Bramachari Maan Thread 1

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Summary:

This has NEVER been started by any other fan fic writer (as far as I know)...I read so many Geet's fan fic and Maan character has always been portrayed as angry young business man, khadus, dusth danav and so on (including mine) so I thought why not play with Maan's character a little bit...make him...DIFFERENT!!!

How many of you watched the movie Shreeman Aashiq with Rishi Kapoor? In that movie, Rishi Kapoor played the role of bramachari (like Panday ji from Geet) and how he changes from bramachari to a young man is the plot of the movie...

Now my fan fic will NOT be like the movie ONLY thing that is going to be similar is the fact Maan will be bramachari like Rishi Kapoor in the movie and the fact that Rishi Kapoor followed Anupam Kher as his role model who told him to stay away from girls..in my fan fic Maan will look up to PanayJi...

How Maan changes from a bramachari to the MAN we all know and love?
What role does Geet play?
How will they fall in love?
Will be my main plot of the story...

Note: Also I will not have Pandayji speak in pure hindi like in the show because well I am not good in that area...so I will type it in normal hindi that we all know...

Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

Index

Ch.1-Pg.1

Ch.2-Pg.9

Ch.3-Pg.16

Ch.4-Pg.24

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Shreya

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Posted: 14 years ago

Yayy me 1st
on ur 5th FF😆
I love this concept
Maan as Bramachari🤣
Bechara maan show main bhi aur FF main bhi kahi ka nahi raha🤣
Update soon
Cant wait to read
Thank you

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy
Yayy me 1st
on ur 5th FF😆
I love this concept
Maan as Bramachari🤣
Bechara maan show main bhi aur FF main bhi kahi ka nahi raha🤣
Update soon
Cant wait to read
Thank you

hahah thanx so much!!!
hehe yah i know...Poor Maan....
lets see how I do with this fan fic lol

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

Enjoy the chapter...I thought I should start with a song...hehee so enjoy!!!!

Chapter 1

The hall is decorated...people are talking among themselves waiting for the ceremony to start...eyes are searching one another..hoping to find whoever they are looking for...
"What are you two standing here for?"

"Sorry Aunty kya aapne usko dekha?"

"Usko kisko?"

"Geet ko?"

"Haan Aunty usne kaha tha ki who yaha par hai...."

Aunty laughs..."Mujhe nahi maloom...yahi kahi hogi..aur waise bhi Meera aur Anjali....yaha thoda enjoy karo..agar Geet mujhe dikhhi toh bata doongi..."

Both: Ji Aunty...

Meera (to Anjali): "I swear if she doesn't come soon..I would be so mad at her"

Anjali: "Hey look there she is...." (Points toward the group of people)

Meera: "Chal..lets go...and join her" (Both runs off to that direction)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aa1fcUmxWl8[/YOUTUBE]

(Lukchup Ke Mai Ghumi Gali Gali, Kahee Mila Nahee Mera Piya
Khil Khil Ke Hans Di Kali Kali, Par Khila Nahee Mera Jiya
Meri Itni Kahaani, Meri Hai Yeh Pareshaani
Kabhi Aaye, Koi Aaye, Koi Bole Maine Dil Diya
Dhund Rahi Hu Mai Aisa Deewana, (Thoda Sa Pagla, Thoda Siyaana)

A guy who is sipping a wine...looks at her dancing and smirking while watching her....he checks her out from top to bottom..and elderly women who was watching her dance was in awe of her...

Ha Mujhse Kare Woh Aake Pyaari Pyaari Baate
Chehre Ko Chaand Keh De, Julfon Ko Raate
He hides behind the piller and looks at her....
Milne Woh Jo Aaye, Bole Haaye Meri Jaana
Dil Me Tadapte Hai Tere Hi Armaan
(Mai Tera Deewana Hu, Tu Jo Maange Jaan Bhi Du)
Bigdu Toh Karde Shuru Haklaana, (Thoda Sa Pagla, Thoda Siyaana)

The elderly women goes up to her friend
"Who is that girl dancing?"

"Savitri yeh Geet hai....tum Handa parivar ko toh janti hogi...woh unhoon ki beti hai..."

SD: Ohh haan main janti hoon...hum unke saath business karte hai....magar maine toh isse pehele nahi dekha..."

"haan yeh kuch hafte pehele aayi thi apna MBA katham karke..."

SD: ohh acha...thank you(she thinks: mere khiyal se yehi mere pote ko change kar sakti hai...)

Ha Kabhi Laake De Woh Guthka Mujhe Bhopal Ka
Kabhi Leke Aaye Lehnga Woh Nainitaal Ka
Bareli Woh Jaaye Toh Woh Laaye Surmeidaani
Lucknow Se Le Aaye Kurta Kaamdaani
(Banaras Agar Jaaye, Sari Leke Hi Aaye)
Puchhe Dehli Se Hai Kya Mangwaana, (Thoda Sa Pagla, Thoda Siyaana)

Lukchup Ke Mai Ghumi Gali Gali, Kahee Mila Nahee Mera Piya
Khil Khil Ke Hans Di Kali Kali, Par Khila Nahee Mera Jiya
Meri Itni Kahaani, Meri Hai Yeh Pareshaani
Kabhi Aaye, Koi Aaye, Koi Bole Maine Dil Diya
Dhund Rahi Hu Mai Aisa Deewana, (Thoda Sa Pagla, Thoda Siyaana)

Everyone claps...the guy who was watching her...becomes relentless when he doesn't see her anymore...he puts the glass down and starts looking for her...meanwhile all the girls start going inside and laughing among each other
Both: "wow Geet..you danced so well"

Geet: Thanks...."

Anjali: "By the way who were you dancing for huh?"...(nudges her)

Geet: of course it is meant for my dream man....wonder when will he come....(she sighs...the guy who was looking for her comes in front of her..)

"Geet you looked so beautiful when you danced..."

Geet (looks at him weird): Thanks...(all her friends look at him) umm lets go guys (they all leave...Geet turns around and looks at the guy who was still staring at her)

Meera: "Geet who was that guy?"

Geet: He is a weirdo...he went to the same school as I did...I don't know how he came here....anyway forget it...I have to go now before mom and dad starts yelling at me....

Both: "Alright bye...."

Anjali: Chal Meera let's go eat

Meera: you fatso always thinking about food....

Geet: Bye guys and don't forget we are hanging out tomorrow

Anjali: Bye we will call you tomorrow....

Geet started making her way out to the entrance...the guy comes in front of her again...

"Won't you say hi to me?"

Geet: Listen Rahul I told you before..I don't like you and never will...why don't you stop wasting your time...

Rahul: But I like you

Geet: I don't......anyway that is your problem....(she walks past him and enters her car....)

Rahul looks at her with anger...

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