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Posted: 14 years ago
awe poor Maan got blackmailed
n Geet didn't even spare Nakul
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Posted: 14 years ago
love this geet so full of funny
love it love it
cont soonnn
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆love how geet blackmails nakul. Love how geet makes maan go shopping with her by mentioning dadi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz Simi...

I somehow guessed that she must have ordered the food from a restaurant ...

hhmmm... Date?? Lets see if this time Maan falls for Geet's charm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Finally and update! 😆


Chapter 13

"I will not wear these clothes"...Maan has spend the last hour or so trying on jeans and shirts in front of Geet. No matter what she chooses he rejects all the clothes. Trying to be very patience with him she gave him more clothes to try on hoping he would like something but alas all his answers were the same.
Geet: Why not? What is wrong with these clothes?
Maan: They are weird. It is not comfortable at all. This shirt (He pulls on his shirt...) it is too tight on me
Geet; That is how it is suppose to be. They are suppose to fit you
Maan: Clothes are suppose to be like this. (He shows off his usual attire) You see how loose and confrotable it is to wear this.
Geet: I dont care! You are coming to a concert with me tonight and you have to dress like everyone does
Maan: Well am not going if I have to change what I wear.
Geet: too bad..I already bought the clothes you are wearing so have no other option left and as for these clothes (she takes his usual outfit from his hands..) These are going in the garbage.
Maan: What? You they are not...(He goes toward Geet to take his clothes back but Geet was too quick and runs off with his clothes. Maan follows her outside but was too late, he saw her throw his clothes in the garbage...) What did you do?
Geet: That is where these clothes belong from now on you have to wear clothes like this especially since you are going to be getting married to me.
Maan (mocks her): I don't care. I don't want to get married to you anyway and if you don't like what I wear don't get married to me. Call off the wedding.
Geet: Nice try. I will not leave you this easily. I still have to get my revenge from you for calling me names. Now come on we have to go.
Maan: Where are we going?
Geet: it is a surpise. (She started dragging him outside of the stores. All the girls looked at Maan and gave him a smile. Maan looked at all of them confused.)
Maan: Why are girls looking at me? (Geet stopped and looked at what Maan was refering to. She became angry when all the girls had stopped in their tracks to look at Maan. One girl dropped her bag on purpose...Maan being Maan he went to pick up the bag from the floor.) You should'n't throw food bag on the floor. (Girl just smiled and giggled..all the other girls became jealous when they saw that and soon everyone one by one dropped their various items they were holding in their hands on the floor...Geet jaw dropped open when she saw Maan picking all the items up. She marched toward him and dragged him away) What are you doing? Let go of me.
Geet: What were you doing huh? I thought you like to stay away from girls. Why were you helping them then?
Maan: What. (he gave her a confused look) Main toh bas iss desh ka aacha nagrigh hone ki kathir kisi ki madad kar raha tha. When someone is in need of help you should always help them no matter what. I don't look at their gender when I am helping someone. For example, I know you need help and believe me I would do whatever I can in my power to help you. I will not look at you being a girl or whatever..
Geet: Help? What help do I need?
Maan: I don't know if it will work but Pandayji will try to take this chudail aatma that is inside of you out. Don't worry you will be human soon if you corporate with us.
Geet (all the words finally registered inside her hand..she looks at Maan angirly and runs after him...) YOU! I won't spare you...buffoon...(Maan ran away from her laughing and scared at the same time seeing her run after him...)
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Maan: Yeh kaise zoo main mujhe lekar aagayi tum? (He looked around the club, people were everywhere jumping up and down to the music, some were at the bar drinking and smoking, some couples were standing in the corner kissing or sitting on couches with girls sitting on the boys lap. He insentatly closes his eyes saying ram ram ram under his breath.) this is the concert? Or yeh kaise dance kar rahe hai...jumping like monkeys..yeh bhi koyi dance hua
Geet: This is not a concert but a club. This would be more fun. Come on lets go.
Maan: Look how they are dancing. What kind of dance is that? It looks like they have an itch in their bodies and they can't reach for it. Sab ke sab bandar lag rehe hai.
Geet: This is dancing. How else is dancing suppose to be?
Maan: Bhangra...that is real dancing and not this monkey dance. I am not going...(ST: yeh ladki toh meri sari tapasya tohdne par lagi hai..agar mujhe pata hota ki yeh mujhe aisi jagah par lekar aah rahi hai toh main apne saat ganga gal aur lekar aata. This will not be enough) I want to go home
Geet: You can't go home this easily yet. Lets enjoy first. (She drags him to the dance floor, Geet started jumping up and down dancing around Maan while he put his arms close to his and just look around shocked and scared. He kept turning his head from left to right seeing everyone dancing like monkeys. He leaves Geet and sits on a bar table sighing in relief...He orders water for himself..he looks at the dance floor for Geet but couldn't find her. Suddenly the lights went off)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0smZGU2VxA[/YOUTUBE]

His jaw dropped open when he saw her dressed in a mini skirt with a tank top. Boys started dancing right next to her. He closed his eyes unable to look at her. He wanted to turn his back toward her but couldn't. He just kept staring at her.
Chori chori kiya re
Dil ye dil liya re
Jadoo se jadoo kiya
Kiya re
Jagi soyi rahon
Khoyi Khoyi rahon
Uski yadoon me uske batoon me
Jhoome jiya re


Crazy kiya re [x3]

She comes close to Maan and dances around him. She puts her hand on his shoulder, he shrugs his shoulders back.
Na uko pata
Na uski kata
She leans toward him...
Main uspe mar gayi
Zara usko bata
She goes back on the dance floor
Theree Theree
Ikraar me
Uske he pyaar me jhoomen jiya reee!

Crazy kiya re [x3]


She brings Maan to the dance floor and dances with him. He tried to move away from her but she puts his hands on her waist and holding his hands in place making sure he doesn't move. She smiles and looks at him. Unknowingly, Maan started dancing as he looked into her eyes. He holds her hand and spins her around.
Main yahan bhi gaya
Main wahan bhi gayi
Socha pal palm use
Main jahan bhi gayi
Din ho yaa raat ho
Wo mere saath Ye uski baat ho
Jhoome jiya reee!

She lands on his chest and looks up at him with shock and happiness. Maan comes out of his trace and realizes what he did. He lets go of Geet and sits back in the corner.

Crazy kiya re [x3]

Sexy lady on the floor!
Keep yhe coming at the mall! [x2]


He watches her from the corner of his eyes. Geet noticed and smiles at him. He turns his head away confused of his actions...
Chori chori kiya re
Dil ye dil liya re
Jadoo se jadoo kiya
Kiya re
Jagi soyi rahon
Khoyi Khoyi rahon
Uski yadoon me uske batoon me
Jhoome jiya re
"What had happened to me? Why did I touch and dance with her? Why? I never danced or went with any girl before but why I am not able to walk away from Geet? Even if Dadima or papa forces me why can't I just ditch her somewhere? Yeh kaisa ehsaas hai..." Geet comes and stands behind Maan. He turns around and sees her standing there.
Maan: woh um I want to go home now.
Geet: You don't like this place?
Maan: No..I am going...(He gets up to leave when Geet holds his hand..) let go of my hand. Jab dekho mera haath pakad thi reheti ho
Geet (Puts her arms around his neck) what can I do if you don't hold my hand.
Maan (lets go of her arms): Its getting late and waise I don't like these clubs and all...
Geet (sighs) fine lets go home.
Maan: chadail you will go home in these clothes?
Geet: Ohh yeah let me go change (Maan ST: lagta hai mujhe kuch karna padega iske kaproon ke bare main...) Maan came to Geet's house..he saw her parents sitting on the dining table. He went up to them and touched their feet. Both were surprised at first seeing Maan here all of a sudden then they quickly gave him a smile.
Rahul: Where is Geet?
Maan: She went upstairs to change.
Anushka: Did you guys have a nice time at the concert?
Maan: Actually, we...
Geet (came up from behind wearing a suit): we had loads of fun at the concert right Maan? (he looks at her dumfounded..she gave him a pleading glare not to say anything...)
Maan: yeah...waise Aunty Uncle I personally didn't like it...(he looks at Geet who was giving him a deadly glare) the clothes that they were wearing...especially the girls...what do you call them yeah mini skirts and tan tops (he smirks at Geet...who almost choked on her water she was drinking at that moment) aur pata nahi kitne chote chote kapade pehente hai..It looks like they are waring kids clothes.Geet should always wear suits..right Auntyji
Anushka: of course...I agree with you
Maan; in fact Geet shouldn't have any other clothes except for suits in her closet. Kyun Geet?
Geet (stutters): haan...yeah
Maan: Right now she should clean her closet and throw all the western clothes.(She looks at him with shock)
Rahul: You are right. (he calls his servant and orders him to clean out Geets closet...she screams no but one angry glare from her dad shuts her up. Maan smirks seeing her plight..."I got my revenge..I got my revenge..." (he starts singing that in his head..Geet storms off to her room angry...)

What do you guys want to see next? Do you guys want me to go straight to their marriage?
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yesss Maan is starting to feel for her
awww not fair he threw out her clothes!
pfft she only changed his style for his own good
hehe loved it
plz add me to your pm list!
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Posted: 13 years ago
me second...
they both r worst case of enemity...
one out of both will surely die b4 reachin the mandap...lol
do add me to ur buddy list if i m not there...
do continue...dis time sooner...
chao
Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii

Yesss Maan is starting to feel for her
awww not fair he threw out her clothes!
pfft she only changed his style for his own good
hehe loved it
plz add me to your pm list!

hehe Maan had to get his revenge lol
They can't let other one live in peace if one is suffering lol
I don't have a pm list but I do send out master pm's to every fan fic I have udpated...so you can read whichever you like 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lively-piia

me second...

they both r worst case of enemity...
one out of both will surely die b4 reachin the mandap...lol
do add me to ur buddy list if i m not there...
do continue...dis time sooner...
chao


Piia (with two ii's) I wouldn't be surprised if they do end up killing each other before marriage lol
You are on the master pm list 😳
Will update as soon as I have the next part written 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


Piia (with two ii's) I wouldn't be surprised if they do end up killing each other before marriage lol
You are on the master pm list 😳
Will update as soon as I have the next part written 😆

actually it's pia wid one "i" only...but js't thout to be diff...js't like dat...😉😉
n thanx 4 addin me to ur masters pm list...
chao

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