A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
heyyy Fatima

Awesom update.........i loved it

beautifully written

do continue soon

hey thanx a lot maria,

waise don't get to see you much now-a-days !
hope everythngs fine :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: VampirePrincess
Hey finally got time so thought to catch up with ur update!:D

Awesome n totally mindblowing!👏

Firstly i loved the whole scene, the BG was simply beautiful, as always beautiful narration coz of which i could imagine it all so well...!!Hats Off to u for tht!⭐️

It was a really nice confession, and somewhere their confession actually touched reality, it felt like u have penned down real people, real emotions..is tht so? i rlly wanna knw😊

Take care hun n do cont soon

Luv

ZJ🤗

Yeah finally you got tym...I missed you so much on this ff...meri regular reader 😊

thnx for the compliment of liking the scene....well because it's all just a fiction of my imagination....giving a chance I wud love to go to that place.... :)

I'm really glad you cud connect to them beautifully !

Hmm....confession...errmm.....I've not exactly penned down real people..but I imagined myself as ada...well I do that often as you know 😳 ....so I guess that's the main reason it came out like this :)

Well to be frank this part is also very close to me one of my most loved chaps...:)

Yep I'll continue soon....only to end it this tym....😭
you too take care dear...

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: -sam-
Read the whole in one go...

Its Beautiful...
Far beyond words...
Emotions wonderfully described.
Lovely
I loved the names too...

I dnt knw y, i didnt found this earlier....
But to read it was pleasure
U hve written it beautifully...
Keep it up!

OMG ! you really read it one go ?
waise itna bada bhi nahi hai na :)

thnx a lot dear....I'm glad you liked this ff of mine though it doesn't have the actual names mayur :)

I'm touched that you liked their names too :)

hmm....I had pm'ed you earlier maybe you didn't read it before.....
but I'm glad you read it and loved it too....

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: zarfishan1983
amazing update fatima plz cont soon

thx alot for the pm

thnx for the comment and liking it too :)

-Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: hazraluvarjun
aussum uppdate
loved it truly

thnx hazra for liking it :)

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: dua_adil
wonderful update
u r an awesome writer

thnx for liking the part...
and also thnx a lot for the compliment ! :)

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

hey thanx a lot maria,

waise don't get to see you much now-a-days !
hope everythngs fine :)

-Fatima

i m here yaar...bus thora sa studies ki wajah se kam online hoti hoon..u r really amazing writer....i loved ur ffs....waitinfg for next part.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

Yeah finally you got tym...I missed you so much on this ff...meri regular reader 😊

thnx for the compliment of liking the scene....well because it's all just a fiction of my imagination....giving a chance I wud love to go to that place.... :)

I'm really glad you cud connect to them beautifully !

Hmm....confession...errmm.....I've not exactly penned down real people..but I imagined myself as ada...well I do that often as you know 😳 ....so I guess that's the main reason it came out like this :)

Well to be frank this part is also very close to me one of my most loved chaps...:)

Yep I'll continue soon....only to end it this tym....😭
you too take care dear...

-Fatima

hey dear i took out time only for u

me too hunny, its so beautiful n peaceful i mean i cud imagine it so well....it felt like, okay i have been to peaceful places like tht....it seems like the silence sings...not the eery one, but the beautiful one, and at night, when the sky is studded with millions of stars..isnt it beautiful? its just awesome, n i got tht kind of a feeling while imagining the scenario u narrated, It was truly beautiful!❤️

see when u imagined urself as Ada then it involves real emotions only😉 I felt that the characters n the emotions r really close to reality, seems like i was right!:D

so the ff is going to end? well i wont say m sad, coz m happy finally Ada n Zaid will get a nice happily ever after, but i will definitely miss this FF, its one of the most beautiful one's i have ever read, what attracts me most to an FF r the characters n the narration, i didnt knw ada n zaid at the start but with time u have engraved these names in my mind, tht whenever i will hear these names i will surely remember ALM n this beautiful tale

Keep Rocking dear, and so wat if this is ending, u will get me a new nice FF to read na?

Lots of Luv

ZJ🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti

i m here yaar...bus thora sa studies ki wajah se kam online hoti hoon..u r really amazing writer....i loved ur ffs....waitinfg for next part.

kk...same here time hi nahi milta....and thnx a lot for your compliment dear !!

maybe the next part will be a bit late...studies n all.. hectic schedule...:)

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

NOTE:

Hey dear readers,

I'm writing this note to inform you that I'm gonna be INACTIVE till december as my exams are gonna start in some 15 days....and will go on till mid december maybe.

So I won't be able to update my FF's so please co-operate with me. I assure you guys I will continue soon after my exams, coz if I continue now I won't be giving my 100% either place :)
I might post a poem or two if I write them otherwise complete cut-off from not only IF but the whole net :)

Hope you understand and not leave me and my FF mid way.
I would have definitely continued now but my studies are lagging due to my ill health.

Expecting an understanding and healthy response.

Take care,
Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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