MAANEET SS: THIS IS NOT THE END THREAD 1

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Hi every1 u all know me well through my FF's "EHSAAS-THE FEELING" & "THAT THING CALLED LOVE"nw first tym m trying my hand in SS titled THIS IS NOT THE END". i know my FF's r still running but still i couldnt help myself writing dis. here's d 1st Part of it. Hope u all Like it. Pls Feel Free to criticise if u all dont like it.

Part 1:


He was waiting impatiently for her at CCD. Looking his watch
again and again seems like Time has stopped from passing. Waiter has comethrice to take his order but every time he said "After Some time". A strong Dilemma going in his mind. How will he going to tell her about the reason he called her? What will be her reaction? Will she be able to bear wat he's going to tell her? But its good for both of them. Its better to solve it now inspite
of suffer due to this in future. Afterall he has full right to think of his Happiness. He thought. He was facing a war between his mind nd Heart. His heart is stopping him to do wat he's going
to do but his mind is asking him to go ahead nd think of his Happiness.


He was going through all dis when he saw her coming through
the door. She was wearing White Suit wid light matching jewellery. She wears no make-up as usual but still looks beautiful
.

"How she managed to look like an Angel always" he thought
wen he saw her but den suddenly he came out from his thoughts realizing for wat he has came here for. By the time she came to his seat finding him lost in his own thoughts

Geet: Hi Maan

Maan: umm Hi Geet

Geet: Wat happen? U were lost somewhere

Maan: nothing Geet. Pls Sit.

Geet takes her seat

Maan: Wat took you so long to Come

Geet: Wo.. I got stuck up in traffic

Maan: ok let me order something

By saying dis he calls d waiter nd places d order. After thewaiter goes Maan again gets lost in his trail of thoughts. He was not sure fromwhere to start the conversation. He never felt uncomfort before Geet but todayhe don't know hw he's going to tell her. Geet notices his uncomfortableness.She can easily Guess wats running in his Mind through his Facial Expression.

"Someone has to broke dis silence"
She thought nd decided to break d silence

Geet: Maan, wat Happen?

Maan(coming out from his Thought): Ummm nothing Geet

Geet: Maan, I know u very well. Tell me wats bothering you. Since last few days I was noticing a change in you. U were not the Same Maan whom I met. Wats Wrong? U wanted to say something to me? Don't hesitate Maan u can tell me.

Maan(To himself): Hw she always Read my mind? (den to Geet) yes Geet u r rite. I wanted to say something to u. Geet, wat I m going to say might hurt you. May be u'll never wish to see my face in future but Geet its important. I cant keep u in darkness anymore. Geet I cant continue this Relationship. In last few days I realized that the feeling between us was not Love. It was just an Attraction which I had towards you. U were saying na that I have changed. Yes Geet I changed because I realized that I don't love you. We cannot be happy in future nd it'll good to stop dis relationship here only. Lets break-up nd move on in our respective lives. It'll be good for both of us. See we'll always be good friends but not more den dat.

He said all in once without looking at Geet once because he knows if he looks at her then he'll again get distracted nd he dont want dis. After completing he looks at Geet who was looking at her silently wid no reaction. Maan has expected that Geet might Shout at him, she may Cry after hearing dis but Geet did none of dis. infact he listened to him patiently nd den smiled slightly which makes Maan more surprised.

Maan: Geet, wat happen? Y r u not saying anything? Atleast React once

Geet still didn't said anything

Maan(getting restless): Geet, ur silence is killing me. Pls say something

He waited impatiently for Geet to speak

So guys! this is it. hope u all Like it. Hit the Like Button if u all Dont like it nd ya Forgive me if i had done any Grramatical mistake as i had typed it in hurry. Do leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary

Luv Aakriti😊😊

😊

Index:

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
NOTE
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
NOTE
Part 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting concepy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Waiting to see what happens next. Could u please PM me when u update. Thanks
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nice start.... do continue... add me to yr pm list...
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interesting...will wait to see how they fall in love with each other😆😆
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awesome start..........continue.........do PM me 😊
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nice start ... and add me to the pm list
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interesting concept..........maan is an idiot for telling this to geet...........nyways continue soo n add me to ur pm list..n plzz update ehsaas....i really love that ff......
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Interesting ... Can you please add me to your PM list ... Please and Thank you :)

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seems really interesting.....
why geet is smiling after hearing everything.....?
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