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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Guys! Thank u So much fir ur Overwhelming Support. m Glad to know that u All liked my Start. nw here's d Part 2 of it. hope u all like it too. Pls Feel Free to criticise if u all dnt like it. Here's D Part 2 of my SS.

Part 2:

He waited impatiently for Geet to speak

Geet was about to speak something when waiter came wid their Order

Maan's monologue:

Damn! This waiter has to come nw only wen she was about to say something. But y she is so silent. She is never like dat. O God! Did I did something wrong? Is she OK? Her silence is more dangerous then her screaming nd shouting. C'mon Geet speak something. Shout at me, Yell at me but don't sit like this. Say something Geet.


(Maan's Monologue ends)

Geet's Monologue:

So Finally he said wat was in his heart. My worst Nightmare has came into reality. The thing for which I scared for so long has finally came true. I felt like my Heart is ripping Apart from my Body, like somebody is snatching my soul away from my Body. He has said all dis without any hesitation. Not thinking twice hw it'll affect me. Thank God! The waiter has came on tym. Atleast I got sometym to absorb wat I heard from him. He is right. We had no right to ruin each other's Happiness. Dnt cry Geet. Be strong


(Geet's Monologue ends)

Maan: Geet'..

Geet came out from her trail of thoughts

Geet: yes Maan

Maan: u OK na

Geet(calmly): yes Maan I m fine dnt worry. U r rite there is no need to continue dis relationship if anyone of us is not happy. Thanx for Telling all dis atleast nw none of us in d misunderstanding that the thing between is Love

Maan: Look Geet I m Sorry But...

Geet: No need to say Sorry Maan. U havent done anything wrong. I m used to of it

Maan's monologue:

Is she really OK? Hw can anyone be so calm after hearing such a Harsh reality. She's definitely not Normal. Y is she not Yelling at me? Y is she not punishing me? Hw can she absorb it so easily


(Maan's Monologue ends)

Geet's monologue:

I knw Maan wat u r thinking? I know that u had expected me to cry, to yell at you, to scream at you. But I'll not do any of these. Geet Handa is not dis much Weak that she cant face dis Reality. If I had faced so much Hardships in my lyf den I can Overcome from dis also. I'll not let a Single tear out of my eyes


(Geet's Monologue ends)

Maan sees Geet taking out something from her Handbag nd to his Surprise he takes out the things which he has least expected. He takes out the Ring which he gaves her wen she has accepted her Proposal nd Teddy Bear which he has gifted her on their ! year Anniversary

Maan: Geet, wats all dis?

Geet: Maan these r the Things that u had given me. These were the Souvenir of our Love. But now wen dere is no Love between us den I don't have any Right to keep these things wid me. So I m returning it to u

"So Does it Mean she already had an Idea that today this Relationship is going to end." He thought

Maan: Geet u dnt have to return me all dis. I mean...

Geet: its ok Maan I'll not ask u to return my Gifts (she said while smiling) u can keep that wid u because I had given it to u because I truly Loved u. but now wen I came to know that u never Loved me I cant keep dis wid me.

Maan: But Geet...

Geet: Maan, Gift dis to the Girl wid whom u Truly fell in Love, not to every girl u met nd get attracted den later realize dat it was not love

Geet's Words Pierced Maan's Heart. He don't know Why but he's not liking the way Geet returning his gift to him.

Geet: Tym for me to Go Maan. Bye

She said nd kept her share of bill on d table. Dey always use to fight for dis thing. Maan wanted to bear all expenses alone but Geet Believes in Sharing everything whether its their expenses or their joys nd sorrows nd today also she did the same thing but Maan has not stopped her. he was still in shock by Geet's Behaviour. He came into senses wen he realized that Geet gets up to leave. . he don't know y but he wanted to stop her

Maan: Geet, wait...

Geet stopped instantly nd turned to face him making sure that she didn't get weak

Maan: Geet, we r still friends nd will always be. This thing will not affect our friendship.

Geet(smiled faintly): Good Bye Maan! Take care always

She said nd turned to leave. Maan watched her go outside d Cafe. He instantly followed her. he wanted to make sure that is she really ok. He saw her taking Taxi from d road. He quickly gets into his Car nd followed her making sure that she reached home safely nd don't do anything stupid during her way to home. He had heard many cases where people suicides after their failure in love nd he didn't want Geet to be Part of it.

Maan's Monologue:

Y is she Behaving so strangely? Nd wait wat is she taking out from her Handbag. O gosh! The gifts that I had given her. she had brought dem wid her. but y? does she already knew about it. Hw she always reads my mind. But y is she returning it to me? I havent asked for it. I agree that the feeling between us was not love but the feeling behind giving dese gifts was Genuine nd nt fake. Y is she not understanding it nd y does it affecting me so much if I don't love her. y it pierced my heart wen she says that I should gift these to the girl wid whom I really fell in love. She is going now but y I want to stop her. Y I m having dis feeling that I will not able to see her again? I wanted to stop her I don't know y but I dnt want to let her go.

I stopped her. she stopped nd turned her face towards me. I saw her struggling hard to control her tears. Y she cant cry in front of me? Anyways I have to stop her. I had to tell her that we r still friends. But to my surprise she didn't react infact said Good Bye nd gone. Y is she doing dis? I can clearly See d pain in her eyes nd Voice wen she was saying Good Bye to me nd she left. I instantly ran Behind her. I saw her taking Taxi nd without thinking twice I get into my Car nd followed her. what if she do something to her? No Maan, she wont do anything dnt get scared. Wait! M I getting Scared? But y? Y I felt that something is breaking inside my heart? Y m I feeling my soul going away from me? Y m I feeling that I lost something very precious? Anyways I kept all dis thoughts aside. Dis tym all I need is to make sure that she reached her home safely nothing else. This is not The End of my care, my genuine care for her

(Maan's Monologue ends)

Geet's Monologue:

I had d Feeling that sooner or Later dis Day will come nd today since morning i was having intution about the result that will come after our meeting. it was Obvious from Maan's Odd Behaviour from last few days. Somewhere in my heart i knew that Maan has called me today for dis Purpose only therefore i brought all dose things which i thought belonged only to me. his Gifts . but nw Its tym for me to return all his Gifts to him, the gifts which I considered as souvenir but was nothing more den a thing to him. I'll not ask him for my gifts because my feeling were true, my love was True behind those Gifts. But yhe'll not understand it. He never understands anything. But its of no use nw. I handed his gifts nd was about to leave wen he stopped me. Y he stopped me nw? o god! Pls Help me I don't want to be weak in front of him. I know if I would be there in front of him for 1 more minute I couldn't be able to control myself. Pls Maan dnt say anything which hurts me more. I cant take it anymore today. But to my surprise he asked me to be Friends forever. I know y is he saying dis so that I wont feel bad but I dnt needs anyone's Sympathy. I just Bid him Final Bye nd came outside.

I know may be this is the Last Tym m Seeing Him, last tym m talking to him because after dis we both move to our respective Directions. May be after sometym he'll forget that he had met someone named Geet nd found a new girl for himself. But hw will I forget him. But I had to be strong. I took Taxi nd headed towards home. I know many youngsters of my Age do something stupid after their failure in Love but m not in one of dem. Because my Life is not only mine, its also of d people who were close to my heart including Maan. I know today I matter nothing to him but for me he'll always be in my heart no matter hw far he goes away from me. No matter if he doesn't loves me but I Love him nd its enough for me to be strong. Good Bye! Maan Singh Khurana. I wish u gets ur True Happiness nd True Love very Soon. for me there's no hope left. This is The End for every feelings in my heart.

(Geet's monologue Ends)

So guys hope u all like dis Part. hit d like Button if u all like it nd do leave ur Comment/criticism. its necessary. Forgive me if i had done any mistake

Luv Aakriti😊😊

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Next - Part 3

Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome part....how can u not. Love geet Maan....geet is so strong....update soon...can't wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing!!!
monologues were beautifully expressing the feelings nd emotions.
wonderful part..........loved it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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as i said earlier maan is a stupid n a jerk to reject geet like this...nw he will pine 4 her 2 come back
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Posted: 14 years ago
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geet is strong and brave lady...loved her
i guess maan also loves her but doesn't know that's love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Maaneet broke up but Geet knew it that this was coming she was really strong person let what future hold for them both part amazing pls do pm me pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was amazing....
how could Maan do this😡...
I can say he loves her but he proves himself that he doesnt...and i am confused and mad at him
and Geet...i love how strong she is...hope all gets better


please continue soon...and add me to your PM list please
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update dear....

thanks for pm

continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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simply awesme....
plzz add me to PM list while sending the next updte

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice ff
add me to ur pm list

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