Crazy Luv SG &MN FF#2 updt PG 4 14/5 - Page 10

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Hey meela di.......so FINALLY ur back wid ur update haan........Y did do dis u kno how much i missed u.............. 😭 😭 but THANK GOD ur back....... 😃 😃 😃now cuming back to ur update........it was AMAZING......I dont now wat to say abt u or ur update........I mean itna acha aur sweet sa update tha.........


D sajan scenes were so JANUABLE just like U..........I just loved dem.......I mean u always portray it so well.......I can always imagine clearly wen ur writing......Mayur were gud too...........


Ben-Rim scene r just very cute and my poor benjy bechara pyaar main bhi kam karna pardta hain usse............ Hmmmmmmmmm I always wonder ki aap itne romantic ho toh kahin koi aapke life main toh nahi...........sorry if I sounded personal but its just for teasing u ok!!!!!!

Love Adya!

great job..i especially luvvved these lines..

M(looking directly in to her eyes): Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayariyon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabon se zyada deep (keeping the eye contact steady he loses the trails of his words, and keeps going closer to nupur 😳

totally describe nupurs eyes....kaash show main bhi mayu ye dialogue bole...

loved it it was such a cute update <3

HIII MEELA!!

WELCOME BACK!!

A COME BACK WITH A BANG!!

FABULOUS UPDT!

I WAS THINKING....

HOW WILL SAMRAT GOING TO PLAY BASKETBALL ON THE BEACH!,,,

LOVED MAYANK'S DIALOGUE:

Nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayari yon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabonse zyada deep....

WAH KYA DIALOGUE LIKHA HAI!

U NEED CLAPS 4 THIS!

JUST LOVED IT!

wowowow tht was cool i love it

Hi Meela, 🤗
welcome back!!! the update was absolutely mind blowing sweets!! 👏👏
spcly the Riyank and the Nuben mix up -- totally unexpected but very very cute..lolzz 😆😆
i loved the Mayur scene and Mayu's dialogue

Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayariyon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabon se zyada deep (keeping the eye contact steady he loses the trails of his words, and keeps going closer to nupur

hilarious!! lolzz 😃
loved every bit of it. Eagerly waiting forn the next update!!😳😳

luv ya,
Himi

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

hi meela di

welcome back awesome update love the nuben riyank mixup haila nupur doesnot know how to cook ??? well now that i am so addicted to crazy luv i'll have tto bunk college to read your update 😆😆looking forward for more khhate meethe nok jhok of mayur, sajan and benjhim

you and nihu are awesome writers better than me atleast 😉😉

thanx for dapm

LEKHA

Thanks Lekha Dear! for the mix-up ummm...lets call that "kaamchor-convinience"😉! nupur barely knows how to cook (srk ya phir ranbir se fursat mile tab na kitchen se mulakat bante rahenge!) gunjan is the good girl on it. well, bout ur writing ability...I wud just say if u r in love with the gr8s like us 😉😆 you must be gr8 too! otherwisw u wudnt find our writings worth reading!

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

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'reserved too'😉

Originally posted by: cuppycake990

great job..i especially luvvved these lines..

M(looking directly in to her eyes): Haan nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayariyon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabon se zyada deep (keeping the eye contact steady he loses the trails of his words, and keeps going closer to nupur 😳

totally describe nupurs eyes....kaash show main bhi mayu ye dialogue bole...

thanks mate!

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HIII MEELA!!

WELCOME BACK!!

A COME BACK WITH A BANG!!

FABULOUS UPDT!

I WAS THINKING....

HOW WILL SAMRAT GOING TO PLAY BASKETBALL ON THE BEACH!,,,

LOVED MAYANK'S DIALOGUE:

Nupur, tumhari ankhen jo ankhen mujhe Tennyson ki shayari yon se bhi zyada romantic, Agatha Christie ki novels se bhi zyada mysterious, Shakespeare ki dramas se bhi zyada attractive, Austen ki kitabonse zyada deep....

WAH KYA DIALOGUE LIKHA HAI!

U NEED CLAPS 4 THIS!

JUST LOVED IT!

PLS CONTINUE SOON WHEN U WANT

SEE YAAA

LOVE UUU

Monu yaar!