Fate has it all set-(MG) FF # 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
just read ur ff
its grt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
awesome updates loved them.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
luv the update plz add em to ur pm list can;t wait till the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
oh my god !!! NT dialogue made me laugh so natural yaar..pls do continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

SO FINALLY THE CONFESSION IS OVER . LET HOPE THAT NT CAN MAKE FAMILY UNDER STAND THE SITUATION........................

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Posted: 14 years ago
#46

Part 10

NT goes down rushes to thje Dalaan where everyone is sitting' almost dragging Geet'

Geet: Di kya kar rahi ho.. everyone is sitting there' what will they think' the family will be shocked ' have you not seen the movies' generations ki dosti ' bachcho ke pyaar ki wajaha se dushmani me badal gai' Di qyamatse qyamat tak' remember'

NT: chup kara movies have rotten your braine' Geet this id life ' ha yaadi what ever you are saying is gonna happen tab zaroor maine Juhi ki tarah marna hai aur Dev ne Aamir ki taraha khud ko khanjar se maarna hai' samjhi ' stupid gal 'chup kara' aur jaldi chala' you are not so light weighted ' are yeh kya mere haath ki mehendi saari ki sari tere wrist par chap gai' ya rab raham kara' chala ya gaaliya doan'

Geet: Di 'what are you gonna do'please Di calm down ' first atleast think what you are gonna say out there'

NT: whaa if I keep on just thinking like you have been doing since yesterday na' then my life will be finished'

NTenter the dalaan halts on seeing both the families' it was all crowded ' he lost her courage' suddenly saw Vikramjeet' calls him '

NT: Vicky where are your bade Veerji and chote veerji'.

Vikramjeet: you know chote veerji is here' we are all surprised to see him ' after he said he will not be able to come its really nice to see' (NT looks at him annoyingly)' him ' he said bade veerji called him last night' bade veerji saying how can sagai commence without him' strange 'I never knew bade veerji so much liked him that wanted him to be here on his special day (NT sighs)

NT: Vicky do you know where the two are , if yes please call them' tell I am calling and its an emergency'

VJ: both why not only Big B .. you know all are busy pampering the younger one'

NT (interrupts): do what is asked of you both you and Geet have done enough damage by keeping quite about all this'

VJ: what ' I did'nt get you'.

NT: are you doing wht is asked of you or shall I proceed ' you know hw embarrassing it will look that I call them out' move

VJ (shrugs looks at Geet she's on the verge of tears senses something went wrong sees how tightly NT was holding Geet wrist): oK whatever'

VJ tells Maan and Dev ' the trio rush outside' Kripa and Muskaan see this' give a questioning look' go to Prabha and Savitri' and point at the leaving trio' they exchange questioning looks wait for few minutes then go in the direction they went'

Maan: kya hua NT ' Geet tera haatn' NT why are you holding it so tightly ' (takes her wrist out of NT's grip and kisses it Geet 's tears start rolling slowly)' whts up dears 'why this drama'(wipes Geet's tears)

NT: Ok bahut pyaar araha hai apni waali par' right na' just tell me whose sagai is today' bola

Maan: tumhari

NT: kiske saath

Maan: Dev'. VJ: Bade veerji'(in unison)

Maan and Dev look at VJ : what ' tere bheja sarak gaya hai kya (in unison)

NT: nahin he's all right sar hum teeno ka phir gaya hai' this Geet ' she told me just a few minutes back'. Don't interrupt ' Maa ne bataaya usko' aap dono kuch jyaad over smart hai' samjh nahin aaya ' for the sagai your family was waiting for veerji to return from London' they were not bothered if Dev makes for the ceremony or not'

Savitri Aunty giving me the jewellery' and above all veerji you are the elder one so was it not quite obvious that you will be engaged first' OMG' we are fools' and you two are bigger fools'.(looks at VJ)' and you ' you always knew veerji loves Geet ' still you did not tell anyone ' bola' chup kyo hai ' bola na(shouts)

VJ: I ' I tried talking to bade veerji ' firstly he was not here and later when he came back he was so happy about the sagai ' that I ' you know' was not able to talk to him.

Maan (who was just listening till now): so these are the 2 girls you were talking about and Geet this is why you were so annoyed with me'that's why you were avoiding me' and even after knowing were drowning in my eyes' kya soch rahi thi saali aadhi gharwaali' this was that no this is not right' Geet chup kyo ho bolo' jealous ha' felt like dying' (teasingly)' wanted to hurt yourself ' wanted to twist my neck'

(no one notices that both families were listening to their talks)

NT: OMG ' veerji she thought you wanted to see me in that pink dress LOL' OMG (blushes)'.(Dev looks at her ' embarrassed ' plays with his specs)' Dev listen your would be saali thinking that my would be jeth K****d me hard on my birth day

Geet: chup kara Di ' aapko sharam nahin aati sabke saamane bolte hue'

NT: tujhe sochte hue sharam nahin aayi' kit era waala mijhe'. OMG' you jerk and ' pagal ladki'. Wise Veerji why don't you demonstrate it to her ' she will know the feeling said even movies mai bhi shaadi se pehle yeh nahin hota'(laughs)

Geet: enough Di now I can't tolerate any more ' finally tell me what the verdict is' I am living in a hell for last 24 hrs'.please '(sobs hard)

Maan:ok we all are gonna go inside and tell the families that it was a confusion and Dev and NT are the couple' they can't keep their hands away from each other any more and before they break their boundaries let them loose'. Ok

VJ: bade veerji ' but you are the eldest of we 3 so you will be narried first' they won't agree

Maan: I am helpless ' the girl who proposed me 12 yrs back seems to have forgotten me' she said if I get a proper Degree shegree our Beji's will let us marry each other' but you know she seems to realized that I am a way too old for her'

Geet moves to him and hugs him hard and starts crying' :never say this again 'aapke bina mar jaana hai maine' samjha aap' last 24 hrs have been a living hell for me'

Maan cups her face and looks at others: chala hum sab chalke families ko batate hai' all my mistake I should atleast have asked whose sagai is this'

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

simply awesome .👏............................ loved it❤️its touched heart of ours .................................. update fast ..................................wants to know the recation of family......... let the love story of maaneet start.............

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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
awsome yaar..loved it ...the way they converse so so nice ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
tooooooooooooo gud. loved it. finally maan knows why geet is avoiding him
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
today do you have any plans to update it again

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