆

Belated Happy Birthday once again...😉 thank youuu Sumi...😃 vaise Doc ne bhi tumhare liye ek msg choda hai...n 2nd page par...😛

Luv,
Sumi .😳

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

Wonderful part...

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

hope you have a beautifull birthday!!!

love you

esha!!!

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

Friendship isn't a big thing
it's a million little things

Thanks for your friendship
Happy Birthday

wishing you all the success in your life on this special day

Originally posted by: golu_1677

Many many happy returns of the day