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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 8

geet: maan chalagaya...bina breakfast karke...kamsekam ek bye tho bol sakthe they na...
She couldn't notice the tears rolling from her eyes while saying these words...

Maan was thinking about the conversation with geet...feeling hurt for every word ...

maan: geet ...tum kaisey bola ...ki hum ajnabee hey...kya humare beech kuch bhi nahi hey...

but suddenly he realized...

maan: arey maan tu bhi na...how can u be so foolish...shaadhi hui ab 2 din hi hua hey...aur in 2 din mein...kithna time tune geet ke saath spend kiya...kya kiya tumne uskeliye...nothing...and u r expecting her to feel for u...

geet ne jo kaha...woh sach hi tho hey...unse na pyaar se baath kiya...na kuch kiya unkeliye...

maan: yeh pyaar ki chakkar mein...iam becoming mad...bina socha...i drew conclusions about geet yesterday about dadima's behavior...to cover that i told lies ...which was totally absurd...geet achchi ladki hey...tabhi tho...she didn't bother much about my lie...and took the situation lightly...koi aur hotha...tho such much mujhe pagal samajh kar...mujhe chod diya hotha...maan u r an idiot...sudharjao...geet ko patane keliye raastha doond...

On his way to khurana constructions maan was thinking various ways to patao geet...until he got disturbed by a call from adi

Maan: hello...what's the matter adi?

Adi: sir aap aaj arahey hey na sir office...

maan: yeah...iam on the way...anything urgent...

adi: yes sir...actually noida wala construction site mein problem hey sir...

maan: problem?

adi: haan sir...some legal issues...kaam ruk gaya hey sir waha...

maan: ok then ...i am going there now...had u informed about this to our advocate

adi: yes sir...he already reached there...bas apka hi intezar hey sir...

maan: ok

Noida project is one of maan's biggest projects...maan hates the word "trouble" especially in work...though he is a cool guy at home... at work he is a strict boss who wants everything to be done perfectly...

maan: noida...trouble...hmmm...driver...noida wala site ke paas jao...

maan was busy whole day in solving the trouble and couldnot get any free time to think about geet...he was just too busy to think about geet...

khurana mansion

From the moment maan left geet became dull...some sort of sadness is filling her heart...especially maan leaving for office without saying a word is hurting her much...

geet: maan aisa kyun kiya? ...manthi hu ki humare beech kuch nahi hey...lekin phir bhi... ...

oye geet...thu bhi na...har baath ko leke sochne lagthi hey...shayad koi urgent kaam ho...isliye jaldi mein bathana bhul gaya hoga...

huh...that may be the reason...lekin...bye bolne mein kithna time lagtha hey...

geet...thu apna dimag ko thoda rest dey...tune kaha ki hum starngers hey...aur upar se tuhi yeh sab expect karrahahey maan se...what is this madness?

should i call him?...call...oh...mera phone...mujhe yaad hi nahi aya...mein usse shaadi ke din gusse mein thod diya...ab kya karu...lagtha hey ab naya phone kareedhna padega...

Suddenly geet thoughts were interrupted by phone call (landline)

geet: shayad maan hi hoga...mujhe patha hey woh jaldhi mein subha bhul gaye honge...he might be worrying about me that i was lonely in the house...

she ran to pick the call...

with lot of expectations from maan...

geet: hello...(breathing heavily)

But to her badluck...the call was from daadi's friend...

geet: daadi paris gaya hey...she will be back in a month...

with huge disappointment she cut the call...

geet(self thought): geet kya hogaya tujhe...why r u behavinhg like this...maan se yeh sab kyu expect karraha hey thu...don't expect anything from him nowonwards...

but everytime the phone rings...geet rushed to pick the call thinking it is maan...and then geeting disappointed...

geet: agar maan call nahi kiya tho...kya...mein call karsakthi hu na? lekin unka number...nakool se poochtha hu...nahi nahi...woh kya sochega humare bare mein...kya karu...kya karu...

Khurana constructions...yes...unke office ko call katha hu...they will connect the call to maan...problem solved...

geet happily took the receiver and dialed KC number which she got from telephone directory

receptionist pinky answered geet's call

pinky: hello...khuranaconstructions...

geet: hello...Can I speak to Mr.maan please

pinky: madam can i know who is speaking?

geet(self thought): kya kahu?...

pinky: hello madam...aap kaun bol rahey hey...atleast naam tho bathayiye...so that i can inform sir...

geet: mein geet...(with shakingh voice)...geet maan singh khurana...(this time with confidence)

pinky stood up listening to that name...

pinky: (scared) sorry madam...mujhe pata nahi tha...iam extremely sorry

geet: no problem...maan se bath karvaye...

pinky: sorry madam...actually sir aaj office mein nahi hey...he went to noida construction site

geet (disappointed) : oh...

pinky: madam...should i pass any message...?

geet: no...thank u

pinky: ok madam...have a nice day

geet cut the call and started thinking about maan...only one word..ek call tho kar sakthe the...was repeating in her mind...she slept on the couch itself thinking about maan...

at about 5pm...maan reached khurana constructions...along with his advocate anil

maan: anil...make sure everything is ok/not...i don't want any trouble in the future...

anil: everthing is fine sir...there will be no trouble in the future...

maan: its ok then...

anil left...and maan entered khurana constructions...

pinky: sir! aapke wife geet madam ne call kiya tha?

maan was shocked...at this unexpected thing

maan: geet ne call kiya...wait...pinky doesnot know that my wife name is geet...that means geet introduced herself as my wife...
maan was on cloud nine...

maan: waise bhi...geet ne kyu call kiya hoga...koi problem tho hua nahi na...

The mere thought of problem to geet...scared him so much...

to be continued...




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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it amazing 😃
Edited by zaara2212 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
love how geet said with confident geet maan khurana wow maan cloud nine love it fabulous update pls cont soonnn thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update
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do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome upd...
lov it...
gud wrk dear...
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loved the update...
both their monologue is interesting to read...
cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!
lol!...both are sooo dumb!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago



Lovely part
Geet thinking over what she said was good
Maan must b very happy Geet introduced herself as his wife

Thanks for pm ...
Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
geet maan singh khurana
very nice
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wooowww such a cute ff...loved it loads

PLZ continue

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