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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: amzu32

wonderful update. .

Originally posted by: zahra15

i couldnt stop laughing on their behaviour...i fink both will say yes intrying to make the other say no...continue soon n thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

res
loved it
continue soon

Thank you guys
I am glad that you guys could laugh lol...
will continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys,

Sorry it took so long...so much for updating this frequently idea 😆😆😆😆😆😆 I hope you guys still like this fan fic 😳😳😳😳

Enjoy

Chapter 7

Everyone was present at Handa's house for Geet's birthday party...Geet gave Maan murderous look while he kept himself distant from her...Dadima who was near him kept pushing Maan toward Geet...he reluctuntily stood near her and smiled at his Dadima..while Geet imagined killing him with the knife...Maan touched the holy water in his pocket as a protectant..."if she touches me again I will spray this whole bottle on her...this time I brought a bigger bottle..."

Flashback:
Maan ran to Pandayji's house and fell on his feet..."please help me Pandayji...a girl touched me again today...it was so bad"

Pandayji: Oh my god...this is worse then evil eye...I think someone did black magic on you

Maan: Black magic? (scared) what should I do Pandayji? Maybe that's why Dadima wants to get me married..i think its that chudail that did this to me

Pandayji (looks at Maan): chudail? Yeh kaun hai?

Maan: wohi chudail jisne mujhe tapad mara tha...usi ke saath meri Dadima meri shaadi karvana chahati hai...main kya karu

Pandayji (gets up and walks around): lagta hai mujhe bohut badi pooja karni pade gi..

Maan: haan Pandayji joh bhi karna hai karo..magar mujhe use bachao

Pandayji (pats Maan's head): fikar mat karo...you just have to get me something of that girl...

Maan: Kya?

Pandayji: haan...warna yeh pooja kaam nahi kadegi...

Maan: Theek hai Pandayji agar woh chuadil mujhe door chali jaati hai toh..joh aap kehege wohi main karuga

Pandayji: Alright I will start performing pooja when you get me the item

End flashback

Maan looks at Geet with nervousness...he fingers the small scissors he has in his pocket...the minute Geet turns around to talk to her friends he slowly takes out the scissors to cut a small piece of her hair...but quickly puts it away when Geet turns around to look at Maan...Dadima and Anushka both come and stand next to them...

Dadima: Geet beta this is for you (she hands her jewelry box...Maan was shocked "now she has done some other magic on my Dadima to give her jewelry)
Geet: Dadima what was the need for this?

Maan: Yeah Dadima..she doesn't need it (Geet gave him a mean look)

Dadima: Maan be quiet..I know what I am doing...anyway all of these will be hers after marriage...

Geet (smiles); thank you Dadima (touches her feet...Dadima hugs Geet...she looks at Maan with evil smile...)

Maan (st): She is up to something...I need to cut her hair and give it to Pandayji before it is too late...there is no way I am getting married to her...I need to do something...

Geet (st): Mr. Maan Singh Khurana you will pay for what you did to me yesturday...first you ruined my makeup, my dress and then you left me all alone without paying for lunch...I will make your life miserable..just wait and watch...you buffoon...(she smiles and looks at Maan)

Dadima: Geet beta if you don't mind..I want to speak with you in private (Maan and everyone looks at her shocked)

Geet: Ji Dadima...(Both went upstairs into the room..while Geet's parents were nervous about their talk)
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After a while Geet and Dadima came downstairs...everyone looks at them with nervousness..Dadima smiled...
Dadima: Don't worry I just needed to speak with Geet..nothing serious

Anushka: Are you sure? We appolize if Geet said something or if we did something wrong

Dadima (holds her hands): You don't have to appolize..it was nothing serious...just normal talking..but anyway enough about this...and lets enjoy this party...(Everyone smiles...Geet looks at Maan with anger...while Maan looks at her hair that he needs for Pandayji)

Rahul: Everyone the dance floor is open...(Rahul goes to Anwesha and takes her to the dance floor..while Ronit and Madhuri goes as well...Dadima looks at everyone smiling...Maan and Geet stood a little far away from each other ignoring each other's presence...Dadima nudges Geet to ask Maan for dance..she nodes her head and goes up to him...)

Geet: Do you want to dance buffoon..I mean Maan (she smiles sarcastically)

Maan: tum jaisi chudail ke saath nahi...aur waise bhi mere pet me dard hai (holds his stomach and pretends that it is paining)

Dadima (sees this and goes up to them): Maan Geet beti ne itne pyaar se pucha hai..
Maan: Dadima my stomach hurts...I can't go

Dadima: Maan now stop behaving like a little boy and dance with Geet..she asked you so nicely (Geet gives cheesy smile to Maan..but all Maan saw was fangs coming out of her teeth...)

Geet: Its ok Dadima maybe next time...(she pretends to get sad)

Dadima (holds her hand): No...Maan will dance with you (Maan looks at Dadima in disbelief)

Maan: But Dadima (before he could say anything more...Dadima puts Geet's hand into his and pushes both of them to the dance floor...Geet smiles seeing Maan being nervous...)

Geet: You know buffoon in order to dance properly you have to hold the person...(Geet takes Maan's right hand and puts it on her waist while she holds his other hand...) Like this...

Maan: You chudail...I don't want to dance with you..your magic won't work on me...

Geet: Don't worry buffoon sooner or later my magic will rub on you

Maan (looks away) Never on me..

Geet (laughs): we will see...(Maan slides of his hand from her waist and takes out the small scissors from his pocket...then he brings it behind her back to cut a piece of her hair without her noticing...as soon as he cuts small piece he quickly brings his other hand to hold it...Dadima got happy when she saw Maan hugging Geet...while Geet was shocked...) what the hell are you doing?

Maan: ohh sorry umm I tripped..am ok now..I gotta go...(he quickly runs out of the party to go to Pandayji...as soon as he got outside of the building...he sprays holy water on his hands as if sanitizing it...) I need to take a bath...
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Geet was in her room after the party resting remembering the talks he had with Dadima during the party...she lies on her stomach and closes her eyes...thinking...

Flashback:
As soon as Dadima and Geet went in the room...
Dadima: Geet I know that you are not happy with this marriage

Geet (looks down): Acutually Dadima I never thought about marriage this early...

Dadima: I know...but please beta don't say no to this marriage (Geet looks at her) I know Maan might not be the one you thought you will be getting married too but when I saw you for the first time I knew that you would be the one to change him
Geet (looks confused): What do you mean change?

Dadima: What you don't know is that Maan is a bramachari...but before you say or ask anything...I just want you to hear everything and then say your decision...Maan always has been a very naive person...he tends to believe everyone very easily but he is very true at heart...he is very caring and lovable...I remember one day when I was sick Maan was the only person that didn't leave my side...he prayed for my well being day and night..he made sure I was eating on time and taking my medication on time (Geet smiled) he knows his responsibilities...i know he will keep you happy...

Geet: ji Dadima

Dadima: There's more...I know Maan is not a bramachari...right now he is listening to this Pandayji...Maan does whatever he says...we tried to tell him not to go or see him but he doesn't listen...Geet beta I know you will help him change...after marriage you can do whatever you want...I don't object you joining college or even if you want to work...even with Madhuri I never forced her to be a house wife..that was her choice...so am giving you the same freedom that I gave Madhuri...but the decision is yours...I know Maan will not say to this marriage because of his father...Please beta I promise you will have all the freedom you want after marriage but please say yes to this marriage and help bring my old Maan back

Geet: Ji Dadima...I will say yes to this marriage...

Dadima: Thank you beta...now lets go back down...

End flashback
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Anushka came in Geet's room...Geet got up seeing her mom...
Geet: mom what are you doing here?

Anushka: Geet I hope you know that whatever decision we made was for your own well being

Geet: I know...

Anushka: so whatever you decide we will accept..if you are not happy with this proposal then I will let the Khurana's know

Geet: No mom its a yes for me...I am ready for this marriage

Anushka: really? I am so happy..I am going to give this news to your dad

Geet: ok...(She lies down as her mom leaves "buffoon I will see how you say no now..." she smirks and goes to sleep)

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Posted: 14 years ago
hahahhaa...loved the last line "buffoon i will see how u say no now"...
ooo tooo goood yaarrr!
eagerly waiting for the nexxt part...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...
superb ...
thnx 4 d pm ...
continue soon ...
cant wait for next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update::
Haha just love the way geet calls maan buffoon😆😆
lol dadi thought maan was hugging geet wen he was busy cutting her hair for the pooja
Glad dat geet agreed,,let's see how maan says no
Cont soon Xx...
Luvin this FF👏
thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWSOME...
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love this update... Hey plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing
do continue
wit more parts
it so funny
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Posted: 14 years ago
so geet say yes on her side
love the last part geet calling
maan buffoon
fantastic part
love it
waiting waiting next
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update dear...so finally geet said yes coz of dadi😛...am happy...
wanna geet to change maan...looking fwd...

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