Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 9

nice part

plz cont soon

thanks for the pm

luv

komal

awww.....i'll miss u and ur updates but i'm looking forwrd for ur new FF on mayur!

coming to this update....

kya mast update tha.....sooo romantic!

awesome, fantastic, amazing, mindblowing!!

finally the real murderer is caught.......sam and mayu did a fab job of catching him!

OMG elora wanted to kill gunjan.....thank god that dinesh killed elora!

pratham bhaiya and titli!!........lol imagine mayank and sammy's expressions...

and mayur.....*sigh*

loved the last scene.....mayur r sooo cute and romantic!

the moon kahan hai and todays no moon day dialougue was tooo good......lol!

thanks for the PM

continue soon.....

This is the ice breaking update from me (havent done any for a long time) hope u will like it.

This goes for you all!

luv

jms (luv this initials of mine😉)

The tension and relief of Benji's case have long been worn off. Dates to padhai, basketball to movies, college to a lot of masti n other words the usual traits of excel college has been being pursued on. Today the three couples are having a "weekend at the beach". Though the summer doesn't permit it but since when Samrat has needed any permission? Specially when Mayank is eased up (credit goes to Nupur) there is no going back atleast not on this occasion. The Chores are divided via lottery, Ben-rim are the ones with the BBQ, Mayur are gonna handle the camping arrangements and sajan are the ones with carrying the gears.

Next to Samrat's car

Gunjan is leaning on her back on the car door Watching Samrat pulling out the camping-stuff form his car boot.

G (moving forward to help): Bas karo samrat kabse keh rahi hoon mujhe bhi thodi hath batane do par

S:Ji nahi, carrying things ladkiyon ki kaam nahin hain aur tumhara to bilkul nahi.

G: Chit ka idea kiska tha samrat? Aur jodyo me kaam karneka???

S (apologetically smiling): Sorry chashmish ye idea thodi flop ho gaya par tum dekhna ye camping na bilkul super hit rahega!

G(shaking her head, watching samrat dropping down the tent): Tent bhi??

S: haan to?

G: itne chhotisi outing ke liye ab tent ka kya zaryurat hain samrat?

S(stepping closer with his crooked smile making gunjan retreat):Bahat khans kam hain chashmish!(pulling her toward him holing her hand) Make out jo karni hain!

Gunjan normally doesn't shout but this time she must have put some effort in her "Kya!" cus that makes the neares branches of the trees totally birds-free.

Benrim

B(Shouting ,thankfully no tree there nearby): KYA!!! Main nahi chhilne wala hoon koi onion-wonion!! Bilkul bhi nahi!!

R : Aur koi kaam to hoga nahi tumse, thodi katai me meri madat karne se bhi inkar kar rahe ho!!jao baat nahi karni mujhe tumse!

B (nervously): Threat kiu karti ho? (holding an onion in his hand and a knife in the other)Kar to raha hoon na?(Stabbing the onion with absolute force as if it the one to be held responsible for his tribulation.

Rimjhim hides a smile.

Mayur

N(sitting beside mayank): ye samrat ka saman lane ka rafter na MASHALLAH! Kachue bhi aage nikal jayega usse By God! Abhi tak to first trip bhi nahi manage hua usse.

M: kaam me agar dhyan naho to aisa hi hoga na nupur?

N: kya matlab?

M: do premi apne aap aakele OUCH! (as nupur pinched him hard)

N: mere bahenke vaare me aisa kuchh soch na bhi mat samjhe tum? Bilkul aise waisi nahin hain wo

M(massaging his arm,interrupting ): Nupur! Main to sirf mazak kar raha tha that's it.Tum bina vaaje ita serious ho gayi.

N(swelling her remaining words,repentantly): Sorry mayank zyada zor se laaga kya?

M doesn't reply .

N: Sorry!?? Dekho ab to kaan bhi pakadli.

M (grumpily): its ok. Ab tum zara shanti se baitho to main thodi padhai karlu?

N:Yaha bhi kitab!!!! Tumne to hadh hi kardi mayank! Dekhna kahi Kitabon ke picchhe bhagte bhagte bechara Bolt ka chutti mat karwa dena!

M (smiling): Nahin, Bolt chain ke neend so sakte hain kiuki main bhagneka nahi padhneka practice me jute huye hoon wobhi kitab ki nahi balke tumhari Ankhiyo ki.

N(shockingly stammering): mmmmeri aaankhen?

M(looking directly in to her eyes): Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayariyon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabonse zyada deep (keeping the eye contact steady he loses the trails of his words, and keeps going closer to nupur until a third party doesn't interrupt)

R:oops! Sorry !dint meant to intrude!(deciding not to make the duo more uncomfortable) anyway nupur I really could do a hand! (indicating helplessly towards a very sweaty n teary benji still battling with his onion).

M(mutters staring at the poor chap): with pleasure!

Sajan

'samanfree' Gunjan is hurrying down the shore angrily,fully loaded samrat is having difficulty keeping up.

S: kaha na sorry chashmish! Wo to sirf joke tha!

G:jobhi tha ghatiyan tha!

S: I know! Sorry to bol raha hoon chashmish. Please maaf kar do!

G(staring at his face for a while): Thik hain. Apology accepted. Ab batao sach me wo tent kis liye hain?

S (looking relieved):ladkiyon ke liye portable changing room,basketball jo khelna hain hume!

G: basket ball? Beach pe? Beach pe insaan beachball khelte hain basketball nahin.

S: samrat ko niyam todne se pyar hain aur basketball se bhi. Apne pyar ke liye samrat sab kuchh kar sakta hain,yaha to do do pyar ka sawal hain chashmish!

G:basket kaun fix karega?

S: don't worry chashmish! Everything will run as smooth as silk!

G(shrugging): Rab ka shukr hain ke benji ne apne hisse ka saman khud hi le aya! Varna '.

Samrat smiles.

muuuuuah!

welcome back awesome update love the nuben riyank mixup haila nupur doesnot know how to cook ??? well now that i am so addicted to crazy luv i'll have tto bunk college to read your update 😆😆looking forward for more khhate meethe nok jhok of mayur, sajan and benjhim

you and nihu are awesome writers better than me atleast 😉😉

thanx for dapm

LEKHA