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Hey Guys! m back. missed u all nd IF a Lot in dese 3 days. I hope u all missed me Too. so without any further wait m going to update in next few mins. get ready wid ur Jutis, Chappals, Comments/criticism everything. m ready to accept watever u all will give to me. ok i think i had done lots of Bak-Bak so i stop it over here only nd going to update. Get ready
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Hey Every1 m back wid another update of mine to torcher u all😆😆. Thanx a Lot for ur lovely-lovely comments on d Previous part. Nw here's d Part 9 of my SS. hope u all will like it too. Pls Feel free to Criticise if u all dnt like it.

PART 9:

Nd rest of d words left unsaid wen she saw d person standing in front of her. Her eyes widened in both shock nd surprise wen she saw him nd a smile formed on her face wen he spoke to him

Person: Hey Kiddo!

Geet (happily): ARMAAN!!!!

She said happily nd instantly hugged him

Geet: OMG I cant believe dis. tu achanak nd tu US se kab aaya? Aur itni der se tu hi mujhe pareshan kar raha than na?

Armaan: Hold on! Hold on! Itne sare questions? Geet Let me come inside first

Geet slapped her head wid her hand nd smiles

Geet: So stupid of me. Come inside

He came inside nd looked around himself. Armaan was Geet's Childhood friend infact a friend on whom she can rely on. Armaan's Dad nd Geet's Dad were best friends. Though Armaan was 4 years elder den Geet yet dey consider demselves as d Bestest Buddies. Armaan always use to call her Kiddo nd dere families has very good terms wid each other. After d Death of Geet's Father also dere relationship didn't changed. Armaan's parents consider Geet nd Misha as dere own daughter infact dey Love Geet more den Misha. 5 yrs back dey have been shifted to US for their business but still dey were in touch wid each other

Armaan:hhmmm not bad Kiddo nothing much has changed in dese 5 yrs.

Geet: Tu bhi kaha badla hai. 5 yrs back also u use to irritate me nd nw also

Armaan: ya I knw dat. Wat to do I love to tease u.

Geet: Armaan...

Armaan: Anyways, baki sab log kaha hai. Mere welcome ki khushi me Garlands lene gaye hai

Geet: Ha ha So funny Mr. Armaan Malik but if u remember den it's a weekday so Mom has gone to Office nd Misha to her college

Armaan: o ya. I forgot. But wait a sec. wat u r doing at home today

Geet (dramatic): I was waiting eagerly for u by staying at home afterall u had came after so many years den hw can I go to sumwhere else

Armaan: Really! Hw sweet

Geet: Shut up!

Armaan: Teri ye Tag Line abhi tak change nahi hui. Geet ab to kuch naya seekh lo

Geet: Armaan...

Armaan:I knw I knw m very adorable nd girls use to take my name nd sigh but dat doesn't mean dat u'll take my name again nd again like dis

Geet: Shut up Armaan

Armaan: ok ok let it be. But seriously wat u r doing at home today. Kahi tune college se bunk marna to shuru nahi kar diya?

Geet: Shut up nothing like dat. I had my presentation next week so had taken off from college for 1 week to prepare for dat. Anyways meri chodo u tell wen did u came from US nd all of a sudden

Armaan: I came last evening only nd...

Geet:u r here yesterday evening nd u r coming nw to meet me. Nd u even told me dat u r cuming

Armaan: arey, I wanted to cum yesterday only but got stuck up in accommodation etc. datsy couldn't able to cum moreover I would have told u about my Arrival den hw can would I able to see dat surprising expression of urs

Geet: but all of a sudden

Armaan: wat to do, ab tu Facebook pe itne Dangerous - Dangerous Status update karegi to mujhe to aana hi padega na. itna pucha Wats Wrong wats wrong but nahi madam k paas tym hi nahi reply karne ka

Geet (sadly): wo, I hardly cum online nw a days, derefore couldn't able to reply

Armaan: ya I can see dat. But seriously Kiddo tell na wats wrong?

Geet:Nothing Armaan. Bola tha na k apne fav novel me ye line padhi thi to wahi daal di

Armaan: ok ok dis was d statement u gave to others nw tell the truth to me

Geet: Armaan, seriously yaar. I read dis line in one of d novel only.

Armaan: o really? Which novel?

Geet: Armaan u r here to take my interview or wat?

Armaan: ok fine u dnt want to tell me den dnt tell. Take ur tym. Chal abhi leave all dis nd lets go

Geet: where?

Armaan: Lovers Point! Dumbo! I m here after 5 whole yrs nd wont u take me for site seeing

Geet: Armaan not today pls. I have to work on dis project

Armaan: Kiddo I dnt want to listen anything u r cuming wid me nd dats final

Geet: Armaan, pls yaar. Sum other tym see already m very much pissed off in dis design. I dnt know but sumwhere sumthing is getting wrong

Armaan: Acha Show me

Geet: but hw will u able to analyze it

Armaan: Kiddo tu na hamesha Kiddo hi rahegi. If u remember I too had done Architecture nd handling my Dad's Business

Geet: oh ya! I forgot

Armaan: datsy I use to say dat stay in my company so dat u too can gain sum brain

Geet: Armaan... Enough first sort it out nd den we'll decide who is more intelligent

Armaan: ya ya we'll see.

He said nd looked at d design carefully

Armaan: yes here's d fault. See if u draw dis block over here instead of dis side den dis building would be perfect

Geet: Wow Armaan, I didn't noticed it before

Armaan: I knw m very genius. No need to compliment me now. Its ok anything for my friend(he said while patting his shoulders)

Geet: Armaan... nw dnt take too much Footage ok

Armaan: ok, see nw I had helped u so as a reward u r cuming wid me today wid me

Geet: Armaan nt today pls. really I had to work a lot today in dis project

Armaan: fine Ms. Geet Handa it seems dat nw u dnt have tym for ur own friend .fine I'll go back to US tomorrow. Wen my friend dnt have tym for me so y should I stay over here

Geet: nw stop getting mellow dramatic ok. Nd dnt u dare to blackmail me emotionally. U very well knw I cant refuse u for anything

Armaan: So y r u refusing nw?

Geet: Armaan pls try nd understand na. see mom is also not at home moreover she dnt knw about ur Arrival also. Acha I'll do one thing I'll go wid u tomorrow

Armaan: pakka

Geet: Pakka

Armaan: ok but tomorrow no excuse

Geet: ya no excuse

Armaan: chalo fir I'll see u tomorrow

Geet: arey y r u going like dis. wait I'll get sumthing for u. hw about ur Fav. Pasta

Armaan: No kiddo u work on ur project otherwise u'll say dat I had wasted ur tym nd u'll get an excuse for not cuming wid me tomorrow

Geet: Armaan...

Armaan: I knw u like my name very much. Afterall m so much...

Geet: u r so much Adorable.

Armaan: Wow Geet, finally u recognize my quality

Geet: Shut up!

Armaan: O God! not again. chal enough of my bak-bak. U work on ur project nd if u face any problem den u r free to ask me

Geet: Sure

Armaan: chal bye nd dnt forget ur Promise Golebaaz

Geet: Shut up! I never forget my Promise. Ok

Armaan: ya ya dat we'll cum to knw tomorrow

Geet: ya Sure. Chal Bye

Armaan: bye

He said nd goes from dere nd Geet too gets busy in her work. After so many days she was feeling a bit relax nd actually smiling nd all because of Armaan who always knowingly or unknowingly managed to make her smile nd let her forget all her worries.

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Next day as promised Geet gets ready to meet Armaan. He has called her numerous tym to conform her plan making Geet irritated but he didn't care

Mom: Geet by wat tym will u be back?

Geet: I dnt knw mom. U knw Armaan na everything is unpredictable wid him, but I'll try to cum soon as I had to work on presentation also.

Mom: Arey its ok take ur tym. Waise bhi u had never been out in dese 3 weeks except ur college so its better u get a break.

Geet: ya

Mom: By the way Geet. Meera has again called last nite

Geet: hhmmm

Mom: I really didn't get y r u avoiding her. Since she returned back from training u haven't gone to meet her also nd u dnt talk much to her on call also. Is everything fine

Geet: ya Mom. U knw na dat my presentation is due next week nd rite nw I had to concentrate on dat nd once its been completed I'll spend my whole day wid her

Mom: ok

Suddenly they heard d horn of car from outside nd no point for guessing who it was. She said a good bye to her mom nd gone outside to meet Armaan

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Armaan: Arey Kiddo! suno to...

Geet: Shut up Armaan! i dnt want to listen anything

Armaan: hey kiddo y r u getting so much upset yaar?

Geet: upset nahi hu to kya karu. Poori Movie me tumne apni Commentary kari hai. Maine movie k Dialogues kam aur tumhari baatein zyada suni hai.tumhari hamesha ki Aadat hai neither u urself watch Movie peacefully nor let others watch it. Jab tumhe movie me itne hi comments dene hote hai to Movie dekhte hi kyun ho. Koi Box office join kar lo. m sure dey definately needs ur Valuable Comments.Isiliye main pehle bhi tumhare saath koi movie nahi aati thi. i dnt knw y i got Agreed dis tym.

Armaan: because m so charming nd no one can resist my charm

Geet: Shut up!

Armaan: o God! D same famous Tag line of urs! Acha baba m Sorry. Next tym I wont do anything like dat

Geet: next tym I'll not go wid u

Armaan: Acha baba dnt cum wid me to movie next tym. But abhi to chal sakti ho na

Geet: where?

Armaan: Mc Donald's. m damn hungry yaar

Geet: hungry or u want to watch girls over dere?

Armaan: whatever u think. Nw lets go

Geet: ok

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At Mc Donald's

Armaan: u knw dats wat I love about India. Girls in India r so preety. None of d girls from rest of d world can beat their beauty.

Geet: Armaan. Tu fir shuru ho gaya? Nw go nd get a Ice-Cream for us. U knw na dat I Love d Ice-cream of Mc Donald's

Armaan: Kiddo! Pls u bring na. I want to enjoy d site in front of me (he said while looking at a beautiful girl in front of him)

Geet (unbelievingly): Armaan, u'll never change. Fine m going to bring u enjoy ur site.

She said nd goes to bring d Ice-Cream.

Geet: ummm Excuse me. 2 Soft-Serve pls. Chocolate flavour nd in cone

Counter boy: 2 mins mam

She waited nd counter boy gives her order nd she pays for it. As she was about to turn she bumped into someone nd ice-cream dat she was holding gets spilled on his shirt. She didn't sees his face nd started apologizing

Geet: OMG! M so sorry. I didn't saw u nd dis happened. M really very...

Person: Geet...

Nd she paused wen she looked at d person in front of her who was looking back at her wid d look like he has found sumthing precious. He was none other den Maan who has came dere to meet one of his friend. he couldn't believe it dat Geet is in front of him. He was seeing her after 3 whole weeks. A tint of Happiness has came in his eyes after seeing her. He looked in her eyes trying to read dem. But all he could find over dere was only pain. Not even anger for him, but just pain which was given by him. Geet too couldn't believe dat she was seeing Maan. She has thought dat she would never able to see him again after dat day nd today he is front of her nd she don't know wat to say. She saw number of expressions on his face wen he sees her. Happiness, pain, guilty, restlessness, and loneliness everything was clearly visible from his face

Geet (slowly): m Sorry.

Maan: No m sorry. Actually I ...

He couldn't said much as Armaan came over dere wen he saw Geet spilling Ice-cream on someone. He decides to go to Geet before any Scene could created over dere

Armaan: o god Kiddo! Kya karti ho? Dekh k chala karo na (Den to Maan) Dude we r really very Sorry. It all has been done by mistake. We can get u a new shirt or if u want we can pay u for dat.

Maan looked at Armaan in a very amused Manner. He couldn't recognize him neother hw couldn't able to figure out wat relation he had wid Geet. He knows dat Geet is not a kind of a girl who got hook-up wid some other guy rite to d next day of her break-up. Den who's dis Guy nd hw cum he's so friendly wid her. All dese thoughts were buzzing in his mind when Maan waves his fingers in front of his eyes

Armaan: Hello! Dude u dere?

Maan (came out of his thoughts): ummm Ya.

Armaan: So I was saying dat if u want we can pay for ur spoil shirt or just get u a new shirt also

Maan: no. its ok. There is no need of doing any of dese. I understand. It happens

Armaan: r u sure?

Maan: ya.

Armaan: ok den as u wish. Chale Kiddo waise bhi dat site has gone

Geet nods in yes nd goes wid him giving a last look to Maan. Wen she reached at Door she looked back once again only to find him looking back at her. She looks at front nd disappears from his sight leaving him dumbfounded.

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Geet was silent on all d way. No matter she tried hard to forget him but Everytym somehow sumwhere he came in front of her. Sometimes in memories nd sumtymes in real like today. Armaan was not liking her silence at all. He loves to see her Kiddo gets irritated nd angry but Dis Silent kiddo was not at all bearable to him. He knows dat sumthing has gone wrong since she had spilled dat Ice-Cream on dat person but he didn't asked her dat tym. Den suddenly he remembers sumthing nd he turned his car to other way. Geet was so lost in her thoughts dat she didn't noticed where dey were heading to until Armaan puts a break.

Armaan: chal!

Geet: where?

Armaan: Chal na! dnt worry tujhe kidnap nahi karunga. Nw c'mon get out of d car.

He said nd opens d Door for her. Geet gets down nd he takes her near a lake. Geet found dis place familiar den she remembers wat special connection dey had wid dis place

Armaan: u remember dis place

Geet: ofcourse hw can I forget dis place. Dis was use to be ur hide out place. Wenever u had a fight wid ur GFs or u feel low or u get scolded by uncle,u come over here only nd den I come here while searching of u nd no one knows about dis Hide out place of urs

Armaan: u always knw me so well na Kiddo (he said while sitting)

Geet (while sitting): Ofcourse Armaan afterall u r my Best Buddy

Armaan: ya Best buddy on whom u had a Crush

Geet (blushes): Armaan Stop teasing me nw. I still feel so embarrassed whenever I think of dat moment. I mean hw stupid I was.

Armaan: Wo to tu hamesha se hi thi. U remember u propose me near dis lake only

Geet: ya. Nd after dat u Expressions were worth watching. I mean u look all shocked nd surprised.

Armaan: Shock nd Surprised? I was like wat d hell is Happening?

Geet: But thank God u make me realize dat it was not Love but just an infactuation due to my Teenage. I mean I thought d attachment dat I had wid u is love. So stupid of me na

Armaan: Ya I remember hw much I had to make u understand d Difference between Love nd Attraction.

Geet: I was so stupid na Armaan, Couldn't able to differentiate between Love nd infactuation. Thank God u make me realize nd mere baat samajh me aa gayi

Armaan: Aur 5th Devdas bante bante reh gayi

Geet: wat?

Armaan: Arey I mean ab agar main tumhe us waqt nahi samjhata to tum yahi samajhti dat I had rejected u aur bas ek aur Devdas ban jati dis tym Female version.

Geet: Armaan...

Armaan: just imagine Geet' u sitting near dis lake wid a Bottle in ur hand nd wat was dat Dialogue ya " Kaun Kambakht Bardaasht karne ko peeta hai"

Geet (laughs): Armaan stop it nw ok I told na dat was just due to my Teenage. Main us waqt bacchi thi moreover I was influenced by Meera who always use to say dat d thing between us was Love wenever I used to told her about d warmth of our relationship. Itna bhaav khane ki zarurat nahi hai ok.

Armaan: ok. Ah by the way Devdas se yaad Aaya. Hws Chandramukhi?

Geet (amuzed): Chandramukhi?

Armaan: arey see nw since u r Devdas, me Paro so ultimately Maan will become Chandramukhi only na. hws Maan? Aur tune use mujhse abhi tak milvaya bhi nahi?

Geet frowned after listening Maan's name. She has not hide anything from him till nw not even Rahul's Matter but dis tym she dnt knw y she dnt want to tell Armaan wat all has happened between her nd Maan. Her change of expression was not remain unnoticed by Armaan. He very well understands dat things r not going fine between her nd Maan.

Armaan: Geet, dat Guy at d Mc. Donald's was Maan Na

Geet (surprised): Hw do u knw?

Armaan: u think m stupid. C'mon yaar I have seen his pic at Facebook nd moreover ur Expressions over dere has said everything

Geet said nothing but look at d lake

Armaan: Kiddo, I recognize him over dere only nd was about to greet him wen I saw ur face nd clearly understands dat sumthing is wrong so I cover it up over dere nd take u out from dere.

Geet: y does it happen Armaan, dat d person whom we love more den us, expect so many things from dem, dey were d only one to break our heart.

Armaan: dats because we expect too much from dem even more den required nd wen dat person couldn't able to lived up to our expectation den we feel isolated.

Geet: but wat if dat person says dat he was never in love wid u.

Armaan: well in dat case just forget dat person nd move on in ur lyf. I knw its very easy to say but hard to follow because we cant just simply forget d person wid whom we are madly in love. But just continuously reminding of him doesn't give us anything. But still we wish dat someday dat person would recognize our true love but in dat hope we cant spend rest of our lyf nd spoil our present we should have to move on. May be d Dude sitting upwards has something good has stored for us rather den dis (he said while pointing upwards)

Geet said nothing so Armaan continues.

Armaan: Geet I dnt knw wat has happened between u nd Maan nd I wont ask also because mujhe kabhi bhi apni Kiddo se kuch poochne ki zarurat nahi padti. Wo khud hi bina pooche mujhe sab kuch bata deti hai nd if u r not telling me anything today den dere must be some reason nd m sure dat one day u'll definitely tell me. I still remember wen Maan proposed u. u first of all told dis thing to me even before Meera. Nd I talked to u for whole 1 hr. on dis matter. Remember

Geet: ya.

Armaan: So wat I want to say is dat dnt spoil ur present due to wat all has happened in past. Waise I knw I dnt have to give u all Dis "Gyaan" because my Kiddo is smart enough to understand wat is good for her nd she wont cry over spilt milk. Aur waise bhi kisi ne mujhse kaha hai dat "if everything happens according to our Wish, its good but if it happens against our wish, den its d best because in dat God's Wish is present who always stores best for us." Rite?

Geet: Rite. (She said nd smiled as dis was d same thing she use to say to Armaan)

Armaan: Ah! Finally u smiled. U r too Good Armaan.

Geet: Armaan, not again.

Armaan: allright. So I think we should leave nw. u have to work on ur project also or else u'll curse me if u didn't do gud in ur presentation.

Geet: I can never curse u for anything.

Armaan: OMG m so much obliged. nw lets ok.

She smiles nd dey both leaves from dere

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Whole 1 week has been passed like dis only. Geet gets herself busy in project nd Armaan was dere to help her in any manner. His visits to her house create a positive environment around her. Nd finally d day of her presentation came nd as expected she has done well in her presentation Thanx to Armaan who helped her a lot in dis project. Every judge was praising her work nd her friends were happy for her. Even her Design Teacher was very much impressed from her who was usually not impressed by any1. Their friends were celebrating outside College.

Deeps: Wow Geet, I just can't believe it. U did it

Pari: Yes I mean Tune to us Lady Mogambo ko bhi khush kar diya. Wat a Presentation Girl?

Geet: thanx a lot Guys but I think u r praising me too much. I mean u all did well over dere

Preeti: Geet, we must did well but dat was nothing compare to urs. U rock Girl

Pari: ok so guys Dis calls for celebration. Geet u have to give us treat for dis.

Geet: ofcourse, guys anytym.

Deeps: hw about nw?

Geet: Nt nw Guys. M very much tired today.

Preeti: Tired or had a date wid Maan (she winks)

Geet (frowning) : No guys really very tired

Pari: By the way where is Maan nw a days. Pehle to Roz tujhse milne aata tha? Nd nw we had not seen him from last 1 month.

Geet: Wo Guys... Actually... Maan is out of Town for his training

Deeps: Wat? Bt y did he need to go anywhere for training, I mean he had such a well reputed family business. He can easily get trained over dere.

Preeti: o God Deeps, have u forgot Maan is d man of his Morals just like our Geet. Really yaar r Perfect wid each other. i mean dat Made For Each other types. Rite?

Deeps: ya ofcourse.

Suddenly something catches Pari's attention.

Pari: OMG! Look who's here?

Geet turned to look at d direction where all 3 were looking nd got surprised as d person to whom dey were addressing is none other den Maan. In d mean tym he approaches near all of dem.

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He was continuously visiting her College from last 1 week every evening so dat by any chance he could meet her, talk to her but Everytym he saw her friends cuming alone outside d college which indicates dat Geet is not cuming to College nd today he saw her wid her friends. He was so happy to see her but frowned wen he sees her expressions. She was smiling, laughing but just d sake of her friends so dat dey couldn't guess wats happening in her life. Dis was not her real smile because wen she smiles from her heart her eyes shows d tint of happiness which is not present nw. nd after dis he couldn't stopped himself from not going to her.

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Maan: hi Guys! Hi Geet!

Geet (slowly): hi!

Preeti: hey Maan! Hws u?

Maan: fine. Hw about u all?

Deeps: we r fine too. But Geet was saying dat u r out of town for ur training.

Maan looks at Geet who looks other way to think of an excuse

Geet (acts to remind sumthing): Oh Guys! I completely forgot Maan has to cum to Mumbai for dis Weekend. I dnt knw hw it slips from my mind.

Pari: It slips, or u dnt want us to meet him

Deeps: C'mon Pari stop teasing her nw. I guess we should leave dese Love birds alone. Afterall dey r meeting after 1 month.

Preeti: I Agree.

Geet: no Guys Its ok. Waise bhi Deeps wants to cum to my home so me nd Maan can continue later

Deeps: dats completely fine Geet. I'll cum some other day. U should spend ur tym wid Maan. Ok

Geet: But Deeps...

Preeti: C'mon Geet Deeps is rite. I think we all should leave u alone. (den to Maan) So, bye Maan. See u some other tym nd u owe a thank u treat to us

Maan: ya ofcourse. Bye.

Dey all go from dere leaving dem alone. Geet don't know wat to say to him nd neither did Maan but yet he decides to break d silence.

Maan: Hws u?

Geet: fine.

Maan: u didn't told dem about...

Geet: I didn't told dem about whatever happened between us

Maan: y?

Geet: because I cant see any1 questioning u.

Maan: u still think so much for me Geet.

Geet: dnt take it otherwise m doing all dis because once'' once u were my friend nd for u d thing between us may be not love but for me it was love nd I cant see anyone pointing fingers on u.

Maan: Geet, sab kuch pehle jaisa nahi ho sakta?

Geet: Pehle jaisa ab kuch bhi nahi raha Maan. Na tum aur na hi main (she said while looking at him) Pyaar to humare beech kabhi tha hi nahi, ek Dosti ka Rishta tha that too died few days back.

Geet's word pierced Maan's Heart like thousand knives r digging in his chest.

Geet: Anyways m getting late. I should leave nw.

She said nd about to go wen Maan stops her

Maan: Geet wait... I'll drop u

Geet: Its ok Maan. M used to of being alone nd going alone too. I dnt want u to bother for a stranger.

Maan (hurted): Geet we are not strangers.

Geet: Yes u r rite we r not strangers. We r Known strangers. Anyways Bye nd TC. Nd ALL D BEST for ur future.

She said nd started heading towards d road wen again she stops nd turned to look at Maan.

Geet: Aur haan Maan. Dis tym u dnt need to follow me till my home like u always did. Because m strong enough to take care of myself nd I don't want anyone's help.

Maan got confused at her statement. "she knows" he thought nd Geet has very clearly read his expression.

Geet: Yes Maan I knew it since d first day u followed me but dat tym was different nd dis tym is different. Anyways Gud Bye nd TC of urself.


She said nd leave from dere leaving him behind dumbfounded, lost nd alone


So guys hope u all like dis Part. hit d like Button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary. nd ya do tell me whether my SS is going gud or not nd give me long-long comments. i'll be waiting. Forgive me if i had done any mistake

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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update once again so now geet trying to forget maan continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
this so awsome i want to read again & again.can u add me i want to read what ever u write,good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...😊😊

the story is truely amazing...and it is based on reality too.

we tend to get distracted from our true feelings due to external pressure. We start thinking that what our friends told us is true and that they know us better than anyone else. But we tend to forget that it is our life that they are talking about and no one can know us better than our self.

In this case too,maan thought that his relation with geet was based on a infatuation and not love. So breaks up with her. Even after the breakup he cannot understand why geet tends to haunt him.he is starving for geet's voice,her one look,her one smile...he cannot stay away from her.

I hope maan realizes that he truely loves geet. One thing i was wondering who was maan's friend who made think that he was only infatuated with geet...

and what to tell about geet. I absolutely loved her. She is sure about her feelings.

I absolutely loved your armaan character. His bond with geet was incredible. I hope armaan stays in the ff for a long time.


plz continue the ss soon...
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Originally posted by: icy_magma

amazing update...😊😊


the story is truely amazing...and it is based on reality too.

we tend to get distracted from our true feelings due to external pressure. We start thinking that what our friends told us is true and that they know us better than anyone else. But we tend to forget that it is our life that they are talking about and no one can know us better than our self.

In this case too,maan thought that his relation with geet was based on a infatuation and not love. So breaks up with her. Even after the breakup he cannot understand why geet tends to haunt him.he is starving for geet's voice,her one look,her one smile...he cannot stay away from her.

I hope maan realizes that he truely loves geet. One thing i was wondering who was maan's friend who made think that he was only infatuated with geet...

and what to tell about geet. I absolutely loved her. She is sure about her feelings.

I absolutely loved your armaan character. His bond with geet was incredible. I hope armaan stays in the ff for a long time.


plz continue the ss soon...



Aww sooo Sweeettt Dear. i get overwhelmed after reading ur Comment. i mean u analyzed my SS So well nd thanx a lot dear for such a sweet, lovely nd Long nd inspiring comment of urs nd thanx for loving d Armaan's Character too. Ur comment really made my day. thanx a ton Again Sweety. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
thank god armaan is there to advice her and share her grief...
i think wat geet said to maan is absolutely right and she has to b strong and move on with her life...
i want maan to realize his mistake and he shud repent for letting her go thro this pain...
i wud want maan to go thro the same pain...
pl cont soon

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