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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan

omg
i cant believe wat u have done😕

u turned a smokng hot dude into idk wat 2 describe him as
nd wat an intro girl, u gave him a golden vest
d moment i read gold vest i was lyk ewew ye kya hai?
nd poor he got slapped in d middle of road among so many people nd didnt utter a word
its really interesting 2 watch his antics wen geet is arnd him
poor soul gets scared so easily
na daadi is a swtheart, such a clever lady
nd ronit god he'll certainly get hypertension if maan remains d way he is
sum1 lyk ronit walking wid maan certainly no 1 wud believe dat maan is nyhow related to
him
nd maan's mom nd dadima infact every1 except dev share such a cute bond
poor geet wat a shock she must have got wen she was literally ordered to maary maan
maan nd geet's fight r so much like 2 kindergarten's kid stuck wid each other

nd d way maan protected geet from rohit was such a suprise d way u described him i never thought he cud ever stand 4 himself 4get abt sum1 else no wonder geet developed a kind of lykng 4 him
ok nw enough of my bak-bak
but 1 thing hw on earth u decided 2 portray maan in such a way i mean no 1 even in der wildest dream wud imagine maan kyk dat but seems u luv 2 portray maan in d most bizzare way
dis is definitely d weirdest maan i have ever come across
but certainly i lyk it
its a nyc fun filled story
will definitely luk 4wd 4 its updates so update soon
nd lyk geet said its definitely going 2 be fun
u rock girl






Pryia..thanks so much for your lovely comment!!!!!!!!
As for your question: how on earth u decided 2 portray maan in such a way...to tell you the truth idk how...I just love playing with Maan's character...I dont' change much for Geet because I love the way she is ..bubbly and fun...but maan..I think having a variety in his character is a must..and I love writing sometihng new that no one has tried so far (at least I can only hope they havent) and yeah I know that everyone, like yourself, was shocked that Maan stood up for Geet knowing how his character is. I had to bring this drastic step not only for Geet but also for the audiance to know that although Maan may seem like the type of not being able to defend himself...he always stands up for whats right...and this not only helped me bring the story forward but also showed his good side of maan...

So lets see how maan gradually changes throughout the story...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update dear
loved it..
cont soon
basicquestion1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute...the more he tries to run away the more it boosts geet's confidence.
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Posted: 14 years ago
now maan will bath with holy water
love the tortourous geet
mrs.msk thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys,
Sorry won't be able to reply back to your comments...but I hope you guys enjoy this update 😳
Enjoy,
Chapter 11
Maan sat in one corner cursing Geet and his family. Mehendi ceremony was going on...and everyone was busy giving Geet all the attention. It was like he didn't exist anymore. Not much time was left before he will actually be tied down with Geet FOREVER...just the thought about their marriage makes him shiver...He couldn't imagine living with her...and this Pandayji..he couldn't do anything right...Maan had given him all the information about Geet to her likes/dislikes and even a piece of her hair..and yet he can't come up with a plan that will make her go away forever? And that Geet...Maan knew she is up to something because whenever he was in the room and there were other people present she would act so nice toward him.
He remembers just yesterday at the dinner table. Geet saved a seat for him RIGHT next to her. Everyone was looking at him for his next move, Maan having no other option, since there were no other seats available sat right next to Geet. And when he was about to serve food for himself..She comes out of nowhere and serves him and gave that "evil" smile to him. Maybe everyone didn't see Geet the way he does but he was determined to bring her "true" face in front of everyone. My parents are so innocent especially my Dadima...she gets influences by anyone's emotions. She is so nice and doesn't know that Geet is evil. It looks like I have to do something quick. Good thing I am the only sane one here. God knows what would've happened to my family without me. Just then Madhuri came and dragged Maan toward Geet and made him sit right next to her.
Maan: What is this? Why am I sitting here?
Madhuri: Beta it is better if you both sit together.
Maan: But what is the need for me here? This is all for women. I feel weird. (he was about to stand up when Geet placed a hand on top of his hand. Maan stopped instentialy and looked at Geet with shock)
Geet: Please sit down if mummy ji is saying it.
Madhuri (pats her on the head): God bless you.
"how dare she touch my hand and that too in front of everyone. She is lucky that everyone is here or else I would've done something to her alone. What am I talking about. Why would I want to get in a room all alone with her. She could easily do some magic on me if we no one is around. I should always remember this and have at least one or two witnesses right next to me. If something happens to me then they can have her punished. What if she does something to my witnesses as well? hmm I should hire some secret body guards where no one will know. They will seceretly follow me around everywhere so in that way if she does something to me they can record it on camera and show it to my family. Yeah. I will call Pandayji to see if he knows anyone that can help me. But first I need to get my hand out of her hand and holy-fy it...god knows I need more water."
Maan: Let go of my hand you chudail. (He spoke low so that only she would hear him...)
Geet (looked at him and smiled): Why? I don't have any problems.
Maan: I have problems that's why I am saying it. Now let go of my hand.
Geet: What if I don't? What will you do?
Maan: I will...ummm...I will do something very bad if you don't
Geet: Ohh really like what?
Maan: Fine don't say I didn't warn you chudail. (He pinches her hand really hard. Geet looked at him with anger and removed her hand.)
Geet: You buffoon, you will pay for this. Just wait and watch. (She saw Dadima pass by and calls out to her...) Dadima.
Dadima: Ji beta. What is it? Is Maan giving you any problems? (She looks at him while Maan looks at her with shock)
Maan: I don't do anything. Its always her.
Geet: No, Dadima he didn't do anything. (She smiles at him but all Maan saw was her being in a chudail avatar.) Actually, I wanted to ask you something.
Dadima: Yeah sure beta what is it.
Geet: Woh umm it may sound weird but umm (She looks down)
Dadima: Geet you don't have to hesitate...you can tell me
Geet: woh I thought if Maan could have my name written on his hand with a henna (Maan chocked on his laddoo hearing Geet...Dadima smiled and Geet and all the girls around her started to giggle.)
Maan: What? Are you crazy? I am not doing that. See Dadima I told you she is evil. She wants to get revenge on me.
Dadima: Maan. Think before you talk.
Geet: Dadima please don't yell at him. Rehene do, mujhe laga ki..kehr...(She becomes sad)
Dadima; No, No beta. You are right. In fact, I love this idea. It will bring you guys more closer. (to the henna lady) Please after you are done could you write Geet's name on his hand.
Maan (whines): Dadima but...
Dadima: Maan...do you want me to call Ronit here? (Maan becomes quiet and turns his head away mad...Dadima smiles and leaves...Geet leans toward Maan and whispers in his ears...)
Geet: Don't mess with me you buffoon. You can't do anything to me as long as I have your Dadima on my side. (Maan was about to speak when henna lady intrupted him)
Lady: What name should I write on your hand? (Talking to Geet...)
Geet: Ji Maan Singh Khurana...("Although, it should be buffoon Singh Khurana..." she looks at him and smiles while Maan looks at her with anger...)
"you chudail I will get you for this...but I am happy you told me something very important...I would have to get Dadima on my side and make her dislike you. If i can do that then you will be out of my life soon...I never thought of that before. hmm just wait and watch..." (Henna lady grabbed Maan's hand and started applying mehendi on him with Geet's name...) "Because of you I am being touched by all the women. I worked so hard to make sure that no women come near me but YOU ruined all that...I will get my revenge you chudail..." (Dadima and Madhuri came and started smiling seeing mehendi being applied on his hand...)
Madhuri: Beta this was a great idea. (Geet smiled...and looked at Maan with evil smile...Maan smiled back at her...Dadima got so happy seeing them smiling at each other...and whispered in Madhuri's ears)
Dadima: I told you bei that everythihng would be alright. Look at Maan..before he never looked at any girls or talked to one and now he is like a complete different person.
Madhuri: You are right mom. I hope they both remain like this forever.
Dadima: me too...
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Maan was in his room scrubbing his hand trying to remove Geet's name but, no matter what he used or did, the color did not go away. Pandayji had a heart attack after listeing to Maan over the phone. "Why is the color so dark? ugh I hate that chudail because of her everyone was teasing me during the ceremony. She is coming over tonight for dinner...just wait Ms. Chudail Handa..you have a huge surprise for you...I will win..."
Maan came down where everyone was gathered. Geet's family had still yet to come. He went toward the sofa and sat next to his dad.
Ronit: Maan let me see your mehendi. Color theek tara chara hai yah nahi...(He laughed and so did everyone...)
Maan: If this is how you are going to be then I am leaving...(He was about to get up when Ronit stopped him...)
Ronit: Maan stop...we were just joking. Come sit. Geet should be coming any minute with her family.
Maan: I wanted to speak to you guys about that. (Everyone look at him with worry...) woh I want Geet to make dinner tonight. (Everyone look at each other with shock)
Dadima: Maan what are you saying?
Maan: Woh Dadima after marriage she will cooking..so I just want to get used to her cooking now.
Madhuri: wow Maan beta you have made me so happy by saying that.
Ronit: I can't believe if you are the same Maan. Must say we made a good choice by having you get married. (Just then Geet and her family came. Ronit got up and shaked Rahul's hand...while Geet and her mom went to sit with Dadima and Madhuri)
Dadima: you guys came on good time. We were just speaking about you.
Anushka: kya batein ho rahi thi?
Dadima: Abhi pata chal jayega...Geet beta...(She comes and sits next to Dadima) Agar tum bura na mano toh Maan chahata hai ki aaj ka dinner tum banao...(Geet looks at Maan shocked who smiled at her)
Geet; Main Dadima? Magar...
Dadima: haan woh kya hai na..Maan abhi se tumhari khane ki adaat dalna chahta hai...
Maan: Geet its fine...I will wait after marriage...I shouldn't have said that..I am sorry Geet if you feel bad
Anushka: Why are you saying sorry beta. Its a good idea.
Rahul: Yeah Maan beta. Geet will cook. (Geet having no other option..shaked her head yes and got up to go toward the kitchen)
Maan smiled and looked at her retreating figure...("hmm if you have Dadima on your side then I have your parents on my side. You can't say or do anything in front of them. Let's see what you will do now...") He gets up to go to the kitchen. He stopped at the kitchen watching Geet standing near a stove mumbbling something to herself.
"That buffoon...I hate him...how do I say that I don't know how to cook. I only know how to make maggie and boiled eggs. and my parents they know that and yet still forced me to come here and cook...now what do I do? I can't ask help from anyone either..."
Maan: umm Chudail..I forgot to tell you what I want. Could you make paneer aloo with rotis and chole...you see both are my favorite.
Geet: You..I will get you for this...(She holds a spoon in her hand ready to hit Maan...Maan quickly runs out of the kitchen seeing that...Geet turned toward the stove again slaming the spoon on the counter...) "I will surely take revenge for this...hmm I know your weakness buffoon..."
Precap1: Ronit: wow Geet the food is good...
Dadima: Really Geet you made good food...
Maan looks at her shocked while Geet gives a winning smile to him
Precap2: "wh wh what are you doing?"
"pyaar"
"pp pp pyaar?"
"haan" (she leans toward him..while Maan moves back...)
P.S. Look like they will be using each other's family against each other 😆😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loving their cute fights...awsome updt dear...

thnks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
did geet call the take away service... I wouldn't wonder if she did to get out of this mess 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...

love the way they both r taking revenge...😆

geet name on maan's hand...lovely...

precap is really interesting...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
This FF is so darn funny...I can imagine Geet giving those evil smiles 😈 and Maan being all touch me not 🤣. They fight worse than kids .

Waiting to see both become aware of each other and play grown up games 😉😛😆

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