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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!
thankgod!...maan started feeling something for geet!
I hope he will be on track soon!😆
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pms!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
i read all chap
simply loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update love maaneet they are so cute love their cute nhok jhok
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Posted: 13 years ago
It took time but here is the next part..I decided to skip the story faster a little..so you guys will know what I am talking about once you read...real fun beings afterwards..😆😆 so why wait?
Enjoy!!!
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I have been noticing that I don't get enough likes/comments. I have 400 people in my pm list and I could barley get 130 likes. I know many of you guys don't have time to comment but please at least like...it motivates me. Whenever i see I have 100 something likes out of 400 it jsut dejects me and makes me not upddate at all. Please if not comment at least like the updates and if you don't like this fan fic or any other fan fic then please delete me from your pm list. I don't want to waste your time and mine and I don't want to go through trouble in making a new Pm ID either. I always make sure I include your ideas and address any concerns in my updates..
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Chapter 14
Maan was coming out of his room when he felt a tug on his hand. Shocked to see Geet wearing a white dress up to her knee, he immediately closes his eyes. "Jai Hanuman.." yeh kya subha subha dekhne ko milgaya...Let go of my hand..." He told Geet while still having his eyes closed. She smirks and leans closer to Maan "Maine yeh haath chodne ke liye nahi padka hai..waise yeh line toh tumhe mujhse bolni chahiye..kehr shaddi ke baad tum mujhse kohoge...abhi dher tak main aise hi kaam chila sakti ho" She smiles and pushes him back in the room and closes the door behind her. Maan opens his eyes and looks at her shocked. Geet takes his hand and puts it on her waist. "I want to kiss you before we get married in two days"

Maan: kk kk kkaya

Geet (puts her hand on his lips...) Shhh...(She leans closer to him while Maan moved back..they kept playing this until both fell on the bed with Geet on top of Maan. He looks at her with shock. Geet smiles and kisses him on the lips. Maans eyes pop open as he looks at Geet on top of him kissing him on his lips..he touched her shoulder to move her but she only held him tighter by his hair. She smiles against his lips. She bites his lower lip and gently kisses it tasting his mouth. After a while, Maan starts responding back to her. He starts caressing her back and turns her over so that now he was on top. He starts giving her small kisses on her neck and shoulder. His hand move to her knees as he places his gental kisses on her neck until he moves back to her lips. His hand gently moving upward above her knees.

"aaahhh" Maan screams and sits up. He was sweating and his heart was beating fast. "Yeh kya hogaya hai mujhe. Why was I dreaming about that. Ram Ram Ram Ram.." (he starts chanting ram) "Should I tell Pandayji about this dream? No no I cant or else he will kill me. I can't marry her. She has taken over my dreams and my house..." He gets out of the bed and notices the bed was full of sweat. "what is happening...I never dreamt of any girl before then why Geet? why?" He sat on the couch thinking about his dream trying to come up with a rational explination for all this.
The next day, Maan mainted his distance from everyone. He was sort of glad that he and Geet cannot meet until the day of their marriage but still the thought of living with her forever scared him. Already she has taken over everything what is there to take over.
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"Stupid wedding..stupid haldi rasam..I don't want to get married..maybe I could run away but where? I don't have any money..thanks to dad who took everything including my credit cards because I kept giving donations to Pandayji." He gets up with excitement..."ohh yeah I think I had some money saved up and hidden in the almari.." He gets up to check the closet, all the way at the end of the closet he finds a box. He looks at the door making sure no one is watching but just to make sure no one does he goes into the bathroom and locks the door. He opens the box and looks at the money..."only 2000 rupees..." he was disappointed. "I won't be able to do anything with 2000 rupees...everything is so expensive..how will I manage with this..." He puts the box on top of the sink..."Now what..if I ask Dadima or mom for money they will ask me thousand questions and I can't defiantly can't ask dad for money or else he will start shouting at me...maybe Dev? Let me see if he can help me..." He goes to Dev's room but was disappointed to not find him there. He asks Nakul who was passing by carrying flowers basket to decorate the house.
Maan: Nakul where is Dev?
Nakul: Woh saab toh bahar gaye hai koyi kam ke silsile main...mujhe nahi maloom kaha
Maan: hmnm ok thanks...("god must really hate me for not helping me get out of this situation. Now what...even Padayji said he can't do anything with me. Am all alone")
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Madhuri: Ma have you seen Maan? I went to his room but I didn't see him there.
Dadima: I think he might be hiding..since he is going to get married soon. I really don't understand that boy. He is not a bramachari..you just wait and watch as soon as he gets married. I am going to tell Geet to stop Maan from meeting Padayji.
Madhuri: Yeah that is a good idea. I want my old son back and maybe we should tell her to change his dressing style too.
Dadima: yeah..we should make a list of things we want her to change in Maan. I know how he behaves in front of her and he will have no option but to listen to Geet. (Both laugh)
Madhuri (stops laughing and looks at her seriously): Do you think we did the right thing with him getting married? I am just worried that Maan will do something with himself.
Dadima (pats her face): Yeah we did. He needed that and I know we chose the right person for him. Geet is very caring and I have full faith in her that she will handle Maan and change him as well. (Ronit comes with Dev and stands next to Dadima)
Ronit: the ceremony didn't start yet?
Madhuri: No we are looking for Maan. I don't know where he is at.
Ronit (sighs): Ok let me find that boy.
Dadima: No. I will go look for him. I know you might loose your temper on him and you
Dev go help your mom with the rest of the preparations.
Dev (roles his eyes) I don't even know why we are getting him married if he doesn't want to. Why are you guys ruining her life?
Dadima; Dev is this a thing to say...he is your brother no matter how he is. you should respect him
Dev: He is so embarrassing..I don't need a brother like him...("Its not fair that Maan got
Geet as his bride, she doesn't deserve him. She deserves someone like me. She will be joining school after her marriage wait and watch." ) He smiles.
Dadima gives him a disappointed look and leaves to search for Maan. Dadima looks in every room and couldn't find him. Lastly she checked the terrace and saw him standing there looking at the sky. She smiled and placed her hand on his shoulder. Maan turned around and looked at her.
Dadima: Maan beta what happened? Everyone is looking for you.
Maan (he hugs her): I don't want to get married.
Dadima (smiles): Sorry beta I cannot help you. You have no option but to get married now.
Maan: But...
Dadima: Maan (she places her hand on his cheek) its too late now. If you take any drastic step both families will have to pay. Do you want that?
Maan: But Dadima that chudail
Dadima: Maan! she is going to be your wife soon..say her name with respect like she does with yours. (Maan st: Yeah right..she calls me buffoon...) Now come on we have to do your haldi rasam (She drags him away with her...)
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Today was the wedding day. Maan sat at the mandap waiting for Geet because of his sehera he couldn't see anything. All he saw was fire mandap ahead of him. He wanted to sneeze due to flowers but decided to hold it and will sneeze on Geet maybe that will make her less evil if he pureness goes on her. He moved his head back and forth to see what happened when everyone became quiet. He moved the sehera from his face and followed everyone gaze. He saw Geet coming down the stairs in her bridal attire led by her mom and some of her friends. He couldn't remove his gaze from her and kept staring at her with mouth open. "I didn't know a chudail can look this nice. Wait what am I saying? Did I just say that? Is has already starting doing her magic on me. I have to be extra careful from her..." Dadima pinched Maan on his arm when she noticed him staring at her. She was happy that Maan was beginning to change a little. She started going in her own day dream where she is playing with Maans kids. "ohh I can't wait till Maan has kids. Am gonna spoil them so much. Pleae God make that happen soon..." She silently prayed. Maan turned his head away from Geet as he felt her sitting right next to him. He looked ahead and did the wedding ceremony having no other option but to go ahead through this. Both took blessings of everyone. Geet gives him a evil smile Maan quickly turns his head away and moves a little bit far away from her...
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Maan and Geet sat opposite of each other while everyone surrendered them. The marriage function was over and the reception as well. Maan couldn't be more relieved, he was tired and just wanted to sleep. Now he knows why he stayed away from marriages it was so much of a hassle. First the actual marriage ceremony, then everyone would want to surround you to take pictures with you and then the marriage function. It wasn't enough that he had to sit next to Geet while the function but she also had to touch him and/or hold his hands when no one was looking. She knew that he couldn't even get up and walk away from her. He was glad that it was time to go home. Everyone surrendered Geet as she did the final bid to her parents. He didn't know why her tears bothered him so much. Why it hurts him to see her cry. Now they were home and he was slowly getting cranky after finding out that he couldn't go to sleep just yet. There are other "traditions" both bride and groom have to do before retiring up to sleep.
Now they were siting opposite of each other as they watched Dadima place a thali in front of them with red water. She held some rings in her hand and dropped them in the water.
The main concept of this game was to see who would dominate in their marriage. At the count of three both Maan and Geet started looking for the ring. He would feel Geet hand touching his on purpose and whenever he would look at her she would wink. He retreated his hand not wanting to play this game any longer but due to constant yelling from his fater and all the boys that counted on him he played the game again. He had no intention of winning but couldn't let that chudail win either. He concentrated on finding the rings ignoring Geet constant grabbing his hand under the water. He felt the ring in his hand and he quickly grabbed it but just as he was about to retreat his hand from the water, Geet grabbed it and pinched him. He instantly lets go of the ring and looks at his hand. He angrily glares at her as she showed the ring to everyone and watched all the women cheer her name. After what seemed like an eternity for Maan the silly games were finally over and it was time to retire for the night. Dadima and Madhuri took Geet upstairs. Maan was relived when he saw her going away. Dev smirks and goes up to Maan and takes him in a corner.
Maan: Dev what is it?
Dev (takes out a condom from his pocket and puts it on Maan's palm): here this will help
you. You might need it.
Maan (looks at the packet very carefully with confusion): What is this Dev? (Dev whispers in his ears explaining him what is the purpose of this packet..Maan eyes opens wide with the information..he drops the packet on the ground) Kya? Ram ram...yeh mujhe nahi chahiye...
Dev: But bro you need this tonight is your first night and anything could happen.
Maan: what can happen? Nothing will happen tonight. I won't let her come near me.
Dev: But bro Geet is modern and very intenligent...you have to be careful tonight when you go up there...
Maan (nodes his head yes): Thanks Dev. You saved me. (some girls come and take Maan away upstaris while he was struggling for them to let her go... Dev smirks and watches Maan go. "Now I will see how you guys make this marriage work. You don't deserve her...")
Precap: SR
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Posted: 13 years ago

really nice update,,,,,,,,maan babu is dreaming of kiisin chudail i mean geet...lol...😆😆😆 😉😉😉😉

gggrrrhhh...i hate dis dev...he is a proper A**-****...
He has evil eye on geet...😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
lvd it i mean update...👏👏👏👏👏
ooyeee teri i m the first one press like n comment...😃😃😃
yyyiiipppeee...
do continue...
chao...
thanks 4 pm...
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Edited by lively-piia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome finally the wedding... omg dev is devil
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Posted: 13 years ago
😡ullu ******** dev, nalayak, ganda nd all censored words... 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dev is really mean don't. Like him. Maan is so cute love him
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Posted: 13 years ago
dev is so dead man if he does anything to geet maan would tear him apart i could see a little changes in maan hopefully he would become a real man continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part!
yes finally they are married
ughh not liking Dev:@
con't soon!
hope the SR is good!

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