Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 8

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@ such a romantic chapter ...................... Uffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

@ fist of all glad to know rimjhim didn't do it ......
@ ex boy was the culprit ..... thank God not from r a gang ... and Gunjan was in trouble ..😲. sweet to read sami's thoughts when he heard that ... and loved it Mayu taking nups hand and hugging her 😳....

@hospital scene was excellent ...nice touch the way the culprit was caught ....

@ and suprise suprise ....the Lawyer is the future Sala 😆.....it was funny .....😆😆 Mayu and Sami ... bicharay ... when they came to know😉😉 ...

@ but truly loved the romantic part of song ... and Mayu standing so close to Nups ... even during the party the way Mayu stared at nups when she came was very very well written 👏

@ i love romance .. and i love passion in romance u gave me both ...👏👏👏👏👏with this chapter ... thanks yaar 😉... truly enjoyed 👏Mayur in Lovvvvvvvvvve😉..... he is about to ask her hand in marriage ... Ooo... LALA😆


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pratham bhiaya haahhhaa how cute....

hey nihu luv

Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

P:haan aur ab mujhe tumhe samjhana hai..nupur..ki meri pyaari titli?. main jeet gaya?..aur tum haar gayi..main best lawyer ban gaya!!

M:TITLI????????????????? Who is tht

N:titli???tumhe yeh naam?.?? Tum??? Kahin tum????

BY GOD!!!!!!!! Pratham bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!aap??

G:pratahm bhaiya!!!!!!!!!

Gunji And nups ran to him?for sisterly hugs?leaving a shocked.mayu.wid his mouth wide open .and amused sammy behind.. Bhaiya????????? He is her brother????then for heaven sake y was he flirting!!!!!!!!????no he is faking it!! He can't be?how I eman.. cum on TITLI????

[in th room]

Nups juss went to window of th room to see th rain and slowly put th hand out to reach out to th..drops of rain?

N:tum kuch keh rahe the na???

M:haan..woh main..

N:bolo bhi?.

M:main tumse shaadi karma chahta hoon!!

Nups felt her heart skip a beat?wot did she hear???shaadi

M:mera chaand mere samne hai!!!

Nups felt shy..she turned her bck and saw mayu thorugh her dupatta..and mayu sings th song?

Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,

Nups lowered her dupatta..and saw him..

He conti

Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa HaiMadhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai, Haan Ye Sama, Haan Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai, Han Han Han Chand Chupa Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana,

Nups ran away frm him?unwantedly?and mayu followed her?he tried to hug her frm bck..buh she bent dwn and ducked him.. went ahead and looking bck teased him..showing her toungue!!

Mayu conti

M: Nazdikiyan Badh Jaane De,N: Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin,

She went behind a pillar..and said

N: Door Se Hi Tum Jee Bhar Ke Dekho,

M: Tum Hi Kaho Kaise Door Se Dekhoon

N: Chaand Ko Jaise Dekhta Chakor Hai

M:[standing in front of her] Aye, Gumsum Sa Hai, Gupchup Sa HaiMadhosh Hai,Khamosh Hai Ye Sama Kuch Aur Hai

Ho Ho Ho, Chand Chupa Badal Mein Sharma Ke Meri Jaana

N:[running to th window and singing]Aaja Re Aaja Re Chanda,

Tu Laakh Duayen Payega

Mayank quickly conti?running to th window and in th process pushed nups..unknowingly!!!!! Na Na Chanda Tu Nahin Aana , Tu Jo Aaya To,

Sanam Sharma Ke Kahin Chala Jaye Na

He turned bck to see nups pissed off?and walking away!!!..he walked behing her?then stopped her..holding her hand..then catching his ears he began to do sit ups!!!!

And nups broke into..muffled laughs!!!mayank went close to her and continued

M:Aanchal Mein Tu Chup Jaane De,N Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin, Mayank touching her long hair!!!! Conti M:Julfon Mein Tum Kho Jaane Do, N: Arre Nahin Baba Nahin, Abhi Nahin Nahin Nahin, nups continued putting her bangle clad arms around his neck!!!! Pyaar To Naam Hai, Sabra Ka Humdam, M:Woh Bhala Bolo Kaise Karen Hum, N:Sawan Ki Raah Jaise Dekhe Mor HaI!!!!!!!! And mayu kissed her on forehead!! They both went near th window nups hand wraped around his strong arms..her head leaning on his shoulder..and mayu singing..Chand Chupa Badal Mein, Sharma Ke Meri Jaana ,Seene Se Lag Ja Tu, Bal kha Ke Meri Jaana, Then quietly nups askedN:hmm mayu abhi tak..yeh..moon kyun nhai dikha?? M:[smiling] bcoz its no moon day today!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awww....what a lovely update....mayur were mindblowing today.....i especially loved the way you ended it.....no moon day...lols....that was too cute for words to describe....will definately miss you lots and your writing style....looking forward for you new fan fic.....dont forget to PM me as i will be more than interested to read it....all the best and good luck.

*faints* hayeeeeeeeeeeeeee nihu di main sadke jaavan!!!! yeh Mayu bhi NA....*blush* sooooooooo sweeeettt.........and last line ne tho mujhe maar hi diya...."its no moon today".....cud u get more perfect................LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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arpita

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!OMG!

Hi my dear romance ki rani!!!🤗
awesome update sweets .. absolutely fantastic!! The Mayur scene was mind blowing.. 😍 it had me shivering for god sake!!! ☺️
n pratham bhaiya!!! lolzzz.. .. omg omg omg.. poor Mayu he was so jealous of Pratham and Pratham turned to be Gunpur's brother.. hahahahaa
Ur simply amazing! keep up teh great work and please update soon👍🏼
Also, ek request jhe darling , pls pls pls PM me the link of the new FF u plan to start.

luv ya,
Himi

PS : btw, after reading the super hot update i was almost gonna faint.. Mayu is just cutest... ** sigh** ❤️❤️❤️