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Posted: 14 years ago
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amzing concept...
superb...
loved it....
update soon...nd plz pm me...
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awwww that was awesome....i just loved reading both the parts...plz add me to your PM list..!!

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Hi every1 thanx for ur Love nd Support so far. i really Feel Gr8 To read all ur Comments. nw before i Post Part 3 of my SS i wanted to make Few things clear to u all.

Maan nd Geet both r College going Guys. Maan is doing MBA nd Geet is doing Architecture. Maan is kind of a Playboy but things started changing wen he meets Geet. He Too tries to Flirt wid her but his Friendship Towards her is Genuine. nw Hw he Realizes his true Feelings for her dis u'll cum to know in next Parts.

Nw here's d Part 3 of my SS. Hope u all Like it. Pls Feel free to Criticise if u all dnt like it.


Part 3:

Taxi Stopped nd so the trail of Geet's Thoughts. She was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't realized wen her Home came until she realized d jerk of break. She takes a Deep Breath nd came out of d Taxi. She faught back her Tears during d whole journey. She didn't wanted to get noticed by anyone especially her Mom. She paid to the Driver nd headed towards her Home. Maan Parks his Car at a distance away from Geet's Cab from where she could easily See Geet but Makes sure Geet didn't noticed him. Geet felt someone stalking but she knews who's it. She smirks nd moves towards her Home. She rings d Doorbell nd her Mother Opens d Door. She smiled, laughs, hugs her mom like she always did. Maan notices geet's actions from a Distance nd was confused at her behaviour he really didn't understand y she's doing dis nd most importantly from where does she gets dis much strength. As Soon As Geet gets inside her house Maan too Drove towards his own home.

Geet's Monologue:

Taxi Break Gives Break to my thoughts also. I know now m going to do the toughest job of my Life. M going to Fight wid my tears in front of my Mom. Because she can easily sense my pain. I take a deep breath nd gets outside d Taxi. As I was heading towards d Home I felt someone stalking me, someone is noticing me from Far. I smirked as I knew who it was. It was none other den Maan. He always use to do dis wenever I return home alone after meeting him because most of d tym I didn't allow him to Drop me nd to make sure I reached home safely he use follow me till home making sure that I didn't noticed him but he don't know that I noticed him first tym only wen he followed me but never show it to him. But y is he doing dis today wen everything is over nw. isn't he wat he said that we r no more together den y is he showing dis care, dis concern. May be he's used to of it nd slowly will get rid from his Habbit very soon. I pressed d Door Bell nd as I expected My Mom opened d Door. I smiled nd laughed like everytym I does so dat she didn't sense wat all has happened today. I entered inside in d same cheerful Manner like I always did buit only I knw hw much Pain was dere behind my smile. My inside was burning on Fire but still I had to put dis Fake Smile on my Face to make my close one's Happy.

(Geet's Monologue Ends):

Maan's Monologue:

I drove to her Following her making sure she didn't notice me. No matter hw hard I try to concentrate on my Driving but in my mind only her thoughts r going on. D way she came out from d Caf without saying anything was disturbing me. I didn't expect dis Reaction from her which makes me more concerned towards her. I parked my Car at a distance from her home like I always did so that she didn't noticed me. U can call it my Attitude that I didn't wanted to show hw much I care for her but dats d way I m. I saw her getting outside d Taxi nd heading towards her Home. My Heart was urging me to stop her, talk to her atleast hug her one last tym. I don't know wat kind of feeling is dis wen I was sure dat there's nothing like Love between us but I dnt want to tackle from it rite nw. May be I was habitual of her thatsy having dis Feeling. I saw her mother opened d Door nd she entered in d same Cheerful Manner like she always did. No cries, no tears. Just Smile on her face. Y is she so calm? Y is she's not showing her Pain not even in front of her Mom also who is her Best Friend. Wat kind of Girl is she? She's Definitely not a human. Afterall who has dis much Courage to smile wen u had recently Broke up. But she's still smiling. I was dere till he gets inside her home. As soon as she got inside I too drove towards my Home. Because I really need to find d Soln. of my Restlessness.

(Maan's Monologue ends)

Mom: Geet, u have been so early Today? U said dat u'll be Late.

Geet: Ya Mom. The Lecture was really Boring today. If I was there for 10 more min den I would definitely drifted to sleep. So its better to Sleep in my Cozy Bed den to dat Bench. (She said Laughing)

Mom: Geet, wen will u grow-up beta.

Geet: C'mon Mom. U have seen our Professor na. he's so ugly as well. Ya if he would be Handsome like Ranbir Kapoor den I would even think of Attending his Boring Lecture. But he's more worse den Atal Bihari Bajpeyi. I wonder hw his Wife Tolerate him.

Mom: Geet, u r really impossible. Acha nw get urself Fresh I'll bring something for u to Eat.

Geet: No mom I m really not in d Mood. My Head is Paining nd I need to sleep so m going to my Room nd pls I dnt want any disturbance. My Cell will be switched Off so if any calls come for me at Landline den simply say m not at home nd ya make sure ur Fav. Daughter Misha don't disturb me while m sleeping or else u'll know wat will happen

Mom: ya I m very much aware of both of urs Cat-Fights nd m sure our Neighbours too. Dnt worry she'll nt disturb u.

Geet: Dat would be better for her. Anyways bye. Gud night

Mom: Gud Nite? Geet its day tym

Geet: Ya bt as nw m going to sleep so I'll say Gud nite only na

Mom: I really cant understand ur theories

Geet: Den dnt try. Bye

Mom: Bye!

She headed towards her Room nd closed d Door behind. Her Mom thinks dat she's Really Tired so she didn't disturbed her nd gets involved in her usual Routine. Geet closed d Door Behind nd rested herself at d door. She closed her eyes nd broke into Tears. Only she knows hw hard it was to control dem so far. She slowly sits at d Floor nd started Crying. Letting everything out of her heart. The Pain, the hurt caused by Maan everything. She lets all d Barriers broke away nd let the tears found their way. May be like dis way only she can feel better

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On the other Hand Maan too reaches his Home. His Dadi wonders wat makes him come Home so Early. He never Misses any of his classes den wats wrong Today. He didn't looked in good mood as well. She decided to ask him

Dadimaa: Maan Beta, u ok na?

Maan: yes Dadimaa y?

Dadimaa: nahi u r home Early Today. Which u never do

Maan: Wo, Dadimaa m not feeling well

Dadimaa: Wat Happen? Apne Doctor ko Dikhaya? Rukiye Hum abhi Doctor ko Phone karte hai

Maan: No Dadimaa I m seriously Fine. I think I should just go nd take some Sleep

Dadimaa: R u sure?

Maan: ya Dadimaa.

He storms towards his Room nd closes d Door Behind leaving his Dadimaa Behind Confused.

(Geet's Monologue):

Only I knew hw hard it was to tell lie to Mom. To pretend dat everything is normal. If I would be there for 1 more minute wid Mom den I will definitely not able to control my tears so I decided to hget away from her as soon as Possible nd Make an excuse of Headache. As soon as I came inside my Room I broke into tears. Nw I couldn't control myself anymore. Nw I couldn't fight back wid my tears. I cried, I cried hard. I let every pain, every Sorrow Given by Maan out of my heart. Endless Tears were cuming out from my eyes but m not wiping dem. I let dem Flow because after dis I don't want to cry again. Not atleast for Maan but is dat so easy.

Y I cant Forget Him? Y Maan Y? Y did u came into my lyf? I have never called u. u ureself came. Y did u walk into my life if u have intended to Leave me like dis? I wanted to Hate u but to my Luck I cant do that also because I love u From d Core of my heart. I cried nd cried. I don't know hw many seconds, hw many Minutes, Hw many Hours but I cried. Once again My Trust was Broken, once again My Heart was broken by the person whom I love A lot. U knw na Maan dat I was a Heart broken Girl wen u came to my lyf den y did u do dis? y? I kept asking dese Questions to myself but got no answer. Its better to left some Questions unanswered. May be tats Lyf. For u may be I was just an another Passing Affair of ur Life but for me u r the Person whom I love d most but nw who left me.

(Geet's Monologue ends)

Maan's Monologue:

I know My Dadi would be surprised to see me home early today nd I was mentally Prepared for it. I somehow convienced her that everything is fine. I m not Gud in enacting like Geet so I cutshort d discussion nd headed towards my Room. I know Dadi would be really confused wid my dis kind of behaviour but dis tym I really wanted some tym for myself.

As soon as I came inside d Room D first thing that came into my Mind is Geet. I still couldn't take my mind off from her. y is she still on my mind? C'mon Dude she's just another Passing Affair of ur lyf nothing else. U r not in Love wid her. Den y m I so much Concerned for her. y did I followed her to her Home to make sure that she reached Home Safely. Y d Pain in her Eyes were still torturing me. Y her uncomplaining Attitude is still Haunting me. Is dis Love? No ofcourse not. Its not Love. Because if it was love den y Should I break her Heart. No I'll Be fine in few Days.

C'mon Dude Geet is just another Girl of ur Lyf nothing else. But Is She? No she's Different. Wait! Wat m I thinking? Y m I having dis Feeling? Was it just because of Guilt? But I had offered her Friendship which I never do to any girl but she refused. But Y I feel Rejected if it was just another Passing Affair. O god! I really need to get out from all dis. May be Yash will able to take me out from all dis. but he'll be returning Tomorrow morning So I had to wait till tomorrow.

(Maan's Monologue Ends)

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It was night nd Geet was sitting near her Window Looking at Moon. She has stopped Crying nw. She felt much lighter but there was still Pain in her heart.

Geet(To herself): I still didn't got d Answer Maan y did u do dis to me? But I'll not ask u any question because its my fate. I'll not blame u for anything. I had always learned something from the Peoples who has came to my Life. From Rahul I learned not to believe in Love den u came nd u make me Learned that Love can Happen Twice also unless u gets a Right Person nd today u also betrayed me nd I learned not to believe on anyone, especially a Stranger. From now on Geet Handa will not believe on any one.

She was still thinking about Maan wen her Sis Misha came to her. dey both Loves each other very much but never shows nd fight wid dem. Misha use to call her 'Wildy' because she always leaves her scratch marks on her face nd Hand wen dey Fight.

Misha: Hey Wildy wats up? Mom was saying dat ur Lecture was very boring today. Waise bhi jahan pet um aur tumhari friends jaise Boring log ho wo jagah apne Aap boring ho jati hai

Geet: Mish Pls m not in Mood of Fight today. So better shut up

Misha: OMG! I got scared. Waise Wat Happen? U had fight wid my Would be Jiju

Geet again felt pain inside her heart but she controlled herself

Geet: Mish, Stop it!

Misha: ok Fine. But seriously wat happened (she asked concerned)

Geet: nothing mish. I m perfectly fine

Misha: ok as u say. But seriously if U r upset Because of Maan den only God will spare him from me

Geet: really?

Misha: Ya Ofcourse! I'll really break his Teeth if he hurts u. Trust me. So let him know dis dat he don't dare to hurt u

Geet: Mish. Its nothing like dat. Everything is fine between Me nd Maan

Misha: hmmm Better be. Anyways Mom is calling u for Dinner cum soon ok

Geet: ok. I'll just be there

Misha Left from dere nd after sometym Geet too goes from dere

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On the Other Hand Maan's Mind also not in Peace. He was still in thoughts of Geet. He still remembers d Day wen he First met Geet. He closes his eyes nd remembers d Day wen he first saw her.

**********~~~~~~~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~~~~~~~~~**********

It was Yash nd Meera's First Anniversary Party. Its been 1 year wen Yash Proposed her nd Meera accepts it so dey decided to celebrate it wid their close friends. Maan was one of d Hottest Hunk of his College. Girls just die for him. He would Rather considered as Playboy who usually breaks Girl's Heart but only His Close one knows hw much Good is he from his heart. Yash was his Childhood Friend nd he shared his every Joy nd Sorrows wid him. Yash always teased him for his Playboy nature but he knew dis very well dat one day Maan will get his kind of girl den he'll not go after any other girl.

Maan was at the Drinking Bar wen he first Saw Geet. She was sitting wid Meera talking nd Smiling. Maan has never seen such a beauty. Dere was many other Hot Girls around him but his eyes were only on Geet. She has Wore Dark Red Colour of Anarkali Suit wid no extra ordinary Make up nd just wore light Jewelleries. But still she's looking beautiful. Her simplicity catches Maan's attention at once. He was staring at her wen Yash came to him.

Yash: Geet Handa, Meera's best friend since School. Doing Architecture

Maan: Hhmmm interesting

Yash: Maan, dnt try ur tricks wid her pls.

Maan: Relax Dude! I wont. I'll ask her for friendship dats it

Yash: I dnt think dat she accepts it because she stays away from d Playboys like u

Maan: No one can stay away from d Charm of MSK

Yash: Really?

Maan: Just wait nd Watch

He said nd goes towards Geet who was standing alone. He confidently Goes to her. For some geet get conscious wen he Saw Maan standing in front of her. No Doubt his charm works on her. Geet couldn't take away from his well toned Body nd Muscles. No doubt he was Looking Hot!!!!!!! But then she shrug off all her thoughts nd came into senses wen Maan speaks to her

Maan: Excuse me Pretty Lady! Can I get u a Drink?

"Oh so he's another Playboy Guy. Nothing unusual" She thought

Geet: Y? R u a Bartender?

Nw dis was d Last Thing dat Maan was expecting from any girl. Girls Drool over him nd she so much Attitude


A Poem from Geet to Maan:


I'll forgive,
It doesn't matter what you do,
You know this love and all I have,
Will always be here for you.
I'll forget,
Anything you ask me to,
If you don't like when I bring it up,
My words I'll think them through.
I'll love,
Even if you don't want me to,
Obsession, call it want you want,
But this is the one promise that I'll always keep for you,
I'll live,
You know my dreams are all I see,
Our life is what its for,
I'm going to be the best that I can ever truly be.
I'll trust,
Anything you ever say,
I put you higher then these fools,
And that is where you'll stay.

I'll Forget, I'll love, I'll live,
I'll trust and I'll forgive,
My love will never go away,
This is all I have to give.

So guys hope u all Like dis Part. Hit d Like Button if u all like it. Do Leave ur Comment/Criticism. its necessary. nd ya forgive me if i had any mistakes while typing

Luv Aakriti😊😊


Next - Part 4
Edited by aakritisri1111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THAT WAS REALLY TOUCHING... 👏..WOW...I LOVED IT YAAR
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Originally posted by: kinju100

THAT WAS REALLY TOUCHING... 👏..WOW...I LOVED IT YAAR



Thank u so much Kinju For being d first 1 To Comment. glad to knw that u loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg.....it was such a sad part...continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh dear i m feeling bad 4r geet....... Just caught ur ff while browsing around.... I really loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice ff... wow geet's so strong... continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Misha i want to punch and put some sense into Maan...
he loves her but he cant understand it...he needs to get some sense...

that was a wonderful update..loved it..and thanks for the PM

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