A Lovely Misunderstanding(Mayur FF) Updated pg 26

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-sam-

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: fariaa70

yup u r right
but i m little bit confused-here who is TOM n who is Jerry?

Main padne kya chali gayi,
U all forgot me 😭

I m so sad now..... Bechari main.....

Not fair.....

But still m leading

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: -sam-

Main padne kya chali gayi,
U all forgot me 😭

I m so sad now..... Bechari main.....

Not fair.....

But still m leading

leading??😆 Tumhare sapnon mein....

But I am glad that you were studying... So u r the winner 🤗

Happy?

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varsha

@rose.three

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

wow... ur awesome...
lovely update dear........

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

great update dear......loved the way u portrayed their feelings.............

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

I need to go through all the parts. I am glad I came across your PM, Fatima . . this seems like something really good. =]

I'll comment again as soon as I am done reading all the parts.

-Kanky

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Mariyam Ghaffar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

wowww...
Finallyyy they confessed their love to each other...
Beautiful update...
loved ittttt...

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

brilliant superp update fatima loved it thanks 4 d pm

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maria

@Maria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

heyyy Fatima

Awesom update.........i loved it

beautifully written

do continue soon

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Hey finally got time so thought to catch up with ur update!:D

Awesome n totally mindblowing!👏

Firstly i loved the whole scene, the BG was simply beautiful, as always beautiful narration coz of which i could imagine it all so well...!!Hats Off to u for tht!⭐️

It was a really nice confession, and somewhere their confession actually touched reality, it felt like u have penned down real people, real emotions..is tht so? i rlly wanna knw😊

Take care hun n do cont soon

Luv

ZJ🤗

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Read the whole in one go...

Its Beautiful...
Far beyond words...
Emotions wonderfully described.
Lovely
I loved the names too...

I dnt knw y, i didnt found this earlier....
But to read it was pleasure
U hve written it beautifully...
Keep it up!