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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

awesome...


maan having dreams...geet kissing him n he kissed back...😆

ye dev ki kya prob hai...y cant he be happy for his bro..maan has never intefered with his life...then y should he mess with his...just coz he didnt get geet...or his bro doesnt deserve geet...uff...live ur life ...stop bothering him...geet hi kafi hai uske liye...😉

maaneet SH coming...ooo...that would be fun...😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM..


hahah i know he is making some kind of progress lol
haha Dev is jealous that is why he cant be happy he doesn't know how to be happy
stay tuned for their SR lol
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: JayaR

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OMG... he actually dreamt that he was responding to her kisses... Haiyee Rabba...

That was so good... finally they are married and now SR awaits them... Now I wonder what will happen in their SR... lolz...


Now this Dev seems to be an evil person... He has an eye for his Brother's wife... chi chi...

haha Yep...he is SLOWLY changing..very slowly lol..hopefully for good once in for all lol but lets see
I am glad many of you responded positivly for me moving this story that fast I had too and coudln't hold on to their revenge on each other without getting boring or running out of ideas lol
Dev is such a devil lol
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

Notty Maan having notty dream with his chudail.
Dev is such a idiot. Is he eyeing on Geet. For God sake she is his Babhi.
Finally maaneet wedding is over.
Am so eager to read Maaneet's convo on their SR.
U didnt have any in this update... I missed it...
Sure Maan going to do sth silly. He n his "Ram Ram..."
thx for the pm...


haha I know I didn't have any maannets convo byut am sure it will make it up on their SR lol..
Not saying anything lol
Lets see how it goes
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zeynab111

Fabulous updates SIMI!!!!!

seriously i luv Maan. . . he is sooo hilarious!!!!
he is slowly changing me liking it!
i can't wait for the SR!!!! i wonder what u r planning 😉 😆.
Me hate that stupid DEV! I hope his evil plan backfires!
me want to see hot hot and cute maaneet scenes.
omg i can even see geet seducing Maan and he trying to escape and think, "where is my holy water when i need it"🤣


ahah thanks so mcuh!
Glad I could make you guys laugh..I laugh whuile I write the uupdates lol
hmmm you have to wait and see what happens on their SR 😳
umm maaneet scenes will only happen if Maan lets it happen so far he is so hell bent on being a bramachari lol..hopefully Geet removes the bhoot soon!!!!!!
hha I loved your last line lol..made me laugh 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys!!!

I am back with their SR update lol..I hope you guys enjoy it 😳

Chapter 15

Maan stood outside of the door with the girls surrounding him. He looked at them confused. He moved back a little.
Girl1: We won't let you go inside that easil jiju..you have to pay us if you want to see your bride. (all laugh)
Maan: I am not paying anything to you guys. (Dadima and Madhuri come there smiling looking at Maan helpless)
Girl2: Alright then we won't let you go inside. You have to pay us in order to enter that is the tradition.
Maan (smiles): Fine then guess I will sleep in the outhouse. (He turns to go. Dadima and Madhuri look at each other shocked. Dadima came in front and stopped Maan.)
Dadima; Girls if you want your money you can ask Ronit. Madhuri beta take them to Ronit. He will give each their share.
Maan: No no Dadima it is fine. I was suppose to give them money since I don't have any I will sleep somewhere else. It is fine.
Dadima: Sorry Maan you are not getting out of this easily from here.
She holds his hand and pushes him inside the room saying Good Night before closing the door. Maan bangs on the door and tried to open it but it was no use since the door was locked. He turns around to look at Geet and was relieved when he didn't find her there. He goes near the bed and looks around. He looks under the bed searching for her. "Where is she? Maybe she got scared and ran away." He smiles and lies on the bed enjoying his "victory". Then he heard the bathroom door open.
He opens his eyes and looks toward the bathroom. His eyes pop open when he saw her coming out wearing a small bathroom above her knees. He closes his eyes and started chanting. Geet smiles and comes near him. He sits up and starts moving back when Geet comes near him. He falls off the bed when Geet winks at him.


This is the night baby, get a right maybe
He looks up where Geet is sitting on the bed leaning down toward him. He starts to slide back. Geet crawls down on top of Maan as Maan begs with his hands folded to leave him.
Haule haule dheere dheere aana meri baahon mein aa jana
She leans on top of him and opens one button of his sharwani. Maan holds her hands and pull her up.
Pyaasi pyaasi (o yes) marr jayungi, aise mujhe aise tadpa na
He roles over and stands up. Geet smiles and hugs him from the back.
Na kar na kar zara bhi fikar
She pulls his head closer to her face and looks at his lips.
Mila mila nazar se nazar
She was about to kiss him when he pulls away
Aaja tujhe heaven dikhaungi

He beats his head on the bed pillar
Haye I don't know what to do, I don't know what to do
Geet comes and puts her hand in front of his head.
Tauba aagey kya karun
She places a soft kiss on his chest and Maan closes his eyes.
I don't know what to do, I don't know what to do
Tauba aagey kya karun
She pushes him on the bed and slowly walks over to him opening his bathrobe. He looks at her shocked and hides his face with his hands. She throws her robe at him. Maan moves back without looking at her.

I don't know how, I don't know what, I don't know why
She jumps on the bed and removes his hands from his face. She tickles him with her hair tickling him. Maan finally opens his eyes unable to take all the tickling.
Halke halke, dheeme dheeme bikhri meri zulfein sulja na
She puts her head on her shoulder and looks at him.
Main na doori seh paungi, aisi waisi baaton mein sulja na
He tried to push her away but she turns around and hugs him. She looks at him seductively and slowly starts moving down while Maan kept shaking his head "No"
Nasha mera nasha chayega
She opens all of his sherwani buttons...
Mazaa bada mazaa aayega
She sits on top of his stomach and places kisses on his chest while holding his hands to make sure she doesn't move
Aaja tujhe heaven dikhaungi

He pushes her off and sits on the bed
Haye I don't know what to do, I don't know what to do
Tauba aagey kya karun
He tries to get off the bed but Geet stops him by holding his hand
I don't know what to do, I don't know what to do
Tauba aagey kya karun


She pulls him causing him to fall on her...
Hey darr jata hoon, gabhrata hoon
He looks at her scared...she smiles and takes his hands and places it on her waist. Maan looks at her with scared eyes
Aagey main kaise badun
She guides him toward her back..she turns him around so that now she is on top
Anjaan hoon inn raahon se, parbhat main kaise chadun

Maan turns his head sideways
Na kar na kar zara bhi fikar
She turns his head toward her so that he is looking at her
Mila mila nazar se nazar
She reaches for the blanket and covers themselves
Aaja tujhe heaven dikhaungi

He fights with her under the blanket but Geet holds his hands and begins kissing him like no tomorrow while Maan protests. She puts Maan's hand behind her so that he is now holding her while they kiss.
Haye I don't know what to do, I don't know what to do
Tauba aagey kya karun
I don't know what to do, I don't know what to do
Tauba aagey kya karun
Aagey kya karun


Both are falling rolling on the bed still covered with the blanket until they fall off...

"Balatkar...Balatkar...bachao" Maan falls off the sofa. He opens his eyes and looks around. He sees Geet lying on the bed peacefully sleeping. He sighs in relief knowing that he was just dreaming.

Flashback:
Maan was pushed into the room. He looks around and sees Geet sitting on the bed without her ghungat. He sighs in relief and very cautisiously walks toward her. Geet looks at him confused. He bends near her causing Geet to lean back as well. He quickly grabs the pillows and moves back. Geet looks at him.

Maan: Dekho you know I didn't want to get married

Geet (roles her eyes): Yeah I know but what can you do now. We are married (She sits on her knees to come to Maan's level and leans closer to him. She whispers in his ears) FOREVER! (She places a quick kiss on his cheek and moves back. Maan wipes his cheek with his hand)

Maan: ewww dekho mujhese door raho warna...

Geet: warna kya huh? Kya karoge tum?

Maan (stammers): ma ma ma (Geet mimicks him) Main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon...yeh meri warning hai

Geet (smirks): aacha...show me. (She sits on the bed with folded legs and arms looking at him with a challenge)

Maan: I will show you what I can do some other time. Right now I am tired. Here is your pillow you can sleep on the sofa.

Geet (smiles): NO! I will not sleep on the sofa. We can share the bed. You are more then welcome to.

Maan: but this is my bed not yours.

Geet: correction OUR bed.

Maan (gets mad): No MY bed! Now get up. I want to sleep.

Geet: Ok then if you want me to be up then pick me up and carry me to the sofa only then I will sleep there. (She holds out her arms in the air waiting for him to pick her up)

Maan (looks at her and just stomps his way to the sofa): Good night...(he lies down and turns his face away from her. Geet looks at him with amusement)

"Don't worry buffoon...this is just the beginning.) She smiles and doses off to sleep.

End Flashback!

Maan to himself... "Oh my god. I don't know how I can survive like this. I stayed away today but what about the rest of my life. Thank god Dev helped me out or else I don't what I would've done. I couldn't face Pandayji afterwards because of shame. I should ask Dev tomorrow and see if he has anymore ideas on how to stay away from her..." Maan goes back to sleep on the sofa.

The next day Maan woke up early and saw that she is still sleeping. He quietly went near her to make sure she is still asleep. "She looks nice when she is sleeping but the minute she wakes up she goes into chudail avatar..." He quietly puts his pillows and his blanket on the bed and heads out toward the bathroom. After few minutes, he comes out drying his hair with the towel and fully dressed in his usual clothing. He goes near Pandayji picture and prays "Panayji please give me enough strength to deal with her. I don't know what has gotten into my grandma that she decided to get me married to this chudail. Hopefully today is a good day..." He finishes praying and looks back at Geet again. "She ruined my sleep and now it is time for me to do the same." He gets and idea and heads toward the bathroom. He comes out holding a cold water mug in his hand and tip toes toward the bed. He looks at her and then at the water and at the count of three he drops the whole mug on Geet. She wakes up screaming. Maan puts the mug on the dressing table and runs out of the room. It took Geet a minute to realize what happened and then looks at the opened door.

"I will get you for this buffoon. You have started a war. I thought I will be nice to you but now watch out." She gets off the bed and notices Pandayji's picture in front of her. She smirked and went inside the bathroom to change. She comes down for the breakfast and sees everyone sitting in the living room talking. She goes up to Dadima and touches her feet followed by Maan's mom and dad. Dadima gives Geet a necklace as a gift, Madhuri gives her bangles from her and Ronit's side. She looks around for Maan but don't see him. She notices Dev staring at her and she turns her face away from him feeling uncomfortable.

Madhuri: Beta I hope you had a good night sleep (She nodes her head yes and remembers Maan throwing water on her in the morning disturbing her sleep)

Dadima: Geet beta as a tradition you have to make something sweet for us. (Geet nodes her head and goes toward the kitchen)

"I don't even know how to cook. I don't know what to do. Today is my first day and last time I did a take out I can't do that now." She looks around for a cooking book. After a lot of time she manages to find it in a drawer. She opens the book and goes through the book. She stops at a kheer recipe. "hmm that seems easy enough. I could make that." She follows the recipe as it is. "hmm ok milk..." She turns around and bumps into Dev. He smiles at her.

Dev: I came to see if you need any help.

Geet (moves back a little): hmm thanks but I don't need help. Do you need anything?

Dev: umm no I will just get a cup of water (He just stands there waiting for Geet)

Geet (looks at him weirdly and sighs): the water is in the fridge. (She points toward the fridge. Dev went to the fridge and poured himself a glass of water. He looks at Geet one more time before leaving. As soon as he leaves she goes to the fridge and takes out the milk. She starts preparing the kheer. Geet puts down the spoon after it was prepared and takes a relief sigh. She starts putting them in the bowl for everyone to be served. She was about to leave when she realized she forgot something. "hmm how could I forget you. I made this especially for Maan." She smiles and puts the bowl on the tray remembering which one is his. She goes outside with the tray and sees everyone is already sitting at the dinning table. She smiles and gives each one their bowl. She sees Maan sitting next to Dev and one empty seat next to Maan. She takes the last bowl and serves it to Maan with a huge smile and takes a seat next to him. Maan looks around at everyone who was eating and enjoying the food. Geet pays more attention to Maan rather then her food and watches as he takes a spoon full of kheer in his hand and puts it in his mouth. Geet holds her spoon in the mid air watching his reaction. Everyone watches Maan with anticipation to know his opinion as well. He looks at Geet with wide eyes while she smiles at him.

Geet: Kya hua Maan kheer aachai nahi hai?

Ronit: Haan Maan why are you making funny faces. Don't you like it? Geet did just a good job. (Maan swallows the kheer having no other option and quickly drinks the water...he looks at everyone as they look at him with confusion)

Geet: What happened? Did I put too much sugar? (she asks innocently. Maan "sugar? You put too much salt in it. How can you make kheer with salt? I don't know why no one else complained about her kheer and is just eating away like it is good")

Dadima; Sugar is fine. I like it. Geet beta you did a wonderful job. Kheer is Maan's favorite I think he likes it. Kyu Maan? (She winks at him...)

Maan: huh wo haan..

Geet: ohh I didn't know it is his favorite. Finish it then Maan. (She slightly nudges him to eat the rest of the kheer. Maan looks at her nervously saying no...Geet pouts and becomes sad) Looks like he doesn't like it Dadima.

Madhuri: Maan why are you behaving like this? Eat the kheer. She made it with so much love.

Maan: But maa

Ronit: Maan now you are married and have to not only think about yourself but also think about your wife. You already want to hurt her feelings on her first day?

Maan: No but dad

Ronit: I don't want to hear anything. Eat your food quietly. (Maan having no other option eats the salty kheer. He smiles pretending that he enjoys it while Geet looks at him with a victory smile)

Precap: Dev: Maan bhai go to your room and see what Geet did.
Maan: What?
Dev: You will know. She already started taking over everything. You have no other option but to agree since she has everyone on her side.


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Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg...balatkar...🤣..balatkar..🤣...balatkar...🤣

i cant believe it..maan dreaming of this...🤣..poor maan...🤣

dreams me bhi picha nahi chodti...pehle kiss...n now balatkar...🤣

awesome...

maan bhi naa...khud hi musibat mol leta hai...what was the need of pouring cold water...

n now the result...salted kheer...😆

geet is not getting good vibes frm dev...n here maan is thinking of asking his bro for more advice...uff...

this chudail will surely make the buffoon pay...wait n watch...

continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

omg...balatkar...🤣..balatkar..🤣...balatkar...🤣


i cant believe it..maan dreaming of this...🤣..poor maan...🤣

dreams me bhi picha nahi chodti...pehle kiss...n now balatkar...🤣

awesome...

maan bhi naa...khud hi musibat mol leta hai...what was the need of pouring cold water...

n now the result...salted kheer...😆

geet is not getting good vibes frm dev...n here maan is thinking of asking his bro for more advice...uff...

this chudail will surely make the buffoon pay...wait n watch...

continue soon...


haha I was thinking of 3 idiots line balatkar pe balatkar line lmao it always cracks me up lmao
His whole system is dheela now lol..he has no control over his dreams anymore poor maan
Lets see what Geet has planned or what is ahead of Buffoon and Chuadil love story lol

btw did you see the video or not? I am not sure if the video link worked since I dont' have flashplayer added to my new computer yet.

Thanks!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow such an amazing update!Its only the saint maan who dreams all that naughty stuff 😆 😆 Glad that geet sensed the bad vibes from dev...Gosh,geet was great with her punishment to maan 😆 😆 Now i worry what that crazy dev will make maan to agree on!! Waiting for next...u write very well,thanks for the update!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


haha I was thinking of 3 idiots line balatkar pe balatkar line lmao it always cracks me up lmao
His whole system is dheela now lol..he has no control over his dreams anymore poor maan
Lets see what Geet has planned or what is ahead of Buffoon and Chuadil love story lol

btw did you see the video or not? I am not sure if the video link worked since I dont' have flashplayer added to my new computer yet.

Thanks!😳


as soon as i read balatkar...chatur flashed in front of me...n both maan n chatur made me...🤣🤣


no dear...the video is not running...i forgot to mention it in my comment...do check it once again n mayb put another link of the same song...

u r most welcome..🤗
yes u r right...pehle sirf kapde dhile the...but ab pura system dheela hai...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb part dear...
Awesome.

Maan's dream...lolll
We will have to wait for real SR...

Arghh...i just hate this Dev ka bacha...

Updt soon.

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