Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

nihu meri jaan ruchi janu....wat an update masakalli 👏thankooooooooooos masakali..janu!! ''taj mahal toh mera hai..'' haila this line killed me.. HAIN!!! na...i really luved it..while i was thinking so thought i'll include it...😳

mayank-nupur scnes were out-of-the-world yaar...tooo goodthankooos janu it were spl for u..u luv them na!!!!

mayank getting jealous and nupur trying to express her love awesumly done😳ur words are now killing me....

coochikoo...😉..i love dng this..me toooo

pratham line maar raha hai nupur par...heheheee..mayank wuld be like ''tujhe cheer dunga'' [remember chiru ke liye dialogue]yaaa..u knw tht was arjun ka self improvisation..guatam told me!!!

aww...pratham has brains yaar he has to kyun woh next updt main pata chalega!!!...ACTUALLY YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER WITH INNOVATIVE IDEAS ⭐️awwwwwwww !!*HUG* janu tu bhi hia..mast mast likhti hai...

the idea was flawless...i loved it jaani*BLUSHING*

and rimjhim , gunjan keeping fast for benji was really ssweet ...loved that part

mayank ko toh bahana chaheye nupur ko uthane kahehehhehehhe...sam ne gunjan ko uthaya toh mayank ne nupur ko utha liya....by god !!!!!!...by god!!!!!

over-all awesum job...fantabulousthankooooooooossssssssssssssssssssssss

and i got my treat ...''YAYYYYYYYYYYYY''

luv u masakalli luv u too janu..miss u!!!

Originally posted by: SanaSarwar

N:nahi..i didn't knw tht..mujhe sirf itna pata hia..ki ..U LUV ME..more than I do'...👏( so so sweet yaar ...)👏thankooooosssssss

@ and nup dialogues about Taj Mahal that she only belongs to Mayu .... Kya Baat hai nihu ..😛😛👏thankoos again actually jab imagne kiya..toh pata nahi tha..u all will like it!!!

@ P:nahi yaar..itne cute ladki kare toh kisi ladke koi probs nahi hoga!!... this guy have some nerves Mayu will kill him no he won't kyun??next updt..read karna!!!

@ nupur mera pyaar' nihu .... Just imagine Mayu saying this to some one at excel may be Rv ... or someone ... that will be r day 😉yaaaaaa man i wnat him to say tht..i dn't like th word..GIRLFRND and BOYFRND..no menaings at all nowdayzz..mera pyaar is sumthing..pure..and true!!!!!

@nihu great mystery writer ...👏.. so they will give ad she is alive ... nice idea...hehehe thankoooos

@ gunajn fasting for frnd was sweet of her 😛like u!!!!true frnd!!


@ yaar i hope Rhimjhim doesn't' end up in jail 😭😭😭...nooooooo she's nt th one.... she was truly worried sick for benji and after the court scene ......when he vist her at hospital was very very touching 👏next toh mayur ka dhasu hoga....

👏👏👏 nihu this chapter was like some film partawwwww ur words killing me .... very well portrayed my feelings and tears r with Rhimi darling oooooooo so sweet..sana

awww...wt a great update!...benji is finally released......my favorite part was the benjim scene....they were so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the song was the perfect choice...especially those lines...they matched the situtation perfectly.

Originally posted by: ILuvArjun

Mayur and sajan at pratham's place]

M:kahan hia yeh pagal..humko bula ke..phir gaya hogaya..

N:mayu!!shant raho'aa jayega..

M:tum usko defend karma band karo..u knw I hate him..

N:nahi..i didn't knw tht..mujhe sirf itna pata hia..ki ..U LUV ME..more than I do'.

M:[awestruck].nupur tum'

N:mayu!!! Koi taj mahal ke samne photo khiche toh.taj mahal.unka thodi..hojata hia..it'll always blong to fro whom it was made'PRATHAM???woh kya'koi bhi mere saath flirt kare..tab bhi'main sirf tumse pyaar karti hoon..aur humesha karungi..koi bhi takat..mujhe tum se alag nahi kar sakti..

M:[juss admiring her luv fro him which was clearly seen in her big dove eyes..]

N:acha acha..ab mujhe ghur na band karo'

M:kyun??yeh taj mahal toh mera hai!!

LOVE this Taj Mahal dialougue👏👏👏

N:hmm..par tum aise dekhte ho..na toh..toh..toh..

M[getting close to her ears]toh'

omg omg omg *faints*😆

N:[shying]..mera band baj jata hai..[giggling]

M:kya????band'nupur I thought u'll say..u feel shy..

🤣go Nupur!!

N:who sab ladkiyan kehti hai'par mian nupur hoon..and I luv teasing u'ths expression of urs'I just luv it coohicoo[pulling his cheeks]

exaclty Nups 😆

P[entering th living room and seeing mayur].hmmm'so mayank bete ko'coohicoo pasand hai..kyun???

M{turning to his voice and starring him]..kyun tumhe probs hai??

P:nahi yaar..itne cute ladki kare toh kisi ladke koi probs nahi hoga!!

M[standing up..and moving in fornt of nupur..eye to eye wid pratham,his jaw tight]dekho..yeh main last time keh raha hoon..dnt mess wid me'..if u hv nt guessed till now let me tell u nupur mera pyaar'aur koi..uske saath batamizi kare'I'll nt stand it!!!!

I totally love Mayu😆..protectin' his Nups😳😆

P{patting him on soulders].ooooooo relax dude..i was juss joiking..

Sajan who were seeing all ths frm distance joined in..

S:[1^st eyeing nupur and then gvng angry look to pratham] kya hua mayank??koi probs??

Sammy giving a hand to Mayu here too😉😆

M:[taunting] nahi bas hum baat kar rahe the..kyun???

P:yep!!!

poor Pratham..its not Mayu's fault he's feeling jealous😉😉😉

S:nahi agar probs hai..toh hum do dost mil ke sab tik karlenge..we are expert in it u knw..[smirking]'chlao phir ..kam ki baat kare?

P:hmm..where's rimjhim she was suppose to join u'??

S:we calld her..and went to her house too buh she's nt there..phone bhi switched off hai..

P:see..next hearing is on..Monday..3 dayz left..she has to be there'nahi toh

M:nahi to kya???

P:I told u..she'll be suspected'

S:buh..she's a frnd..

P:sources say..she was elora's rival'so may be'.see am juss taking precautions'

M:ok we'll bring her any how..

P:ok!!now elora sice died no one came to claim her body..wen I researched I cma eto knw..her parents hv abandoned her..long back bcoz she was a characterless girl constantly.embarrassing her parents..she also had lots of..BF's'using them and leaving'so its poss sum1 frm them must hv kille her'

NIHU , do u watch CSI? 😆

S:par how'll we knw??

P:haha'he'll cum and himself admit it'see no one knws..she's dead..so just take her pic and tell in all newspapers and even internet tht she's alive..buh on ventilator[Life support machine]..anyone knws her plz cum for her help..

M:hm y???

P:jus do as I say'th person who killed her didn't turn bck to see if she wa dead or alive..so..ths newz will shake him up..and am sure he'l do sum mistake..in his..jest to kill her yet again and fear of been caught..and benji who kal bail pe chut jayega..am sure..ballistic report is in his side..

😭 Benji

N:[clapping her hand on mayu's lap]aree wah!! By god !! kya idead hai'too gud!!!

P[winking]thanxxx lady..

*slaps Pratham😆....how dare u look at Nups like dat..don't u know she's only 4 Mayu*😆

M:[wid stern voice and angry look to samart]haan haan'gud idead..kyun smarat??.

S:hmmm gud one..gunjan tum chup kyun ho??

G:kuch nahi I was juss thinking..[buh she was nt..her face was telling a diff story.she was pale and tensed]

S:[whispering]chashmish,kuch hua kya??

G[faking]no am f9..chale ghar!!!

S:ok!!byee pratham..chale mayank and nupur!

M[holding nups by hand buh eye contct wid pratham]..chalo nupur..

😆*laughs at Mayu*

They all came out and were discussing abt th ase wen suddenly gunjan.lost her conscious and fell holding onto smarat's arms

S:gunjan!!!!!!!!!

N:gunjan..kya hua tujhe??

M:aree usko paani do!!!..smarat..sprinkle sum on her face..

N:haan haan

S:[sprinkling water and almost on verge of crying..he could nt bear her lying like ths..he was dead afraid,,1^st his frnd nw gunji..]..gunjan plzz open ur eys..kya hua tumhe??

G:[slowly cuming bck to senses]..Diii

N:haan main hoon yahan gunjan..

M:gunjan tum tih ho na??

S:chashmish,tum yeh'???..kaise?
G[smiling weakly]..woh main..am fasting na.toh thodi..weakness agayi thi..am f9 nw

S:kya????ab tum kuch kha lo'no need to fast and all..

G"its for benji smarat....aaj ka last din hai..kal se I'll eat..

awwwwwwwww what a cute Benjan scene...Gunjan fasting 4 Benji...u don't see friends like this nowadays😳😳😳

really cute

S:[looking at his watch]..aha..see its' past 12.00 kal ka din shuru hogaya..now 1st u'll eat sumthing'waise bhi benji will cum out kal!!!

G:nahi smarat cheating nahi..godji..naraz honge..

S:gunjan..meri pyaari chashmish..um itni sweet ho ki godji bhi nazar nahi honge..aur hue bhi tu main hoon na!!

N:by god!!! Srk!!!..wah!!

SRK....By God😆😆😆...she doesn't leave him alone does she😆

M:[smiling looking at nupur]

S:chalo ab..[and he picks her up in his arms]

G:samrat!! Mujhe chodo'I'll wwalk..plzz

S:bilkul nahi'aur waise bhi tum heavy nahi ho'besides itna acha chance main nahi chodne wala..badi mushkil se tum bahoon main ati ho'

*I love Sammy😳😳😳*

G{shying and then slowly rests her head on his strong chest]

😳 *faints*

N;hiayeeeeeeee!!kash main bhi faint hoti..aur tum mujhe uta the mayu!!

M:hmmmm..[getting close to her..looking inher eys].meri bahon main ane ke liye..u dn't need to hv reasons..[and he picks her up tooo]

*faints (again)*😆

N:awwwwww mayu!!!!!!!!...

lol u shud be a MJHT creative!!! I wud love to see ur Sajan and Mayur scenes😆

Well these lovers could always find..sum time for luv..may be they were blessed wid lady love'buh nt all are ..our very own benji was still w8ng for tht stroke of luck'buh where was his lady..where was she since th day of murder,two dayz went away in th printing of th newz..as pratham had ordered..them to do.still no one calld for elora'sajan and mayur were discussing th same thing..wen sammy's phone ringed'it was frm rimjhim's cell

S:hello,rimjhim..kahan ho tum??

S:kya????mian abhi ata hoon

M:kya hua samrat???

S:rimjhim ki ma ka cal tha..she's in hospital'city hospital..chalo lets go there!!

M:haan chalo

[All in city hospital]

sammy and mayu are inquiring abt rimjhim and th receptionist tells them..she's in ICCU..3^rd floor..thye all rush to 3^rd floor and find rimjhim's mom sitting there outside

N:auntyji..rimjhim'kaisi hai??yeh sab..

Rimjhim's mom[rm]:she's bcum weak..her white blood cells count had gone dwn'

S:par kaise??i mean suddenly

RM:she's been visiting all pilgrims and holy places widout food and water for past three dayz'said she wanted to pray for sumone'tht took toll on her health.

😲😲😲
😲

M:hum usse mil sakte hain??

G:haan auntyji..plzz

RM:yaa!!doc said two at time

N:main aur gunjan yahan ruk te hian..tum dono jao'

M:tik hia!!

They enter th ICCU cabin and find Rimu lying there..wid oxygen mask and all painful stuff..

Wen sammy stepped in..he made a sreechig noise of opening th door..which made rimu open her eyes..she slimed weakly seeing mayu and sammy

S:rimjhim..tum..yeh sab'are u mad??

R:benji'hwz he???

M:woh tik hia'was asking for u'par tum yeh sab..

R:benji ke liye..he didn't kill her..he had gone to get water for me'I had asked him to bring..it was part of task I gv him..to complete..after which I was gng to answ his question..

S:question????

R:yes!!he proposed me'and I said..u bring me water 1^st then'll ans'juss for fun and he landed in jail..its all my fault'

She started crying helplessly..

😭

S:rona mat rimjhim..he'll be f9'.

R:listen..tom I want to meet him..anyhow..plz..

S:buh..u can't get discharge tom'

M:[smiling]haan par benji toh kla aa skata hia na'remember.pratham said he'll get th bail tom..

S:eureka!!!..f9 then we'll bring benji here tom..

Next day in court..

P:ur honour'here's th ballistic report..thye say.th murderer..is 6ft.10inc..and benji as u can see is hardly.5.5..thay also say th murderer is left handed and ebnji is right handed

ok ok...u DO watch CSI😆

C:ur honour,there sum ppl who can use both hands..how can we say..bneji is right handed only

P{walking towards mr.chawla'picked up th pen on his table]bcoz mr.chawla'benji is [he threw th pen at benji who caught it wid his right hand..well practicing BB wid sammy had made him perfect in ths field.]..RIGHT HANDED'see..he caught it wid his right hand'only!!!

interesting Court case scene😊...the right-hand and left-hand dialogue sounds familiar frm some movie😉

Ths proves ur honour..ma client is nt guilty..so I demand..a bail

J:th ballistic report proves..benjamin is nt guilty..buh as he was found on th crime sight..he'll hv to attend court till th case is sloved..he can pay 50000 as bail'next hearing..on thrusday

Sammy jumped across th divider and running hugged benji and mayank hugged both of them while nups and gunjan hugged each other

S:benji..tu free hogaya dude

B:sammy'mayank thanxx gyzz

M:hum se jyada koi aur is thanx ka haqdar hai

S:haan'rimjhim..

P:ok gyzz..me leaving..next paln ke liye aaj sham mere ghar..byeee..yaa Rimjhim ok get well soon

B:get well soon???kya hua usko??

S:tu chal toh sahi'

On their way to hospital they explain everything to benji abt rimjhim'benji felt ahorrible pain in his heart..which was impact full more than th blows he got in police station'.his eyes were full of tears..they showed him rimu's room and told him to go alone.

Benji slowly enterd th room carefully nt making a single noise..buh rimu slowly murmured"benji..tum ho na??"

B:rimjhim'.

R:[slowly opening her eyes and seeing benji she tried to get up smiling through th mask]

B[ran to hold her and looked in her eys]rimjhim..mian..woh

R:ssshhhhhhh..pehle mujhe kuch kehna hai'benji.

B:abhi kehna padega tumhe'jarurat nahi hai rimjhim..koi apne ke liye itna nahi karta jitna tumne mere liye kiya'am blessed tht u lUV ME!!!!

[th song inBG..kuch kuch hota hai sad version.credit to makers]

😭I love this song.

rimjhim closes her eys and a drop of tear rolls dwn her cheeks..

😭😭😭

jane wafa hoke bekarar..bar so kiya maine intazar

par kabhi tune nahi yeh tab kaha jo ab kaha

she slowly opend her eys and saw benji who was still holding her in his arms like ahalf hug..and smiling cutely which coverd all th bruises on his face..

dil bebasi main chupke se rota hai..kay karo hai kuch kcuh hota hai..

benji broke into a small laugh..and said..rimjhim'rona kyun????..oooo..main ne tumhe tik se hug nahi kiya isliye'chalo yeh bhi wish puri karta hoon..and he enveloped rimu in his arms'

AWESOME👏👏👏 Loved it muah!! 😃

Plz do update soon😊, am waiting😆

LUV

NIHU

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Nihu yaar....what an update!!thankoooooooooos ji

🤗

Ohoo.....Mayu to bohut hi possessive ho raha tha!! 😉😉yeh toh hona hi tha!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aur phir Nupur ne jo pyar ka izhar kiya....kya baat hai!👏glad u luved it!!!!!!!!

Arre yaar...that dialogue

N:hmm..par tum aise dekhte ho..na toh..toh..toh..

M[getting close to her ears]toh?

N:[shying]..mera band baj jata hai..[giggling]

LOL!🤣🤣

Great dialogues, seriously!!🤣awwwwwwwwwww..tahnkoos ji...happy u liked them...

"Mayank bete to coochikoo pasand hai..." OMG!😳haan......

Oh Gunjan is so sweet....usne benji ke liya fast rakha!she is weet yaar..am i try to maintain it!!!!!!!!!!

And she fainted...chalo, Sam was there to catch her! Its so cute how she says "Godji"....and Sam's like "Main hoon na..." Awww.....hehehhehhehhe......

And Nupur couldn't help cracking that SRK joke na....! 😆😆mere ff main SRK toh hona hi chaiye!!!!!!!!!!!

Mayank to bada romantic ho haya hai!hmmm itna nahi next upd will be rocking one!!!!!!!!!!!!

"Yeh taj mahal to mera hai..." 😳 What a line yaar nihu, how do you come up with these!

loved it!awwwwwwwww..u like dit..i thought it was silly...donno yaar..it suddenly clicked in my mind....and i wrote it!!

And y'know I'd just read Ruchi's fic update and there was a scene where Mayu said "main utha ke le jaa sakta hoon" but then finally he didn't end up lifting her....so I said to Ruchi ki I wish yeh scene dekhne ko milta...

Par tune to meri yeh wish bhi poori kar di!!awwwwwwwww..reall!!! so gald i could janu!!

yahaan to without reason Mayu ne baahon mein utha liya! Wah kya baat hai!!humare FF main aisa hi hota hai!!

Nihu, tu sahi keh rahi thi humaari saari wishes poori ho rahi hain!BINGO

And OMG rimjhim is in the hospital and she was praying for Benji these three days!haannnnnnnnn

Poor girl! oh I'm feeling so bad for Benji-Rimjhim...

Chalo, at least woh loose screw lawyer ne Benji ko innocent to prove kiya...hehhehheheheh

And that last scene was amazing!thankosssssssssssssssss

The song was perfect choice! benji said I Love You! Oh....i could actually imagine that scene happening in my mind.OMG ur wrds are killing me now..tahnxxxxxx janu u r too cute!!

But but but....who's the killer...???hehehheh

Will it be revealed in the next part...? surely....Anyway, how long will the mystery continue....,next is last I mean how many parts...?

But Nihu yaar awesome writing!!

I reallly wanted to read more!*HUGS*..janu.......

Update soon and thanks for still PMing me....😊

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

N;hiayeeeeeeee!!kash main bhi faint hoti..aur tum mujhe uta the mayu!!

M:hmmmm..[getting close to her..looking inher eys].meri bahon main ane ke liye..u dn't need to hv reasons..[and he picks her up tooo] loved these dialouges😆 thankooooooooosss meri pari!!!!!!!!!!!!

NIHU ⭐️ MERI PYAARI SUPERSTAR pehle to sorry for commenting very late awwwwwwwwww...SORRY???😡 q k i was verry busy updating my fan fic which i luv to read!!!and reading and replying to the comments there . us k lie 1000 utthak baithak😆 😆 LOVELY PART JAANU LOVED IT

thankooooooooooooossssssssssss..and no utak baitak..plzzz

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