Fate has it all set-(MG) FF # 1 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

so now they r together hope to see some ☺️........................

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
a small jist (read it)
hey all of you wait ....
the family have given them 1 month
may be at the end they discover that its really fantasy
I don't know if they will want to stay togather once they get to see each others temper...
oh no you alll also do'nt know how stubbarn they are and how short tempered both are....
thers are chance that Geet will change but MSK and change are 2 different things
wait till more comes...
Geet has to do a 5 yr degree course with lots of hot guys out there....
MSK being hot and back after completing his studies...the most eligible bachelor of Delhi and Bhopal
most of Geet's college staff madams and students drooling over him will make things difficult]
so just wait and read....
give suggestions if you have any
thank you its only your encouragement that motivate me to write
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Hey
love the start of ur ff
do write it down
im really looking forward


Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
hey plz don't separate them. they should be together for ever
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
loved it yaar..awsome .now onwards we can see some maannet moments
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Part 13

Geet and the other girls are serving tea and snacks' Prerna notices a cup of coffee in the tray'. Smiles and says aloud Geet main yeh coffee leloo'

Geet thik hai aap le ligiye'.

Prerna (teasingly looks at Maan ' who shrugs): are you sure

Geet; yes I will make one more no prob' (leaves to make the other cup)

Prerna taken aback by her innocence ' thinks she does not even be teased' Maan smiles at gives her a 'you can't win her' look'. Kripa smiles noticing all this tells to Savitri' all laugh on this' Prerns shrugs and gives Maan a 'jayad kush naa ho' look.

Geet gets a cup of coffee and gives it to Maan not knowing the joke moving around' quite disturbed by every ones laughing looks but shrugs' and sits to have her tea'

Prena: Geet you are drinking tea ' don't you like coffee (all the time looking at Maan)

Geet: bho I drink coffee when I have some serious work to do ' it helps me stay awake during my studies'

Prena (yeh ladki naa): but Maan prefers coffee I don't remember he ever drinks Tea

Geet: everyone has ones own taste ' its ok if he like coffee' what's the issue in this' (turns to Maan) do you mind me drinking tea '. Want me to have coffe'ha

Prena hits her head hard everyone else smiles

Maan: on prob Geet its your personal choice' I don't mind (smiles and gives her an encouraging nod)

Savitri: enough Prerna ' Geet don't mind Betaji'

Geet: why should I mind ' its rather nice ' she had a question she asked me rather then lingering on the thought for a long time' its good she is the first one to accept that there is some hope for me and Maan' (everyones taken aback' even Maan had not thought on this line)

Aarambha to Prarambha: the girl is quite sharp and yet down to earth simple'.

Prambha: I think her innocence will be her USP' she is right for Maan

Rano: Ranveer bho neighbours ko raat ki dawat ke liye kisiko personally bheja remind karane ko

Ranveer: abhi nahin Beeji ' bus bhejta hoan' are Dipendar'jaa yeh list le aur jake in sabke yahan chool ki naute {dinner where each and every member of the family has to come the guest will not have to lite their choola i.e., stove to make food} ki bol ke aa '. Aur ha zaraa Geet ko bhi le jaa ' ghar ke andar jaakar bol aaegi'

Gomati: take Kripa and Maan also with you' there are few families that are our relatives also' go Maan ' Kripa jaavo

All 4 leave ' once out of the house' Maan and Geet lag behind as both of thm are moving very slowly' feeling a little awkard by the pace of the events' in just 24 hrs they have been through a lot of emotions'.

Kripa knows Geet won't understand any sarcasm remembering the tea episode: Maan abhi sirf sochne ka chance mila hai license nahin samjhe' you better move fats before whole of the Hoshiyarpur notices it'

Maan a little embarrassed and Geet confused (many times innocence is a boon thinks Kripa) they move from house to house ' they come to Khatri's residence'raghav Khatri is a student final yr mechanical at MACT Bhopal, sees Maan and comes out running'. Extremely excited on seeing Maan'

Raghav: aap Maan Sir hai na' (Maan nods)'. I am Raghav student at Mact' Sir so nice to see you '

Dipendar: aaj NT ki sagai hai Maan ke Bro se'

Raghav: aap Handas ke rishte daar banne waale hai' wow lucky NT'(Maan nods and moves out of the house dragging Kripa as he is feeling awkward)' ( Dipendar goes to talk to elders)' Geet lucky Sameera she will have a hot hubby and a cool sister in law'

Geet: Sameera '. Who is she?

Raghav: she was with Maan in college' now a teacher there' drools for him' and you know she is the only girl MSK ever talks to at the college' even for some projects he approaches her if he needs assistance' she said she will soon be teing with him as soon as she is able to convince her parents MSK's family are not agaist Love Marriage'

( Dipendar comes ' Geet has gone blank) They take leave

Geet; Bhai sab ho gaya ab hum ghar chale mujhe taiyaar bhi hana hai (Sameera' tabhi Maan bahar chale gaye kahi uski baat kripa Di ke samaane na aajaye)

She searches for Maan as soon as she is back ' finds him standing by the window near the stairway' holds his wrist and drags him to the terrace (no one was near by only VJ who keps quite just smiles) once on the terrace'

Geet: who is this Sameera'. Your GF'. Fianc '. Who'.

Maan: (shrugs) look Geet there is nothing like that ' she's just a friend'. Nothing else

' believe me Geet'why you always fail to trust me'

Geet: every one is right how much do we know each other'. That Sameera girl telling everyone in the college that your parents have no objection it is her parents objecting else both you would have been a married couple by now' (very angry)

Maan: look geet I don't give a penny to what others think I only bother about what my close ones think'. What you feel matters to me' I am telling you I am all yours' this is only from Sameera's side'

Geet: you never seem to have contradicted her ' tell me' did you evr say anything when others ask you about Sameera

Maan: Geet I am a man of action I don't believe in narration '. And when I will marry you no one will again say a word about it '

Geet: that will be when we will get married' hai na' aur yeh kuch time tak nahin hone wala' aur abov all I am going to study in that college where this Madam drools over you and talks nonsense about you'. And I'll have to tolerate all that' because you will not contradict her' right

Maan: yes' you will have to because I will not say anything'

Geet tries to run away' Maan holds her waist and brings her closer '. Turn her to face him'. Runs his free hand on her cheek Geet shudders ' slowly Maan cups her face' gently movin her hair and tucking them behind her ears' traces his finger on her lower lip' Geet shivers and suddenly turns around' facing her back to Maan' he moves her hair in front looking at her back ' K*** lightly on her neck' Geet is out of breath ' slowly moves up and bits her earlobe very softly' Geet feels that her legs have turned into jelly' if Maan would not have been holding her she would have fallen down'.he hides his face in her hair taking in her aroma'.

VJ: bro'.

Both Maan and Geet jump and within sec are on the opposite corners of the terrace'.

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

ME FIRST ................ LOVELY.... VERY INNOCENT GEET.......... HOW MAAN WILL BE ABLE TO HANDLE HER...... LOVED THEM.............. LOVE HER CUTE TALK OF COFFEE AND TEA. LOVE THIS FF

Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
nice parts. loved them.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
very nice part
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
loved da update
do continue
it was amazing

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