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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
Lovely update
maan want to tell truth 4 her
what her reaction
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
awesome update bro.loved it.😳
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
hey loved ur ff...
they r married and geet in her own dreamland and maan wants to win her over...
loving that maan is initiating the steps...
i hv sent u buddy req can u pl add me to ur pm list thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


part 7

maan: I want to start this relation with truth...but what if she gets angry...

Geet: maan...aap aram kejiye...mein aapke liye juice leke athi hu...

She noticed the food on table while leaving...nothing was touched in plate...this made geet hurt...

geet: (self thought) yeh khana bhi nahi khaya...mein bhi na...bas khana nakool se bijwadiya...aur sogaya...atleast i should have checked whether maan had his dinner/not...this was all my mistake...dubara aise hone nahi dhunga...

she was about to leave then...

maan: geet!!! (in a low voice)

She stopped and turned towards maan...

geet: kya chahiye maan...?

maan: mujhe tumse baat karna hey...

geet: baath karna hey? kya baath hey maan?

maan was getting restless with each passing second...he could not get any words to say..

Geet noticed maan's discomfort and sensed some trouble

Geet: kya maan...abhi bhi dard ho raha hey kya?

maan: nahi geet...iam not feeling any pain...now

geet: then ...aap kya kehna chahthey hey mujhsey...?

maan: woh...woh...kal...mein tumse jhoot bola hey geet...he said in one breath...

geet : jhoot bola hey...kab?

maan: woh...actually mujhe koi back pain nahi thi...just i pretended...

maan was closing his eyes while saying this...he opened his eyes...to his shock...geet was smiling infront of him...

geet: so apne mujhse jhoot bhola...toh apko koi back pain nahi hey...this is what u want to tell?
This cool behavior of geet was scaring maan futher...he nodded "yes"

geet: she smiled...smiled...and left the room smiling...without saying a word to maan...

maan got confused...he didn't expect this reaction from geet...he was expecting a totally different scene...

maan: mujhe patha hey ki...mera biwi thoda alag hey...lekin yeh ladki mujhe har roz ek nayi shock de rahi hey...

without wasting a second he ran behind her to talk ...

geet was in kitchen preparing coffee...maan went to the kitchen...

geet was smiling in the kitchen too...

maan: (self thought) arey geet tum ithna math smile karo...mujhe dar lag raha hey...kya isko shock tho nahi lagi...mera jhoot ki wajah se...oh god...what to do now...?

maan: clearing his throat..mmm

geet: bas ek minute maan...aap hall mein betiye...iam coming there with coffee...

maan: shocked...she is talking with me normally...did i really said the truth?

maan left the kitchen and was waiting in the hall for geet...geet came with two cups of coffee...

geet: maan...bahar garden mein jaayenge kya...?

maan: again shocked...he nodded his head saying "yes"

geet: then let's go

geet and maan went to the garden...both were sipping coffee silently...geet was enjoying her morning coffee...whereas maan was worried about geet reaction...

geet: patha hey maan...after so many years...iam having my morning coffee...

maan: still worried and scared for geet 's reactions...

geet: i should say thanks to dadi for this...

maan: (choked) : kya? thanks?

geet burst into a laughter with maan's sudden expression...

geet: maan aap bhi na...i don't know why u will give such expressions...waise bhi...if daadi's words had done this much help...then i should really thank her na...

maan: (still shocked) u r not angry with her...for being so mean ...with u

geet: mean? nahi maan...woh bade hey mujhe se...aur mein aapki tarah unke poti hu...agar meri bhalayi keliye...ek baath bola ya daanta bhi tho...why should i take it wrong/why should i become angry...she will scold me for my betterment only...hey na...
waise bhi...she is ur daadi...the most important person in ur life...agar woh mujhe tappad bhi maara...to rectify my mistake...i won't mind...

That answer from geet made maan to fall in love with her all over again...untill now he knew only that his wife is ziddi,childish...but today he saw a totally different geet...a matured geet...who can make anyone to like her with her words and actions...maan was mesmerized by her words today...and her beauty is adding more attraction to those words...

geet suddenly started laughing...maan was shocked with her sudden act...

maan: with😲 expression...achanak tumhe ho kya gaya geet?

geet: 🤣

maan: still 😲...bolo geet kya hua?

geet: kuch nahi...aap ko back pain nahi tha...then u were pretending...bas usko yaad kar rahi thi...aap mere samne us jhoot ko chupane keliye patha nahi kya kya kar rahe they...

i was thinking yesterday...that u refused my help because u hate me...but now i a came to know why...rath pura iss bare mein...she again started laughing...

maan: rath poora...iss bare mein?

geet became concious now...she felt that unknowingly she was speaking out about her emotions...she cut the discussion at that point...

geet: kuch nahi hey maan...chodiyena use...

maan was still worried about his lie...he want to clear that issue...

maan: geet are u angry with me?

geet: kisliye?

maan: for telling lies?

geet: i don't know maan

maan: u don't know? what does it mean?

geet: jhoot bolne se gussa tab atha hey jab hum une yekeen karthey hey...but in our case...we are strangers maan...we know nothing about one another...
if we had been lovers/ atleast friends...i would have killed u for telling lies to me...but we are just strangers...so there is no point to be angry with u...
saying these she looked at watch...

geet: maan lagtha hey office jaane ki time ho raha hey apko...i will make breakfast ready...aap thayyar hojayiye...

geet left the garden...leaving maan shattered...

maan was deeply hurt by geet words...somewhere in his heart he was sure that geet might also be having some feelings towards him...but today with her words...especially "strangers" she cleared that she don't have any feelings for him...

maan: yeh kya hey geet...if u had become angry...atleast i would have felt happy...that u r feeling for me...but with ur indiffence u almost ripped my heart...

he felt very disappointed.

sadly he left the garden and went to his room to get ready for office work...

geet although said those words that they are just strangers...but after that she was feeling very bad about those words..

geet: geet tune ithni badi baath keh diya ki hum strangers hey...yeh meri mu se kya nikal gaya...what i blabbered infront of him?
kya such me mujhe gussa aya maan se...for telling lies?🤔
Kya mein maan keliye kuch bhi feel nahi kar rahi hu?

she was analyzing about herself until she heard maan's car leaving...

geet ran outside and saw maan leaving the mansion...

geet: maan chalagaya...bina breakfast karke...kamsekam bye tho bolsakthe the na? she could n't notice the tears that were rolling from her eyes continuously while saying these words...


to be continued...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
lovely update.. amazing!! keep it up 😃
Edited by kriya... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
poor maan felt bad what geet said love it awesome update cant wait to read next part pls cont soonnn thanks pm thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome updates
loved them all loadz
fab ff
loving it sooo much
cant wait 4 da next part
con son
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
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geet ne maan ke dil dhukaya...ussey ajnabi keh diya...
lets c how geet makes it up to maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
geet said strangers ..
i am also sad for maan...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww...i felt sory 4 maan
btw nic upd...
do continue .soon...
thanx 4 pm...

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