Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Knowalot2

Gunjan's fasting!! aww so sweet of her....han she is weeto..muahxxxxx

and lol the Mayur scene😳....i wish this was 4 real, and the Taj Mahal dialogue-loved it😃awwwwwwwww..thankooooosssssssssss ji

thanks 4 pming me Nihu- ur update ROCKS👏👏👏awwwwwwww....luv ya janu!!


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Originally posted by: TINAMALHONTRA

HEY NIHU!!! hiiiiiiiiiii tina
AB KYA MUJHE YEH KEHNA PADEGA KI HOW WAS UR UPDATEhehheheh haan..i luv ur commments
MERE PAAS DICTIONARY MAIN AUR KOI WORDS BACHE HI NAHI HAI!!!awwwwwwwwwwwww
OK SUMMARIZE KAROON TOH
AWESOME, MINDBLOWING, GR8, SUPERB....ETC ETC SEE NO WORDS LEFT*HUGS* januuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
BUT I MUST SAY SORRY MAYUR AND SAJAN FANS awwwwwwwwwwwwwww?????
AAJ TOH MUJHE BENJI AUR RIMJHIM
HI SABSE ZYAADA PASAND AAYA.....hehehhhehhehhehe
BUT AS I AM A LITTLE BIASED TO BOTH THE
COUPLES MAYUR ROCKED YAAR..LOLZZZZZZZZZMAYANK KA PROTECTIVENESS,
USKA "CUCHIKOO", AND HUMAARI NUPUR TOH FOREVER QUEEN HAI!! glad u like dit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AND SAMRAT HUMARA NAYA SRK hehhehhehehheh
APNI CHASHMISH KE LIYE VVAKT BADAL SAKTA HAI
BUT AB SUSPENSE KHOL HI DO haan next part is last..frm me!!!!
I WANT TO KNOW KI YEH MURDERER HAI KAUN!!
JIS NE HUMARE BECHAARE COUPLES KO PARESHAANI MAIN DAAL DIYA
WAITING FOR UR UPDATE....PM ZAROOR KARNA LIKE U DID FOR THIS ONE
LOTS AND LOTS AND EVEN MORE
LOVESAME TO U SWEETY
TINA😊

Originally posted by: kinnari2295

heyyyy

mindblowing part.

loved it.

pls continue soon.

pls pm me if possible.

luv

kinnari.

Originally posted by: cuppycake990

NIHU SWEETY............AISha janu.youre fab.....awwwwwwww u tooo.like ur FF....thankooooooossss awesome job...coochikoo......😉hehehhehhehehhe

Originally posted by: Senny

hey nihu, sorry i have been quite busy, but your updates and the benji's case, everything has been just amazingggggggggggg, you know how to do wonders with a pen, like words for that matter. this part was just fanstastic, i am simply hooked to your ff and my interest in it has kept on increasing and increasing, you know how to carry your readers together and connect a chord with our hearts, you again and again have impressed me, made me laugh, smile , cry and jump with joy, your ff is a true reflection of life, hats off to you for being able to make us feel like that. Excellent work, keep it up jan.

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx aton senny janu

ur wrds always inspire me a lot....a hugs frm me to u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

their besutiful moment didn't last longer?.as adoc enterd wearing a mask on his mouth and asked benji to go out..as it was time for her check up!!benji sweetly kissed rimjhim on her forehead and went out..only to find mayu and sammy talking wid police..

B:hey dude yeh kya ho raha hai??police??again??

S:benji darr mat yaar..they for rimjhim's protection!!!humne tujhe who ad wali baat boli thi na..for elora..us AD main..hospital ka naam aur..room no?hum ne rimjhim ka diya hai!!!for extra measures u see!!!aur rimjhim ko koi probs na ho..isliye yeh police

M:par tum inti jaldi mil ke agaye rimjhim se!!! kya hua???

B:aha..nthing.koi doc aya check up ke liye..toh I came out!!!

Sammy and mayu looked at each in horror?bcoz it was luch break in hospital..and doc had juss cheked rimjhim b4 thye cmae?so now no check wwas there tht means

S:mayank chal..

Both ran in to th room to find th so called doc..trying to jump frm window and runaway?mayank got hold of his leg and pulled him forecfully and as soon as he fell inside th room on floor sammy punched him hard on his face thrice..

Benji ran to rimjhim whoes oxygen mask was nt in its place..he quickly..put it abck and screamed for doc?.th culprit was then taken to police ?.fro investigation?

Next day in court?..

P:UR honour?.well as we all can see th murderer of ELORA is here?name:dinesh?.elora's EX-boyfrnd and he himself has confessed he killd her?..Dinesh can u tell us agin y u did so??

D:She was a B****?.yes..she was?using boyz for her needs..yeh toh uski hobby thi?.apne luxury ke liye..she use to use boyz?spend al their money..on her drugs and drinks..and then leave them?.she used me too..spoilt my life..she did nt deserved to be alive?

P:then y tht day..i mean in excel coll..u could hv killed her anyway!!!

D:aha..tht?A******..she had calld me there?she wanted to break a couple and trap th boy for her needs again?she wanted me to kill th buyz GIRLFRND?.she had askd me to do it?so I killd her..killed her.HHAHAHAAAAAA?killd her..she was crying wen I shot her?.BL**** B****?..begging?dn't kill me..ARRRGH?I shot 3 times in her body HAHHAAAAAAAAAAAAA

P:who was th couple she wanted to break?I eman tht gal??

D:hmmm?oh..sum gunjan bhusan!!

SAMMY felt his heart stop beating..kill her..gunjan?she wanted to kill gunjan..if Dinesh had nt killd elora..then today my chasmish would..be DE?.noooooooooooo?and a tear rolled dwn his cheek..he slowly looked at gunji..who was equally shocked..here..mayank quickly grabbed nups hand and put his other hand around her gvng her a warm hug..a hug of dn't worry

P:tht's it ur honour?.i rest my argument!!!!

J:th testimony of DInesh confirms Benjamin is nt guilty hence he is free?and DInesh gets a punishment..of death to be hanged till death!!! Case dismiss!!!

Benji ,sammy,gunji,mayu,nups,all gave each other big group hug?..wen they turned around to wish pratham..he was nt there pratham was w8ng for them in th entrance ?.they joined him there

P:so guyzzzzzzz?.am done wid my job!! Ab toh mante ho na..am best??

S:haan?koi shaq nahi hia!!!!!!!!!!!

P:aur tumhe..lady??[looking at nups]

M:usse bhi..hain na nupur!!

N:hmm haan?!!by god!!!..woh?jab tumne

M:aree who samjh gaya nupur?

P:haan aur ab mujhe tumhe samjhana hai..nupur..ki meri pyaari titli?. main jeet gaya?..aur tum haar gayi..main best lawyer ban gaya!!

M:TITLI????????????????? Who is tht

N:titli???tumhe yeh naam?.?? Tum??? Kahin tum????

BY GOD!!!!!!!! Pratham bhaiya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!aap??

G:pratahm bhaiya!!!!!!!!!

Gunji And nups ran to him?for sisterly hugs?leaving a shocked.mayu.wid his mouth wide open .and amused sammy behind.. Bhaiya????????? He is her brother????then for heaven sake y was he flirting!!!!!!!!????no he is faking it!! He can't be?how I eman.. cum on TITLI????

P:meri titli?apne bhai ko nahi pehna payi..haan main saga tohri na hoon?

N:nahi bhaiya..aapp..aisa mat sochiye..hum aap ko humesha yaad karte the..kyun gunjan??

G:haan di..bhaiya..di ne apko bhaut miss kiya!!!aap morena se kya gaye bhul gaye humko!!!

P nahi pagli..gunjan?tum dono toh meri jaan ho?kitna dunda tum sab ko par?chodo .jab tumlog office aye the na tabhi bolne wala tha..par inn handsum hunks ko dekh kar..socha chalo test karu..meri behno ki choice kaisi hai!!!!

Gujan ka toh..pata hia?she'll neva go wrong in Judgeing ppl?..so sammy ka tension nahi tha..par Titli ke saath mayank ko dekh kar..main tora pareshan hogaya..i mean..mayank itna chup chup aur yeh?.bak bak bak bak?

Titli ka rajkumar..ka image bahut alag tha..aur mayank?toh isliye..yeh sab kiya?

S:cool dude..humhe toh pata hi nahi chala

M:oh..toh mian tumhare test main pass hua ya nahi??

P:pass..tum 1^st agaye..tumse jyada..nupur ko koi pyaar nhai kar sakta?.am so haapy for all of u!!!!..aur kabhi bhi tumhare love ke fight karna hai..mummy ya daddy ko razi karna hai !!!toh MAIN HOON NA!!!

N:awww..aap ko yaad ahi..ki SRK?ke liye pagal hoon

P:bilkul?mujhe yaad hai tum pagal hoo ??.tabhi toh mujhe mayank pe garv hai?woh tumhe handle jo karta hai..kyun mayank??

M:100%....

N:kya???mayank!!!!! bhaiya!!!!!!

P:oh cum on!!!!!...toh?tum sab ne..apne apne families ko batadiya?apane luv ke bare main?.hun!!!!..am sure kisine nahi toh mayank ne toh bola hoga!!!kyun??

M[gulping dwn his saliva]..arr?who?mmm?main who?.batane wala hoon?actually..yeh sab ke gadbad main?mian ..

P:tik hia..yaar..itne tension wali koi baat nahi?.bata dena?

Ab chalo shaam ko ghar aan sab.party hai..aur haan[he took out sum parcels frm his car]

Yeh?tum sab ke liye gifts..samrat,gunjan,mayank,nupur

Yeh dresses meri behnoo ke liye aur suits tum handsum hunks ke liye..for wining my test.. party main pehn ke ana?.jarur!!!! chalo see ya then byeeeee

[eevng party time]

it was a beautiful venue?.th party was orgainised in th lawn outside pratahm's bunglow?.very few ppl were invited..mostly frm his office?nupur and gunjan were upstairs getting ready?.or rather gvng final touch to their dressing..till mayank and sammy came?.

A little while later mayank reached there along wid sammy

mayank was.looking smashing hot in white jacket and white V-neck t-shirt..wid blue jeans?.and SAMMy was looking dashing in..black suit..

M:wah!!! Venue hai!!! Nice one..par mujhe informals aur tumhe formals kyun??hun samy??

S:kya pata!!!! I guess its matching to our gals!!! Par who dono hai kahan!!????

And juss then they heard sum buzzing as nups and gunji arrived.? gunji was lookin a doll..in black and white saree and nups was....she was looking a diva?she was wearing a off shoulder SHARARA ?in complete chic white?colour..th corset and th long flowing lehanga ?..was juss enhancing her beauty?. Slowly mayu turned around and his eyes captured the most beautiful vision ever.. There she stood, gazing at him with her big dove eyes..smiling and signing wid her eys to ask hw was she looking?.par mayu was..nt in condition to ans? he was so engrossed and mesmerized by her exquisiteness that he didn't pay heed to the questions she was asking..

N:mayank..bolo na??mayank..arggh mayu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M:haan..kya?tumne kuch bola??

N:[stamped her foot]nahi?hato?main vahan ja rahi hoon gunjan ke pass

M:aree nupur meri baat toh suno..mian?

N:hiiiiiii samrat..wowwwww kya handsum lag rahe hoo!!!

S:thanx nupur!!tum bhi kuch kam beautiful nahi lag rahi?par?.haan chashmish se zyaada nahi?

G:samrat!!!!..nahi DI ap bahut achi lag rahi ho!!!..aur mayank..tum bhi ache lag rahe..ho..

S:haan?he's looking cool

N:acha?main toh notice hi nahi kiya!!![she glared at mayu and went ahead to th poolside]

Mayank ran behind her?calling her..

M:nupur!!!!!!!! Nupur..meri baat toh suno?.nupur[he caught her hand frm behind..buh nups didn't turn around she simply stood there]

M:nupur?am sorry mian..tumhe bolna bhul gaya..ki tum achi lag rahi ho..kyun main tumhe dekh kar sab bhul jata hoon..aur jab tum itni khoobsurat lagti hoo toh?I juss can't take my eyes off you

Nups slowly turned around?and looked at him

N:sachi??

M:muchi!!!!!

And they both laughed?..

N:tum bhi na?.

M:hmm ab bolo main kaisa lag raha hoon?

N:ek dum?.OSO..ke SRK?par interval ke baad wala hun!!!!!!!!

M:[smiling ]..SRK!!!!!!!!!?..tum aur tumhara SRK!!! Chalo ab..lawn mian jate hain?

Th evng juss paseed away in..a bliss?sajan,mayur and partham chatting their heart out?.nups telling pratham hw she fell for mayu?.and sammy telling tht how gunji is his life?..and he can't afford to loose her!!!!

Soon it was time to return home bck..samrat..took gunji on his bike..while mayu said he'll drop nups in auto?.on his way home?.

Par..it was almost impossible to get an auto..at ths late in night?.buh neither of them was complaining 4 tht. it was wonderful to walk under th moonlight..wid th love of ur life?and ofcource..wid th constant..blabbering of nups how would mayu get bored..he was luving it..bocz she was looking too cute?th sparkle in those big dove eyes?th glow on her face..he did nt wanted to stop her? Life without her did not seem to be life at all. And then those wrds of pratham kept ringing in his ears? he should tell his mom abt her..abt his luv..tht he wanted to b wid her his entire life..own her..marry her !!!!!!!!!!!!!yes!!!!!!! Marry her!!!!!!!!!!!!!Suddenly, he can't wait to get married to her.he caught her hand suddenly

N:hun..mayu?kya hua??

M:nupur main..mian?.tumse.

N:mujhse??kya???

M:main tumse?[and suddenly it started drizzling?.]

N:awww mayu meri dress kuch karo na?plz?kharab hojayigi?

M:main kya??..acha chalo?wahan kuch ghar jaisa nazar aa raha hai.

Within a min th intensity of rain began to grow..os much so tht..it was impossible for them to see ahead..still..sum how they managed to get near th house ?.probably th only one situated on th road!!!

Mayu sum hw got permission frm th lady who was lving in it..to occupy th room behind?th house?till th rain stopss?

[in th room]

Nups juss went to window of th room to see th rain and slowly put th hand out to reach out to th..drops of rain?

N:tum kuch keh rahe the na???

M:haan..woh main..

N:bolo bhi?.

M:main tumse shaadi karma chahta hoon!!

Nups felt her heart skip a beat?wot did she hear???shaadi

She slowly turned around and saw him..he was there..looking straight in her eys..no question of joiking?.he was dam serious

N:mayank tum??

M:[keeping his finger on her lips]shhhh?main janta hon wot am saying?.

N:itni jaldi??? Hum abhi bhi coll main hain!!

M:ufff nupur ..wen am I saying..ki kal hi shaadi karte hain?am saying?ki kames kam maa ko batate hian..atleast?she should knw..we luv each other

N:haan auntyji ko bola hi nahi?..tik hai kal bole?ya phir abhi..mayu..kaise bolenge..haan..tum shuru karma..aur..amain kahongi..[she suddenly went numb?as she realized mayank was very close to her she could feel his breath..on her face..and his eys fixed upon her mapping up each and every detail. Her eyes lowered a bit as she was right in front of him. Gathering up courage, she lifted her gaze and met him eye to eye. His unrefined gaze made her heart do summersaults. She felt a blush creeping up her neck. She the strong wind made few strands of her hair coverd her face..mayank gently put them behind her ears.wid his fingers?..touching her cheeks while dng so..nups wnet all red..she ddin't knw wot to do?she was hivering wid cold..as she was wet!!!!mayu came more close..evn more..she thought he might?kiss her..buh no..he took her dupatta and putting it frm her head he covered her properly?.

M:yeh aise hi rakhna..toh thand nahi lagegi?

N:mayank..tumhari yehi baat muhe sabse zyada pasand hai!!!..

M:[confussed]kaunsi??

N:kuch nahi..chale ghar..barish thoid kam huiee hai!!!

M:kuch aur der rukte hain plzzzzzz?

N:hmm kab tak?barish phir badgayi toh??

M:hmm todhi der..jab tak..chaand an dikhayi de!!!!

N:oh?itnsi si bat..w8..juss now u'll see UR moon?

M:mera chaand mere samne hai!!!

Nups felt shy..she turned her bck and saw mayu thorugh her dupatta..and mayu sings th song?

Nups lowered her dupatta..and saw him..

He conti

Nups ran away frm him?unwantedly?and mayu followed her?he tried to hug her frm bck..buh she bent dwn and ducked him.. went ahead and looking bck teased him..showing her toungue!!

Mayu conti

She went behind a pillar..and said

N: Door Se Hi Tum Jee Bhar Ke Dekho,

M: Tum Hi Kaho Kaise Door Se Dekhoon

N: Chaand Ko Jaise Dekhta Chakor Hai

Ho Ho Ho, Chand Chupa Badal Mein Sharma Ke Meri Jaana

Tu Laakh Duayen Payega

Sanam Sharma Ke Kahin Chala Jaye Na

He turned bck to see nups pissed off?and walking away!!!..he walked behing her?then stopped her..holding her hand..then catching his ears he began to do sit ups!!!!

And nups broke into..muffled laughs!!!mayank went close to her and continued