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Semarnk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#751

loved the update cant wait for more :)

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#752

LOVED IT SWEETY . THANKS 👏AS USUAL OUR MUNDA IS SCARED FROM HIS WIFY.................... THIS GEET IS REALLY VERY SMART AND INTELLGENT. I LIKE HER....................... UPDATE OTHER FF (TELE & WCBTB) TOO SPL .TELE .........

LOVE U SHRUTI FOR ALL YOUR FFS

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kirti_fiji

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Posted: 14 years ago

#753

msk tu to gaya,

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loved the update,

egarly waiting for the next one

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ada_angel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#754

i m so happy that atlast u have updated..it was shrt n crisp n really gud ...mannn i think by the end of the function will be bowled out..hehhe

thanxs fr pm

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#755

read both parts togather

Part 52 (1/2)

During her performance there was pin drop silence in the auditorium, when she bowed ending her performance she was received by a standing obviation.

No doubt after that mind blowing performance she made her way to the finals.

The last 5 names were

girls:- Santoshi electrinocs Maharashtra, Lipi Architecture Assam, Geet Architecture Punjab, Roopsha Electrical Manipur & Madhavi computer Science Karnataka

Boys:- Sanchit Mechanical Delhi, Rajnees Jabalpur Electrical, Gaurav Computer UP, Alok Mechanical Haryana & Rohit Electronics Civil

They were asked one question and they have to write the answer on a paper in 10 mins time, the Question was "which is your recent favourite movie and why?

Alok: Dil, as it was complete entertainment package, nice star cast, romance, lovely songs, good acting, incredible dance numbers and happy ending

Gaurav: Tezab as it had Madhuri and Anil Kapoor my Favourite on scrteen pair and also the dance number ek do tin and the song so gaya yeh jahan

Rajneesh: Maine Pyar Kiya as it had Bhagya shree. Its story was very nice, the songs were really nice and it potrayed how people forget when they become rich

Rohit: QSQT, the chemistry between Aamir khan and Juhi Chawla was amazing, and the rivalry issue was so Rajputana, loved it

Sanchit: Rangeela, as it showed hoe one can be successful yet sweet, and also that true love never remaind hidden it may be over shadowed by Lust but in the end when lights are on it is love that is seen and not lust and also that when the lights go off as the shadow disappears so does lust disappear when bad times come only love remains

Girls

Geet: Rangeela a complete show down. Innovative beginning, Urmila potrayed the role of a sweet, innocent struggling actress with ease, the tapori Aamir did justice to his role. The secrets on screen and off screen well potrayed. Ram gopal Verma very nicely and naturally formed the developing emotions between the girl and a boy, their friendship their ambition their desire their sacrifice their dreams their complexes their growing class difference all were screened naturally. It touched every aspect of human nature and human relationship. The role played by Jackie Shroff was marvelous and close to reality.

Lipi: DDLJ as it showed how mush these two people love each other but still the respect they had for their elders and instead of eloping they decided to convince their parents for their marriage

Madhavi: DDLJ as it told true love finds it way

Roopsha: QSQT it showed how the true love is broken because of stupid family rivalery, how mistakes commited by earlier generations made the present generation suffer

Santoshi: Hum Saath Saath Hai as it showed family bonding, love sacrifice and that if we are not wrong nothing wrong can happen with us

So the results are to be announced, CG and G of H were invited on the stage to announce the 2 runner uos and the winner,

MSK was given the paper containing the girls name which he gave to G of H and took the boys list from her, fearing Geet's eyes.

Sam stood near MSK and her hand was resting on his arm, smile crossed Geet's face when she looked at them, Maan noticed the snile and jerked his arm moving away from Sam which she did not notice, (such a blind woman thought Geet)

MSk announced 2^nd runners up ' Alok; 1^st runners up ' Rajneesh; winner ' Sanchit

He crowned the three and backed off not daring to look at Geet's spitting eyes

G of H announced 2^nd R up- Santoshi; 1^st R up- Lipi; winner- Geet

He shot a look at her and smiled and she just narrowed her eyes as if she will eat him alive then she smiled innocently at others (what a great actress she is thought Maan)

After the crowning the photos were taken and then after vote of thanks dinner was announced.

Sam called Geet; hey Geet you should say hello to MSk after all 2moro onwards he will be your boss

G: of course mam, as you say

S: come, come with me

G (self thought) (he and my boss, poor woman trying her luck on a married man and that too the one who is madly in love with his wife)

Sam tapped Maan's shoulder

M: yes Sameera (he looked at Sam and then noticed Geet standing with her to his horror she had an evil smile which only he can recognize)

G: hello sir (she joined her hands in a Namaste ignoring his extended hand)

M: hi, BTW congratulations

G: thank you sir,

M (trying to talk normally): your performance was breathtaking, you are the master in violin (bit his tongue, yeh maine kya keh diya master ab tu gaya Maan)

G: thank you sir, but I am not master in this I am master ion something else, you know my mastery here was not flawless

M (oh God why? why me? why my wife? Why?): it did not seem to have any flaw

G: many flaws (emphasizing on flaws) are recognized by one but the other half pretend that they does not exsist

M (read between the lines and closed his eyes in disappointment, can I ever win her?) maybe, and your answers they were amazing

G: not my thoughts Sir, some one told me about that aspect of the movie.

M (defeated): Sam your student is quite witty, and you know she is to join KC from 2moro

S: yes, I know, I am proud of her, she discussed it with me before going to you

M: discussed with you (stunned)

G (satisfied with the reaction): mam, not discussed, mam I took

your PERMISSION, to join.

S: oh yes, you know Maan she was so nervous was quite afraid

G: yes sir I was very afraid (said innocently)

M (afraid aur yeh mujhse aur mere bhaiyo se pucho who is afraid of whom); why were you afraid?

S: oh! Maan, don't make her feel uneasy, she's already confused, come lets have dinner

Maan thanked his stars (aaj ke liya itna toture kafi hai pata nahin kal yeh kya karegi)

G: I will take your leave mam, I have to join my friends, good night sir (gave him her will see you look)

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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#756

HI SHRUTI.

FINALLY ME FIRST TO REPLY. LOVED MY SELF...............................

LOVELY ............ HOPE U R UPDATING OTHERS TOO.

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: maansee

HI SHRUTI.

FINALLY ME FIRST TO REPLY. LOVED MY SELF...............................

LOVELY ............ HOPE U R UPDATING OTHERS TOO.

no dear not today

as you all asked I updated a long one but can't update any more today

will try at night or tomorow early morning