MAANEET SS: THIS IS NOT THE END THREAD 1

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Aakriti Srivastava

@aakritisri1111

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: muskanp

geet gum main celbrate karna bhool gayen...
yeppy mre first😆

ya wat to do Geet ka gum hi kuch aisa hai thanx for being d first 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Anu

@anuandavi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Hey nice update. Maan can feel Geet's pain but is not able to realize his own feelings.

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angelic_cute

@angelic_cute

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

maan is in love but confused abt his feelings

good long part

update soon

bye

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-Veritaserum-

@-Veritaserum-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Awesome update
Thanx for the PM

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

It was a sad sad update continue soon.

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Tanu

@butterfly.tanu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

love the part...

plz add me in ur pm list...

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Very well written . Your writing always touches my heart esp Geet's pain 👏

Just a suggestion don't let Geet succumb to this heartbreak & fall into depression .

I mean allow her to go to college & if possible make her do some job . She should realize that she's worthy of the Best things in life . Geet's life , her existence , her being , her self-worth & her self-esteem does not begin & end with & for unworthy losers like Maan .

What you're depicting via your fiction is the talk of the day 👏 & true & real life situations . A woman's worth & her entity is not measured by her boyfriend or her husband . They maybe a part of her but they can never be in alignment to her individualism coz every individual is unique pertaining to her spacial skills & latent talent .

Allow Geet to rediscover herself & this not with any Maan but with her own capabilities , on her own merit .

As for Maan let him be witness to this confidence Geet . Let him realize that Geet is not some weak bechari woman & that he feels pity for her. NO !!!! A Big NO !!!

Geet's identity is not circumscribed to his presence .

Geet is an Individual 1st & extremely dignified too . So your approach towards her being independent will bring Geet as a strong-willed confident woman who dared & won the world irrespective of adverse situations .

You must be wondering why I gave you such a long comment ? 😆

There're reasons -

# 1stly , I love your style of writing .👍🏼

# You pen down emotions Brilliantly . I mean I cried with every update of yours it was so effective & Fantastic 👏

& lastly,

# I know you've the potential to show my confident Geet flawlessly 👏

Anyways it is your FF so take your own call @ the end of the day . Procceed it as you want it to be . I just gave my inputs as a reader some of the things would like to see.😊

Brilliant update Glitter Star Red