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Posted: 13 years ago
me dead😆😆😆😆 what a spoiler ...😳
I cant wait to read this o
ne...
please update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awww he is dreaming of her? now he will think that churail has the power to come in his dreams
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg i think maan is doing this thinking he is dreaming 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Thank you all the likes and comments after the spoiler...Hope you guys like this part😳 Plz do throw any suggestions about future updates...will try to update again 2marow...😳

Enjoy!

Chapter 18

Maan makes her lie down again on the bed and puts cold water cloth on her head...he felt somehow responsible for her condition. He knew his parents had placed a trust in him for this trip but in some way he feels like he let them down and most importantly he let himself down. He covers her properly with the blankets...all night he kept putting wet cloth on her forehead and he was relieved when her temperature was beginning to go down. He sits next to her on her bed and falls a sleep holding her hand. The next morning he woke up early after the sun hit his eyes. He lets go of her hand as soon as he realized he was holding her hand while sleeping. He checks her forehead and was happy to know that her fever was now gone. He gets up from the bed for a shower. He orders breakfast for both of them before waking Geet up. He stands next to the bed and looks at her. He pokes her shoulder to wake her up but doesn't get any response from her instead she turns the other way. Maan goes on the other side and pokes her yet again..Geet knotted her eyebrows in frustration but was still asleep. She lies on her stomach and covers her face with the pillow. He removes her pillow and holds it in his hand. He smiles and hits her on the back with the pillow to wake her up. Geet opens her eyes and looks at him with anger and finally sits up.
Geet: What is your problem? Why did you wake me up?
Maan: To eat...go get ready

Geet: I don't want to eat yet...I want to sleep

Maan; The doctor said to make you eat on time. He will be here sometime today for your checkup

Geet: Doctor? Why do I need a doctor?

Maan: You don't remember?

Geet: If I did I wouldn't ask you.

Maan: You had high fever last night. You were shaking all night. I had to place cold cloths on your forehead to reduce the fever

Geet: What? but how did I get sick?

Maan: Because you wanted to pretend to be Kajol and play in the snow.

Geet (looks down embarrassed) Ohh... sorry

Maan: hmm I hope this new bhoot of yours is off and just in case its not I found a video for you that you have to watch

Geet: video? what video?

Maan: I searched making of DDLJ on you tube and there Kajol was talking about how she got sick doing that dance sequence

Geet (confused) okay what does that have to do with me?

Maan: so that you can get a better sense of how dangerous it was...you chudail

Geet: Again you called me chudail

Maan: yeah because you look like one right now...look at your hair...(she turns around and looks at the mirror and realizes he was right...her hair was all over the place..quickly she gets off the bed and heads for the bathroom.. "ha I knew this will get her off the bed..." He sits on the chair and waits for her to come out. He looks at the time and it has been half an hour since she has been inside the bathroom..he gets up and starts pounding on the door.

Maan: Geet hurry up the food is getting cold

Geet: I am coming give me another 10 minutes...

Maan: How long does it take to get ready?

Geet: Did I tell you order the food before I got ready? No right..go and order more food.

Maan: You order the food when you come out. I am not...chudail (he was about to go and then stops) by the way no matter what you do you will still look like a chudail (he laughs)

Geet: Just wait buffoon and I will show you when I come out.

Maan: Whatever...lets see what you do...(he goes back on the bed and decides to sleep for a little bit...)

Meanwhile, Geet in the bathroom was cursing out Maan for calling her chudail but at the same time she was happy that he at least took care of her while she was sick. She smiles to herself and opens the door to find Maan sleeping on the bed. She looks at the food still untouched. She goes near him to wake him up. She puts her hand on his shoulder and then she finds herself under Maan while he is on top of her sleeping peacefully. He was still holding her hand on the side while he places his head on her shoulders making himself cozy. This was new for Geet, she was the only one that made any moves on Maan but never did they shared this close proximity before. She slowly brings one of her arm that was free and hugs Maan gently rubbing his back to sooth him. He gets more comfortable in his sleep. His breath was tickling her neck each time he would exhale, she suppressed her giggles not wanting to wake him up. She closes her eyes lying down very still just enjoying his touch. She opens her eyes when she feels Maan lips on her neck...she looks down and sees Maan kissing her neck slowly. She closes her eyes feeling his touch. He moves toward the face kissing her jaw line then her cheek, her eyes, nose and then finally her lips. Geet opens her eyes to look at him. "How can he be sleeping? Does he think about me when he is sleeping?" She smiles to herself...Maan puts his head back on her shoulder again sleeping...Geet just laid there thinking of current events. She was now determined to get him off of this Bramachari mode now no matter what. She smirked as she smiled evily and closes her eyes resting as well.
Few hours later, Maan stired in his sleep and slowly opened his eyes. "Whos neck is this?" (He slowly raises his head and sees Geet sleeping near him and he had his head on her shoulder...) "How did this happen" (He then looks down and realizes he was on top of Geet while she laid under him sleeping. He quickly gets up and runs his hand through his hair in fursturation and gets off the bed. Geet wakes up after being little bit cold. She notices Maan standing near the window. She goes up to him and places her hand on his shoulder. Maan turns around and looks down.
Maan: Geet...I am sorry...I don't know how I even did that?

Geet (smirked) hmm let me tell you how...(she comes near him) First, you had held my hand like this (she holds his hand) then (she looks into his eyes) then you had pulled me under you (she stands in front of him leaving no gap between them) then you laid your head on my shoulder like this (she puts her head on his shoulder and looks into his eyes as Maan looks at her and her each move) then you slowly very slowly (she whispered) kissed me on my neck like this (she kisses him on his neck, Maan closes his eyes...) then you kissed my face (She moves up to his face...kissing his jaw line then his nose, eyes and she looks at his lips before kissing him..) then finally you kissed my lips...(she lightly kisses his lips by putting her arms around his shoulder...Maan looks at her with open eyes...then slowly closes it and puts hugs her..slowly he starts responding to her...Geet hugs him tighter around his neck as both kiss...Maan was also about to hug her when they were inturpurted by a phone call.

Maan: hello...(he turns around so that his back is toward Geet...) Hi Dev...(Geet goes to the bathroom...Maan hits his head when she closes the bathroom door...) huh yeah Dev I am here...why did you call? Everything alright?

Dev: yeah bro everything is good...I just wanted to know how things are going...

Maan: umm yeah everything is alright...(Geet comes out of the bathroom...and goes outside the room...) "where did she go?'

Dev: Bro are you there? Where is Geet?

Maan: huh...Dev I will call you later...(he hangs up the phone before Dev could say anything...Dev looks at the phone and throws it on the floor with anger...)

Dev: I won't let this marriage succeed...(He smirks) Just wait and see bro...
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Maan quickly goes to the bathroom and gets ready. He grabs whatever comes in his hand and leaves his room to go after Geet. He goes downstairs in the lobby..there he sees Geet talking to the receptionst..He goes behind her and pokes her on her shoulder to get her attention...

Maan: What are you doing here?

Geet: ohh I thought if we could eat outside instead? (She avoids any eye contacts with him while Maan does the same with Geet)

Maan: umm yeah okay...where?

Geet: Well the receptionist said that they have a restaurant inside the hotel so we could go there for breakfast and then some sight seeing...

Maan: I hope you are not going to make me SRK again when we go.

Geet (laughs): no..I think I am done pretending to be Kajol for a while...(then it got quiet between the two) umm so chale?

Maan: huh umm yeah...

Precap: Can we be friends?
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved da update
hate dev
i hope he doesnt destroy maan nd geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very romantic yet cute update, i hate this idiot dev
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it ❤️
maneet scenes were awesome
i can't stop laughing whenever maan calls geet chudail 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update
😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
sooo sweet n cute part!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update hate dev😡 precap is awesome

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