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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 19

By the time Maan opened the door Geet had almost changed, if he would have been a sec late Dev and Vicky would have broken it. Dev immediately entered the room sighed on noticing that the room was not disturbed, ran his hands over his hair, thank God nothing damageable happened, noticed her coming out of the screen partition, looked at her observing her minutely, pointed her to stop there, turned, Vicky just go and see if the kids have settled for lunch, VJ wanted to oppose but one look in Dev's eyes set him to leave.

Dev: Geet drape your duppatta properly, (she gave him with a questioning look), don't put it side ways use it to cover your (annoyed) neck and all, please listen to what I am saying. (brings water for her from the nearby jug) drink this compose yourself, Vicky and kids won't notice, but Taiji will be coming at any time, she will immediately know that things were about to get out of hand, (Geet gets embarrassed, Maan tries to say something but Dev stops him), listen Saali ji go to the adjoining guest room there take a quick shower, (smiles and whisoers) you are smelling Bro, (laughs) his cologne is all over you now go

Geet leaves not able to understand what to feel but she liked what Maan did and she also liked that she smelled him, but her Jiju was saying so she has to go, looks at Maan questioningly Maan nods, his eyes told her that she should follow Dev's instructions

As soon she was out of ear shot Dev turns to Maan,

Dev: so bro, (looks at his chest) same goes for you go and change and before you leave button up your shirt, and yes, find some ointment for Geet the love marks you have left will not go otherwise, and they are quite visible (smiles annoyingly)

(Maan buttons his sgirt and is about to leave) bro take that packet also, and don't give it to Geet, (Maan confused) bro NT will come and her family also Nt will be sharing Geet's room and if she sees it you know what will happen, one look at it and anyone can tell something happened when it was draped on (Maan looks at the saree it had the smell of his cologne and her perfume, it was badly wrinkled and the blouse was in a pityfull condition, he remembered all their doings, suddenly he realized if Dev won't have come to their rescue things would have gotten out, put his hand on his eyes, takes the saree puts all the stuff back in the packet)

Dev: bro its OK, but you only said one should not start things one can't control, Bro and please realize the fact that you loose your self control when you are alone with her, so please avoid being alone, bro precaution is always better than cure, tread slowly on the path of love, I am always at your side.

Maan hugs him and thanks him for everything; you are so nice and understanding, and leaves.

As predicted Samiksha comes to check the kids for lunch, Geet was just coming down, all showered and wet hair.

Samiksha: Geet you were having shower at this hour

Dev and VJ try to interrupt but Geet takes over smiling: auntyji I slept and when they called for lunch , I was so sleepy I thought a shower will help, so I no more am sleepy.

Samiksha smiles and Dev VJ relax : where's Maan?

Dev: does he ever take his lunch on time, may be trying his way out with new machines he brought.

Samiksha: Geet just go and call him (both bro's smile teasingly at her)

She goes to call Maan, from outside, Maan aapko aunty bola rahi hai lunch ke liye...... theek hai main aata hoan.......suno Nakul se bolo mera lunch yahin le aaye...... theek hai

Maan eats in his room while Geet with others, its better they don't face each other else their eyes will reflect every thing.

Rest of the day was uneventful as the readers are concerned, the girls had masti halla, NT once called Dev, Beeji and Darji called Geet for some help, Maan went out with Adi for some work.

9th June

Geets family arrived, already big family became bigger, as usual they settled in various rooms, Geet shared her room with NT. Other relatives also started pouring and as Geet has finished all her office work, have settled all the problems and taught the staff how to handle it, there was no need for her to go to the office.

Now Maaneet were not able to see each other, whole day went when Maan did not see her, at night he went to his balcony to get her glimpse, but she did not come, he dialed Dev's rooms extension to find where she was, Dev told him she was at his place with NT and her mother, he tried to see her but all the girls have crowded and he could only see her back which he instantly recognized, VJ patted on his shoulder, bro no use you can't meet her, sorry if you want I can ask NT bhabhi to bring her, Maan said no ways, its ok, and leaves for his room

11th June

Still no Geet to be seen, Maan was happy as today is Sunday whole of the family will have lunch and high tea and dinner together, today he can atleast see her, from 2moro onwards those shaadi functions will start, then after 15th she will leave, OMG Geet will leave God knows for how long, when he will ever see her, after 5 yrs no ways , this will not happen, I have to do something, but what can I do, Maan is irritated

At lunch Geet was always with some one or other she kept on stealing looks at him, smiled at him now and then, but they were never somewhere close, Dev was not ready to help him in any case and he instructed same for VJ.

At the high tea same scence followed by a frustating dinner. After dinner though when he was strolling in the lawn

Geet came by pulled him behind the tree, he was taken aback by her boldness, she hugged him tight unbuttoned his 1st 2 buttons and K****d his chest with hunger, he moaned, cupped her face, she pulled him and seals his L**s with hers, he never accpected that she will reflect his feeling with same energy and passion, he K****d her back with same ferocity, she loosened her kurtee to bare her shoulders, he liked her gesture and acknowledged it by tracing his L**s on them, she shivered and leaned to rest herself against the tree, she moved her kurtee in such a way that one of her B*****'s was exposed, he gasped on the sight, she guided his mouth to it, he hesistated for a sec, she insisted, he nibbled it, she shuddered, he cherished the softness, he gently rubbed his subtle on it, her softness meeting his roughness, they felt like heaven, he cupped it with his hand (it was so perfect it fitted his palm as if it were made to be cupped by it) moving back to seal her L**s, all this went on for some time,

They came to senses when they heard noises of the leaving families. He gently left her, straigthned her kurti, fastened the zip, pecked on her cheek, she smiled, teasingly said: so Maan now I have to take a shower at this hour.....he laughed: I too.

then they left first Geet then Maan after about 15 mins.
PS: sorry can't write more I am human and can't write such stuff with people ariund
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one.. luved dev n VJ for trying to help maneet...do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, part. romantic also.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update wit da nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg... awesome updates dear..
do cont soon...
thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
continue soon😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love the bonding between vj dev and maan it's too cute and awe Maaneet are too sweet together but can't be left alone or things may go out of hand anyways great update and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
dev saved them.....phew!!!
poor maaneet missing each other too badly
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
how long ll geet be in coll ?? by that time maan ll become more sadoo if she isnt there..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 20

NT grabs Geet as soon as she enters the Kothi, takes her to their room

Geet: what Di, you look worried, everything alright

NT worried traces her hand along Geet's arms, hugs her, sighs: Geet you grabbed Veerji behind the tree ( Geet giggled) I am serious, why you did so, if anybody saw (covers her eyes with her hands) girl what did you think (covers her mouth) geet you definitely have lost senses

Geet mused by her behaviour, very happy with what she did, blushing pink, her cheeks felt hot, strange tickling sensation ran through her body: Di no one saw or may be someone saw (winks) oh Di (hugs her) if I won't have intiated it now, Maan would definitely have broken here tonight (giggles) Di why you are so upset, (NT amazed by the reaction, she looked so innocent as if what she did was not wrong, NT doudted may be its her own mind that is thinking crap, NT is really confused, is she wrong or is Geet wrong) Di kya soch rahe ho, don't think so much wrinkles pad jayenge.

NT shrugs, Geet leaves to take the shower,

NT calls Dev's extension number,

And tells him what she witnessed and was surprised to know that he had already caught them in worse condition,

NT held her head; he said that if things got futher then he will talk to Maan's mother about getting the 2 tied up sooner,

He also asked NT if she mind her younger sis getting married be4 her,

NT said no moreover she would be pleased that Maan marries be4 Dev,

He says he will then definatly talk if things became more complicated,

He feared that once Geet went to Bhopal, ...., Maan would also be there as he works 4 days from Bhopal and 3 days from Delhi

Any time any thing will go wrong as until now he was convinced that it was Maan who was the culprit but after 2days incident he knows that the 2 are partners in crime,

The logs have already been placed just waiting for the match stick to set fire.

12th Sagan (Monday) (Swaraj Kothi, Dev's place)

13th mehandi (Tuesday) (Singh Villa VJ's place)

14th sangeet (Wednesday) (Khurana Mansion Maan's place)

15th shaadi (Thursday) (the campus)

All the ceremonies were very tedious after all 3 girls are to be married; there was a hell lot of confusion, the Sagan ceremony went well though with a lot of confusion like whose mamaji will do the milni whose mamiji will bring the sweets, which clothes are to be given to whom so on and so forth Indian marriages are a big deal and then 3 marriages not less then a disaster though a sweet one.

The mehendi ceremony was at Vj's, all around the Villa one could see girls in different colors and attires applying Mehendi on their palms, their also confusion like which mehendi came from Kripa's , which one is from Prerna's and Muskan's,{ the girl applys the mehendi sent from the boys house}

In all this confusion Prerna's Mehendi applied hands accidentally touched Geet's hand when she was waiting for her turn the whole print of Prerna's mehendi could be seen on Geet's and surprisingly Prerna's print remained undamaged

The Mw said, this is a good sign, and also said that Geet will very soon be married to someone close to Prena.

All ladies of the family were dumb struck as Maan's and Geet's future alliance has not been known to any one but the family.

NT sighed and thought Dev you are right you should talk soon, even fate wants them to be married sooner

At midnight Geet sneaked in Maan's room every one was at VJ's, Maan was bored so came back to take rest when she saw him leaving waited for some time and came.

Maan: tu yahan, please leave if Dev or VJ saw you here they will definateky kill me, (she giggled and moved her head in a big nooo)

Geet: look at my mehendi, you know and narrates the whole incident, the mehendi had dried and was showing a dark color

Maan took her hand and kissed it, she smiled, he was surprised to notice that she did not blush, she just looked at him, her eyes were smiling, he stood up and went near the window, she came and stood near him leaning her head on his arm, he placed his hand on her waist, none of them spoke, the time seemed to have stopped

At the Villa NT noticed that Geet was missing, she searched for Maan he was also not there, she looked for Dev or VJ, found Dev and pointed him to come,

she told that the 2 are not here, he said he knew, VJ has gone to see will be back soon, just VJ enterd, Dev raised his brow ,

NT promptly asked him, he said not to worry, come I'll show you what they are doing, the 3 saw them standing by Maan's window looking at the stars as if counting them,

VJ: shall I call them

Dev: no its OK 2 nyt nothings gonna happen, both look content and happy, she will be here,...., in I say about 15 mins

NT: how can you be so sure

Dev: I know bro, and begum sahiba I know Geet better than you, these 3 wks have taught me a lot about her

NT blushed on hearing begum sahiba: you may be rite

The 3 leave and as Dev predicted Geet came back in 15 mins, NT and VJ were amazed how rite Dev was

At the Khurana Mansion

Sangeet ceremony was quite hillarious it was nothing like movies boys were given equal opportunities to dance as were girls (no boy zone , silly, happens only in movies)

Archana- Manav danced on the "Ab Chahe Maa Roothe Ya Baba"

Aarohi ' Arjun danced on the" Teri Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi"

Parineeta ' Rishab "Le Jayenge Le Jayenge"

NT ' Dev "Shayad Meri Shaadi "

VJ - Maan "Wha wha ramji "

Geet "Hothon pe aisi baat"

Kripa, Prena, Muskan- "Yeh galiyan yeh chaubara"

group dance on "ek do teen " (tezaab)

Rest ladies danced on the folk songs. It was very late till the function finished all were tired every one scattered and slept where they could find place to, NT way tired rolled on her Maa's lap, Dev and VJ dropped themselves on the sofa, Geet lied on the sattee with the six kids, Maan dropped on the carpet near his Maa and sisters, and so on,

At about 2am Maan woke and walked to the kitchen for water on his return he saw Geet sleeping with the kids, he went near her observed every one was sleeping picked her up, she slightly moved and then feeling him cuddled into his lap, he smiled and took her to his room, he made it a point not to lock the door, he promised Dev he will not start what he cannot stop,

he laid her on the couch instead of the bed, bed would be very tempting, she slowly opened her eyes, he was moving away after placing her there, she grabbed his hand pretending to be fast asleep,

he turned and looked at her, sat by her side, after some time he was not able to resist the temptation, traced his free hand on her cheek, she smiled and opened her eyes,

Geet: Aap mujhe yahan porceline ki doll ki tarah place kare ke kahan jaa rahe the, aur if you had to leave, why bring me here?, meri neend bhi kharaab ki aur kuch karte bhi nahin

Maan: tum naa bahut naughty ho gayi ho, yahan sab sochte hain main control loose karta hoan, kisi ko kya pata tum kya karti hoan.

Geet: should I tell them (evil smile) {OMG she is too much}

Maan: if you will give me that look then what ever will happen, will be your own fault

Geet: no fault just pleasure, do you remember I'll leave the day after 2moro.

Maan: yes how can I not,

Geet: why don't you stop me (he shrugs) hum shaadi kar le

Maan: what, and your studies, madam abhi tum shaadi ke liye kaha rahi ho, phir 10-15 saal ke baad mujhe galiyan dogi ki meri vajah se tum pad nahin saki, na baba, I won't take the risk baad me joote khane se achcha hai abhi wait kar loon.

Geet: nahin marongi joote, (thinks hard) ok if you don't want, I just realised I have not known any guy other then you, so may be during these years I may find someone better , you never know (ab main dekhti hoan what you will say)

Maan surprised or rather shocked: is this possible Geet? noways you can find someone better then me

Geet: soch lo Maan phir mat kehna I did not warn you (pulls him and seals his L**s), you are giving me a lot of experience, it will come to my aid, (he smirks, holds her K***s her passionately, she smiles, pushes him back) what this, you want me, but you don't need me ha, when I leave I wonder are there many girls waiting for a chance, so you won't miss all this, (he wonders is she drunk or what) yes I am drunk, lust is stronger then any alcohol, Maan tell me you will miss me, look at me (he just buried his face in her hair)

She pulled him to her, rested his body on hers,now he laid on her, his chest touching hers, she bit him hard on his neck, he K****d her L**s, passionately, the K***s were hard and hungry, they were hot and demanding, she responded with equal pace returned an eye for an eye,

They would have continued but a knock brought them to reality, this time it was not Dev but VJ, he sighed, Geet I am waiting outside, if you are not here in 2 mins I'll come in.

Maan: she's not coming and if you want you can come in

VJ: ok, (he comes in slowly by the time Geet sits on the couch and Maan on the bed) what is she doing here bro, last I remember she was sleeping in the lobby with kids

Geet: Vicky don't you know the answer (winks and giggles, embarrassing Maan, VJ fumes, kya Dev bhai mujhe bhej diya) ok guys don't fume else you'll set this place to fire, I think I should leave, Vicky turn back I want to talk to your bro for a min (VJ nods a big no, Maan's confused this gal is becoming bolder day by day) ok but don't say that I did not warn you, (VJ turns immediately, she giggles, comes near Maan) good night Maan and you better dream about me if any gal comes near you even in your dreams she's dead (winks) ok leave the family ladies, (tiptoes and K****s him hard on his L**s, Maan surprised does not know how to react, sighs and gently puts her away and)says sweet dreams and that dream part applies for you also,

Geet: but I never dream about girls (LOL) (Maan shuts his eyes, moves his hand in his hair then presses the back of his neck and says OMG, yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi, yaa shaayad mein pagal ho chukka hoan)

Geet leaves. Leaving behind a confused and surprised Maan, he thinks will she really leave him for someone else, should we marry as soon as possible, but what about her studies , oh she has just confused me, she has become a wicked fairy from a sweet fairy The thought of anyone else in her life made him uneasy.

Precap: 2moro is shaadi then she will have to leave delhi, see how she plays wickedly with him and how he unknowingly makes her jealous

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago

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