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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi all of you thankyou for the support

I just wanted to ask do you all want me to go with Devtara scenes or should I cut them I mean ignore them if you all are ready to read them I will pen them down'.

Waiting for response say yes or no but do reply '. VOTING KA ZAMAANA HAI

Part 16

20th May 1995

NT and Geet leave for Delhi, fromthere NT will take a flight to Ahmedabad, Maa gives hell lot of advices before they leave NT is annoyed

NT: what Maa you are instructing Geet as if she is going to some Bhoot Bangala, come on you are just making her afraid, Beeji Chachi tell her to stop making a fuss, Geet will fare welll and above all sha eis not going their to shine in the family's eyes but is going as you all thought she needs to understand Maan, enough shall we leave or I will miss my flight

Rajji: take care sweety, bye

The car leaves Dipendar is accompanying them will return the same day

Finally they reach the Singh Khurana Campus, it is a huge campus with three huge palacial bunglows the first one on the right is the Singh Villa belonging to the eldest son i.e., Arambha Singh, the 2nd in the middle is the Swaraj Kothi belonging to Prarambha Khurana and the 3rd is the Khurana Mansion belonging to Pratham Singh Khurana.

They go to the Singh Villa as Darjee and Beeji live there is the oldest of all bunglows and the most beautiful and biggest of all, Samiksha welcomes them and asks VJ to inform his Chachi's that the Handa's have come, she then asks the driver to take Geet luggage to the Swaraj Kothi as Geet will be staying their.

NT: peri pona Taiji, how are you?

Geet: Namaste Aunty (she asks NT in her ear that why her luggage was sent to Dev's Place rather then Maan's, NT assures her she will find out)

Samiksha gets it but pretends she has not heard. Takes them to meet Darjee and Beeji in the mean time Prabha and Savitri arrive, NT touches Prabh's Feet to take her blessings, Prabha hugs her and says she is eagerly waiting for her arrival; she also takes Savitri's blessings.

Geet on the other hand is feeling awkward, says Namaste to all and sits quietly.

Just then the trio comes the great sisters Kripa, Prerna and Muskan.

They see Geet sitting quietly; find it odd as Geet was a complete chatter box. Prena again plans to pull her legs.

Prena: hey Muski don't you see someone here is lost in someone's thoughts (looks at Geet) (no reaction) someone's so much lost that even have lost their hearing (no reaction)

Kripa: Prerna stop it she is not getting what you are saying ans belive me you are just embarrassing your own self by trying to pull her legs (laughs) (still Geet does not understand all that was for her)

Savitri is taken aback by her innocence and blesses her in her mind Geet meri bachchi kisi ki nazar na lage tumhe tum kitne bholi ho Babaji yeh hamesha aise hi rahe.

Savitri: you both might be tired why don't you freshen up NT when is your flight

NT: Chachiji bas 2 hrs mein

Vicky takes them to the guest room and asks Geet to freshen up here once NT leaves she will be shown her room at the Swaraj Kothi.

NT: hey Vicky why is Geet gonna live at Dev's and not Maan's

VJ: Bhabhiji she is still not Bro's fianc you are chote veerji's fianc and she is your sister so technically she is directly related to Dev and she has to stay there else with so many relatives moving around they might ask why she's staying there'. And above all you can't trust bro will keep his hands away from her (winks) kyon Geet boh pillar ke peeche kya horaha tha'(laughs) (Geet blushes walks to the washroom)

NT: yes the elders are always right Veerji really will not make up to the big night'. (bits her tongue yeh maine kya keha diya)

VJ: raises his eyebrow Bhabhiji you are making it safely to that or not (winks, NT hits him hard by her purse) help somebody help (leaves the room)

After 30 mins Dev and Maan come to the Villa, say hi to Dipendar all of them move for lunch, Dev sits with NT, Savitri with Geet (as she can't trust either Prerna or Maan) Maan has to sit with Dipendar and Vicky

After Lunch Dev cross questionds NT about all the things she is carrying and confirms she has all the documents with her Maan hand her a copy of some questions which the examiner can ask her while evaluating her thesis also instructs about how she must carry herself Geet is all the while watching them talk so consistently she wonders how well they can focus on issues and how well Dev Maan and her Di know about the priorities of the moment at present they are compeletly concerned about NT's Vivas

After an hour NT leaves with Dev Dipendar and Maan, Vicky take her to the Kothi, Kripa shows her the room which she will live in.

Kripa: how do you like it

Geet: its beautiful

Kripa: youhave a beautiful view from your terrace balcony, come let me show you

(Geet follows finds the view mmm'. Only she could see the terrace of the other bunglow thinks what's beautiful about it) you know why I call it beautiful '(points at the opposite terrace) its Maan's Room (Geet blushes and smiles) so I was right na its beautiful ..

Geet hugs Kripa: thanks Di, the truth is I did not like the idea of living here always thought I would be living at his place, but Vicky explained things, then I understood, sorry Di I never had anything against anyone (a single tear rolled)

Kripa toke that tear on her finger tip and kissed it: pagali we are all with you you know I always liked you thought that once NT and Maan get married I will ask Beeji to bring you as dulhan of Dev or Vicky, now its dev and NT and will soon hopefully have you for Maan'. You are so innocent. Now unpack your bags (leaves stops and turns ) I have not told Maan about you being in this room he was asking me but I said no, he always stands by his balcony after dinner (smiles and kisses her forehead ) happy viewing.

Geet is happy now settles down in the room where she will be till the shaadi that is on 26th June, she then goes down to help the ladies of the house

After the dinner she wishes everyone good night Kripa winks at her she blushes goes to her room, switches on the TV set here at Delhi they show few more channels then Hoshiyarpur some satellite TV, she fiddles with the remote unable to get how to operate it , at ther eplace they only had DD channel NT told her here they might be having few more channels that show some superb stuff, she gives up 2n\moro she will ask Kripa about it

Looks out of the balcony door and notices Maan standing, slowly shyly she reaches the Balcony Maan notices some movement thinks whose their as far as he knows that room is empty he concentrates hard and realizes that she was Geet he misses his heart beat, swears Di so that's why you wre'nt telling me and smiles

Both Maan and Geet stand by their respective Balconies looking at each other the distance is such that they can see each other but can't talk but atleast they can see each other.

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

heyyyyyyyy

ijust love ur FF

awesomeeeeeeeee update

cant wait for the next part

do continue soon



Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
its amazing i really loved it
do continue soon 😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
loved ur ff
its beautiful
do pm me plz
n yes I really would like to read more n more maneet😉
keep writing
Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
hey sweetheart......😊
i came back after 4 days,,,n i got soooooooooooooo many pms...😃...& read ur last 5 parts in one go........yiiieeepiiiieee
m soooooooooo happy😛
maaneet moments milenge ab...😍...devtara ko out karo ab......
i want maneet ahem ahem scenes 😉
lolzzzzzzzz plz try to fulfill my wish asap😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part.....who wants more of Devtara when we have Maaneet with us yaar...so make more of them...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow thats nice, cant wait for the next update, i think they dont need words to talk, they have so much love in their eyes
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
nice, lovely part. loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi.. read ur last 2 updates...
dy wer superb...
n loved both d pendants...
do cont soon.. thnx a lot 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi

I am saying sorry before hand

This part is also having some technical details about Geet's interest

I felt it important as this will be a thing which will strengthen their professional bonding

Their personal bonding is great!

....but if you feel I should skip this type of things which I plan toinsert now and then do tell me.... I will try to make it short.... I just feel its important in knowing once personality I like details a lot.... in eberything love or work

Part 17

At the breakfast

Dev hey maa today's Sunday finally my day off, don't you think I shouls take my future saali for some outing.

Prabha may be you are right Geet have you seen any thing at Delhi

Geet Aunty I have almost seen every place don't jiju remember Darjee was always insistenet that we must visit places rather then messing up the house here and disturbing the ladies

Dev oh yes you are right you being the naughtiest was dragged out first (laughs Geet just smiles remembering all the times when she used to tease Maan along with VJ) but Geet you should'nt have seen our work places the factories the office etc. )he prayed God let her say no '. I have a surprise for her )

Geet yes Jiju I have never been to the offices but today is Sunday so I don't think we can go there

Dev no Geet we can its will be easier oday you know the Khurana Construction remaine sopen 7 days on Saturday & Sunday till noon so if we go now we can take a quick tour

Geet what you people work 7 days

Dev no, its not that the accounts dept comes on Sunday ti close and get the bills of the contracters ready which are to be dispatched on Monday early morning, so that Chachu only has to go and verify them and sign them for quick output

Geet ok if its fine with Uncle Aunty

Dev we will take Vicky with us let me call him (goes to the intercom calls VJ and tells him to get ready in 30 mins) he is still waking, Geet you to get ready after that we will have lunch at CP, hurry, I too should get ready

Dev (calls the office from his room extension) hi Adi, is Bro there ''' no its ok '' I were looking for him here ''. No no don't call him he might be busy ''.. when willl he be free''. Till lunch I guess''''. Ok in a hour or 2 ''.. ok thanks''. No don't bother him''.. its ok''''. I'll manage''''' bye & thanks again

The 3 leave for office Dev knew Maan was at the office completeing the presentation for 2moro and he will we free in an hour, he wanted to surprise him by taking Geet there and also he was assured as the family did not suspect his motives, its repay time Bro for all the help times you help me and Tara, I love you bro.

In the office

It was a huge 10 storied building lately constructed it had the elements of Modern Architecture it was a complete blend of form and space.

As soon as Geet entered the premises Maan jerked he lost his concentration, its weird I just felt that Geet is some where near but how is it possible, oh man you are missing her, concentrate Maan concentrate wind up this work soon and leave, you have to plan how will you meet her, this family, she's so near me yet so far, work Maan work, he again moves to check the details.

Dev leaves Geet withVicky telling him to bring her to th econference room after finishing the tour and wait for him until he checks on with Maan.

As Geet was ascending the floors she felt as if she was going towards Maan., she stopped asked: Vicky Maan is in the office

VJ kya kahoo: I don't think so, I did not see his car in the parking (she definitely does not know which Maan's car is)

Geet: are you sure

VJ: shahayad, kya hua is every thing alright. What if Bro is here does it matter (praying)

Geet: no aise hi puchcha (VJ sighs in relief)

On the other hand Maan was also feeling Geet's presence, man you have lost it, instead of concentrating you are drooling, what has happened to you, God help me. Just then Dev enters, Maan looks at him, sees if anyone is behind him.

Dev: bro aise kya dekh rahe hain, (looks back) is someone at my back.

Maan: no, how Dev on Sunday

Dev: when will you be free want to talk to you

Maan: just in half an hour say what

Dev: you finish up then we will talk

Maan: is anyone accompanying you (skeptical)

Dev: no bro (Sasha enters with a bunch of files) hi Miss India how you (she hands the files to Maan) how your boring not happening fianc?

Sasha: firstly I am good, secondly don't be rude about my fianc and thirdly he is ok

Dev: so if he's ok why you both are not getting married (meanwhile Maan studies the files at smiles at their discussion)

Sasha: there's a prob, he wants me to discontinue my job, what to do, that's why its me who is buying time

Dev: consult the cupid bro, you know her secretary Lily had the same prob but bro met her fianc and now she's getting married and is not leaving KC- Bhopal.

Sasha: really Maan, will you help me?

Maan; ok I will, you are an asset, we can't loose you, bring him for lunch on mmmm'. Ummm'. Let me see, day after 2moro, OK and you will not accompany him, you will not inform him that he is to meet me alone, we'll see to some last minute excuse. Ok now back to work I have seen thes files they are perfect lets move the prints drawings etc., to the conference room for 2moros presentation'

Dev: bro I'll help you why bothering delicate Sasha

Maan: ok Sasha then you may leave its almost 11:45am, and send Adi with those accounts etc,.

Dev: Sasha will you show me where the prints are

They leave and after sometime Adi enters

Dev is in the design room looks at the new printer and a new computer, Saha tells him that they have been deliovered today itself, he has never seen such a big printer

Dev: what is this OMG such big printer, its A1 size, wow

Sasha: ya Maan ordered it when he was in London, we are the first in India to have purchased it, nice na, 2moro the technician will come and tell us how to operate plus we now also have that digitally advanced audio visual (AV) machine so that we can directly make the presentations through coputer, no need for printouts' great na, but we have to wait till the technicians (Dev mesemerised) ok you drool I must leave take the prints etc., to the conference room bye

Dev: bye'. Looks for some time and then takee those bulky prints, etc., one by one to the conference room on the 8th floor. Finds VJ and Geet there asks VJ to help as there are so many prints, they both one by one bring all the material in the conf. rm, when all is done Dev winks at VJ and tells Geet that a last round of things are left they will bring them and take leave. It was ok with Geet she was sitting there admiring the new AV machine which was still packed.

Dev reaches Maan's chamber Adi was still there, points VJ to hide: hi Adi, bro I have done it are you finished

Maan: yes Dev, ok Adi you may leave, come early 2moro bye

Adi: bye good dsy to both of you

Maan: yes Dev, now we can talk, sit

Dev: bro fist go and check if every thing is their in the conf. rm. Then we can talk in peace

Maan: ok, I have to keep these files also there and lock the room. Why don't you came with me, we'll talk there itself

Dev: its ok bro until you come I'll make few calls (Maan sniles and leaves Dev sighs stands up to go to find VJ)

VJ: he gone

Dev: yes

VJ: for how long

Dev: I know bro he will be happy to see her but will be back in 10-15 mins

VJ: why

Dev: who aise hi hain

In the conference room

As Maan was moving to the conf. rm. His heartbeats were increasing he could now strongly feel her presence

Same was with Geet she too reflected his emotions, as Maan opened the conf. rm door Geet turned to face the door''' an eye lock.

Maan slowly smiled so this is what Dev wanted to talk about, thankyou Dev you made my day

Geet blushed, slowly stepped towards Maan at a safe distance stopped and greeted him

Geet: aap yahan Sunday ko

Maan: yes, preparing for 2moros presentation, how come you here

Geet: Dev and Vicky were giving me the tour of the office, don't know where they went, must be coming

Maan moving towards the prints to distract himself places the prints in there correct places

Geet: Maan, is it a AV machine, first of its kind in India

Maan: yes, you recognize it, it's still not installed

Geet: may I install it

Maan confused: you know your way to these computers

Geet: yes I've been studying computers since 4th std., also I have seen this machine at Chandigarh, there they taught us how to operate etc.

Maan was quite impressed; go ahead, I too will like to know how to operate it.

(The momentary awkwardness vanished and they talked quite easily )

Maan: wow Geet you impress me, you did iot so fast and that man said he will have to give his whole day, was using our ignorance

It were already 45 mins and neither Maan nor Geet came out

Dev was worried OMG have things gone out of hands Vicky had we done something wrong in bringing her here we both know they can't stop themselves once they start''. Both run towards conf rm.

They pause at the door slowly peep in sighed in relief but also confused ''

Dev: what they are doing with computer

VJ: do the 2 people in love behave like this instead of holding each others hand they are holding the mouse

Dev: anything can happen with thes two (annoyed kya bro itna achcha chance diya aur aap romance ki jagha yeh kar rahe ho slaps his head)

VJ: ok small B relax

Inside

Maan: thanks a ton Geet you are a genius, tell me do you know any thing about plotters

Geet: those big printers of A1 size slef cutting blades with roll on 36" sheet paper wow you have brought that too

Maan: yep its in the design room come I'll show you

Both Dev and VJ leave to get seated in Maan's cabin, Maan notices them,, turns and looks at Geet who is winding up the things.

As she comes near him he holds her hand and K***s them, cups her face and says Geet you are really intelligent thankyou for coming in my life Geet blushes, yeh aap kya kehe rahe hai, he places his finger on her lips tum janti nahin ho Geet kal se mera kya haal ho raha hai, jab tak tum yahan nahin thi theek tha par kal se tum mere itne paas ho aur kitni door ho,

places his lips on her collar bone, she sighs closes the gap between them, hold his waist coat pecks on his cheek, his subtle gave her a shivery feel, he slowly traced his hands on her back, the feel of those strong hands turned her legs into jelly, she no more was able to support her weight, he picked her up and placed her on the table, k****d her eyes one by one, she sighed, he touch dher cheeks by his, slowly tracing down, the roghness of his skin felt like heaven against her soft skin, he slowly hid his face in her hair inhaling the essence of her, he K****d her neck, she shivered, he bit her ear lobe very softly, a moan escaped her, he slowly traced his L**s to her collarbone to her shoulders, she sensed what he wanted, moved her hand in such a way that the sleeve slightly slid baring her left shoy\ulder, he quickly as if waiting K****d hard there and was loosing control, she put her hand on his head moving him closer, he bit her shoulder, she maoned wanting more, he slowly came don to her cleaveage and K****d, she lost herself, unknown wakening took over her, she felt like on the 7th cloud, he looked it her eyes fromthere saw igniting passion in them, slid her other sleeve baring her other shoulder and exposing more of her cleaveaga, unknowingly she held his hand and brought it to touch her B*****, he liked the feel slid hid hand under her neck toudhing the N***d skin, fire ran through their skins, he just wnted to tear her , she unknowing un buttoned his top button then the 2nd one, out of somewhere senses hit his mind he caught her hand K****d it, straightened her kurti, she realized what was happening, slowly climbed down the table looke din his eyes, he smiled, sighed, then hugged her tight. They slowly made their way out after gaining some composure.

Maan: now I know why they kept you at Dev's

Geet just blushed and slid her small hand in his large one.

They took the lift and went to the design room.

Maan: it's safe if we work on with machines else we start working on each other

Geet just smiled and nodded affirmatively

They discussed the plotter, installed it they were free at around 2:00 pm by the time Dev and VJ have also come both were disappointed that these 2 did not even touch each other but only talked about machine, less they know what happened after they had left.

Geet leaves first with VJ

Dev: kya bro itna achcha chance diya tha aur aapne use bhi kaam par laga liya

Maan smiles and pats on his cheek: mujhe jo chahiye tha usse jayaad mil gaya thankyou Dev you are a real angle, chale I am hungry.

They leave for CP

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