A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26

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zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

amazing update fatima plz cont soon

thx alot for the pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

wonderful update

u r an awesome writer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi
I am first :)

Fatima , 🤗🤗🤗

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Finally -read the whole one.. It was beautiful.. The way you picturised the whole scene - I felt I was there watching those wonderful moments.. Perfect scene for talking your heart out and I am sure this will sort out all issues between them.. now we can see mayur together (oops..sorry - slip of tongue) Zaid and Ada together.. You know - gradually im falling in love with these names too...Thanks to you.

Thnx a lot di ! for your comment and that too the first one...

I'll alwzys remember tht tom and jerry 😉
Yeah it sure was a perfect scene.....hope to go there once :)

yeah hopefully you'll see them together !!
I'm touched your falling in love with these names too...despite being a mayur fan and also reading my story :)

but you know this ff is gonna end soon :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: ruchimayur
nivviiii diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....!!!!
shiii i thought i am first

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U are amaziin !!!...

Ur words are like gems ...i mean , beads which finally become a beautiful when put together .

Ur word of expression is just flawless ...MINDBLOWIN !!!...

I am still dazed ...😳😳...and u leave me speechless everytime time .

N this update was seriously like a dream . Zaid confession and finally Ada speaking her out !!..My God !...i am speechlesss ....

Loads of loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.....!!😳😳

-Ruchi

Ah! shit your second ....but earlier than fari 😉

coming to the comment ! thnx a lot dear....😊

for your lovely comment...God dear I don't write that beautifully that you compare my writing to gems ! but still spellbound ! :)

yeah whilst writing this part I myself was so lost into it thot I was living it....it's surreal :)
so maybe....that's the reason it came out that beautifully !

-Fatima

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: fariaa70
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hi dear
mind-blowing update
awesome dear
finally zaid confessed his love
i loved each and every word said by zaid
all the words r just magical

happy to c zaid n ada together

very good update
keep it up

Thnx fari :)

Mee too I love zaid...oops I meant his words 😳

they are not yet together dear....who knows wat happens next :)
hope you like the coming parts too :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: kulsumd
hie dear

Im just speechless after reading this update...

It vz just MINDBLOWIN.

Each and every sentence r beautifull...

Wow finally both met at their secret place unknowingly...

Zaid's confession vz superb...how he finally xplained his feelings to Ada...

And it vz nyc how Ada opened up her feeling to Zaid...

U have explained both's feelings n emotions beautifully...

Ab jaldi jaldi aise hi longer update dena.

Love
Summi

hey summi,

long tym na..you didn't comment on the earlier part...but glad to see your comment here 😊

Yeah finally....they confessed...bahot kheecha na meine.... aur tumlog ko tang bhi kiya 😉
Actually I was apprehensive about zaid...I can relate to ada more well......glad to know you cud connect to them :)

longer update..???..tum toh janti ho na yeh ff khatam ho raha hai...hopefully end k jitne bhi parts hai....I'll try to make them long ....:)

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago