Fate has it all set-(MG) FF # 1 - Page 3

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Originally posted by: Manpreetmann

hahahaha loved it dear......i was laughing when i saw the family chart....it was MIND BOGLING😆

u know what, my dads name is manjeet....ohhh no plz maan is my dream boy, n here in this FF he is my father.....hahahahahahahaha...... well no issues, do 1 thing, maan geet ki shaadi ke baad, mujhe inki beti bana dena, i'll be the most happiest person on this earth😆

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Part 7

Maan senses Geet as soon as she steps on the terrace' he hides and looks at her confusedly' she seemed very upset '.then he hears her sobs'. She was weeping'

Hey what happened to her' let me think' OMG' 'm such a fool' today was her last exam' surely she did not fare well and as everyone is so happy here she can't share her disappointment' I should talk to her' OK Maan all the best' go ahead

He walks towards Geet '. She immediately turns wiping her tears' looks at him uncertainly '

Maan: Hi Geet' you at this time 'on the terrace' every thing alright'(no answer) 'mm'ummm' so how were your papers' hope everything went well (no answer)' (irritated) what's this sweetheart I am talking and you juat giving me weird looks' is everything alright'

Geet: yes all is well' and don't sweetheart me ' am not a kid ' (after some secs)' so shopped for 2moro's function' should have bought a Sherwaani' right

Maan: yes Maa had brought a Sherwaani' for all 3 bro's same color and all'

You might be wearing a lengha after all its your Di's sagai' which color noy the same as NT's' she must be wearing Pink ' the color enhances her beauty (Geet annoyed)' let me guess yours will be Green or blue may be white ' but definitely not pink..

Geet: I did not get it I were busy Maa and Di brought I only approved'.(feels very sad)

NT comes searching for Geet' so you are here I've been looking for you everywhere' what are you doing here ' Geet its 1:00am ' chala neeche chala'. (notices Maan)' so this is it Maan what are you doing here '.(winks)' saraa din baat karne ka chance nahin mila (naughtily) ' but you should have atleast seen the time 'waise kya baate ho rahi thi(giggles) ' batao'(winks again) (Geet confused as well as annoyed seeing NT winking at Maan' HIS MAN)

Maan: aisa kuch nahin hai' stop thinking rubbish' I were just asking her the color of your dress'

NT: my dress' you always know I'll go for pink' you wanted to know Geet's dress color hai na (giggles) Ok I'll tell you it Green base with Blue and White embroidery ' all your favorites '(Geet is not able to understand why they were discussing her) Dev said you will instantly fall for it (Geet still confused' but thought it was their some code language)'

Maan: Dev how come he come in picture'

NT: of course he was with me when I brought ' Ahmedabad ... got it'

By the way why is Dev not here ' kal tak he will come naa' Maan Kripa Di said he won't be able to manage' and above all they have informed that sagai its 2moro'

Maan: relax you have any phone no. where he is staying' we'll call him and tell'

Geet: stop it what's the issue about Dev not being here'

NT: Geet please let the elders talk' the phone is in the lobby 'but Darji is there' ca'nt use it'(desperate)

Geet: we can use the Kitchen extension '. If you both so desperately want to talk to Dev'(still confused)

{girls remember its early 90's no mobile exsisted in India' and Pagers were also a new thing}

They go to the kitchen

Maan calls Dev: Hello may I Please talk to Dev' I am his elder Bro'Dev where are you man'. You should have been in Hoshiyaarpur by now' what bakwaas Dev leave everything' take the 3am flight for Amritsar and be here by eary dawn' no ways' rest can wait'. NT is worried helll'. How will sagai take place without you' what you don't know '. This weird family of ours ' I don't know from wherer do they get such ideas' oh ya' dulha na sahi uski talwaar sahi'. Enough I don't want to listen anything'.. Ok you'll be here'. If NT shreds a single tear I'll tear you'. Now leave immediately ' want to say hello to NT'Nt talk to him but only for a minute'

NT: where are you' come soon' missing you'.(looks at Maan & Geet)' umm'mmm' I too' Bye

Maan: ab kush. When you'll open your eyes in the morning, he will the first person you see' now go sleep' Geet take her she needs rest ' its her big day'

NT: I'll leave ' Geet you remain here ' you both need to talk (winks says softly to Maan) veerji enjoy (winks naughtily)

Geet: (not able to listen what NT said to Maan' stiffens): I should also leave.

Maan holds her wrist and turns her towards him '. Tucks the flying hair strand behind her ear' looks passionately in her eyes '. Holds her slim waist with other hand and brings her close'. Geet lost in his eyes' her heart says let the time stop' but brain says what is all this 2moro he will be engaged to Di and tonight he is holding me like this' suddenly jerks and frees herself'

Maan comes to senses'. Rather he senses her awkwardness' moves back'

says: kya hua Geet is every thing alright'.

Geet: look Manjeet'.

Maan: I am Maan, Geet you remember 'naa' don't you' how come calling me with that name that every one else stopped using'. Geet don't do this'

Geet: it was a mistake'. Some childish '. Forget it' you will not understand'(sighs)

Maan: Ya I will not understand' Geet the day I took this name MAAN with an A from your name'. you became a part of my existence'. Now wh'(Geet interrupts)

Geet: no I am not your part ' ya true I willingly gave it to you (both not talking about that stupid A but about their hearts)'. But I was only 5 at that time' you are much older you should have had some sense then'

Maan :( hurt) ya ' now I got it ' your behavior '. OMG ' and all the time I thought' ya you are right we should forget that childish act'I am way too old for you'. Right Geet I have no right on you'(sighs)' sorry Geet for imposing myself on you' but still my offer is open' my feelings genuine 'Geet I will always be there' in high or low' in happy or sad' bye Geet ' take care'( walks to the stair way 'turns) all the very best Geet for your future' Geet I am really sorry I drooled too long over the past'(feels like crying' moves fast')

Geet stands there for few more minutes'. She's confused' Maan statements are so contradicting to the fact that he was being engaged to Di' she felt like hitting herself hard'. What is all this' why is Maan accusing her '. She was always clear she wanted to marry him' her trying for Architecture was the fact she wanted to help him in the future ' have reasons to be with him 24X7 rather then waiting in the house for him to return from work' Beeji also said if she had a Degree she can have Maan'. What is all this' God help me guide me'she goes down and sleeps fitfully.

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