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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 23

Maan kept quite Geet was confused as to where she must go she remembered her conversation with the Driver, Guddu Miayan, (has been Maan's Driver for last 7 yrs, from the day Maan came to this city), when Bhaiya does not say any thing it means he will go to the office, if he is annoyed and does not have any deadline will go to the boat house near the pumping station bada taalaab (big lake),

So she should take the car to the office, when she was about to take right turn for MP Nagar (where his office was) he said no Guddu Miayan not here I am just annoyed take you know na and again starts thinking about Geet also about Sameera's behaviour he pledges to clear things with Sameera soon.

He was so deep in thoughts that he failed to notice Geet taking a longer route which usually people new to the city take (Geet had studied the road map thoroughly before coming to Bhopal for her easy movements) by the time she reached their Guddu miayan was already there, he opened the gate for Maan and took the keys from Geet, Maan without noticing went to the old boathouse,

Geet stood their, meanwhile Guddu Miayan brought chana jhor garam and gave her 2 conical packets, Bhabhi (Geet gave him a surprised look) yeh leegiye aur bhaiya ke paas jaiye , he will sit their for hours and won't notice you as he did not in the car how will he here, you have to go and moreover he does not know that you are in town so you see he might think he is imagiming you

Geet blushed and went near Maan, she passed the packet to him, thankyou Guddu miayan, ab aap jaye aur come after 2-3 hrs, I don't feel like going anywhere, (he waited) aap nahin jayenge jantaa hoan chahe saari raat mein yahan kyo na betha rahon, and sighed, aap bhi baithiye, kash aapki bhabhi yahan hoti par my luck shaadi bhi 5 saal tak nahin Guddu Miayan aap kuch bolte kyo nahin turns and sighs dekha ab aap bhi mujhe Geet ke jaise lag rahe hain sighs and rubs his eyes, Geet holds his hand main sach main hoan koi khawaab nahin, he moves a step back looks at her places his hand on her cheek she smiles and then suddenly hugs her with ajerk the chana jhor garam flies in the air (as in Geet serial), his hands roam all through her body

Guddu Miayan smiles and looks around alah tera shukra hain dophar ke 12 baj rahe hai aur koi yahan nahin hai inki mohobbat ke nazaare dekhne ke liye chalo main bhi gaadi me baithoo, in the car he hears a beep sound and sees a pager lying there, Dev had given it to Geet saying he will page her the reactions of her father, GM opens the page and reads it it said will reach Jahannuma for lunch at 1:15 pm join us else we will come. He smiles and gets out to tell them.

Geet and Maan are sharing a passionate K***, oblivious of their surroundings, GM thinks that he should not interrupt but says no this is a public place and they should check themselves. Goes to them and shouts BHAIYA, BHAIYA Maan recognizing his voice comes to reality, gently backs away and winks at her, Kya hua GM every thing all right,

Who bhabi ka pager bol raha hai, lunch par sawa baje Jahanuma pahuchana hain.

Maan: theek hai (looks at Geet) how come you here

Geet: college report karne aayi thi, baaki formalities 12th july ko hain.

Maan: lets go to some place safe I just feel like eating you (teasingly) though I know I am not allowed to but main chakh to sakta hoan(winks)

Geet: sirf chakhana hai (blushes)

Maan: nahin khanaa hai (puts his hand on his heart) par kya karo hai!

He asks GM to take them to the highest point of the lake {which was only known then by the trackers and lovers, now a well known point}

GM smiles and takes them when they were leaving the car he warns them Bhaiya only 20 mins then I'll honk we have to reach Jahnnuma at 1:15pm, Geet smiles at his concern and thinks how much caring this man is no doudt Maan should be trusting him a lot, Maan nods obiedently.

They reach the point Geet was mesmerized by the view, Maan hugged her tight from back showering her with K****s, she felt the tempo of her heartbeats increae, and she was conscious oe an elevated tension that began in the pit of her stomach and flared along every nerve end, firing her body with an acute awareness that was till now unknown to her.

He was no where near stopping he had missed her so much that it was hard to control he wanted to feel her every part, he K***d her neck, collar bone still hugging her back there was not place left there untouched by him. He whispered Geet

She turned at the sound of his voice, and felt her breath catch at the passionate image he presented.

There was something about his stance, a sense of animalistic strength, that fine tailoring enhanced evily. The dramatic mesh of elemental ruthlessness and primitive power added a magnetism few women of any age could successfully ignore, than how can poor sameera she jerked at the thought how come Sam came in between him and her stupid me

He sensed this and eyed her as if asking what happened she nodded, for a few timeless seconds his eyes locked with her in an attempt to determine what lay behind the nod,

She sensed it and grabbed him into yet another passionate K***

That went on and on finally GM honked hard.

They left each other regretting the time and cursing their being not able to marry soon though both did it in their separate minds

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome one.......... really loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it ..... am waiting for the marriage soon !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update

plz continue soon 😉😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats so so sweet, please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice, lovely part. loved it.
guddu miyan is nice.
maaneet missed each other, after 5 yrs both will marry each other.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 24

In the evening Maan's mother and father came to Bhopal, Guddu Miayan went to take them as Maan was in a meeting with some client who was leaving at th every night.

In the car GM asked how they came in such a urgency, instead of answering him Savitri saked him: GM who is this Sameera?

GM: a girl who studied with bhaiya in the college and now teaches in the same college

Savitri: I amd asking mmmm umm I mean is there something in between her and ur bhaiya.

GM smiles: no madam definitely no, bhaiya is all lost for bhabhiji, how can he have someone in his life and heart

Savitri: bhabhiji, what bhabhiji

GM: Geet bhabhi aur kaun, aap un dono ki shaadi karva rahe hain na

Savitri: how didyou know?

GM: I know everything madam, you don't know I have been referring to her as bhabhiji since I met bhaiya.

Savitri: so Maan told you also

GM: madam, aap bura na mane tie k baat kahoo, chota muh badi baat hai,

Pratham knows how loyal GM is to Maan says: are GM aapki baat ka kya bura manana, aap to Maan ke right hand hain, aap bole.

GM: dekhiye saab, ab bhabhiji bhi yahan par hi rahengi, aap log unki shaadijald se jald kyo nahin kara dete, matlab I should not say par who aaj jab bhabhiji aur bhaiya mile tab

Savitri interrupts: I know GM that's why we have come here, thanks hint karne ke liye , waise I know what you might have witnessed (rubs her forehead)

They reach home, at the dinner,

Savitri trickingly made all men eat first then followed by women just to make sure Maaneet do not get her and others in awlward moments, she had enough of thir deewangi

After dinner she asked NT to take Geet to her room and asked Dev to take Maan with him as Pratham and Ranveer were their she did not want any scene,
later Dev asked her can he take Geet, NT and bro for a drive they can see the lake at night she said ok but beware you both are going as Maaneet escort don't start your own??? Dev convinced her

Savitri: Bhaisaab we talked to our preist he said that their birthcharts are very nice 36/36.

Rajji: that's nice so we can marry both NT and Geet together.

Pratham: there's a problem, NT and Dev's marriage date is after 6 months and Maneet date are either 1st July or wait for 3 yrs

Ranveer: we can wait but doyou think these 2 can be trusted for such a long time , don't mind its not only Maan's fault Geet is equally responsible.

Everyone laughed

Savitri: do you mind your younger one marrying first, Dev has talked to NT and she says she would like her Jeth to be married first.

Rajji: ok but Darjee

Pratham: we have talked to them all we are here to ask you if you have any objection

Ranveer: na ji na, chale muh mithaa karvao ji.

Later when the 4 come Maneet annoyed as Devtara have given them no chance at all.

They are informed of the decision, Geet blushes hard and Maan hugs his parents, Geet moves forward to take their blessings hugs NT, Dev says teasingly yeh kya saali banana se pehle hi v\bhabhi ban rahi ho, ab mera kya hoga crosses his chest. Everyone laughs.

Savitri calls GM: lijeye Muh meetha keejiye ab yeh aapki bhabhi sach mein banana waali hain 1st ko, GM very happy moves forward and touches Geet's feet, Geet is moved by his gesture, maan comes forward and hugs GM

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Note:

Do you guys want me to go with the rituals

Let me tell you

>Today is 21st June

>Shaadi is on 1st July
>Geet's b'day 26th June
>Only 9 days for preparartions,
Handa's have done nothing for Geet's shaadi all their preparations till now were for NT therefore very hectic shopping schedaule, same the Khurana's have just now married there 3 daughters so they also not prepared same position there,
>Marriage will take place at HSPur
>Sagan, Mehendi and Sangeet all will be on 30th June both at HSPur and Delhi
>Baraat will come on 1st July from Delhi to HSPur at 12:00pm sharp,
>Wedding will take place at 3:00pm at the Gurugwara (anankaraja)
>Reception will be at 6:00pm Hspur followed by dinner and other rituals
>Vidaa will be on 2nd morning after breakfast at 8:00am
>In Delhi all rituals will be doen till 4:00 pm followed by Reception and Dinner after which Dipendar will take Geet to HSPur for pag phera rasam
>On 3rd Maan will go back to HSPur to bring Geet to Delhi

So there will be no Maneet moments till 3rd when they are back to Delhi and their big night, which I would like to hint, will be a disaster as readers are concerned.

So buddies tell me how much you want me to write I will write as per your wishes
What events you would like me to elobarate

#The Birthday

#The journey from HSPur to Delhi
#The small time they get together on 2nd before reception
#The journey back to Delhi from HSPur after the pag phers
#The big night
#The honeymoon
#Straight to Bhopal

-------Do write what you want--------

{I am going for a vacation from 24th to 27th Dec 2010 will update till 23rd and then after 28th so reply soon or else I may start typing what I feel like typing and my POV can be boring also}
If you have any ideas how I can elobarate the above situations don't hesitate to share

Thankyou in advance

part25 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37264325

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great, love msk and geets wedding before dev and nt's, hai looking forward to some nice wedding updates. wondering if msk and geet will be alone before marraige or not
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Posted: 14 years ago
luv maneet wedding before dev-nt.. do continue soon

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