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Posted: 14 years ago
lolz...he made her cook...hehehe... I just hope she mixes lots of red chilli powder especially for Maan and feeds him,,,,,,,


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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys,
Sorry it took so long but am finally here with an update BUT I got some bad news..from now on my updates will be slow when I mean slow I mean hopeless-ly slow 😆😆😆 I will try to update every weekend but that depends on if I have a part written for any of my fan fics. Sorry guys!!!
Chapter 12
Maan paced in his room with his hands behind his back looking down on the floor thinking about the dinner yesturday night. "How did she manage all the cooking? That chudail..I know she must've did some magic or else how would it be possible to cook the food when she doesn't know how to cook. Think Maan think...there has to be an explination for all this."
Maan smiled after seeing Geet suffer in the kitchen. He quietly went and sat down with the rest of the family. "Now I will see how she manages everything. After tonight, when Dadima and rest will see she is not fit to do anything. hmm my plan will work. Pandayji will be so happy to hear that..." Nakul calls everyone to dinner after a while, Maan smirks and happily sits at the table. "hmm now the truth will come out..." He was about to make a comment when the servants start bringing all the dishes. Maan looks at everything displayed on the table with a shock. Then he sees Geet come outside with flower all over her dress and little bit on her hair. He looks at Geet and then at the food in shock with his mouth open. Dadima closes his jaw with her hand and smiles at him. Geet smiles seeing Maan's shocked face. "You thought you could defeat me Mr. Khurana? Well you got another thing coming. You will pay for this." Nakul serves everyone around the table before he could serve Maan; she stops him.
Geet: Nakul I will serve Maan. (everyone on the table got happy while she gave Maan evil smile. She stands next to him and serves him spoon full of rice. She bends down and whispers in his ears when no one was looking "enjoy the food..." Maan looks at her and moves away a little. Dadima asked Geet to sit on the chair next to Maan and starts enjoying the food.
Ronit: Must say Geet your food is delicious.
Geet: Thank you uncle. Maan how did you like the food?
Maan: wohh umm
Geet: You didn't try it? Here let me feed you.
Maan: no I can eat by myself.
Madhuri: Maan eat if she want to feed you. You are very lucky to have Geet.
Maan: umm I can eat see...(he takes a spoon full in his mouth and starts eating.)
"how did she do it? I keep thinking of the same thing again and again but can't find any explaination." He was so engrossed in his thinking that he didn't notice when Geet came in the room. She hugs him from behind. Maan stops and look at the hands around his waist. He brings his hand in front of him. "No this are not my hands. Then who is..." He turns around and sees Geet with a smile. He moves back a little.
Maan: What are you doing here?
Geet: I came to meet you
Maan (looks at her suspecious) Why?
Geet: just like that..(she sits on the bed..Maan wanted to stop her but couldn't) So tell me what were you thinking about?
Maan: why should I tell you? Get out of my room.
Geet (gets up): if I don't go then? (She walks toward him while Maan took few steps back. Both kept going on and on like this until Maan hits a wall behind him. He tries to move away but Geet blocks his way by placing both of her arms on the either side of the wall. Maan looks at her shocked)
Maan: Wh wh what are you doing?
Geet (smiles): Pyaar (she leans closer to him)
Maan: pp pp pyaar?
Geet: Haan...you know...(she leans closer to him with her eyes closed to kiss him on his lips but she hits a wall instead. She opens her eyes and sees Maan on the floor crawling. He gets up and stands in front of Geet.)
Maan: Listen chudail you better stay away from me. Your magic won't work on me. I am telling you right now.
Geet (smiles): What would you do if I don't? Tell on me? (She moves closer to him again and wraps her hands around his neck. Maan tried to remove her hands but this only caused Geet to hold him tighter...) Want to know a secret about yesturday night dinner? (Maan stops and looks at her...) You want to know how I did it? (Maan shakes his head yes) If I tell you, will you do what I ask you to do?
"What should I do? If I say no then I will not find out the truth but if I say yes I am afraid she will ask for something stupid...but what will she ask me? I should ask her and then decide what I want to do..."
Maan: What are you going to ask me?
Geet: hmm don't worry about it...when the time is right I will ask you...
"so that means she won't ask me right now...I should say yes to when she asks me later on I will say no or make sure I don't come in front of her... yeah..."
Maan: ok fine...now tell me...(Geet lets go of him and starts walking around the room. Maan made mental note of all the things she touched so that he can holy-fy the room later...Geet began her story)
As soon as Maan had left the kitchen, Geet stood there contempleting on what to do next. She took out aata and started to kneed to make roti but she had put too much water into the bowl which caused the aata to be thin and watery. She pushed the bowl away from herself in fursturation. "What should I do now? Everyone is waiting for food outside. I hate that buffoon for putting me in this situation. I will get my revenge but first I have to figure out what I have to do in this food situation. Think Geet. After that, you have to plot your revenge..." Just then she saw Nakul come into the kitchen for water. Geet smiled and looked at Nakul.
Geet: Nakul what are you doing?
Nakul: I came to get water for outside.
Geet: Nakul will you do me a favor? Actually, no not favor, help. I need help.
Nakul: Sure ma'am what do you need help with?
Geet: I have to make dinner for the family but I don't know how to. So I need you to go outside and buy food. I will give you the list of the items.
Nakul (shocked):But ma'am no I can't do that. If saab finds out about this then I will surely loose my job.
Geet (smiles): Don't worry nothing will happen as long as I am here. Trust me. (Nakul looks confused) Ok then, you see this window...you just have to go through this window and get me the items that I want.
Nakul (backs up) Nah madam. I am sorry I can't do this.
Geet (gets mad and holds a big spoon in her hand): Now you listen to me. You will do what I say or else I will make sure you get in trouble. Now you decide what you want to do. Either do what I say or I will tell Ronit uncle and you know his temper. (Nakul gulps in fear and imagnes Ronit uncle holding a danda in his hand looking at Nakul with big eyes...while he sat on his knee folding his hands begging for forgivness. He comes out and looks at Geet and shakes his head.)
Nakul: Ok, I will do whatever you say but please don't tell anyone. I need this job.
Geet (smiles): Good. Now get me these items. Fast! (Nakul jumps out of the window to do some shopping while Geet smiles with victory...As soon as Nakul came back with the food...she opened all the containers and poured the food in the bowls...she quickly gave all the empty containers to Nakul to dispose outside the house. After that, Geet puts some aata on her hair and little bit on her clothes to make it look like she was cooking.)
Maan looks at her shocked.
"You blackmailed poor Nakul?"
Geet: I had no other option. Now, you have to do what I say.
Maan (smiles) Hmm I don't have to say or do anything you say. (he waves his thump back and forth like a little boy...and smiles...)
Geet: Hmm I knew you would say that. You see I came prepared. I had told Dadima that you and I are going to be hanging out all day today. You had "promised" to take me to this concert. Now, if Dadima calls me up and asks me about it. I will have to tell her that you didn't go and I was forced to go by myself..imagine how mad she will be at you. And before you know it your papa and whole family will find out what you did. Now I don't want to imagine the punishment you will get becuase of this. I mean I don't mind calling Dadima right now and lettign her know. It won't do me any harm. (she sits on the bed) So you think about it..what you want to do. Either come with me OR take punishment from your dad.
"Kaha faas gaya main. Sari umar mujhe yeh blackmail karti rehe gi. Bas bohot hogaya...ab nahi..I am putting my foot down..hmm"
Maan: I am NOT going and that's final... (Geet gets up and goes toward the door...before she leaves she looks back at Maan...)
Geet: Alright, I will tell Dadima right now. (she takes out her phone and starts walking...)
Maan: NAHI..wait I am coming..(He runs behind her...and catches Geet on time. He snatches her phone and hangs up on time.) I am going with you.
Geet (pats his cheek) Good boy. Now before we go to the concert we have to go shopping first.
Maan: Why?
Geet (looks at him from top to bottom) You are NOT going in that clothes.
Maan: What! Forget it. I am not changing my clothes.
Geet: Yes you are. (Just then Dadima and everyone comes home..Geet smiles)
Ronit: Geet beta what are you doing here?
Dadima: Haan beta didn't you had to go with your parents to some party? (Maan looks at Geet shocked.."so that means she lied to me...if only Dadima was here to hear her out.")
Maan: Yeah she is leaving right now. Anyway I have to go now. Bye Geet. (He runs out of the house before anyone can say anything. Maan turns around and looks at Geet. He sticks out his tounge and leaves for Pandayji's house.)
"you buffoon I will see you for this..."
Maan was at Pandayji's house doing some pooja. Pandayji tried all methods to get rid of Geet from Maan's life but it seems like nothing is working.
Pandayji: I don't know what to tell you.
Maan: How can you say that Pandayji. I can't be stuck with her all my life. You know she tried to trap me today by going out with her good thing my family came on time or else I don't know what would've happened to me.
Pandayji: Looks like she is not that easy to defeat.
Maan: Do something quick. I don't want to get married to her. My wedding day is approaching soon,
Pandayji: mujhe sochne de. Main kuch karta hoon. (Maan shakes his head and sits down waiting for Pandayji to think of something. Maan's picked up the phone call that was coming in from Dadima.)
Maan: haan Dadima. I am busy right now. What? why? I don't want to come home. but...fine I will be there...(he hangs up the phone.) Pandayji I have to go right now. Dadima is calling me for some work.
Pandayji: Ok...I will think of something until then. Ohh and before you go. Here is some holy water. I know you need it the most in this crucial time. The guys don't mind giving you their share. (He gives him a big water bottle filled with holy water...Maan takes it happily)
Maan: Thank you Pandayji...I knew I could count on you. (he takes his blessing)
Pandayji: Bhagwan kare sari ladkiyan tumse door rahe (he gives him his blessing as Maan leaves...)
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Maan: What? No way...I am not doing it.
Dadima: But Maan we have told her already
Maan: Ok fine then you go. I am not going. You guys already forced me into this marriage and now you want me to go out with her. NO WAY!
Dadima (fake cries): Fine then, I will tell Geet that you can't come. It's fine I am sorry, I should've asked you before I said yes to her.
Maan (hits his head): Fine. I will go. Don't cry anymore. ("That chudail I will get you. You have my poor Dadima in your hands right now. I will get my revenge...")
Dadima: Good..Geet will be here any minute to pick you up. (Maan goes to his room fursturated...He takes the holy water and sprinkles it all over him)
Precap: Their date...Lets see how it goes 3rd time...hopefully third time's a charm...lol
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOLOLOL i loveee Geet she's sooo funny!
am i evil or what i don't feel bad for him!
Gosh Maan stop being stubborn and fall for her already
Teehee xD
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it...
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg.. lmao.. rofl.. girl every time i read ur ff i crack up.. i cant stop laughing.. love this bramachari maan.. and pandey ji is sooo funny.. "bhagvan kare ko bhi larki tumhare paas na aye".. lol tooo good yaar.. cont sooon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update as always.
geet is too smart.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

bechara maan...getting blackmailed frm every1...😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
i knew geet wud hv done something else...
maan its gonna b difficult to get rid of her...
lets c if she can make him fall for her...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Loved it! Geet is so funny. Thanks for the pm

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