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Posted: 14 years ago
#71


So sweet ❤️ 😳
Both thinking about the same thing
Maan how to win over Geet n Geet how to comfort Maan 👍🏼

Nice n sweet part 😛 , loved it & thanks for pm ..... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow that was a great update.👏.
geet started to care for maan....i hope she will realise that she is loving him.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update.... But they r idiots.... Sweet nd cute loving idiots...lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice concept and flow of writing is very good. i love it. keep the good work going on and please update soon.

can u please add me to ur pm list😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely part
loved it
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thats a wonderful SS ur writing..
everything was written wonderfully..
do cont soon and add me to ur PM list..
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jwalamukhi




thank u noorfathima..................😳

no probx.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING

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part 6

Next day.............................

Geet wokeup early and took a glance at watch............

Geet: Its only 6...i will sleep for some more time............

she was about to sleep when dadi's words echoed in her mind...........this should not be repeated..........She got up from the bed with a sudden jerk...........

Geet: oye geet tu bhi na.............right from the childhood u never gave anyone any opportunity to question u.......and if daadi warned u...then it is ur mistake....u gave her the chance................woh baath alag hey ki woh bade hey...aur unka haq bantha hey mujhe dantna......lekin waise bhi...u cannot do this mistake again.....how many times maan will save u?
maan.......oh teri.........u forgot totally about maan.....unka pain ka kya hua hoga.......mein kaise biwi hu? when my husband is ill...iam sleeping like this...

husband....? the word "husband" made her cheeks red....she started to blush at the thought of maan...her husband........unknowingly

Geet: (self thought) husband? when did u start thinking about him like this?yeh kya hora hey mujhe.......why am i behaving like this.............how can i feel like this?....two days back he was a stranger....now he is my husband..........Is this feeling in me because he is my husband?

kal thak maine badi badi bathe ki.....about love marraige ....and all...but today why am i feeling something special about him......something very special....which i hadn't felt for anyone before............kya yehi pyaar hey.....?

nahi...nahi...yeh pyaar nahi...i saw in films...in love first there should be understanding...eyelocks...parks...cinemas....fights...lies........and finally DDLJ.....but nothing like this happening to me........except for a strange desire to be with maan........

Geet was analyzing her feelings...but still couldn't get the answer...........then she came out of her thoughts when she remembered maan's back pain

geet: mein bhi na...maan ke back pain ko dekhne ki bagair ...iam wasting my time on useless thoughts...........first of all i have to see maan...

Geet went to maan's room........but to her surprise he was not there.......................

Geet: yelo....maan tho nahi hey....kaha gaya hoga?

geet: chalo...nakool se poochthi..hu......nahi...nahi.....arey geet thu paagal hogaya kya? will u ask others about ur husband whereabouts...... yeh teek nahi hey.,......nakool kya sochega hamare baare mein.......i will search by myself.....waise bhi he will be in this house only.......ithne subha woh kaam pe nahi jaathe........

She started searching each and every room of khurana mansion.....but to her bad luck...she could not find maan............atlast she reached his gym.............there he was doing excercise....seeing that geet became very angry and rushed to him...

Geet: maan!!! yeh app kya karrahey hey?😡

maan who was busy in doing excercise got shocked with sudden appearence of geet.......

He was just looking at geet.....he thought it was a dream......because he knew his geet loves sleeping...

maan :geet getting up at 9 is first of all difficult and that too...at 6...bahuth dhur ki baath hey....pakka dream hey.....

Before coming to gym he went to geet's room.....at that time she was in deep sleep.....

so noway geet is here....mein bhi na....hamesha geet ke baare mein soch raha hu...that'swhy iam day dreaming about her.....😆

he smiled at his thought and continued with his excercise........irritating geet further......

Geet got angry as maan is behaving as if she is not there....her anger exceeded limits

Geet: maan!!!!!! 😡

maan with the scream of geet finally realized that geet was there for real

maan: geet!!!!!!!!!😲

geet: what are u doing maan? yesterday u had severe back pain....u suffered alot...and today u r coming for excercise.......yeh kaisa paagalpan hey😡.... chaliye...yahase...abhi isi waqt....aur kamre mein jaake rest kijiye.....chaliye

maan was shocked with geet words.......then surprised....then felt happy...

maan: geet concerned about me...she cares for me...yayyyyyyyyyyy(in his heart)

without saying another word maan stood up and followed geet.......

maan(self thought): geet cares for me....but what am i doing? saying lies to her? i wanted our relation to be pure with full of faith and trust...and now iam starting this with lies..

he hated himself for telling lies to geet.....

geet saw maan who was dull and thinking about something...she thought he was still having backpain....

geet: maan aap kya soch rahe hey?.....abhi bhi dard ho raha hey kya? (with worried expression)
geet concern for him made him feel more guilty for telling lie to her.......

maan: jho bhi ho...i should start our relation with truth.......i will tell her the truth...that i lied to her..........but what if she gets angry?....

to be continued...............
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago

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